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The Cunt That Cuts
you can lurk in the shadows
never again will you taste me
my demons will hound you
until the end of days
bite, slash and tear
you will feel me
when you take
your last gasp
I've sent my riders out
they ride the ether waves
see my ashen face
beyond the grave
victim after victim
you took trophies
from them all
you made me strong
gave me wealth
legion strong
they comfort
this vile whore
my maggots
will pick your brain clean
eat away your pride
see me now a Queen
of the mad and depraved
I will out cunt you
as I cut you
you're my bitch
where I go you follow
a dead wraith
eat my leftovers
vulture of the weak
I see your face
know you well
do you really want
more of my hell?
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Re. The Cunt That Cuts
21st Feb 2017 9:04am
A woman of many talents, you never cease to amaze me.
I loved the photo you chose for this wickedly amazing piece.
You don't just embrace the dark, you make it your bitch.
Fine job, Crim...
I loved the photo you chose for this wickedly amazing piece.
You don't just embrace the dark, you make it your bitch.
Fine job, Crim...
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21st Feb 2017 1:26pm
Re. The Cunt That Cuts
21st Feb 2017 9:10am
"I will out cunt you
as I cut you
you're my bitch
where I go you follow"
I love your dark poetry. The way you spit it is with such fire. Cunts think they can play cute little bitch, but run at the slight of a true queen.
Great write
as I cut you
you're my bitch
where I go you follow"
I love your dark poetry. The way you spit it is with such fire. Cunts think they can play cute little bitch, but run at the slight of a true queen.
Great write
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Re: Re. The Cunt That Cuts
21st Feb 2017 1:27pm
thank you LadyKilla this was actually about a man from my past that still haunts me and causes me paranoia.. love your comment though.. love Crim
Re. The Cunt That Cuts
21st Feb 2017 9:44am
you describe this darkness vividly, Crim -
death metal symphony & the ritual orgy...
death metal symphony & the ritual orgy...
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Re: Re. The Cunt That Cuts
21st Feb 2017 1:28pm
Re. The Cunt That Cuts
21st Feb 2017 10:52am
I will out cunt you
as I cut you
you're my bitch
where I go you follow Damn! If only you could have seen the mischievous smile form across my face! I knew it was happening and I was powerless to stop it!
Awesome! We need to write a movie together!! Lol!
as I cut you
you're my bitch
where I go you follow Damn! If only you could have seen the mischievous smile form across my face! I knew it was happening and I was powerless to stop it!
Awesome! We need to write a movie together!! Lol!
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Re: Re. The Cunt That Cuts
21st Feb 2017 1:29pm
thank you Chad happy to bring a smile to your face with my venting.. love Brenda
Re. The Cunt That Cuts
21st Feb 2017 12:42pm
Okay, dammit, you have brought to the
fore an absolutely ball-busting poem
which will remain in my thoughts forever.
You are right up there near the top of the
ball-busting mountain. I salute you!
fore an absolutely ball-busting poem
which will remain in my thoughts forever.
You are right up there near the top of the
ball-busting mountain. I salute you!
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21st Feb 2017 1:29pm
Re. The Cunt That Cuts
21st Feb 2017 1:51pm
Well, damn! You lit this one with a firecracker, dark or not. I have this image in my head of a dark mistress casually flicking a whip against her leather boots as she speaks. I am awed and humbled by your power and grace, my lady. Much love... :)
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. The Cunt That Cuts
22nd Feb 2017 5:02am
Re. The Cunt That Cuts
21st Feb 2017 2:06pm
Someone pissed off the wrong woman and now there's hell to pay! She's coming with both barrels blasting! Awesome write Brenda!
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Re: Re. The Cunt That Cuts
22nd Feb 2017 5:03am
thank you Xmar you made me smile wide on your take of this write :) love Brenda
Re. The Cunt That Cuts
21st Feb 2017 3:27pm
"I will out cunt you
as I cut you
you're my bitch
where I go you follow"
such a beautiful and original expression - masterful - love it :-)
as I cut you
you're my bitch
where I go you follow"
such a beautiful and original expression - masterful - love it :-)
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22nd Feb 2017 5:04am
Re. The Cunt That Cuts
21st Feb 2017 7:37pm
Utterly outstanding, captivating and mind wrenching. I love your imagery. Even when I got to maggots and thought... "maybe not...." I was already hooked and you had me to the end, shocked sensibilities and all. That, is a very rare find for me. Kudos.
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22nd Feb 2017 5:04am
Re. The Cunt That Cuts
21st Feb 2017 11:36pm
Whoa... it was raw, n vivid enough n then you mentioned maggots... yea I was done then! Remind me NOT to rile u up ever!! lol
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22nd Feb 2017 5:05am
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22nd Feb 2017 3:23pm
Re. The Cunt That Cuts
Anonymous
22nd Feb 2017 3:51pm
if "out cunting" is not a thing yet
it sure as shit needs to be
absolutely loved this write brenda
so damn fierce!
it sure as shit needs to be
absolutely loved this write brenda
so damn fierce!
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Re: Re. The Cunt That Cuts
22nd Feb 2017 4:02pm
Re. The Cunt That Cuts
22nd Feb 2017 8:38pm
I don't know about the hell but I can't get enough of your writes, Crim. I have mixed emotions about the title (desire, abject fear) but the rest is sublime.
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23rd Feb 2017 10:26am
Re. The Cunt That Cuts
25th Feb 2017 2:19pm
Brenda.. this is simply brilliant.. i'm speechless, just blown away by your ink.. into the list it goes.. love..
Dave
Dave
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3rd Mar 2017 7:00am