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Yearn At Midnight
I feel you tender soul
vulnerable in your darkness
you wear it like midnight
to keep out the sideshow leers
you're not for their consumption
though I know they pick at you
like carrion do a fresh carcass
I weep in the cold steel rain
cross deserts to reach you
I've cast my lot
I will walk this journey along side you
quietly so as not to disturb the restless spirits
the ones that rattle your bones
when the bottle is empty
the silent time when ghosts scream in whispers
my magic is pure
it will lighten the burden
of a skin that yearns
I'm like a mellow whiskey
I'll take off the edge
relieve your ache
wrap my poetic legs round you
spill your ink deep inside me
let's fuck the demons dead
*Read by the very lovely and talented Magdalena*
Published 23rd Oct 2016
| Edited 26th Oct 2016
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23rd Oct 2016 00:39am
FANtastic last line, Brenda, and the lines
leading up to that last one aren't too shabby
either. To be a savior to another soul is a
very worthwhile thing to be, and when you add
the physical, it makes it all the more better.
leading up to that last one aren't too shabby
either. To be a savior to another soul is a
very worthwhile thing to be, and when you add
the physical, it makes it all the more better.
23rd Oct 2016 6:03am
23rd Oct 2016 00:47am
23rd Oct 2016 6:03am
23rd Oct 2016 1:24am
Precious Soul.......Crim you're such a treasure to read........luv this supensful ink.....the last stanza is mega sexy.......luv it and you........purple luv & hugs xo :)
23rd Oct 2016 6:04am
23rd Oct 2016 2:16am
I liked this one. I love your use of words. You have a voice that is all your own. This sounded mystical, epic, and intimate. Nice ink.
23rd Oct 2016 6:05am
23rd Oct 2016 2:19am
A dark and beautiful love poem with that razor sharp edge you do so well. True,Crimsin style.
You are such a talented lady,I hope you know that....
You are such a talented lady,I hope you know that....
23rd Oct 2016 6:06am
aw you really moved me with your gracious comment lovely Kasai thank you dear one..
love Crim
love Crim
23rd Oct 2016 2:48am
Tantalizing to the imagination and stimulating to the rest of my anatomy... a very amorous spill of verse that makes my appetite crave more...
Fabulous poetry aglow with a Crimsin hue of radiant red seductivity!
JJ
Fabulous poetry aglow with a Crimsin hue of radiant red seductivity!
JJ
23rd Oct 2016 6:07am
Anonymous
23rd Oct 2016 6:28am
Absolutely love this ink 💓
Your expression is brilliant.
"wrap my poetic legs round you
spill your ink deep inside me
let's fuck the demons dead "
--- that. 💋
A true masterpiece, my friend.
Your expression is brilliant.
"wrap my poetic legs round you
spill your ink deep inside me
let's fuck the demons dead "
--- that. 💋
A true masterpiece, my friend.
23rd Oct 2016 6:35am
23rd Oct 2016 8:29am
those midnite yearns, Crim, too familiar;
look to the shadows for an embrace.
makes me wanna spill, but not ink...
look to the shadows for an embrace.
makes me wanna spill, but not ink...
23rd Oct 2016 11:50am
23rd Oct 2016 8:31am
Crim...You sent me 'swinging' ( a favorite line from one of my fav. Songs lol)... Well until the last line
THEN I wanted some yum yum lol
THEN I wanted some yum yum lol
23rd Oct 2016 11:50am
Anonymous
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23rd Oct 2016 8:55am
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23rd Oct 2016 11:51am
23rd Oct 2016 4:49pm
a real powerful write - fucking demons to death in a strange way sound appealing :-)
you really are a special poet :-)
you really are a special poet :-)
23rd Oct 2016 7:56pm
Anonymous
23rd Oct 2016 7:19pm
Brenda, you never fail to amaze me with your words. They come from your beautiful mind, so I should not be surprised. :)
Willow
Willow
23rd Oct 2016 7:57pm
23rd Oct 2016 9:40pm
I'm going to keep this to read whenever I'm blocked. That should get the juices and ink flowing. Thank you Crim!
24th Oct 2016 3:30am
23rd Oct 2016 9:53pm
Sexiness is written all over this
..and myheavenlyburninggods.. .
Woooo, yes, I think you've gotten
many high rises out of me with
this,
You know some day, I will find a
way to blow through your soul
...as you do
me lol... ;)
I'm loving on this one.. . will be
back to steal it to put in my private
vault of heart beats.
-Howlings
..and myheavenlyburninggods.. .
Woooo, yes, I think you've gotten
many high rises out of me with
this,
You know some day, I will find a
way to blow through your soul
...as you do
me lol... ;)
I'm loving on this one.. . will be
back to steal it to put in my private
vault of heart beats.
-Howlings
24th Oct 2016 3:31am
thank you beautiful Howling you made me smile big with your gracious comment :)
love Crim
love Crim
Anonymous
23rd Oct 2016 11:04pm
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24th Oct 2016 3:31am
Anonymous
24th Oct 2016 12:10pm
My god Crimm.. you lured me in with this beauty. Hot!!!
✨Trish
✨Trish
25th Oct 2016 12:49pm
26th Oct 2016 1:03am
This is quite a wonderfully written piece. The language and imagery within this piece all comes together. I love everything about it. And the title is quite captivating. Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece.
26th Oct 2016 4:02am
26th Oct 2016 1:10am
haunting and lovely
gave me chills
This is a Masterpiece or in your case a Mistresspiece
Bravo Brenda
LIKE
xo
gave me chills
This is a Masterpiece or in your case a Mistresspiece
Bravo Brenda
LIKE
xo
26th Oct 2016 4:03am
26th Oct 2016 6:31am
Wow... just wow!!! You blew me away with this one!
I think it's my favorite of yours so far (though I think I said that before ;-))
You keep amazing me, lovely Crim!
I love spoken word (it gives depth to a poem) and the music is just stunning!
Love, Duende
I think it's my favorite of yours so far (though I think I said that before ;-))
You keep amazing me, lovely Crim!
I love spoken word (it gives depth to a poem) and the music is just stunning!
Love, Duende
26th Oct 2016 4:01pm
thank you lovely Duende Magdalena added so much to this write with her beautiful reading of it..
love Brenda
love Brenda
26th Oct 2016 7:07am
In addition to what I said before, this very dramatic reading by Magdalena along with some most apropos music make this even more stirring than before. I should find someone who can do that for mine...
JJ
JJ
26th Oct 2016 4:03pm
thank you JJ yes Magdalena did a awesome reading of this i'm deeply appreciative of her..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Anonymous
26th Oct 2016 9:39am
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26th Oct 2016 4:05pm
thank you Adam I have the lovely and talented Magdalena to thank for bringing this poem to life..
love Brenda
love Brenda
26th Oct 2016 4:51pm
You are quite interesting to read. You have an appealing voice and your writing is quite impressive. I hope to reach your level of skill someday far in the future. :)
26th Oct 2016 8:08pm
thank you for the beautiful comment the reading was actually done by another lovely poetess Magdalena and she brought so much to this write with her recital of it..
i'm sure you are quite brilliant as a writer..
love Crim
i'm sure you are quite brilliant as a writer..
love Crim
Anonymous
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26th Oct 2016 5:36pm
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26th Oct 2016 8:09pm
thank you from us both lovely Amelia I think Magdalena did a magnificent job of reading this poem of mine..
love Crim
love Crim
27th Oct 2016 7:12pm
27th Oct 2016 9:26pm
thank you Darkest Hades yes Magdalena did a awesome job at reading this..
love Crim
love Crim
28th Oct 2016 3:13pm
Thank you Crim for giving me the pleasure of reciting this great piece. and thank you to the comments regarding my reading. :) x
28th Oct 2016 3:32pm
I am so honored and deeply moved by your recital of this poem thank you lovely Magdalena..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Anonymous
29th Oct 2016 4:07am
My Beautiful Brenda, a suspenseful tone to this one and with darkened seduction...you had me on the edge of my seat. Both of you did a fantabulous job!!
I love you so much!
Taryn xoxo
I love you so much!
Taryn xoxo
29th Oct 2016 3:50pm
thank you beautiful one I am deeply indebted to the lovely Magdalena for adding so much to this write with her reading..
I love you..
xo Brenda
I love you..
xo Brenda
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3rd Jan 2017 6:55am
"wrap my poetic legs round you
spill your ink deep inside me"
This line speaks to me.....
spill your ink deep inside me"
This line speaks to me.....
4th Jan 2017 00:41am
7th Jan 2017 6:43pm
This poem is astonishingly beautiful conveying unseen worlds and with utmost delicacy.
7th Jan 2017 8:26pm
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17th Sep 2017 6:11am
Gods in hell this is fucking epic..gave me chills all over . Thank you ,thank you so very much
17th Sep 2017 6:20am
17th Sep 2017 6:32am
It fuckin shook me , I have never been affected so .. radically from words , it blew my mind , the music your voice .. I went to the you tube channel and watched more , shared a video to the world has to see this I feel ,least everyone one my Facebook lol.
17th Sep 2017 6:39am
thank you deeply i am humbled & honored i wrote the poem but it was read by a lovely poetess named Magdalena she made my magic with her reading of my poem.. honestly this is the best i've written in a long time.. love Crim
