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Take mine
Fragile
like thin glass
S H A T T E R S
before me
My own heart
feels like
B R E A K I N G
I pick up
the pieces
S C A T T E R E D
I want to
glue it
T O G E T H E R
But there's
just too many
M I S S I N G
But Ill
give you my
H E A R T
Until your own
is repaired
like thin glass
S H A T T E R S
before me
My own heart
feels like
B R E A K I N G
I pick up
the pieces
S C A T T E R E D
I want to
glue it
T O G E T H E R
But there's
just too many
M I S S I N G
But Ill
give you my
H E A R T
Until your own
is repaired
Published 9th Jan 2016
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9th Jan 2016 7:50pm
9th Jan 2016 9:12pm
9th Jan 2016 8:15pm
Red, short and sweet.. but brilliant as hell.. fucking love it.. into the list it goes.. much love and respect..
Dave
Dave
9th Jan 2016 9:15pm
Thanks Dave for going on my emotional ride today. Lol just one of those days for me
10th Jan 2016 1:42pm
Aaaaawww... There's moment
when a writer hits a spot in their
ink where (unless one is completely
devoid of emotions) their words stir
the very soul of the reader. You just HIT that spot with the impact of a sledgehammer. exceptional in every way my dear!
when a writer hits a spot in their
ink where (unless one is completely
devoid of emotions) their words stir
the very soul of the reader. You just HIT that spot with the impact of a sledgehammer. exceptional in every way my dear!
11th Jan 2016 4:40am
Awwwww thank you! Your so sweet! I'm glad I was able to do that and not have to write a novel to get my point across. This was real deep for me. Again thank you (:
10th Jan 2016 10:46pm
Dynamic wordplay here, RedRidingHood
that soaked through my skin and left me
. . . breathless!
that soaked through my skin and left me
. . . breathless!
11th Jan 2016 4:42am
Ooo I took your breath away! Why I feel so very accomplished right now (: I'm glad you enjoyed this write SMG. Thank you for taking the time to stop by and read.
