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A Chance in Hell
Snowflakes are fallen feathers from the wings of guardian angels
Melting into teardrops as they gently reach out and touch your soul
With unconditional kindness, the kind that cares and quells
Lifting you out of the darkness within your deep and lonely hole
There is nothing I would not sacrifice to spread these wings for you
Releasing all my feathers, soaring down to where you fell
Unfurling layers of eternal love to heights we never flew
Together we can beat the odds of a snowflake’s chance in Hell
Melting into teardrops as they gently reach out and touch your soul
With unconditional kindness, the kind that cares and quells
Lifting you out of the darkness within your deep and lonely hole
There is nothing I would not sacrifice to spread these wings for you
Releasing all my feathers, soaring down to where you fell
Unfurling layers of eternal love to heights we never flew
Together we can beat the odds of a snowflake’s chance in Hell
Published 25th Apr 2015
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Anonymous
25th Apr 2015 5:56pm
I love how your ink puts a wonderful image inside my head. Its a amazing feeling in my heart to have read some of your work again.
25th Apr 2015 6:01pm
Thank you, you are a good friend that I would happily apply these words to. And very quick too, I only posted this a like a minute ago... lol!!! jj
26th Apr 2015 12:10pm
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26th Apr 2015 2:50pm
that's what I am missing - a friend like you - that could do that for me :-)
such a beautiful write I just have to add it
such a beautiful write I just have to add it
26th Apr 2015 7:17pm
I could use a friend like me! There's not enough guardian angels to go around. If I could save myself I think I could save the world, cos I am one titanic mess. I dream of being an angel but really, I don't know if such things exist. I keep hoping there is one somewhere up there, looking out for me... thanks for commenting David! jj
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19th Apr 2020 3:12am
"Fallen Angel"
My wings tarred and defeathered
In your eyes my innocense is gone
Whatever I did, I am sorry!
Fallen from the gace of your heart
Still I will be there if you call
Tainted by and invisible sinister cloud
But never boken from the fall
Some evil villian cruhed my halo
And now I'm just a kind hearted old man
jj
My wings tarred and defeathered
In your eyes my innocense is gone
Whatever I did, I am sorry!
Fallen from the gace of your heart
Still I will be there if you call
Tainted by and invisible sinister cloud
But never boken from the fall
Some evil villian cruhed my halo
And now I'm just a kind hearted old man
jj
29th Apr 2015 4:40am
Hello, JJ.
I known I haven't been on here for quite sometime, so I have neglected to read any of your newer works or that of others, so for that I apologize.
This is a short yet very beautiful write. You are always so sweet in your poems. I only wish I could become motivated to write again...and maybe even write something half this good.
Hope all is well.
May Mother Earth guide and let the elements be with you.
Merry Cheers!!!
-Jessica Dawn
I known I haven't been on here for quite sometime, so I have neglected to read any of your newer works or that of others, so for that I apologize.
This is a short yet very beautiful write. You are always so sweet in your poems. I only wish I could become motivated to write again...and maybe even write something half this good.
Hope all is well.
May Mother Earth guide and let the elements be with you.
Merry Cheers!!!
-Jessica Dawn
29th Apr 2015 12:10pm
Thank you Jess! You know I miss you and your wonderful verse... may the muse spark you butt into creating sparkling rainbows in the empty skies above!!! :)
30th Apr 2015 5:03am
Oh JJ.....this has melted my heart.....what a sacred write of a dedicated luv for another soul....just beautiful!!!!! Enjoyed this very much xo :)
30th Apr 2015 5:10am
Thank you Gail, glad you enjoyed it! Any time I can melt your heart, just let me know... :) jj
30th May 2015 4:29pm
30th May 2015 4:56pm
Thank you for the heart warming comment Noire. What to do with all the melting going on here between the snowflakes, hearts and souls???
:)
jj
:)
jj
