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whats now over my head
He walked out of the big top, finally waving goodbye, "hello blue skies" he thought. disgruntled burning dreams sky rocket into pockets of savored things, he calls culls and breathes with the soft savage land, gleaming pieces on stiffer strings this marionette man dances slower, sifting sighs through lights that no longer blind but sparkle dazzled rays down as he gazes from atop his cliff edge, feeling the rush of jump as the edge just skims along far as he can see...tis many a wondrous views to be had...
Up here near, the clouds, the air, is thinner yes? So thoughts barrel roll, head misting mid-drift... yes...many a riff, but these cling encircled secrets breathe, somewhere behind him, he hears shouts of "come back", but he is alone walking in peace ever forward away from such tattered chaos, smoking wisps memory... such things...
Somewhere near, galleries opened their doors spilling out as he viewed dawns breaking and suns setting throwing acoustic electric sounds to this backdrop, paintings forever line the skies as the clown cries released relief, slowly wiping grease paint from his skin, adding colour to an already Beautiful horizon line...the big top moves from town to town, erected over so many heads...forever entertaining existence.
Up here near, the clouds, the air, is thinner yes? So thoughts barrel roll, head misting mid-drift... yes...many a riff, but these cling encircled secrets breathe, somewhere behind him, he hears shouts of "come back", but he is alone walking in peace ever forward away from such tattered chaos, smoking wisps memory... such things...
Somewhere near, galleries opened their doors spilling out as he viewed dawns breaking and suns setting throwing acoustic electric sounds to this backdrop, paintings forever line the skies as the clown cries released relief, slowly wiping grease paint from his skin, adding colour to an already Beautiful horizon line...the big top moves from town to town, erected over so many heads...forever entertaining existence.
Published 27th Apr 2013
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27th Apr 2013 6:39am
Okay so I got through the first paragraph thinking wow all this in just one stanza. Then I played the tune...it was so good! I wanted to start singing, even made up words when I realized none were coming forth.
27th Apr 2013 6:49am
Thank You for the kind comments of the write!!!
But very Glad You enjoyed this tune Jazz...it's one that speaks to me deeply...Glad You found words to it too!!!
But very Glad You enjoyed this tune Jazz...it's one that speaks to me deeply...Glad You found words to it too!!!
27th Apr 2013 8:45am
This song put me in a reminiscent state of mind that had the most calming affect on me!:) *Don't know why!* I listen to the song first then I read your ink! I know, I'm so backwards! lol...
Thoroughly enjoyed how your pen swayed with the song!
Poetic Love~
Thoroughly enjoyed how your pen swayed with the song!
Poetic Love~
27th Apr 2013 9:02am
Thank You Dear Rain :)
I'm Glad You enjoyed both:)))
Backwards never-makes sense to do this too:)
I'm Glad You enjoyed both:)))
Backwards never-makes sense to do this too:)
27th Apr 2013 9:32am
And yet if he had turned and walked back, would the lights have blinded rendering him lost to unseen but heard and felt adoration...food for thought Soul.
27th Apr 2013 4:06pm
Prices paid would make him feel half the man, carrying bitterness always, no matter how good the outcome.
Thanks for the read and the thoughtful food, drinks call!!!
Thanks for the read and the thoughtful food, drinks call!!!
27th Apr 2013 1:01pm
This is a wonderful write Soul, the imagery in the last stanza is beautiful and captivating.
For some reason I cannot get any sound from the video. I will check it on you tube :)
For some reason I cannot get any sound from the video. I will check it on you tube :)
27th Apr 2013 4:09pm
Thank You Dear Magdalena:)
Such kind words!!!
I wonder why...Dup took one from an earlier poem...They don't fancy the video use I think...
Such kind words!!!
I wonder why...Dup took one from an earlier poem...They don't fancy the video use I think...
27th Apr 2013 7:38pm
Soul this took me on a magnificent journey..full of imagery and wondering what's going to happen next..captivating..peace Crim
27th Apr 2013 8:43pm
27th Apr 2013 9:33pm
28th Apr 2013 1:40am
Thanks Dear Red, for the read and comment, I'm glad You Liked tis a snapshot...course they all are mostly eh?
27th Apr 2013 9:47pm
It has a kind of rhythm to it,
a LIFE to each word.
I don't have the words to describe it,
but I assure you what you've written
impressed me beyond measure.
a LIFE to each word.
I don't have the words to describe it,
but I assure you what you've written
impressed me beyond measure.
28th Apr 2013 1:42am
Always You give me such kind comments Dear Scribbler...awwww then You say something as sweet as that...Humbled greatly!!!
