Poems About Wisdom Seeking Honest Critique
#wisdom
Sea Side Frolics
I fell far North,
caught in a cradle of clouds, dunes, and an unexpected
human silence.
I wandered by day,
following the border of sea and land,
finding routes along lanes, roads, and field bound tracks.
At times, during dead winter nights,
I stood on my frosty balcony, staring into the pitch,
hearing only the nearby sea;
it has such a task,
rumbling all night, its roar heightened
in night’s quietude.
I perched on the margins of my world,
a pigeon, with wakeful eyes
scanning the...
caught in a cradle of clouds, dunes, and an unexpected
human silence.
I wandered by day,
following the border of sea and land,
finding routes along lanes, roads, and field bound tracks.
At times, during dead winter nights,
I stood on my frosty balcony, staring into the pitch,
hearing only the nearby sea;
it has such a task,
rumbling all night, its roar heightened
in night’s quietude.
I perched on the margins of my world,
a pigeon, with wakeful eyes
scanning the...
#MovingOn
#PersonalGrowth
#wisdom
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Obelisks
Wintry tears drip deep
into icy, dark waters
The stream is endless,
as she came to me in the form of paradise
As I envisioned
I made a decision
Wisdom floats
as infinity awaits
into icy, dark waters
The stream is endless,
as she came to me in the form of paradise
As I envisioned
I made a decision
Wisdom floats
as infinity awaits
#nature
#utopia
#water
#winter
#wisdom
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Three wishes...
I want to take Ed Sheeran to the planet
Mars and raise little cuddly puppy dogs.
Elon Musk - make my wish come true!
I want to dumb down all the people to
a mental stage close to Down Syndrome -
To make the world more peaceful.
Scientists? Do this and I'll pay you with sex!
I want the DEATH PENALTY back in all 50 states
and all around the world! But I get to flick the switch and decide who dies!!! It would be so awesome!
God? Do I have your fucking blessing on this?
Mars and raise little cuddly puppy dogs.
Elon Musk - make my wish come true!
I want to dumb down all the people to
a mental stage close to Down Syndrome -
To make the world more peaceful.
Scientists? Do this and I'll pay you with sex!
I want the DEATH PENALTY back in all 50 states
and all around the world! But I get to flick the switch and decide who dies!!! It would be so awesome!
God? Do I have your fucking blessing on this?
#LifeGoals
#wisdom
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soul
discretion divine in my hallowed halls
sanctuary of heart interpretated
secreting away my soul
lest anyone see how soft I am
my heart alters according to my need
with prayers rising to heaven
grieving inward with despair
silently uttering my cares
please watch over my family
down on my knees I give thanks
grateful for fraility, grateful for sin
the knowledge recieved, is hard born
wisdom immortal, mine
sanctity of feeling within
my sacredness understood
with great care, I observe
learning...
sanctuary of heart interpretated
secreting away my soul
lest anyone see how soft I am
my heart alters according to my need
with prayers rising to heaven
grieving inward with despair
silently uttering my cares
please watch over my family
down on my knees I give thanks
grateful for fraility, grateful for sin
the knowledge recieved, is hard born
wisdom immortal, mine
sanctity of feeling within
my sacredness understood
with great care, I observe
learning...
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
#wisdom
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~my poetic prophetess :: Opheliac
viz: ophie
#admiration
#friendship
#love
#minimalist
#wisdom
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Conjuring your strength
Do you really know what is your strength and courage and perseverance. 🤔 When you feel that you are all alone, within the very foundation of your mind. 🧠 YET you refuse to bend down on your knees, for you remain resilient on standing on your own two feet. WITH the deepness of your own heart. 💖 FOR sure you have the ability to truly manifest, 👁️ that which you want and need, Even if it means there must be a sacrifice. 😔 TO be made of your own self and dignity. For sure everything comes at a price, To not to have to deal with, what you don't...
#courage
#kindness
#LifeCycle
#patience
#wisdom
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Arachne
In the silence of the ancient grove,
we bow with humble hearts and minds
honoring the eight-legged delicate weave
their webs a testament to nature's craft.
Through the stillness whispers of their lore
threads of existence crossing patterns
in their presence we find harmony
balanced in the cycle of life’s design.
Oh gentle spirits of the eight legs
we celebrate your ceaseless toil
crafting wonders in the air between breaths
your webs the stars of earthly skies.
Beneath the moon's serene glow
your...
we bow with humble hearts and minds
honoring the eight-legged delicate weave
their webs a testament to nature's craft.
Through the stillness whispers of their lore
threads of existence crossing patterns
in their presence we find harmony
balanced in the cycle of life’s design.
Oh gentle spirits of the eight legs
we celebrate your ceaseless toil
crafting wonders in the air between breaths
your webs the stars of earthly skies.
Beneath the moon's serene glow
your...
#jealousy
#mythology
#nature
#spiritual
#wisdom
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Communicating With The Queens
Women love words
All kinds of words
Words that can argue And words that describe
Words that show feelings that you have inside
For a moment Or a lifetime Be they shallow or deep
Words rile women up Or pit them right to sleep
Women love words that express
They love words that proclaim
Love words that sound different
Though your message is the same
Words tell of the good a man has in his heart
And some words aren't yet spoken
cuz of time spent apart
Words properly delivered,
can be...
All kinds of words
Words that can argue And words that describe
Words that show feelings that you have inside
For a moment Or a lifetime Be they shallow or deep
Words rile women up Or pit them right to sleep
Women love words that express
They love words that proclaim
Love words that sound different
Though your message is the same
Words tell of the good a man has in his heart
And some words aren't yet spoken
cuz of time spent apart
Words properly delivered,
can be...
#honesty
#respect
#wisdom
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Emanations of the Mind...
Often I get lost in my thought,
In those recesses of my intellect,
where ambivalence interlaces with the glimmering of discernment,
I traverse looking for the ineffable,
the elusive sagacity spoken softly in the stillness of quiet reflection.
Emerging from the profound depths of contemplation,
a sudden effulgence of clarity,
as comprehension unfurls like the delicate tendrils of an ethereal bloom,
grasping, attaining, a verity both fragile and steadfast.
I wander through the consecrated halls of philosophy and education,
where...
In those recesses of my intellect,
where ambivalence interlaces with the glimmering of discernment,
I traverse looking for the ineffable,
the elusive sagacity spoken softly in the stillness of quiet reflection.
Emerging from the profound depths of contemplation,
a sudden effulgence of clarity,
as comprehension unfurls like the delicate tendrils of an ethereal bloom,
grasping, attaining, a verity both fragile and steadfast.
I wander through the consecrated halls of philosophy and education,
where...
#learning
#SelfDiscovery
#wisdom
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Reincarnation
Am I losing my mind, or finding something hidden?
Ideas swarm restless, screaming—
Read this, understand that,
Find the plan before time guts me like a clockwork beast.
It’s not hell I fear.
It’s the nothing.
The dead air, the black screen,
Memories pounding my skull like fists, three minutes before the credits roll.
Game over!
No encore!
But maybe it’s worse—
Maybe I come back.
Again.
To this.
This SHITSHOW of a planet
Where hope gets bought and sold,
Where dreams die quietly in cubicles,
And...
Ideas swarm restless, screaming—
Read this, understand that,
Find the plan before time guts me like a clockwork beast.
It’s not hell I fear.
It’s the nothing.
The dead air, the black screen,
Memories pounding my skull like fists, three minutes before the credits roll.
Game over!
No encore!
But maybe it’s worse—
Maybe I come back.
Again.
To this.
This SHITSHOW of a planet
Where hope gets bought and sold,
Where dreams die quietly in cubicles,
And...
#confessional
#identity
#SelfReflection
#spiritual
#wisdom
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Submission.
Well, it’s finally happened.
I’m officially Life’s bitch.
Its plan to dig its claws into me,
went without a hitch.
Its firm grasp only tightening,
and
won’t let me go,
like a blood binding contract.
it took ownership of my tattered soul.
Why not someone else?
I have literally nothing to offer.
I try to do good, keep my head down,
living a mundane life,
so why bother?
I’ve felt the heaviness on my soul
from such a tender age..
how foolish of me to think I’d leave this lifetime ...
I’m officially Life’s bitch.
Its plan to dig its claws into me,
went without a hitch.
Its firm grasp only tightening,
and
won’t let me go,
like a blood binding contract.
it took ownership of my tattered soul.
Why not someone else?
I have literally nothing to offer.
I try to do good, keep my head down,
living a mundane life,
so why bother?
I’ve felt the heaviness on my soul
from such a tender age..
how foolish of me to think I’d leave this lifetime ...
#acceptance
#honesty
#sadness
#TruthOfLife
#wisdom
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The Fork, The Fire, The Flame
Ideas, impressions, sense refined,
A mirror held to humankind.
Passions burn where reason treads,
A slave to what the heart has fed.
Virtue, vice—no logic's claim,
But echoes felt in pleasure's name.
Hume’s tools cut through belief’s facade,
To find no truth in man or God.
A mirror held to humankind.
Passions burn where reason treads,
A slave to what the heart has fed.
Virtue, vice—no logic's claim,
But echoes felt in pleasure's name.
Hume’s tools cut through belief’s facade,
To find no truth in man or God.
#wisdom
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