Poems About Wisdom Seeking Honest Critique
#wisdom
wallyroo92
Poem Published
20th Apr 2025 9:00pm
20th Apr 2025 9:00pm
Proxima Centauri Centaurus
We stars have lived for only billions of years
Yet our time with the universe is finite
Thus you must be fruitful and productive
If you hear this message and see our light
Seek enlightenment and use it wisely
For everything that has a beginning will end
Find the truth and share it gladly
And then you will be able to transcend
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Yet our time with the universe is finite
Thus you must be fruitful and productive
If you hear this message and see our light
Seek enlightenment and use it wisely
For everything that has a beginning will end
Find the truth and share it gladly
And then you will be able to transcend
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#hope
#stars
#universe #wisdom
#universe #wisdom
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PoetSpeak
Poem Published
5th Apr 2025 5:43pm
5th Apr 2025 5:43pm
I can't say this is about you but you know it is ....
I feel close to you
Often
Even in turmoil
I'm bound by your near smile
It illuminates a path
One day there will be glory
Until then
I'm your Mentor
wise
sometimes
in desire
almost always
your time
precious stones
Often
Even in turmoil
I'm bound by your near smile
It illuminates a path
One day there will be glory
Until then
I'm your Mentor
wise
sometimes
in desire
almost always
your time
precious stones
#crush
#lover
#wisdom
234 reads
25 Comments
Gahddess_Worship
Poem Published
4th Apr 2025 3:03pm
4th Apr 2025 3:03pm
Perpetual Seeker
I don’t know” is the challenge
a return to childlike innocence
“I don’t know, but I’ll find out” is challenge accepted
awakens the inner detective, researcher, puzzle solver
“To the best of my knowledge” is the reward
praying that my curiosity hunger is never satisfied,
that my thirst for knowledge never abates
that my honest lack of education
will forever supersede my pride
knowing everything, where’s the fun in that
a return to childlike innocence
“I don’t know, but I’ll find out” is challenge accepted
awakens the inner detective, researcher, puzzle solver
“To the best of my knowledge” is the reward
praying that my curiosity hunger is never satisfied,
that my thirst for knowledge never abates
that my honest lack of education
will forever supersede my pride
knowing everything, where’s the fun in that
#children
#learning
#love
#PersonalGrowth
#wisdom
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Lynxxey
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 6:27am
3rd Mar 2025 6:27am
Afterglow
I’m feeling so good, since I up and flew out the pin.
Feeling alive and so free, like I can breathe again.
I took a walk with my swimming thoughts and thought about how I should live.
Then I noticed that it’s mostly myself that I seem to struggle with.
A problem in you, is a problem I feel in me
With all the cameras in the world, how come we still don’t see?
That what you put out, tends to come around back to you.
And the things we see online, tend to always blur the truth.
Oh, oh yeah, afterglow..
If I knew then, what I...
Feeling alive and so free, like I can breathe again.
I took a walk with my swimming thoughts and thought about how I should live.
Then I noticed that it’s mostly myself that I seem to struggle with.
A problem in you, is a problem I feel in me
With all the cameras in the world, how come we still don’t see?
That what you put out, tends to come around back to you.
And the things we see online, tend to always blur the truth.
Oh, oh yeah, afterglow..
If I knew then, what I...
#inspirational
#wisdom
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Seed
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 4:55pm
28th Feb 2025 4:55pm
When We Learned What We Learned
When you were glitter and sparkles
When you were new and not fully known
When I presented my best side
When you were fantasies and dreams
When you were all I ever wanted and so out of reach
When you first touched my hand and it was electric
When I got brave enough and stole a kiss that got the ball rolling
When we fussed and fought getting to know each other
When we made up and let love prevail
When the shine was still bright enough that we wanted a life together
When we got married and you moved in
When some years went by and...
When you were new and not fully known
When I presented my best side
When you were fantasies and dreams
When you were all I ever wanted and so out of reach
When you first touched my hand and it was electric
When I got brave enough and stole a kiss that got the ball rolling
When we fussed and fought getting to know each other
When we made up and let love prevail
When the shine was still bright enough that we wanted a life together
When we got married and you moved in
When some years went by and...
#aging
#LifeStruggles
#wisdom
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MalcolmG
Poem Published
16th Feb 2025 12:50pm
16th Feb 2025 12:50pm
Porcelain Dreams
Empty days drift in a world made of smoke and disguise,
Made-up lies, a life of despise while she hides.
A castle of echoes, a throne built on fantasy,
Her lack of reality—this is her majesty.
A queen in her kingdom of neon-lit haze,
Words set relationships ablaze,
Pretending to raise while seeking pity then praise.
Where nothing is real, yet she basks in the sunlight, acts brave.
She dances with thoughts of grand junction, whispers her name—total dysfunction.
Plays puppets with fate in her self-written game.
Muppets...
Made-up lies, a life of despise while she hides.
A castle of echoes, a throne built on fantasy,
Her lack of reality—this is her majesty.
A queen in her kingdom of neon-lit haze,
Words set relationships ablaze,
Pretending to raise while seeking pity then praise.
Where nothing is real, yet she basks in the sunlight, acts brave.
She dances with thoughts of grand junction, whispers her name—total dysfunction.
Plays puppets with fate in her self-written game.
Muppets...
#motivational
#obsession
#wisdom
96 reads
2 Comments
Gahddess_Worship
Poem Published
15th Feb 2025 4:10pm
15th Feb 2025 4:10pm
Out of the Cold
Well done
collecting the best burning wood
tinder to fuel your fire
wisdom, love, compassion, camaraderie
that when ignited will set ablaze action
Be encouraged by intellectual progress
be strengthened by new spiritual insight
however, don’t keep it stacked too long
sitting unused beside your hearth
arrange it carefully in your firebox
add pages filled with words of wisdom for kindling
simply strike the match and light your passion
warming heart and soul,
awakening to service feet and hands
compelling mind and...
collecting the best burning wood
tinder to fuel your fire
wisdom, love, compassion, camaraderie
that when ignited will set ablaze action
Be encouraged by intellectual progress
be strengthened by new spiritual insight
however, don’t keep it stacked too long
sitting unused beside your hearth
arrange it carefully in your firebox
add pages filled with words of wisdom for kindling
simply strike the match and light your passion
warming heart and soul,
awakening to service feet and hands
compelling mind and...
#happiness
#hope
#passion
#uplifting
#wisdom
131 reads
3 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 6:39pm
7th Feb 2025 6:39pm
A Poet’s Ever Tweet
A rose, in the hands of God, lays her fate
As seasons cease not shake and shape
Those are Nature creed, obey and not berate
God's wisdom, vain minds couldn't debate.
Pains that affect the heart, we do feel once
As deep they might dig, the pleasure is immense
Time when slow to meet a wish, the ache intense
God's wisdom, vain minds couldn't make sense.
A rhymer lays bare the fine music of verse
Mother nature would fill a heart and wounds nurse
Uphold Beauty and in the wonders of poetry the soul immerse
Wisdom, in a blessed...
As seasons cease not shake and shape
Those are Nature creed, obey and not berate
God's wisdom, vain minds couldn't debate.
Pains that affect the heart, we do feel once
As deep they might dig, the pleasure is immense
Time when slow to meet a wish, the ache intense
God's wisdom, vain minds couldn't make sense.
A rhymer lays bare the fine music of verse
Mother nature would fill a heart and wounds nurse
Uphold Beauty and in the wonders of poetry the soul immerse
Wisdom, in a blessed...
#admiration
#inspirational
#LifeAsAWriter
#wisdom
#WritingPoetry
110 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 11:30am
23rd Jan 2025 11:30am
Listen to the silence
Living in the shadows, where there is no place to go
Living in the shadows, where there is no place to dream
Take a deep breath to fight against your fears
Live for the moment to understand your destiny
Listen to the silence to find the way
Do you remember when nothing was everything?
Lies,
Cause what sounded good to you determined your choice
Your knowledge is fading, and this battle is just the beginning
Living in the shadows, where there is no place to dream
Take a deep breath to fight against your fears
Live for the moment to understand your destiny
Listen to the silence to find the way
Do you remember when nothing was everything?
Lies,
Cause what sounded good to you determined your choice
Your knowledge is fading, and this battle is just the beginning
#fate
#fear
#LifeStruggles
#silence
#wisdom
138 reads
14 Comments
SeaCat
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 5:24pm
11th Jan 2025 5:24pm
Sea Side Frolics
I fell far North,
caught in a cradle of clouds, dunes, and an unexpected
human silence.
I wandered by day,
following the border of sea and land,
finding routes along lanes, roads, and field bound tracks.
At times, during dead winter nights,
I stood on my frosty balcony, staring into the pitch,
hearing only the nearby sea;
it has such a task,
rumbling all night, its roar heightened
in night’s quietude.
I perched on the margins of my world,
a pigeon, with wakeful eyes
scanning the...
caught in a cradle of clouds, dunes, and an unexpected
human silence.
I wandered by day,
following the border of sea and land,
finding routes along lanes, roads, and field bound tracks.
At times, during dead winter nights,
I stood on my frosty balcony, staring into the pitch,
hearing only the nearby sea;
it has such a task,
rumbling all night, its roar heightened
in night’s quietude.
I perched on the margins of my world,
a pigeon, with wakeful eyes
scanning the...
#MovingOn
#PersonalGrowth
#wisdom
122 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 7:03pm
8th Jan 2025 7:03pm
Obelisks
Wintry tears drip deep
into icy, dark waters
The stream is endless,
as she came to me in the form of paradise
As I envisioned
I made a decision
Wisdom floats
as infinity awaits
into icy, dark waters
The stream is endless,
as she came to me in the form of paradise
As I envisioned
I made a decision
Wisdom floats
as infinity awaits
#nature
#utopia
#water
#winter
#wisdom
114 reads
6 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
29th Dec 2024 11:41pm
29th Dec 2024 11:41pm
Three wishes...
I want to take Ed Sheeran to the planet
Mars and raise little cuddly puppy dogs.
Elon Musk - make my wish come true!
I want to dumb down all the people to
a mental stage close to Down Syndrome -
To make the world more peaceful.
Scientists? Do this and I'll pay you with sex!
I want the DEATH PENALTY back in all 50 states
and all around the world! But I get to flick the switch and decide who dies!!! It would be so awesome!
God? Do I have your fucking blessing on this?
Mars and raise little cuddly puppy dogs.
Elon Musk - make my wish come true!
I want to dumb down all the people to
a mental stage close to Down Syndrome -
To make the world more peaceful.
Scientists? Do this and I'll pay you with sex!
I want the DEATH PENALTY back in all 50 states
and all around the world! But I get to flick the switch and decide who dies!!! It would be so awesome!
God? Do I have your fucking blessing on this?
#LifeGoals
#wisdom
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4 Comments
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