Poems About Violence Seeking Honest Critique
#violence
Twitch of the Death Nerve
#loneliness
#women
#violence
#fiction
#MentalHealth
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War is Hell, Hell is War!
In the grip of winter
Impending dread
The opposing army seized their home
Family fought them hard and with honor
Critical madness
All of his family slaughtered
Disemboweled
Stillborn removed
Torched
Charred remains
He was the last survivor
Barely endured the massacre
Ridden with disease
Severed survival
Gasping for air
On life support
A vacant coffin awaits
Retribution for the dead
Impending dread
The opposing army seized their home
Family fought them hard and with honor
Critical madness
All of his family slaughtered
Disemboweled
Stillborn removed
Torched
Charred remains
He was the last survivor
Barely endured the massacre
Ridden with disease
Severed survival
Gasping for air
On life support
A vacant coffin awaits
Retribution for the dead
#dark
#violence
#war
#death
#revenge
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A Girl With the Skin of the Moon
I met a young girl with a face of a leper,
as I browsed some travel books at the local store down on the lower east side
I heard her mother was raped on a bed of sand, while watching two people fuck on a bed of sand
she was known as a pillow biter
her bruises were covered with makeup
she wanted revenge
someone took a photograph of the rape
one of the men was in the lower left of the photograph
she described the rape as a porno holocaust
it was a gang bang
one of the men were discovered in a steam bath
this wasn't his first time
he...
as I browsed some travel books at the local store down on the lower east side
I heard her mother was raped on a bed of sand, while watching two people fuck on a bed of sand
she was known as a pillow biter
her bruises were covered with makeup
she wanted revenge
someone took a photograph of the rape
one of the men was in the lower left of the photograph
she described the rape as a porno holocaust
it was a gang bang
one of the men were discovered in a steam bath
this wasn't his first time
he...
#violence
#abuse
#fiction
#ShortStory
#illness
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C.S.I.
The very definition of deadbeat
is every last conservative we know
hell for leather at the buy bull retreat
and the dog and pony deer hunter show
to study the latest mass murder kit
cuz deer and people weigh about the same
so bullets make the same ballistic hit
on legal or illegal human game...
about which they fantasize all day long,
when they're not bitching about Taylor Swift
and how woke she is with her latest song
where lyrics are too big for them to sift
like the ideation they should have learned
from all the schoolbooks...
is every last conservative we know
hell for leather at the buy bull retreat
and the dog and pony deer hunter show
to study the latest mass murder kit
cuz deer and people weigh about the same
so bullets make the same ballistic hit
on legal or illegal human game...
about which they fantasize all day long,
when they're not bitching about Taylor Swift
and how woke she is with her latest song
where lyrics are too big for them to sift
like the ideation they should have learned
from all the schoolbooks...
#violence
#PopCulture
#ignorance
#tradition
#masculinity
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Deep Red
#lust
#sex
#family
#violence
#ShortStory
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Orgy of Death
For those I hate
Fucking hell
Beneath the skin
An open wound
Thirsty for blood, hunger for flesh
Scattered carnage
Wriggling torsos
Pungent, infested disease
Brain candy for dessert
Vomiting repugnance
To die again
Fucking hell
Beneath the skin
An open wound
Thirsty for blood, hunger for flesh
Scattered carnage
Wriggling torsos
Pungent, infested disease
Brain candy for dessert
Vomiting repugnance
To die again
#violence
#death
#evil
#fiction
#horror
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Kiss Them Goodbye
#violence
#death
#school
#fire
#God
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Hungry Dopes
A pizza delivery man was beaten to death a few towns over where I live 3 years ago. Three teenage geniuses who decided this was the way to get some free food. They took all of the delivery man's pizza, but left the $500 that was in the man's pocket!
#violence
#death
#money
#food
#ignorance
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Girl X, Boy Y
They don't
wander with
dirt stained
hands
they spend
hours alone
inside dark
channels
as court
hearings
warp into
stages.
wander with
dirt stained
hands
they spend
hours alone
inside dark
channels
as court
hearings
warp into
stages.
#murder
#violence
#Britain #minimalist
#Britain #minimalist
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When The Iceman Cums
I really hate you
did you know I resent you?
you make me feel things with your hateful testosterone
it's all about sex with you
I am cold about it
I don't like anyone getting in my personal space
you make me think about it
and my vulnerability trembles
the masochist in me lusts
encourages scenarios
twisted thoughts that arouse
but I keep myself chaste of thought
it disturbs me what captivates my senses
there is a cruelty in me
that violence excites
I don't allow it ever ...
did you know I resent you?
you make me feel things with your hateful testosterone
it's all about sex with you
I am cold about it
I don't like anyone getting in my personal space
you make me think about it
and my vulnerability trembles
the masochist in me lusts
encourages scenarios
twisted thoughts that arouse
but I keep myself chaste of thought
it disturbs me what captivates my senses
there is a cruelty in me
that violence excites
I don't allow it ever ...
#dark
#women
#violence
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Enter Tha Badman
Another disc day dawned, now here's the scoop,
Gino Corona, released from prison, fresh out the coop.
Five years down the line, for a knife crime spree,
Now he's out, on the right path, to set himself free.
Decides on shotokan karate, and keepin' it clean,
He arrived at the dojo, it was a sight unseen.
The sensei there, the retired cop from back in the day,
Corri Coleback sent Gino, back then, on his way.
Eighth Dan black belt, no joking around,
His daughter, Mary Coleback, also wears the crown.
She's a rookie cop on the beat, and...
Gino Corona, released from prison, fresh out the coop.
Five years down the line, for a knife crime spree,
Now he's out, on the right path, to set himself free.
Decides on shotokan karate, and keepin' it clean,
He arrived at the dojo, it was a sight unseen.
The sensei there, the retired cop from back in the day,
Corri Coleback sent Gino, back then, on his way.
Eighth Dan black belt, no joking around,
His daughter, Mary Coleback, also wears the crown.
She's a rookie cop on the beat, and...
#conflict
#violence
#LifeStruggles
#CallToAction
#prison
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When a Dragon flies
I can hear the beat of black wings
my mind cracks on a tempest wind
I want to breathe the fire it brings.
Find the bars and fix them to my cage
In every open bottle there’s a rage
your in a mess that's already made.
I am and I’ll always be
somethings got a hold of me,
drench my shirt in stale pain
don't let my Dragons rise again
Your fingers tremble on deep water
but you’ve already crossed the border,
bind my hands and let my fists unfold
one more truth that's never to be told.
So let my feet find broken glass ...
my mind cracks on a tempest wind
I want to breathe the fire it brings.
Find the bars and fix them to my cage
In every open bottle there’s a rage
your in a mess that's already made.
I am and I’ll always be
somethings got a hold of me,
drench my shirt in stale pain
don't let my Dragons rise again
Your fingers tremble on deep water
but you’ve already crossed the border,
bind my hands and let my fists unfold
one more truth that's never to be told.
So let my feet find broken glass ...
#anger
#violence
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DU Poetry : Poems About Violence Seeking Honest Critique