Poems About Violence Seeking Honest Critique
#violence
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:53am
Yesterday 10:53am
The fight begins, till death
We all dream of peace
Heard the tales of euphoria
We've all seen the land of hate
No tears in our eyes
No pain inside
No fear for us to hide
Two fists I'm ready to throw down
United, break down the walls
Shotgun blasts sound out the call now
The fight begins for us all
We've got to fight back
This burden in our hands
We've got to let them know
Rise up ready to attack
We are the final stand
We've got to let them know
We've got to let them know
This is the end
The fight begins, till death
Heard the tales of euphoria
We've all seen the land of hate
No tears in our eyes
No pain inside
No fear for us to hide
Two fists I'm ready to throw down
United, break down the walls
Shotgun blasts sound out the call now
The fight begins for us all
We've got to fight back
This burden in our hands
We've got to let them know
Rise up ready to attack
We are the final stand
We've got to let them know
We've got to let them know
This is the end
The fight begins, till death
#anger
#CallToAction
#corruption
#rebellion
#violence
33 reads
4 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 10:06pm
1st Nov 2024 10:06pm
Whale Psychologist
One day...
When the boffins pull his carcass apart
they'll find a new species of syphilis
had acted as a stand in for his heart
even as it worked as a chrysalis
in syndication with his Adderall
to evolve neural function into venom
spat as demagoguery and Sharpie scrawl
never too far from his ogre frenum
routinely caught by photos, in a sneer,
or wide open cetacean blowhard hole
in all the ways lips can represent fear
and neuronal damage rigamarole;
too late to analyze when he is dead,
in lackey wake...and subsequent...
When the boffins pull his carcass apart
they'll find a new species of syphilis
had acted as a stand in for his heart
even as it worked as a chrysalis
in syndication with his Adderall
to evolve neural function into venom
spat as demagoguery and Sharpie scrawl
never too far from his ogre frenum
routinely caught by photos, in a sneer,
or wide open cetacean blowhard hole
in all the ways lips can represent fear
and neuronal damage rigamarole;
too late to analyze when he is dead,
in lackey wake...and subsequent...
#addiction
#hypocrisy
#MentalHealth
#politics
#violence
92 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
29th Oct 2024 5:44pm
29th Oct 2024 5:44pm
The vicious cumshot
#abuse
#death
#orgasm
#sex
#violence
70 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Oct 2024 6:47pm
28th Oct 2024 6:47pm
The Gore Gore Girls
#dark
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
#violence
31 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 8:39pm
27th Oct 2024 8:39pm
Toxie Will Help
Cleaning the gym, the easiest target
everyone's torments he must bear
Thrown into a barrel of nuclear waste
instant mutation his life changed forever
Skin turns dark head grows large
putrid complexion exterior decay
Rejected by loved ones forced to exile
roaming alone feeling confused
Bringer of justice, killing the villains
If you need help he will assist
A true vigilante saving the world
A brush for a weapon, a blind girl is his love
Living in the junkyard, a social outcast
Planning his vengeance towards them...
everyone's torments he must bear
Thrown into a barrel of nuclear waste
instant mutation his life changed forever
Skin turns dark head grows large
putrid complexion exterior decay
Rejected by loved ones forced to exile
roaming alone feeling confused
Bringer of justice, killing the villains
If you need help he will assist
A true vigilante saving the world
A brush for a weapon, a blind girl is his love
Living in the junkyard, a social outcast
Planning his vengeance towards them...
#heroic
#horror
#PopCulture #violence
#PopCulture #violence
55 reads
4 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 3:35pm
27th Oct 2024 3:35pm
A Dance of Shattered Glass
The glass doth break in shards
A splintered, shining rain
As crimson trails, like wounded bards
Sing low in whispered pain
The broken light doth gleam
A fractured, silent cry
And in the blood’s swift, pulsing stream
Life’s fleeting colors lie
Yon scattered glass doth show
A twisted, darkened art
A portrait born of pain and woe
Writ deep within the heart
Each shard, a mirrored face
Reflects the crimson flow
A moment’s rage, a brief disgrace
In blood and glass laid low
A splintered, shining rain
As crimson trails, like wounded bards
Sing low in whispered pain
The broken light doth gleam
A fractured, silent cry
And in the blood’s swift, pulsing stream
Life’s fleeting colors lie
Yon scattered glass doth show
A twisted, darkened art
A portrait born of pain and woe
Writ deep within the heart
Each shard, a mirrored face
Reflects the crimson flow
A moment’s rage, a brief disgrace
In blood and glass laid low
#dark
#rhyming
#storm
#violence
#wind
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0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
26th Oct 2024 10:34am
26th Oct 2024 10:34am
I'm here to kick ass and chew bubble gum!
Hidden from humanity, Hideous to see
Walking among the humans, Acting like one of us
But with these special glasses, see them for what they are
They will take over your brain, They will bring you pain
They Live in every city, They have been here for years
They control the police, they're sick they have no fear
THEY LIVE!!!!
Now the time has come to fight, we must take a stand
They have galactic power, Super intelligence
Watches that can transport them if they feel threatened
How do you kill these creatures, impossible it...
Walking among the humans, Acting like one of us
But with these special glasses, see them for what they are
They will take over your brain, They will bring you pain
They Live in every city, They have been here for years
They control the police, they're sick they have no fear
THEY LIVE!!!!
Now the time has come to fight, we must take a stand
They have galactic power, Super intelligence
Watches that can transport them if they feel threatened
How do you kill these creatures, impossible it...
#aliens
#PopCulture
#scary
#scifi
#violence
64 reads
6 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
24th Oct 2024 3:56pm
24th Oct 2024 3:56pm
Serial quitter
Now that she was calmer,
she looked at the sun
and decided to walk away from there.
She felt unobserved,
as if her existence had no
any greater interest to any other being.
She found that silence strange,
nothing in the air or coming from the nearby forest,
she didn't associate all this with the absence
of songs and chirps in the hot afternoon.
She remained distracted...
Without even noticing that the path
was paved with thousands
and thousands of heads ripped off from birds.
she looked at the sun
and decided to walk away from there.
She felt unobserved,
as if her existence had no
any greater interest to any other being.
She found that silence strange,
nothing in the air or coming from the nearby forest,
she didn't associate all this with the absence
of songs and chirps in the hot afternoon.
She remained distracted...
Without even noticing that the path
was paved with thousands
and thousands of heads ripped off from birds.
#anxiety
#murder
#ShortStory
#silence
#violence
58 reads
6 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
23rd Oct 2024 3:10pm
23rd Oct 2024 3:10pm
The Girls in the Van
I see the van sometimes, idling by
the nightclubs and the bars,
the drive-thru restaurants.
They wear the uniforms of girls
of their respective periods: leg warmers,
tees, scrunchies, hairspray (gallons
and gallons of that), and each
is wrought with some old wound:
a slash across the throat
is most common, on occasion
a stab to the chest. Nothing can staunch
the laughing, though; the endless
flow of youthful joy.
The youngest is sixteen, the oldest twenty-three.
And now across the parking court tarmac, ...
the nightclubs and the bars,
the drive-thru restaurants.
They wear the uniforms of girls
of their respective periods: leg warmers,
tees, scrunchies, hairspray (gallons
and gallons of that), and each
is wrought with some old wound:
a slash across the throat
is most common, on occasion
a stab to the chest. Nothing can staunch
the laughing, though; the endless
flow of youthful joy.
The youngest is sixteen, the oldest twenty-three.
And now across the parking court tarmac, ...
#ghosts
#murder
#violence #women
#violence #women
88 reads
3 Comments
Duice
Poem Published
17th Oct 2024 5:07pm
17th Oct 2024 5:07pm
Judgement Day
Fully loaded down by stress
focusing spectrum of cuss words to a beam
Sinister regards of carnage
kaleidoscope aimed at opposing team
Boom-Bam-Beam Tourette tics loiter in throated
close support scene
A-10 Warthog BBBRRRRRTTTT
plain in turret attack routines
Dumb luck keep it simple stupid
everybody gotta die seems
Just feed ammo stockpiles
for passovers on horrified screams
Life gave me lemons
I’m handing sour juice no aid of chaser
Only bitter sweet thoughts
aimed chase from infrared laser ...
focusing spectrum of cuss words to a beam
Sinister regards of carnage
kaleidoscope aimed at opposing team
Boom-Bam-Beam Tourette tics loiter in throated
close support scene
A-10 Warthog BBBRRRRRTTTT
plain in turret attack routines
Dumb luck keep it simple stupid
everybody gotta die seems
Just feed ammo stockpiles
for passovers on horrified screams
Life gave me lemons
I’m handing sour juice no aid of chaser
Only bitter sweet thoughts
aimed chase from infrared laser ...
#anger
#frustration
#anxiety
#PTSD
#violence
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1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
13th Oct 2024 7:53pm
13th Oct 2024 7:53pm
Guts, but no brains
She told me while we were at a cafe eating lunch, that the way I live my life would make her head explode
She can't handle more then one thing at a time, due to her anxiety
I told her that I would pay her $100 dollars to see her head explode
She said today was my lucky day, pulled out a gun and shot herself in the head
Part of her head exploded onto the wall and our table
Instead of $100, I placed a $50 in her bra, since I only saw part of her head explode
I got up, paid the cashier and left
She had guts but no brains, literally
She can't handle more then one thing at a time, due to her anxiety
I told her that I would pay her $100 dollars to see her head explode
She said today was my lucky day, pulled out a gun and shot herself in the head
Part of her head exploded onto the wall and our table
Instead of $100, I placed a $50 in her bra, since I only saw part of her head explode
I got up, paid the cashier and left
She had guts but no brains, literally
#anxiety
#fiction
#horror
#satirical
#violence
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2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
13th Oct 2024 7:50pm
13th Oct 2024 7:50pm
An eye for a tooth
After an intense game of Chutes & Ladders, Mary hailed victorious over Gary
As everyone knows, Gary is a huge sore loser
He also had one to many drinks that evening
Mary decided to showboat a bit
The showboating was in Gary's face
He didn't like this one bit
He told Mary to back off
She wouldn't listen
With an unexpected scream, Gary slugged her twice in the mouth, knocking a tooth out of her mouth
He then said, "See, you don't need that dentist visit after all. I helped you out."
Mary said crying and upset, "That wasn't the...
As everyone knows, Gary is a huge sore loser
He also had one to many drinks that evening
Mary decided to showboat a bit
The showboating was in Gary's face
He didn't like this one bit
He told Mary to back off
She wouldn't listen
With an unexpected scream, Gary slugged her twice in the mouth, knocking a tooth out of her mouth
He then said, "See, you don't need that dentist visit after all. I helped you out."
Mary said crying and upset, "That wasn't the...
#fiction
#horror
#marriage
#ShortStory
#violence
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