Poems About Utopia by Top Critiquers
#utopia
Limp Sound Display (collaboration with PAR)
Unwind the clock
there far beyond the beyond
where there is no one else
the world's on fire
on the waters he walks
humanity also walks...
passing the time with song
humming happy thoughts
Mouse falls into a trap
volcanoes explode islands
birds in my tree
birds destroy their nests
a rainy day, wash the hate away
like seahorse cowboys
singing their song
mushroom clouds dissipate
strawberries mean love
Let your body go with the wind
let your body free from your mind
Find the stairway at the...
there far beyond the beyond
where there is no one else
the world's on fire
on the waters he walks
humanity also walks...
passing the time with song
humming happy thoughts
Mouse falls into a trap
volcanoes explode islands
birds in my tree
birds destroy their nests
a rainy day, wash the hate away
like seahorse cowboys
singing their song
mushroom clouds dissipate
strawberries mean love
Let your body go with the wind
let your body free from your mind
Find the stairway at the...
#admiration
#art
#collaboration
#dreams
#utopia
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The Soultopian Love... of our 'Amirtham' raining~ butterflying, a solid alchemy
https://youtu.be/N9xyTmVqIIc
your eyes are papery black carbonaceous conical Cuillin Scot mountains
in an immersive inversion… wet slithery shimmery eel multidimensional
projectiles in the nightish dewy running collective tears pulling my rubble
bridges in many a needful stringy concrete chalazal suspensions…
& by the scorchy summer day… erects as amazingly rugged transitions...
a rocky~ scarred ageless warrior... in but fine sugar sprinkled dispositions...
of an ever~ invitational... a globular 'kaala jamun' dome,...
your eyes are papery black carbonaceous conical Cuillin Scot mountains
in an immersive inversion… wet slithery shimmery eel multidimensional
projectiles in the nightish dewy running collective tears pulling my rubble
bridges in many a needful stringy concrete chalazal suspensions…
& by the scorchy summer day… erects as amazingly rugged transitions...
a rocky~ scarred ageless warrior... in but fine sugar sprinkled dispositions...
of an ever~ invitational... a globular 'kaala jamun' dome,...
#love
#dark
#war
#utopia
#spiritual
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4 Comments
HAVE YOU EVER TRULY WONDERED
Though I walk through the valley of death I shall not walk alone nor shall, I fear what is waiting at the end as I am never alone with the most highest spiritual soul. By my side as I walk through the shadows of the darkness that surrounds, which is known as the unknown which is called the dead of the night. For there were times when I became weak even got down on my knees, as there were times when I felt so all afraid and alone with ME MYSELF AND I. But not once did I give up on finding the inner strength, and courage to walk and stand against all that stood against ME. For they say it takes...
#utopia
#heaven
#hell
510 reads
6 Comments
Patty O Furniture
Some low slung February sun
tried to warm the afternoon breeze
by having fresh vortical fun
on its way through the neighborhood trees
It was a frisky sky today
daring me to stop and stare
and to stay awhile and play
in the finest midwinter air
And so I watched the branches dance
and birdshadow race through the grass
to stop and sing birdsong romance
for fledgling flights at outdoor class
I saw the squirrels come and go
and at the birdbath take a sip
in backlit sunbeam ripple glow ...
tried to warm the afternoon breeze
by having fresh vortical fun
on its way through the neighborhood trees
It was a frisky sky today
daring me to stop and stare
and to stay awhile and play
in the finest midwinter air
And so I watched the branches dance
and birdshadow race through the grass
to stop and sing birdsong romance
for fledgling flights at outdoor class
I saw the squirrels come and go
and at the birdbath take a sip
in backlit sunbeam ripple glow ...
#utopia
197 reads
10 Comments
Capstone
I destroy all around me.
I seek and always find.
I'm not always who I used to be.
I like to wander through my mind
The ends are always beginnings.
The day of death; I celebrate .
I'm betting on the winnings.
It was foretold straight from the gate .
I'm missing like the capstone.
Yet, a pyre in the midst.
An ancient echoing microphone.
A collection of all my wits.
The tourists all around me,
They question as I amuse.
I mock them as I folly.
I like to torture and abuse.
I destroy them with...
I seek and always find.
I'm not always who I used to be.
I like to wander through my mind
The ends are always beginnings.
The day of death; I celebrate .
I'm betting on the winnings.
It was foretold straight from the gate .
I'm missing like the capstone.
Yet, a pyre in the midst.
An ancient echoing microphone.
A collection of all my wits.
The tourists all around me,
They question as I amuse.
I mock them as I folly.
I like to torture and abuse.
I destroy them with...
#betrayal
#prison
#utopia
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12 Comments
Undoing
distraction has its side effects
attraction has its side effects
every betrayal has side effects
all betrayal is one-sided and cuts
the tradition is to know and keep quiet
____________ bleed and be quiet
____________ dream and stay awake
emotion has its side effects
lust has its side effects
perception has several altered states
contradiction is saying to be quiet
swallow to be forgotten
side effects
we are all side effects
of a void full of nothing
of a mad dog's howl
of a...
attraction has its side effects
every betrayal has side effects
all betrayal is one-sided and cuts
the tradition is to know and keep quiet
____________ bleed and be quiet
____________ dream and stay awake
emotion has its side effects
lust has its side effects
perception has several altered states
contradiction is saying to be quiet
swallow to be forgotten
side effects
we are all side effects
of a void full of nothing
of a mad dog's howl
of a...
#anxiety
#dreams
#mirror
#passion
#utopia
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12 Comments
Birnin Zana
The first time I laid my eyes on The Golden City
I was amazed at all it’s beauty and splendor
Skyscrapers nestled between rivers and mountains
A scenery that only the imagination could render
In this true symbiosis of technology and nature
People go about their way wearing colorful clothes
There’s a sense of peace and harmony amongst them
When their king walked around without being grandiose
This society is a wonder of scientific advancement
Respectful of the environment and its protection
It’s a utopia that this country has kept...
I was amazed at all it’s beauty and splendor
Skyscrapers nestled between rivers and mountains
A scenery that only the imagination could render
In this true symbiosis of technology and nature
People go about their way wearing colorful clothes
There’s a sense of peace and harmony amongst them
When their king walked around without being grandiose
This society is a wonder of scientific advancement
Respectful of the environment and its protection
It’s a utopia that this country has kept...
#dreams
#utopia
#peace
#LifeGoals
#scifi
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8 Comments
Commencing The Passage Of My Soul (Water)
I have been captured in suspended animation
The evolution of my spiritual amalgamation
Where time stand stills
The essence of my vessel slipped through a realm of thy will
There are no inferior humans only the cosmic transported by the waves of sound
Love on the run with light years, and the Heavens is a treasure our fate has found
The vibration that lured me too
Will it be a human or panther that pulls me through
Truth given in the pulsate as a new beginning kisses the Grand Rising dew
The Autume Equinox...
The evolution of my spiritual amalgamation
Where time stand stills
The essence of my vessel slipped through a realm of thy will
There are no inferior humans only the cosmic transported by the waves of sound
Love on the run with light years, and the Heavens is a treasure our fate has found
The vibration that lured me too
Will it be a human or panther that pulls me through
Truth given in the pulsate as a new beginning kisses the Grand Rising dew
The Autume Equinox...
#rebirth
#scifi
#spiritual
#utopia
#water
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anxiety in the city
and as I walk down
the street
they
ignore me, I say,
the only thing we have in common,
apart from
our common humanity,
of course,
is that
we’re strangers,
and all that entails,
the inherent
dangers ..
the street
they
ignore me, I say,
the only thing we have in common,
apart from
our common humanity,
of course,
is that
we’re strangers,
and all that entails,
the inherent
dangers ..
#heaven
#hell
#utopia
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3 Comments
Dock of Souls
at dawn there's a flicker of gold
faint with the morning dirge
night have given up Souls
sings to it, a new day
they come in liquid presence
four mystical whales
old sisters to carry souls
to gather with other sparks
what answers beauty from within
what calls to the deep like trumpets
who is the essence of them
transporters of spirit to beyond
souls left behind
swirl with the mists
screaming with the winds
forever tormented in this world, yet not
should they speak to you ...
faint with the morning dirge
night have given up Souls
sings to it, a new day
they come in liquid presence
four mystical whales
old sisters to carry souls
to gather with other sparks
what answers beauty from within
what calls to the deep like trumpets
who is the essence of them
transporters of spirit to beyond
souls left behind
swirl with the mists
screaming with the winds
forever tormented in this world, yet not
should they speak to you ...
#utopia
#ghosts
#hell
#mythology
#tradition
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2 Comments
haiku from the vegan blues café
haiku from the vegan blues café
blind golden boy
fills his cup of joy
with the blues
deep in Harlem
sax fifth of bourbon
for blue heaven
Latin Jazz wails
in Spanish Harlem midnight
for coconut blues
blue barbarians
strut the Goth jazz
for midnight Huns
flamingo artistes
paint Harlem pink
for the hepcat blues
blind golden boy
fills his cup of joy
with the blues
deep in Harlem
sax fifth of bourbon
for blue heaven
Latin Jazz wails
in Spanish Harlem midnight
for coconut blues
blue barbarians
strut the Goth jazz
for midnight Huns
flamingo artistes
paint Harlem pink
for the hepcat blues
#utopia
#night
#music
#food
#haiku
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2 Comments
Stiletto Meadow
At nine years old
The water ate my lungs
Turning me ice cold
In the year 1984
With my mother’s heels on
Playing dress up
And hop scotch
Across the pond
Where the scent of
My ghost lives on
Gliding with the swans
I’m dead and gone
Butterfly broken wings
Reflect beside my
Fossilized teeth
Playing hide and seek
Sunflowers larger
Than the vintage sun
Gave rays of shade
To my antique bones
It’s now 2084
I’m dead and gone
But the scent of my
Ghost...
The water ate my lungs
Turning me ice cold
In the year 1984
With my mother’s heels on
Playing dress up
And hop scotch
Across the pond
Where the scent of
My ghost lives on
Gliding with the swans
I’m dead and gone
Butterfly broken wings
Reflect beside my
Fossilized teeth
Playing hide and seek
Sunflowers larger
Than the vintage sun
Gave rays of shade
To my antique bones
It’s now 2084
I’m dead and gone
But the scent of my
Ghost...
#love
#death
#utopia #ghosts
#utopia #ghosts
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31 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Utopia by Top Critiquers