Uplifting Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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uplifting seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Duice
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 11:50pm
27th Oct 2024 11:50pm
Milestones
Surrounded in vibrant sharp beauty
to checkpoint the unknown
Survived experiences devoured
that could’ve sever hip bone
In jungle thorns of life
machete swung at carnivorous dense thicket
Would be insane to run the same path
and more a fool to twice pick it
Resilient in conviction I beat trails
to pave thin fragile success
Fought demons at trials in my wake
asleep woke sweat grapple in stress
Stick a [milestone] at this juncture
to save repeat of heredity queue
S.O.S. walking tight circles to arrive
in...
to checkpoint the unknown
Survived experiences devoured
that could’ve sever hip bone
In jungle thorns of life
machete swung at carnivorous dense thicket
Would be insane to run the same path
and more a fool to twice pick it
Resilient in conviction I beat trails
to pave thin fragile success
Fought demons at trials in my wake
asleep woke sweat grapple in stress
Stick a [milestone] at this juncture
to save repeat of heredity queue
S.O.S. walking tight circles to arrive
in...
#choices
#LifeChangingMoment
#memories
#TruthOfLife
#uplifting
204 reads
4 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 11:00am
27th Oct 2024 11:00am
Daddy Issues
Go ahead,cry,little girl.
Nobody does it like you do.
When you feel the pain come through.
I knew how much it matters to you.
I'll hold your hand.
Hold you close and do my best to defend.
Cry,the tears that come out like a faucet.
I know what you went through.
Cry ,the tears that turn blood red.
From the pain you went through.
I'll brush away your tears.
And scare away your fears.
I'll hold you nice and warm.
So you don't have to cry.
I'll give you hot chocolate,with flavour you cannot deny.
...
Nobody does it like you do.
When you feel the pain come through.
I knew how much it matters to you.
I'll hold your hand.
Hold you close and do my best to defend.
Cry,the tears that come out like a faucet.
I know what you went through.
Cry ,the tears that turn blood red.
From the pain you went through.
I'll brush away your tears.
And scare away your fears.
I'll hold you nice and warm.
So you don't have to cry.
I'll give you hot chocolate,with flavour you cannot deny.
...
#hope
#MentalHealth
#sadness #uplifting
#sadness #uplifting
130 reads
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
26th Oct 2024 10:48am
26th Oct 2024 10:48am
Colors Of Roses
I think each rose is unique.
And if you just take a peek,you'll see what you need.
Like red rose petals,spread at the wedding altar.
Red roses represent love.
You give them to someone you love hard.
Red roses represent passion and desire.
And the light,ember fire in your heart.
Red roses are beautiful and never foul
I could wear it in my hair.
They are georgeous and prevent a bad affair.
And if only one day I could be one.
I would be a red rose,number one.
People would look at me in awe.
And I will never...
And if you just take a peek,you'll see what you need.
Like red rose petals,spread at the wedding altar.
Red roses represent love.
You give them to someone you love hard.
Red roses represent passion and desire.
And the light,ember fire in your heart.
Red roses are beautiful and never foul
I could wear it in my hair.
They are georgeous and prevent a bad affair.
And if only one day I could be one.
I would be a red rose,number one.
People would look at me in awe.
And I will never...
#flowers
#happiness
#nature
#rose
#uplifting
90 reads
0 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
19th Oct 2024 11:04am
19th Oct 2024 11:04am
Carnival Of Memories
I still remember the good old days.
When music plays and wind sways.
We would be happy in so many ways.
Carefree,freedom.
In your own home and room.
Love ,freedom.
To choose your husband,groom.
I remember when I was a kid and my grandma took me to a carnival.
Cotton candy,kebab.
And lots of toys for sale.
Happy music,my heart.
Feeling happy,swell.
There would be people all around.
Kids,adults,teenagers.
Who all came to celebrate.
Kids of all ages,who can't wait!
Some people came for...
When music plays and wind sways.
We would be happy in so many ways.
Carefree,freedom.
In your own home and room.
Love ,freedom.
To choose your husband,groom.
I remember when I was a kid and my grandma took me to a carnival.
Cotton candy,kebab.
And lots of toys for sale.
Happy music,my heart.
Feeling happy,swell.
There would be people all around.
Kids,adults,teenagers.
Who all came to celebrate.
Kids of all ages,who can't wait!
Some people came for...
#happiness
#hope
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
64 reads
1 Comment
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
16th Oct 2024 10:47am
16th Oct 2024 10:47am
The Rainbow
It was the end of a tiring day.
And I began to head home.
I went into my house, a peace and quiet of my own.
I had a cup of mint tea.
And I relaxed as one should be.
Yet outside,I caught a light.
With colors,that take flight.
It was a colorful,amazing sight.
It was colorful,bright.
Not during night,but day.
Far,far away i the sky.
With colors you cannot deny.
And you let out a happy sigh.
It was a rainbow, made of light.
During day,not starry night.
It was colorful,like colorful sunrays. ...
And I began to head home.
I went into my house, a peace and quiet of my own.
I had a cup of mint tea.
And I relaxed as one should be.
Yet outside,I caught a light.
With colors,that take flight.
It was a colorful,amazing sight.
It was colorful,bright.
Not during night,but day.
Far,far away i the sky.
With colors you cannot deny.
And you let out a happy sigh.
It was a rainbow, made of light.
During day,not starry night.
It was colorful,like colorful sunrays. ...
#happiness
#hope
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
85 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
13th Oct 2024 2:23pm
13th Oct 2024 2:23pm
Warm Leatherette
Life always seemed so endless
when we were listening to the Bee Gees
or Donna Summer...
Even ABBA has always made us feel
like dancing and acting carelessly.
They convinced us that we were immortals.
So we kept on going through the years.
No preoccupation, no worries or fears.
Cheering Cher and Turning Tina.
We were so passionate, so absolutely in love,
we believed that the groove was in the heart.
We used to jump onto the dancefloor
but not into precipitate conclusions.
They made us certain that...
when we were listening to the Bee Gees
or Donna Summer...
Even ABBA has always made us feel
like dancing and acting carelessly.
They convinced us that we were immortals.
So we kept on going through the years.
No preoccupation, no worries or fears.
Cheering Cher and Turning Tina.
We were so passionate, so absolutely in love,
we believed that the groove was in the heart.
We used to jump onto the dancefloor
but not into precipitate conclusions.
They made us certain that...
#dance
#happiness
#kindness
#music
#uplifting
78 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
12th Oct 2024 6:31pm
12th Oct 2024 6:31pm
SACRED HEALING
SACRED HEALING is more beneficial to you, more than anything that you could do to improve. YOUR quality of life and health and wellness of your healing, process through the process of your your own mind and heart and spiritual soul transferring. THE real deepness of your personal thoughts, from negativity to positivity for sure no matter what we have to do, to improve the process of healing. DO it with your inner strength and courage and perseverance. For we must never give up 🤨 the fight, for the betterment of life. For let the fire 🔥 that burns inside of you, let it ignite,...
#LifeChangingMoment
#StreamOfConsciousness
#TimeHeals #uplifting
#TimeHeals #uplifting
86 reads
4 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
10th Oct 2024 5:40am
10th Oct 2024 5:40am
Sell the Positive
Sell the positive
Discard the negative
Positivity living in all of us
Can’t think negative
It just defeats my soul
So I sell positive in every breath I take
Positivity that’s what sustains
Pose a question just to me
If you live positive and not negative
Flowers bloom in your situation
Not every day is a Daisy
Some days all I have is weeds
Positive in motion you can’t stop it
If you dip into positive shed negative notions
Think about what we are grateful for
Family friends and...
Discard the negative
Positivity living in all of us
Can’t think negative
It just defeats my soul
So I sell positive in every breath I take
Positivity that’s what sustains
Pose a question just to me
If you live positive and not negative
Flowers bloom in your situation
Not every day is a Daisy
Some days all I have is weeds
Positive in motion you can’t stop it
If you dip into positive shed negative notions
Think about what we are grateful for
Family friends and...
#gratitude
#hope
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
60 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
9th Oct 2024 9:55am
9th Oct 2024 9:55am
DO YOU KNOW THYSELF
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words, ✍️ I would like to take this time to ask you. HOW FAR YOU WILLING TO GO TO TRULY, to learn thyself what makes you feel the way that you do. For sure do you have the perseverance to accept, the challenge of encouragement to dive into the deepness of your, own mind and heart and spiritual soul. 🙏 For sure what would it take for you to know thyself Worth. 🤔 Do you have the knowledge and wisdom, to understand your thoughts and insight, and the deepness of your own personal thoughts of WHO YOU ARE. FOR HOW MUCH DO YOU...
#courage
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#strength
#uplifting
97 reads
15 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Oct 2024 11:21am
8th Oct 2024 11:21am
You're the one
Times were slow,
they could be changing
My life could use some arranging
Now's the time to have some fun
Falling for that special someone
You could open a hidden world
To reveal that hidden pearl
Life it has it's unknown joys
Hidden deep by little girls and boys
Reaching deep into hazy minds
Magical wonders you may find
Life is a one way street
If by chance, baby we should meet
If I needed a helping hand
To lie, to steal, to take the stand
I know it's you babe, I know it's you
Guide my ship through the...
they could be changing
My life could use some arranging
Now's the time to have some fun
Falling for that special someone
You could open a hidden world
To reveal that hidden pearl
Life it has it's unknown joys
Hidden deep by little girls and boys
Reaching deep into hazy minds
Magical wonders you may find
Life is a one way street
If by chance, baby we should meet
If I needed a helping hand
To lie, to steal, to take the stand
I know it's you babe, I know it's you
Guide my ship through the...
#happiness
#love
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
123 reads
6 Comments
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
7th Oct 2024 12:43pm
7th Oct 2024 12:43pm
Borrowed IG Wisdoms
Don't count the days until you succeed. Make every day count on your way to succeeding.
------BeenLikeThis------
Purposeful
Oracle
Evoking
Transformation
Now that is a perfect description of a POET.
(Don't recall who posted it, but I loved the T-Shirts they wore)
------BeenLikeThis------
Purposeful
Oracle
Evoking
Transformation
Now that is a perfect description of a POET.
(Don't recall who posted it, but I loved the T-Shirts they wore)
#collaboration
#metaphor
#uplifting
80 reads
0 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
7th Oct 2024 10:59am
7th Oct 2024 10:59am
Childhood Memories
if I could live there just one day.
I would go back to happy times and sway.
I would visit stormy winters with friends.
Visits at the beach,make amends.
When I was young and nobody pretends.
We would travel to far away lands using our imagination.
And we would stay together like a whole another nation.
We would be safe in our own station.
Of friendship,love,desparation.
Like the day I were sad and you told me a joke.
I didn't get it,but it gave me hope.
It cheered me up and dried my tears.
But eventually,I had...
I would go back to happy times and sway.
I would visit stormy winters with friends.
Visits at the beach,make amends.
When I was young and nobody pretends.
We would travel to far away lands using our imagination.
And we would stay together like a whole another nation.
We would be safe in our own station.
Of friendship,love,desparation.
Like the day I were sad and you told me a joke.
I didn't get it,but it gave me hope.
It cheered me up and dried my tears.
But eventually,I had...
#childhood
#hope
#memorial
#sadness
#uplifting
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