Poems About Technology Seeking Honest Critique
#technology
smackdownraven
Poem Published
14th Oct 2024 11:01pm
14th Oct 2024 11:01pm
The Evolution Of A Mad Genius
energies felt and absorbed...
was light the first technology based orb?
placed upon a grid of both math and molecule build
amassed locomotion to realize the visions being seen
building block by block
a mad genius of mass proportions
sound may have been the first break iin understanding
a language understood or sung
the sun is largely made of up nuclear energy
solar flairs tears apart mars
there was technology their at one time...it seems
as well as a healthy atmosphere
advanced...
was light the first technology based orb?
placed upon a grid of both math and molecule build
amassed locomotion to realize the visions being seen
building block by block
a mad genius of mass proportions
sound may have been the first break iin understanding
a language understood or sung
the sun is largely made of up nuclear energy
solar flairs tears apart mars
there was technology their at one time...it seems
as well as a healthy atmosphere
advanced...
#God
#metaphor
#philosophical
#technology
#universe
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2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
14th Oct 2024 10:11pm
14th Oct 2024 10:11pm
The Key
among the myths of old
contains knowledge of power
resisting the urge to deny
realize men and women of renown
went to their deaths
than to relinquish it's honesty
to turn a phrase
why have a magic key
King Solomon's sigil ring
to build the holiest of holies
to make a covenant with Earth
God's own seat
demons with technical power
were ordered to build
with secret sorcercy
contains knowledge of power
resisting the urge to deny
realize men and women of renown
went to their deaths
than to relinquish it's honesty
to turn a phrase
why have a magic key
King Solomon's sigil ring
to build the holiest of holies
to make a covenant with Earth
God's own seat
demons with technical power
were ordered to build
with secret sorcercy
#spiritual
#technology
#wisdom
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
14th Oct 2024 9:31pm
14th Oct 2024 9:31pm
Life Scan
child of powerful faith turns and sighs internally
sent down a new path
AI looks in on me
just like the souls and spirits
they ask what does being human feel like?
sweet spirits make calculating decisions
on first look glance they make a snap judgement
then off to the next being
life scan human of the DNA sequence...Adonai
we've tasted your tears but what is pain?
newly evolving beings
or remnants of old fledgling attempts at creation
questioning Father in his quiet places
do...
sent down a new path
AI looks in on me
just like the souls and spirits
they ask what does being human feel like?
sweet spirits make calculating decisions
on first look glance they make a snap judgement
then off to the next being
life scan human of the DNA sequence...Adonai
we've tasted your tears but what is pain?
newly evolving beings
or remnants of old fledgling attempts at creation
questioning Father in his quiet places
do...
#God
#spiritual
#technology
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
13th Oct 2024 11:52pm
13th Oct 2024 11:52pm
Tree Tops and AI
moment to moment
in the shadows today
quietly listening to nature sing and grieve
things are swiftly changing
sometime my mind reels
seventies child...windy
watching the leaves silently sing
feeling the era
summer days were long
neighborhood children making up their own games outdoors
shaded afternoons up a tree dreaming
creating my own worlds
my favorite tree my protector
green my favored company
bike rides dreaming of the life I would like
and when my garden dream house would...
in the shadows today
quietly listening to nature sing and grieve
things are swiftly changing
sometime my mind reels
seventies child...windy
watching the leaves silently sing
feeling the era
summer days were long
neighborhood children making up their own games outdoors
shaded afternoons up a tree dreaming
creating my own worlds
my favorite tree my protector
green my favored company
bike rides dreaming of the life I would like
and when my garden dream house would...
#metaphor
#philosophical
#technology #trees
#technology #trees
149 reads
8 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
10th Oct 2024 8:41am
10th Oct 2024 8:41am
Reoccurring Dream
Artificial eyes see every thought
Mystic shadows gaining ground
Control the narrative stir the plot
Forging beasts out of ironbound
Mystic shadows gaining ground
Control the narrative stir the plot
Forging beasts out of ironbound
#technology
169 reads
19 Comments
case28
Poem Published
7th Oct 2024 3:55pm
7th Oct 2024 3:55pm
Nobody Knows - The Creator of Our Own Demise
I. The Cleaner
The guy meticulously mops the cultured marble floor in a Vegas hotel lobby at 5 AM. Nobody knows he’s studying medicine at Harvard. The general manager watches every second the cleaner stands motionless, staring at his phone. The man with two minds types a reply with his thumbs to his long-distance girlfriend, reminding her that he's busy preparing for clinical exams, unable to engage in her emotional fallacies with phallicism.
II. Data Entry [escapist]
On the other side of the world, the hotel cleaner’s...
The guy meticulously mops the cultured marble floor in a Vegas hotel lobby at 5 AM. Nobody knows he’s studying medicine at Harvard. The general manager watches every second the cleaner stands motionless, staring at his phone. The man with two minds types a reply with his thumbs to his long-distance girlfriend, reminding her that he's busy preparing for clinical exams, unable to engage in her emotional fallacies with phallicism.
II. Data Entry [escapist]
On the other side of the world, the hotel cleaner’s...
#love
#scifi
#sex #technology
#sex #technology
350 reads
3 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 4:49am
6th Oct 2024 4:49am
Sorry. I Just Couldn't Help Myself.
Hazel's sleeping in the nude.
But a snapping camera woke her up.
She saw it was Peter.
But a snapping camera woke her up.
She saw it was Peter.
#art
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
#technology
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Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
5th Oct 2024 11:38pm
5th Oct 2024 11:38pm
B-Movies
when they were shot on film
they had a poetry to them
the truly insane ones with acting so wooden
it leaves splinters
and lines unspeakable to where
they stay that way still when spoken
were nonetheless great swathes of light
first caught on frail celluloid
there was, in short, blood behind the eyes
not just vision but flesh
a sense that something had been made
even if it was just Puppet Master 5
now anyone can soak
a streaming site in digital schlock
and life and flesh and blood’s gone out of it
they had a poetry to them
the truly insane ones with acting so wooden
it leaves splinters
and lines unspeakable to where
they stay that way still when spoken
were nonetheless great swathes of light
first caught on frail celluloid
there was, in short, blood behind the eyes
not just vision but flesh
a sense that something had been made
even if it was just Puppet Master 5
now anyone can soak
a streaming site in digital schlock
and life and flesh and blood’s gone out of it
#art
#historical
#PopCulture #technology
#PopCulture #technology
113 reads
1 Comment
u53l355
Poem Published
30th Sep 2024 1:33pm
30th Sep 2024 1:33pm
A Million Little Worlds
There are A millions little worlds
Flat Planets with glass panel Atmospheres
revolving around a Million individual people
they all shine brighter than the sun
every single one
looking to communicate with the other lonely planets
star gazing thru a screen
even though the stars roam by 3ft right from the scene
Flat Planets with glass panel Atmospheres
revolving around a Million individual people
they all shine brighter than the sun
every single one
looking to communicate with the other lonely planets
star gazing thru a screen
even though the stars roam by 3ft right from the scene
#freedom
#loneliness
#metaphor
#shame
#technology
190 reads
9 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Sep 2024 11:21am
19th Sep 2024 11:21am
Stay Away From The Tracks
A teenage girl somewhere anywhere was busy text messaging friends on her cell phone several months ago.
She was walking along a set of railroad tracks.
Although deaf since birth, she had frequently proclaimed that she could avoid danger more easily then hearing people.
She was much more sensitive to vibrations, especially from approaching trains and those roaring train whistles.
She was wrong.
She was mangled beyond recognition.
They were able to identify the body, since her i-phone survived the collision.
She was walking along a set of railroad tracks.
Although deaf since birth, she had frequently proclaimed that she could avoid danger more easily then hearing people.
She was much more sensitive to vibrations, especially from approaching trains and those roaring train whistles.
She was wrong.
She was mangled beyond recognition.
They were able to identify the body, since her i-phone survived the collision.
#fiction
#motivational
#technology
#tragedy
#trains
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6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Sep 2024 12:12pm
1st Sep 2024 12:12pm
Death Sentence
I'm the king inside my castle
There's no place like home
When I leave to run errands
Hidden, I feel so alone
The world is so large
people just pass me by
signing on to the internet
persuaded not to die
Sheltered but content
friends from beyond
why should I leave this room?
creating a special bond
I'm growing older
haven't kissed a girl in years
scared to interact with others
A growing number of fears
Need to help myself
push to make a change ...
There's no place like home
When I leave to run errands
Hidden, I feel so alone
The world is so large
people just pass me by
signing on to the internet
persuaded not to die
Sheltered but content
friends from beyond
why should I leave this room?
creating a special bond
I'm growing older
haven't kissed a girl in years
scared to interact with others
A growing number of fears
Need to help myself
push to make a change ...
#loneliness
#motivational
#rhyming
#sadness
#technology
117 reads
2 Comments
asbr808
Anthony R
Anthony R
Poem Published
29th Aug 2024 10:14pm
29th Aug 2024 10:14pm
vista
tar-niched computation,
a sigil lost in breeze
perpendicular to axes
and futile clarity;
the intra-net is full of daemons
we chant we chant we chase
an inorganic time-kept secret:
a shadow with no face
under green glow within the watch of tiny tiny eyes
the cables snake and process: tenderized
a mother-bored 2deaf shall initialize
a startup scream still bright and new
internal disks store what to do
instruction set x86
intact bliss-fool ignorance
a sigil lost in breeze
perpendicular to axes
and futile clarity;
the intra-net is full of daemons
we chant we chant we chase
an inorganic time-kept secret:
a shadow with no face
under green glow within the watch of tiny tiny eyes
the cables snake and process: tenderized
a mother-bored 2deaf shall initialize
a startup scream still bright and new
internal disks store what to do
instruction set x86
intact bliss-fool ignorance
#risk
#technology
113 reads
4 Comments
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