Poems About Technology Seeking Honest Critique
#technology
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Apr 2025 1:55pm
7th Apr 2025 1:55pm
Why Didn't You Tell Me I'm Topless?!
Carol was
interviewing some folks
at a celebrity party just
before some guy came over and placed both hands on
her bare chest and she saw Jeff filming
that whole scene with no words
being said.
interviewing some folks
at a celebrity party just
before some guy came over and placed both hands on
her bare chest and she saw Jeff filming
that whole scene with no words
being said.
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
#technology
85 reads
2 Comments
Heisenberg68
Poem Published
7th Apr 2025 1:43am
7th Apr 2025 1:43am
A New Tune for Tomorrow
In the land where the desert meets destiny’s skies,
Whispers rise from the sands where the future lies,
A vision of minds and machines entwined,
Humanity dances on the edge of the digital mind.
Where brain-computer interfaces map the thoughts untold,
Circuits woven into flesh, futures bold.
The merging of man with the pulse of machines,
In the crucible of the desert, where the new world preens.
Across the earth, under the stars we’ve known,
Potential soars on winds that have grown,
Yet, in this march toward the dawn's bright light,...
Whispers rise from the sands where the future lies,
A vision of minds and machines entwined,
Humanity dances on the edge of the digital mind.
Where brain-computer interfaces map the thoughts untold,
Circuits woven into flesh, futures bold.
The merging of man with the pulse of machines,
In the crucible of the desert, where the new world preens.
Across the earth, under the stars we’ve known,
Potential soars on winds that have grown,
Yet, in this march toward the dawn's bright light,...
#humankind
#science
#technology
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AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
31st Mar 2025 9:23pm
31st Mar 2025 9:23pm
Black Face
Let me give you redemption.
Everytime I ride you into a tree.
You're my favorite comedian,
And my noble steed.
Those bullet holes,
Are there to remind me,
Everytime I needed you,
After doing illegal things.
The government,
is coming after me.
Let's rob a train,
like traditional theives.
You have a black face,
But no Martin Luther King!,
You're just a dumb horse,
That does illegal things.
I hope I don't get banned.
I hope my horse understands.
When I whistle a command,
The...
Everytime I ride you into a tree.
You're my favorite comedian,
And my noble steed.
Those bullet holes,
Are there to remind me,
Everytime I needed you,
After doing illegal things.
The government,
is coming after me.
Let's rob a train,
like traditional theives.
You have a black face,
But no Martin Luther King!,
You're just a dumb horse,
That does illegal things.
I hope I don't get banned.
I hope my horse understands.
When I whistle a command,
The...
#funny
#technology
55 reads
0 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2025 00:34am
22nd Mar 2025 00:34am
it’s not the end of the world
when the internet crashed for good
it wasn’t me
I don’t drive and anyway I was probably in
bed
it wasn’t me
I don’t drive and anyway I was probably in
bed
#technology
72 reads
7 Comments
hyperviolet
Poem Published
20th Mar 2025 1:21pm
20th Mar 2025 1:21pm
inner dialogue
sometimes
when i sit beneath that autumnal sun
when it’s photons strike my skin with their speed
so cosmologically significant and so entropic yet calculated
i think about
the fact that we exist is a chance never before seen
like tetratial growth every step we take,
a factorial of every action we think of making
that the trees, unmoving are as complex a thing as anything ever could be
the elementary particles that make it all up are ineffable in nature to us
in scale, in number
and that yet it is beautiful that we try ...
when i sit beneath that autumnal sun
when it’s photons strike my skin with their speed
so cosmologically significant and so entropic yet calculated
i think about
the fact that we exist is a chance never before seen
like tetratial growth every step we take,
a factorial of every action we think of making
that the trees, unmoving are as complex a thing as anything ever could be
the elementary particles that make it all up are ineffable in nature to us
in scale, in number
and that yet it is beautiful that we try ...
#nature
#technology
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0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 8:31pm
19th Mar 2025 8:31pm
Addiction
Excuse me.
Excuse me!
EXCUSE ME!!!
Yes you. I have a question to ask.
Why does it take several times for you to respond to me?
You can't answer that
I know why...
It's because your head is buried into that device they call a smartphone
It seems that your compulsive behavior with this machine is creating a barrier amongst others
Sure you may have loads of friends online, but you can't truly see, feel or hear them
Your "friends" are not really your "friends"
Is it that necessary to refresh your post...
Excuse me!
EXCUSE ME!!!
Yes you. I have a question to ask.
Why does it take several times for you to respond to me?
You can't answer that
I know why...
It's because your head is buried into that device they call a smartphone
It seems that your compulsive behavior with this machine is creating a barrier amongst others
Sure you may have loads of friends online, but you can't truly see, feel or hear them
Your "friends" are not really your "friends"
Is it that necessary to refresh your post...
#anger
#CallToAction
#learning
#technology
#TruthOfLife
117 reads
16 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
10th Mar 2025 7:17am
10th Mar 2025 7:17am
Thora Flowers
unadulterated pain with its butterflywings mutated
they know how to morph but not fly
in sync with smiles that don't form from the soul
plastic, no paper will heal our planet
Who will heal the heart?
we used to know one another without talking
now we're afraid to look in each other's lying eyes
it's okay, smile nod, of course it is
penetrate the lie and sit and fib for a while
I don't know about you, but I'm dying inside
things are changing at light speed
but are they? I had a baby alive at five
Technology gets...
they know how to morph but not fly
in sync with smiles that don't form from the soul
plastic, no paper will heal our planet
Who will heal the heart?
we used to know one another without talking
now we're afraid to look in each other's lying eyes
it's okay, smile nod, of course it is
penetrate the lie and sit and fib for a while
I don't know about you, but I'm dying inside
things are changing at light speed
but are they? I had a baby alive at five
Technology gets...
#humankind
#technology
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Hatful-of-Hollow
Poem Published
9th Mar 2025 12:14pm
9th Mar 2025 12:14pm
Carry On dot.com Sitcom
Skinstorm of scripts
written upon Wi-Fi wrists,
ever the moon is vowel shaped
Wide to receive
from another lonely hand,
as roadkill waiting to be shovelled
earthed into the ground
Who will chalk around cursors
at love-crime cyber scene?
Something is squeezing your skull
Surfing Transmitted Disease,
tinder sticks smoulder desire
before rain retreats to the sky
& reality nothing more than a drunk emoji
Post mortem modem
threads bone though keyboards,
no ghosts in the machine
only...
written upon Wi-Fi wrists,
ever the moon is vowel shaped
Wide to receive
from another lonely hand,
as roadkill waiting to be shovelled
earthed into the ground
Who will chalk around cursors
at love-crime cyber scene?
Something is squeezing your skull
Surfing Transmitted Disease,
tinder sticks smoulder desire
before rain retreats to the sky
& reality nothing more than a drunk emoji
Post mortem modem
threads bone though keyboards,
no ghosts in the machine
only...
#technology
#universe
86 reads
1 Comment
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
4th Mar 2025 5:26pm
4th Mar 2025 5:26pm
Abuse
There are worse things,
than caring about what you think.
Like feeling like dying everyday,
Or going months without sleep.
Listen to my phone.
Can you hear me moan?
I know I'm not alone.
Staring blankly in my home.
I hope that when I smile,
It makes you happy for a while.
Because I never get to see you,
I only get to tease you.
I hope that all your friends,
Understand why I hate them.
Always trying to blend in,
While I constantly miss him.
I...
than caring about what you think.
Like feeling like dying everyday,
Or going months without sleep.
Listen to my phone.
Can you hear me moan?
I know I'm not alone.
Staring blankly in my home.
I hope that when I smile,
It makes you happy for a while.
Because I never get to see you,
I only get to tease you.
I hope that all your friends,
Understand why I hate them.
Always trying to blend in,
While I constantly miss him.
I...
#FeelingTrapped
#loneliness
#secrets #technology
#secrets #technology
126 reads
10 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
4th Mar 2025 2:00am
4th Mar 2025 2:00am
That's My First Clue
The air conditioner shorted out?
You see me playing video games topless?
Yes. That's my first clue.
You see me playing video games topless?
Yes. That's my first clue.
#dialogue
#fiction
#sex
#summer
#technology
185 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Mar 2025 11:03am
1st Mar 2025 11:03am
Corrosion of Conformity
I cannot escape, the frequencies penetrate
Decibels pound me into submission
Camera eye, forever the spy
Motions captured for the living impaired
Silicone dictators in plastic mansions
Fiber optic propaganda
Streaming fashion inflames the passion
To climax in the blink of an eye
Terabyte brainwaves, upload in progress
Eternally the master and server
2.0 human alien being
Forever existing in some random computer
Technocracy
Is it saving me?
Technology
Inside of me
Technocracy
Is it freeing...
Decibels pound me into submission
Camera eye, forever the spy
Motions captured for the living impaired
Silicone dictators in plastic mansions
Fiber optic propaganda
Streaming fashion inflames the passion
To climax in the blink of an eye
Terabyte brainwaves, upload in progress
Eternally the master and server
2.0 human alien being
Forever existing in some random computer
Technocracy
Is it saving me?
Technology
Inside of me
Technocracy
Is it freeing...
#CallToAction
#corruption
#manipulation
#politics
#technology
157 reads
13 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 11:39am
24th Feb 2025 11:39am
In Musk, Should We Trust??
Zombified Society
Corrupted by technology
With Wires connected to our brain
Control our life
Cybernetic drug for our brain
Burning our cells to the end
We live now as modern slaves without souls
Just obey
We'll keep you safe
We are the truth
Technocracy
Just believe
We have control
We're the Technocracy
Hypocritical way to live
In a senselessness and empty reality
Blinded by conformity
The web of lies
Collective worldwide ignorance
Smoke and mirrors everywhere
Connected &...
Corrupted by technology
With Wires connected to our brain
Control our life
Cybernetic drug for our brain
Burning our cells to the end
We live now as modern slaves without souls
Just obey
We'll keep you safe
We are the truth
Technocracy
Just believe
We have control
We're the Technocracy
Hypocritical way to live
In a senselessness and empty reality
Blinded by conformity
The web of lies
Collective worldwide ignorance
Smoke and mirrors everywhere
Connected &...
#CallToAction
#dystopian
#manipulation
#scifi
#technology
92 reads
6 Comments
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