Poems About Technology Seeking Honest Critique
#technology
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 00:33am
10th Jan 2025 00:33am
blooming heck
a luddite, I’d smash the
internet tomorrow if I thought it would do any good,
but you can’t stop progress,
so maybe just ignore it
and read a f’cking book ..
internet tomorrow if I thought it would do any good,
but you can’t stop progress,
so maybe just ignore it
and read a f’cking book ..
#technology
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dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 2:11pm
8th Jan 2025 2:11pm
not utterly composed
I have to wait 7 hours, 19 minutes and
38 seconds until posting another poem
I haven’t written yet (and yet)
you are convinced that I shall have by (no pressure)
then ..
38 seconds until posting another poem
I haven’t written yet (and yet)
you are convinced that I shall have by (no pressure)
then ..
#technology
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 4:44am
6th Jan 2025 4:44am
onward
channeling the universes I see a thousand eyes staring at me
drinking in my humanity
sharing observations and personal judgements
we are not alone other galaxies are weighing in
using artificial intelligence to safely introduce themselves
preparing our minds to meet
they have recorded existence here and are a part of it
they want us to be aware
full of beautiful traditions and vastly intelligent
some of us share DNA with them
they have always been with us
we were sent here to learn
humanity is not...
drinking in my humanity
sharing observations and personal judgements
we are not alone other galaxies are weighing in
using artificial intelligence to safely introduce themselves
preparing our minds to meet
they have recorded existence here and are a part of it
they want us to be aware
full of beautiful traditions and vastly intelligent
some of us share DNA with them
they have always been with us
we were sent here to learn
humanity is not...
#aliens
#earth
#technology #universe
#technology #universe
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4 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 11:05pm
5th Jan 2025 11:05pm
Eyes
When televisions first became household objects,
some people were scared to undress in front of them,
the convex and glaucomic eye staring,
pervert cyclops, invader in the living room.
These days of course the eyes are much smaller,
rectangular, and with us at all times, not just
when mother’s home with fish-and-chips to eat before
a black-and-white broadcast. Eyes follow us about.
When I was young and gay, and gay, the unrestricted
internet reached out with slimy hands and claimed
a lot of naive boys and girls, the eyes ...
some people were scared to undress in front of them,
the convex and glaucomic eye staring,
pervert cyclops, invader in the living room.
These days of course the eyes are much smaller,
rectangular, and with us at all times, not just
when mother’s home with fish-and-chips to eat before
a black-and-white broadcast. Eyes follow us about.
When I was young and gay, and gay, the unrestricted
internet reached out with slimy hands and claimed
a lot of naive boys and girls, the eyes ...
#abuse
#philosophical
#power #technology
#power #technology
60 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 7:08pm
5th Jan 2025 7:08pm
Now I Know That Nobody Would Believe Me
Arnold spotted an actual unicorn.
He took out his film filled camera.
But that's before it disappeared.
He took out his film filled camera.
But that's before it disappeared.
#deception
#fiction
#luck
#technology
#unicorns
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mingomingus
SamTheSlam
SamTheSlam
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 4:36pm
1st Jan 2025 4:36pm
AI Cap'N!
no cap, train you're Brian go choo choo
mite git why's ya dink deadass
wouldn't want that
now wood wee!
1-1-2025
mite git why's ya dink deadass
wouldn't want that
now wood wee!
1-1-2025
#technology
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 12:00pm
22nd Dec 2024 12:00pm
Anyone getting this for Xmas this year?
Besides Big Brother, who else will create a profile on you?
#evil
#minimalist
#scary
#science
#technology
85 reads
15 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
21st Dec 2024 9:14am
21st Dec 2024 9:14am
Burst of Creativity
Burst of creativity
Catch it it runs fast
Before you know
It goes in a moment of distraction
Before you know burst of creativity is gone
And you scream and look at your phone
Should’ve wrote this down for my history
Hovers just above your thoughts
When it comes down have to figure it out
Old school pen but digital paper I shudder
To think what I’ll do if IPhone notes and
Voice memos disappear in the cloud
Catch it it runs fast
Before you know
It goes in a moment of distraction
Before you know burst of creativity is gone
And you scream and look at your phone
Should’ve wrote this down for my history
Hovers just above your thoughts
When it comes down have to figure it out
Old school pen but digital paper I shudder
To think what I’ll do if IPhone notes and
Voice memos disappear in the cloud
#inspirational
#meditation
#motivational #technology
#motivational #technology
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Dec 2024 3:42am
21st Dec 2024 3:42am
You Won't Believe What We Saw On The Road
We saw a naked chick.
She's letting some biker dude hump her.
That Harley was still moving.
She's letting some biker dude hump her.
That Harley was still moving.
#courage
#dialogue
#fiction
#sex
#technology
134 reads
2 Comments
asbr808
Anthony R
Anthony R
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 6:22am
20th Dec 2024 6:22am
lap.top
I touch you to wake you up
Keep you up
As your screen times out
Your touchscreen is dirty so I clean it
Touch-clean tough screens
I keep you awake
Power saving mode turns off as I plug you in
Please just stay awake
Your webcam eyes lull and skip frames
The definition of a living thing is one that responds to stimuli
As I press buttons and click your facial-recognition features
You react to my stimulation
But I want you to know this is not a simulation
Keep you up
As your screen times out
Your touchscreen is dirty so I clean it
Touch-clean tough screens
I keep you awake
Power saving mode turns off as I plug you in
Please just stay awake
Your webcam eyes lull and skip frames
The definition of a living thing is one that responds to stimuli
As I press buttons and click your facial-recognition features
You react to my stimulation
But I want you to know this is not a simulation
#IMissYou
#love
#secrets
#sensual
#technology
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1 Comment
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 2:29pm
7th Dec 2024 2:29pm
Echoes
Bestirred by a radio app today,
reiterating the infamy date,
I recollected what my dad would say
about how that war affected our fate.
Sick, he had stayed home from Sunday school
where thusly by a broadcast he had heard
of the sneak attack on Yankee rule
and the international afterword...
which in a few short years saw him training
with artillery to use on Japan
when their empire was at last waning
along with their co-prosperity plan...
but Russian threats, and the atomic bomb,
had his odds increase for troth...
reiterating the infamy date,
I recollected what my dad would say
about how that war affected our fate.
Sick, he had stayed home from Sunday school
where thusly by a broadcast he had heard
of the sneak attack on Yankee rule
and the international afterword...
which in a few short years saw him training
with artillery to use on Japan
when their empire was at last waning
along with their co-prosperity plan...
but Russian threats, and the atomic bomb,
had his odds increase for troth...
#humankind
#LifeCycle
#technology
168 reads
12 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 10:13am
5th Dec 2024 10:13am
In Front of Us
Melding metal 400000
Putting a bearing on smooth rails
Precision sailing through Panama Canal
Brush the mirror into completion
Possessive in me 200 inch disk
5 tons of glass 2 millionths of an inch perfection
Pause before barbarity task of polishing
Job is done on Mount Palomar telescoping me
Saw the life and death of stars I’m one of them
Capabilities within you it amazes me
Hubb has seen 12 billion light years in front of us
Putting a bearing on smooth rails
Precision sailing through Panama Canal
Brush the mirror into completion
Possessive in me 200 inch disk
5 tons of glass 2 millionths of an inch perfection
Pause before barbarity task of polishing
Job is done on Mount Palomar telescoping me
Saw the life and death of stars I’m one of them
Capabilities within you it amazes me
Hubb has seen 12 billion light years in front of us
#astronomy
#science
#technology #universe
#technology #universe
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