Poems About Support Seeking Honest Critique
#support
Poems about support seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
stevenyprince
alysha
alysha
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 3:12pm
10th Jan 2025 3:12pm
Twin.
One must protect the boundaries of love
With 3 hearts
Warrior, protector, lover
He came and wrapped me up
The day after the bird hit the window
My brother, black angel
Upside down wings
Feathers so soft
And warm
Against the skin of my arm
As you love me
Surround me
I let go
Dissipate
Cycles within cycles
Into the sea, liquidied
Turned to hide inside the earth
Became fire and expanded wide
Burn to ashes and rise
Just float
The wind, that is, its
Spinning
Around inside the...
With 3 hearts
Warrior, protector, lover
He came and wrapped me up
The day after the bird hit the window
My brother, black angel
Upside down wings
Feathers so soft
And warm
Against the skin of my arm
As you love me
Surround me
I let go
Dissipate
Cycles within cycles
Into the sea, liquidied
Turned to hide inside the earth
Became fire and expanded wide
Burn to ashes and rise
Just float
The wind, that is, its
Spinning
Around inside the...
#birds
#love
#spiritual
#strength
#support
63 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 10:52am
10th Jan 2025 10:52am
Soulless Zombi
Four walls surround me
And im feeling sick
Don't remember yesterday
Don't know what's real
Blood on my shirt
Mud on my hair
Paranoia's kicking in
The delusions never stop
Living in the moment as they say
Doing what the masses do
Wearing what the masses wear
Going where the masses go
Sacrifice your mind
And your sanity
Disconnect one moment
Spiral to infinity
Midnight strikes the pills go down
You thought this is a story?
Hear the colors see the music
Feel so fucking great ...
And im feeling sick
Don't remember yesterday
Don't know what's real
Blood on my shirt
Mud on my hair
Paranoia's kicking in
The delusions never stop
Living in the moment as they say
Doing what the masses do
Wearing what the masses wear
Going where the masses go
Sacrifice your mind
And your sanity
Disconnect one moment
Spiral to infinity
Midnight strikes the pills go down
You thought this is a story?
Hear the colors see the music
Feel so fucking great ...
#confusion
#drugs
#identity
#MentalHealth
#support
49 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 1:24pm
9th Jan 2025 1:24pm
Detox and Discontent
You will not be getting any sympathy from me
Too late for that
Ignorance seen through your blind eyes
Cause & effect
Detox
Artificial promises
I'm feeling empty
Destroy reality
I crawl deep inside myself
Detox and discontent
Too late for that
Ignorance seen through your blind eyes
Cause & effect
Detox
Artificial promises
I'm feeling empty
Destroy reality
I crawl deep inside myself
Detox and discontent
#emptiness
#lies
#support #TruthOfLife
#support #TruthOfLife
67 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 10:14am
8th Jan 2025 10:14am
The Assist
Hurt creates anger
Anger triggers oppressed thoughts
Lend someone a hand
Anger triggers oppressed thoughts
Lend someone a hand
#friendship
#hurt
#oppression
#senryu
#support
51 reads
13 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 6:30pm
6th Jan 2025 6:30pm
Back to the Light
When I look into the mirror
Turn the page on this dark chapter
Gone are my fears; they went out the door
I’ve had enough; I can’t take no more
Lend me a guiding hand back to the light.
Turn the page on this dark chapter
Gone are my fears; they went out the door
I’ve had enough; I can’t take no more
Lend me a guiding hand back to the light.
#SelfReflection
#spiritual
#support
65 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 12:40pm
2nd Jan 2025 12:40pm
Ready, Aim, Desire
She looked so goddamn sexy with that gun in her mouth.
It really brought out her cheekbones.
Ohhhhh Yeahhhhh, I get really aroused and hard just thinking about it.
I wonder if she'll pull the trigger?
Do you think I can encourage it?
Let's end this story right now.
It really brought out her cheekbones.
Ohhhhh Yeahhhhh, I get really aroused and hard just thinking about it.
I wonder if she'll pull the trigger?
Do you think I can encourage it?
Let's end this story right now.
#erotic
#girlfriend
#motivational #support
#motivational #support
106 reads
18 Comments
moon_bather
Poem Published
25th Dec 2024 11:54pm
25th Dec 2024 11:54pm
I am the conundrum
I am the conundrum
Facing the truth
While wondering
what we have here
More than nothing
I know that
Surely you feel the same
look at what we have here
It’s like saying you love someone
When you really don’t
And you leave it at that
goddamn
I am the conundrum
Fucking leave me
Or love me, but
You do you
goddamn
Where am I
Where you are
Leaves me falling right into
Your arms again.
…shit.
Facing the truth
While wondering
what we have here
More than nothing
I know that
Surely you feel the same
look at what we have here
It’s like saying you love someone
When you really don’t
And you leave it at that
goddamn
I am the conundrum
Fucking leave me
Or love me, but
You do you
goddamn
Where am I
Where you are
Leaves me falling right into
Your arms again.
…shit.
#admiration
#apathy
#confusion
#despair
#support
55 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Dec 2024 12:17pm
25th Dec 2024 12:17pm
A Gift
Good Morning to each of you. I went to bed last night without any gifts under the tree.
I woke up this morning and there were a whole bunch of gifts waiting to be opened.
The power of magic if you believe in something.
As I approached each gift, I realized that every gift was from all of you.
You all are the gifts that were under my tree.
Everyone of you have made me shine since arriving here in January 2024.
The power of words, praise and feedback truly is something magical & real.
I wish all of you at DUP a Happy Holiday and Happy New Year.
I woke up this morning and there were a whole bunch of gifts waiting to be opened.
The power of magic if you believe in something.
As I approached each gift, I realized that every gift was from all of you.
You all are the gifts that were under my tree.
Everyone of you have made me shine since arriving here in January 2024.
The power of words, praise and feedback truly is something magical & real.
I wish all of you at DUP a Happy Holiday and Happy New Year.
#friendship
#happiness
#love
#magic
#support
71 reads
9 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 3:52am
22nd Dec 2024 3:52am
These Scars Wont Define Us
Heartfelt, this goes out to all the poets here
those that for whatever the reason
have chosen to share their scars
I appreciate you all
Together WE shall cross this river
those that for whatever the reason
have chosen to share their scars
I appreciate you all
Together WE shall cross this river
#gratitude
#healing
#support #TimeHeals
#support #TimeHeals
55 reads
3 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 6:07pm
20th Dec 2024 6:07pm
waiting on a soul connection
little thoughts of beauty make me smile
with a grateful heart I enter another day
my hopes are that there are no surprises I can't handle
focusing on the positive
I won't get mean today
you wouldn't think that is a thing
but it is for the impatient
the key is to remember to be present in the moment
not racing ahead to the next destination
taking my time to smile at people
instead of cutting them with my eyes
it's been brought to my attention how vivid I can be
altering myself I realize I don't want to be sour
I want...
with a grateful heart I enter another day
my hopes are that there are no surprises I can't handle
focusing on the positive
I won't get mean today
you wouldn't think that is a thing
but it is for the impatient
the key is to remember to be present in the moment
not racing ahead to the next destination
taking my time to smile at people
instead of cutting them with my eyes
it's been brought to my attention how vivid I can be
altering myself I realize I don't want to be sour
I want...
#love
#spiritual
#support
95 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 11:09am
20th Dec 2024 11:09am
Lifetime
Life neither remembers nor forgets
It is valueless to itself
It doesn't care about you
Don't you see how easily it leaves the room when you need it during those trying times?
It is valueless to itself
It doesn't care about you
Don't you see how easily it leaves the room when you need it during those trying times?
#LifeStruggles
#morality
#support
79 reads
9 Comments
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 2:28pm
14th Dec 2024 2:28pm
The Importance of the Right Woman
Thoughts of you, woman,
stir love in your man's soul
Memories of your presence bring forth feelings
Powerful,
Bold
There is a fire burning inside your man
which keeps him moving ever forward
A God-given imperative to profess, provide, and protect
It is your presence in his life
which gives focus to his method
And gives reason to his madness
It is what you do
and who you are
that bring peace in the heart of this man
Doing what comes natural to you is the cure for what ails him ...
stir love in your man's soul
Memories of your presence bring forth feelings
Powerful,
Bold
There is a fire burning inside your man
which keeps him moving ever forward
A God-given imperative to profess, provide, and protect
It is your presence in his life
which gives focus to his method
And gives reason to his madness
It is what you do
and who you are
that bring peace in the heart of this man
Doing what comes natural to you is the cure for what ails him ...
#courage
#love
#respect
#strength
#support
79 reads
3 Comments
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