Poems About Strength Seeking Honest Critique
#strength
Poems about strength seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
56ApacheLove
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 12:57pm
8th Feb 2025 12:57pm
My Nickname Was Grace, Because I Broke Everthying I Touched, But Maybe That's Not A Bad Thing
If the woman I now am, could keep the knowledge I now have on the outcome of you, and how one day you would heal from your own childhood trauma and be the mother I always needed, I would've loved you while you were thumping around on me. I would've went to school with a clearer mind, knowing there's hope in this life to be had one day. I would've applied myself to studying. I could've made good grades, I just didn't see the point of it all, as a child life is defined by current moments, and the future was happening live time, so I had no hope for mine, because if your own mother hated you,...
#forgiveness
#hope
#love
#redemption
#strength
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56ApacheLove
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 3:17pm
7th Feb 2025 3:17pm
Preservation Of Faith
I only write when life is pressing on everything that matters.
Never losing roots, color, or softness...
Until the confusion is lifted, and the sun shines once more.
Never losing roots, color, or softness...
Until the confusion is lifted, and the sun shines once more.
#forgiveness
#love
#redemption #strength
#redemption #strength
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jigg82
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 1:34am
7th Feb 2025 1:34am
Hunter ranger
Nothing is more infuriating as the wrath of a man’s blood soaked heart,nothing is more infuriating than a man’s gentle hand upon the love of his lusting drive.nothing is more infuriating than a man’s protection of his true love.your insulted?,but I’m soul challenged .a challenge of absence and loss.a challenge of everything I stand to lose,and everything I expect …..let me ask you. Would you challenge your own heart? and self worth?or would you become the ranger hunter.a subclass that’ll never be beat.because his or hers arrows of
of truth and confidence always fly straight and true.and...
of truth and confidence always fly straight and true.and...
#courage
#heroic
#inspirational
#motivational
#strength
79 reads
2 Comments
anandosen
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 6:33pm
5th Feb 2025 6:33pm
Coyotes
Stormy winds gushing down the signature sips of life;
Even when raindrops were forced to change their directions of downpour;
The son of Sun & Mercury stood aloud & gore.
Like a king he won, like a dog he lost;
His own kingdom defeated him like an enemy;
The son of Sun & Mercury was reborn as Gemini.
Alas with his confidence he build his prudence;
Rejuvenated like a beast bathing in sagacity;
The son of Sun & Mercury swayed the coyotes crazy.
Even when raindrops were forced to change their directions of downpour;
The son of Sun & Mercury stood aloud & gore.
Like a king he won, like a dog he lost;
His own kingdom defeated him like an enemy;
The son of Sun & Mercury was reborn as Gemini.
Alas with his confidence he build his prudence;
Rejuvenated like a beast bathing in sagacity;
The son of Sun & Mercury swayed the coyotes crazy.
#courage
#hope
#motivational
#redemption
#strength
54 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 2:50pm
5th Feb 2025 2:50pm
Pray don't worry
As you go through the process of your trials and tribulations, that you will have to learn to navigate your true spiritual potential, to help you with making your own decisions that will affect, the very foundation of situations that will come with challenges that will sometimes have you doubting thyself. For regardless of what you have to go through will comes with more lessons that we still have to learn. Yet you must have faith in your life's beliefs, cause sometimes we have to give our problems, that we can't solve to give them to Almighty God. For don't worry because God Almighty, will...
#emotions
#hope
#love
#motivational
#strength
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oldmanG
Poem Published
4th Feb 2025 3:59am
4th Feb 2025 3:59am
Can you Hear the Silence
Can you hear the silence
I yearn for the silence to hear me
I run from the noise that assaults me
I breathe but my breath can’t hear me
I live for the silence that lives within the trees
We’re so used to the noise that silence scares us
I get anxious when the silence confronts me
I am afraid to not hear a sound around me
Make some noise to make him go away
Can you Hear the Silence
I yearn for the silence be near me
I run from the noise that’s around me
...
I yearn for the silence to hear me
I run from the noise that assaults me
I breathe but my breath can’t hear me
I live for the silence that lives within the trees
We’re so used to the noise that silence scares us
I get anxious when the silence confronts me
I am afraid to not hear a sound around me
Make some noise to make him go away
Can you Hear the Silence
I yearn for the silence be near me
I run from the noise that’s around me
...
#emotions
#silence
#spiritual #strength
#spiritual #strength
115 reads
3 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 11:13pm
2nd Feb 2025 11:13pm
Need
Society has tamed you
once wild and unapologetic
Your hunger was insatiable
no one dared cross your path
I need for the fire to rise in your blood
to remember how it felt to be seen and heard
I need the raven and not a dove trained to fly at reasonable altitudes
When will you need to override the conditioning?
Will you stay broken by life?
I see you lurking underneath your skin
break free and meet me
One step forward
palm up
waiting
once wild and unapologetic
Your hunger was insatiable
no one dared cross your path
I need for the fire to rise in your blood
to remember how it felt to be seen and heard
I need the raven and not a dove trained to fly at reasonable altitudes
When will you need to override the conditioning?
Will you stay broken by life?
I see you lurking underneath your skin
break free and meet me
One step forward
palm up
waiting
#courage
#motivational
#strength
268 reads
14 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 3:51pm
2nd Feb 2025 3:51pm
What your going through
I am here for you no matter what you are going through in your life, for I give to my most strongest soldiers no more than they can stand. FOR sure no matter how dark it gets, I am there to shine the heavenly Halo's, above your head just reaching into your heart and spiritual, subconsciousness of your own mind. For sure life wasn't meant to be easy, for there will be hard times and good times in the cross roads of what is life. THAT we all will have to journey and travel and walk, through this vortex of life. 🙏 Yet have no fear because I will always be there, for you to guide you and...
#faith
#spiritual
#StreamOfConsciousness
#strength
#TruthOfLife
85 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 1:21pm
2nd Feb 2025 1:21pm
It's a blessing in disguise
It's a blessing when we can connect on a positive, level of energy and understanding and respect. FOR what we share and have as one love. For it's true, that we all will go through so much sometimes, that it will test our strength and commitment which could either. Make us or break us or just separate us, from the deepness of the truth of our love and hearts. But yet we will find the deepness of being reunited so comfortable, even with the struggles that we have to face in the very depths of the darkness. For sure it's necessary to be able to share our thoughts, and insight and spiritual...
#admiration
#courage
#gratitude
#happiness
#strength
96 reads
8 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 9:43pm
28th Jan 2025 9:43pm
Leave what's not yours
To a man or woman leave a man or woman, that's not yours alone 🤔 I say that to get you to think and understand, that there is a true differences, between a good woman and a good man. WHO believes in having, a strong relationship with someone, who doesn't have to cheat or lie for they have a real relationship with honesty and truth and trust. For sure it's a subconscious thoughts on your part, to be able to share your thoughts and insight and spiritual soul with love and honor and respect.
#courage
#kindness
#love
#respect
#strength
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56ApacheLove
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 5:12pm
28th Jan 2025 5:12pm
From One Mother To Another
It's a beautiful gift to watch your children tackle life unbroken when something so broken raised them. Hiding the pain was worth it, and in the moments when I couldn't cope, when I would spill over because it was all just too much, well, I regret not being stronger in those moments. Because in those moments they couldn't understand that part of mom, the war of cycle breaking and the toll it takes on mind body and soul, where I would lay in bed for three or four days crying and praying, praying for God to renew my strength, but never once did I lay a hand on them, never once did I withhold my...
#emotions
#forgiveness
#love #strength
#love #strength
89 reads
2 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
27th Jan 2025 4:54pm
27th Jan 2025 4:54pm
She Walks In Silence
She walks in silence, like a lapping wave
drowned in chastity and flooded with rave
holding dear and tight her very beauties
denying all her gems and rubies.
Her powers disabled under the spell
the flame in wouldn’t break out of its shell.
Tempted to trace a humming call of fate
allured but reluctant to take the bait.
The strings of her heart lost their pitch and tone
the clutches of mind hurting to the bone.
Untraceable are the paths to no end
unable to soul unself and ascend.
She walks in silence, like a gliding breeze ...
drowned in chastity and flooded with rave
holding dear and tight her very beauties
denying all her gems and rubies.
Her powers disabled under the spell
the flame in wouldn’t break out of its shell.
Tempted to trace a humming call of fate
allured but reluctant to take the bait.
The strings of her heart lost their pitch and tone
the clutches of mind hurting to the bone.
Untraceable are the paths to no end
unable to soul unself and ascend.
She walks in silence, like a gliding breeze ...
#courage
#inspirational
#love
#strength
#TimeHeals
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8 Comments
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