Poems About Strength Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about strength seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
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Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
Yesterday 5:39pm
Yesterday 5:39pm
Blissfully Relaxed,
Blissfully relaxed,
From materialistic delight, detached
I left my skin down to the carnal mortality
clothed my soul in transcendental eternity
Mountains and forests, skies and seasons
Shepherds and pastoral eclogues;, my glossary
If to flesh satisfaction called on
I am Naturally calibrated, not addicted
Each and every container is to be filled
With the appropriate fair value, not abused
And so, i feel
Heavenly untroubled,
Earthly fulfilled
Spiritually healed ...
From materialistic delight, detached
I left my skin down to the carnal mortality
clothed my soul in transcendental eternity
Mountains and forests, skies and seasons
Shepherds and pastoral eclogues;, my glossary
If to flesh satisfaction called on
I am Naturally calibrated, not addicted
Each and every container is to be filled
With the appropriate fair value, not abused
And so, i feel
Heavenly untroubled,
Earthly fulfilled
Spiritually healed ...
#courage
#emotions
#inspirational
#motivational
#strength
26 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:53am
Yesterday 11:53am
Never love or hate
Focus
The truth of a blade
The truth of it sharpness
Steel can cut through flesh & bone
Never love or hate
The truth of a blade
The truth of it sharpness
Steel can cut through flesh & bone
Never love or hate
#emotions
#hate
#love
#strength
#honesty
49 reads
5 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:53am
Yesterday 2:53am
Salute
I raise my glass in a silent salute
For the hardships I’ve gone through, and the achievements I’ve earned
It leaves a bittersweet blanket over my tongue
Yet I down the drink, and set the glass on the table
Regardless of its content, I’ll quench my thirst.
For the hardships I’ve gone through, and the achievements I’ve earned
It leaves a bittersweet blanket over my tongue
Yet I down the drink, and set the glass on the table
Regardless of its content, I’ll quench my thirst.
#bittersweet
#faith
#strength
45 reads
4 Comments
Academic
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 5:13pm
20th Dec 2024 5:13pm
Harry and Meghan's Happy Holidays Greetings!
By Stanley Collymore
people in the USA have been saying
"Happy Holidays" since then 1860s.
Try looking up the history of the
phrase instead of guessing about it or else asininely literally implementing into it your
own quite stupid, and racist assumptions;
and basically specifically so, because the
technology is essentially clearly evidently
used by Harry and Meghan! What a really
crude bunch of absolute losers, and very
discernibly also literally pathetic morons
you...
people in the USA have been saying
"Happy Holidays" since then 1860s.
Try looking up the history of the
phrase instead of guessing about it or else asininely literally implementing into it your
own quite stupid, and racist assumptions;
and basically specifically so, because the
technology is essentially clearly evidently
used by Harry and Meghan! What a really
crude bunch of absolute losers, and very
discernibly also literally pathetic morons
you...
#happiness
#inspirational
#kindness
#respect
#strength
21 reads
0 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 1:05am
19th Dec 2024 1:05am
Want More
The ocean waves keep crashing on the shore
I’ve been told to accept less, but I want more
The moonlight is the only guide that I need; a steady comfort to protect me when I bleed
I write my own destiny; this is what I swore.
Love hurts, but loneliness kills
My goal has been accomplished with the blood that I’ve spilt.
Come and push me into the water; let it ooze in my pores
Even when my lips say “stop”, I keep on wanting more
I’m told that I ask too much, that I should accept what I have
I don’t expect empty souls to ever understand. ...
I’ve been told to accept less, but I want more
The moonlight is the only guide that I need; a steady comfort to protect me when I bleed
I write my own destiny; this is what I swore.
Love hurts, but loneliness kills
My goal has been accomplished with the blood that I’ve spilt.
Come and push me into the water; let it ooze in my pores
Even when my lips say “stop”, I keep on wanting more
I’m told that I ask too much, that I should accept what I have
I don’t expect empty souls to ever understand. ...
#faith
#hope
#rhyming
#sacrifice
#strength
59 reads
8 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
17th Dec 2024 7:07am
17th Dec 2024 7:07am
Make Myself
Make myself lovable
Make myself indispensable
Make myself something more than this
Make myself into the one I want to be
Make myself huggable
Make myself snug as a bug in the rug
Make myself see that there is more to me
Make myself see the danger round the corner
Make myself into me I am born again
Make myself see the sins I’ve sinned
Make myself live again
Make myself into a dream that sings to me
Make myself into someone who stands for more
Make myself indispensable
Make myself something more than this
Make myself into the one I want to be
Make myself huggable
Make myself snug as a bug in the rug
Make myself see that there is more to me
Make myself see the danger round the corner
Make myself into me I am born again
Make myself see the sins I’ve sinned
Make myself live again
Make myself into a dream that sings to me
Make myself into someone who stands for more
#hope
#love
#motivational #strength
#motivational #strength
38 reads
0 Comments
KendalM
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 3:27pm
16th Dec 2024 3:27pm
Diary Entry...Huh
Im tired, my moms on Hospice...well she should be but she still has yet to say the word cancer stage four and sign the papers, so she's refusing the end of life care she needs, which makes it a confusing situation on the family.
Then two days ago my grandma on my dad's side had a heart attack, and after 2 units of blood and bipap machine to restore her oxygen levels, she went back downhill again, hemoglobin a 7 and now they are thinking she has lymphoma or leukemia.
I know everything happens for a reason, I'm just tired, and this is hard.
Its taking all I got to keep...
Then two days ago my grandma on my dad's side had a heart attack, and after 2 units of blood and bipap machine to restore her oxygen levels, she went back downhill again, hemoglobin a 7 and now they are thinking she has lymphoma or leukemia.
I know everything happens for a reason, I'm just tired, and this is hard.
Its taking all I got to keep...
#emotions
#strength
44 reads
3 Comments
UbiquitousVoid
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 6:27am
16th Dec 2024 6:27am
OVERCOME
Within sleep, unspoken scars
All that's left are bleak memoirs
Plugged the wounds with every smile
And words kept brief
Laid to rest beneath the dirt
In a land I'll not return
Lies a corpse of hope resiled
That haunts my dreams
Ripping through the calmest scene
There's a storm that beckons me
This malice from darkness birthed
'Round every turn
In these halls that ebb and flow
Every person seems to know
The same emptiness that burns
Each gaze averts
All reasons aside
Something in me...
All that's left are bleak memoirs
Plugged the wounds with every smile
And words kept brief
Laid to rest beneath the dirt
In a land I'll not return
Lies a corpse of hope resiled
That haunts my dreams
Ripping through the calmest scene
There's a storm that beckons me
This malice from darkness birthed
'Round every turn
In these halls that ebb and flow
Every person seems to know
The same emptiness that burns
Each gaze averts
All reasons aside
Something in me...
#healing
#hope
#strength
50 reads
2 Comments
Mercurial
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 3:34am
15th Dec 2024 3:34am
Let Go.
I just put my hand over my head and thought,
There's so much to the hand than the hand itself,
What if it was cut off and grief sets in,
Consumed by anger and succumbed to sadness,
All the days you took it for granted, now it is separate from your body,
You yearn for the attachment...you take a look at it, taking it closer,
Touching yourself, smelling it, seeing it for what it is, the softness,
The uniqueness of each finger, the beauty of your nails, femininity of your thumb,
The feeling is intense than when it was intact.
In your memories, the...
There's so much to the hand than the hand itself,
What if it was cut off and grief sets in,
Consumed by anger and succumbed to sadness,
All the days you took it for granted, now it is separate from your body,
You yearn for the attachment...you take a look at it, taking it closer,
Touching yourself, smelling it, seeing it for what it is, the softness,
The uniqueness of each finger, the beauty of your nails, femininity of your thumb,
The feeling is intense than when it was intact.
In your memories, the...
#gratitude
#grief
#regret
#strength
#TimeHeals
37 reads
2 Comments
Evocation
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 6:22pm
14th Dec 2024 6:22pm
Summit
I will conquer this mountain
even though I am broken
I will conquer this mountain
even though I feel pain
I will conquer this mountain
to prove I am worthy
I will conquer this mountain
till no one remains
even though I am broken
I will conquer this mountain
even though I feel pain
I will conquer this mountain
to prove I am worthy
I will conquer this mountain
till no one remains
#courage
#respect
#strength
30 reads
0 Comments
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 2:28pm
14th Dec 2024 2:28pm
The Importance of the Right Woman
Thoughts of you, woman,
stir love in your man's soul
Memories of your presence bring forth feelings
Powerful,
Bold
There is a fire burning inside your man
which keeps him moving ever forward
A God-given imperative to profess, provide, and protect
It is your presence in his life
which gives focus to his method
And gives reason to his madness
It is what you do
and who you are
that bring peace in the heart of this man
Doing what comes natural to you is the cure for what ails him ...
stir love in your man's soul
Memories of your presence bring forth feelings
Powerful,
Bold
There is a fire burning inside your man
which keeps him moving ever forward
A God-given imperative to profess, provide, and protect
It is your presence in his life
which gives focus to his method
And gives reason to his madness
It is what you do
and who you are
that bring peace in the heart of this man
Doing what comes natural to you is the cure for what ails him ...
#courage
#love
#respect
#strength
#support
45 reads
3 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 10:55am
13th Dec 2024 10:55am
Mel44
Visual Expression IX
#admiration
#courage
#determination
#inspirational
#strength
149 reads
15 Comments
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