Poems About Strength Seeking Honest Critique
#strength
Poems about strength seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
Yesterday 3:48pm
Yesterday 3:48pm
Unforgettable
I wonder, myself whom I venerate
The voice of my heart if loud fair enough!
The hive of my life I strive to relate
Aspire to unleash my wonders, seems tough.
To craft a soul of light, creed of the core
The quest for mines of gems never shall end
The harsh thrusts I’ve learned not to deplore
For every stance there shall be a firm stand.
Pearly prints along your path, your voice carve
Sound sounds are seized and unforgettable
Medallions feeding souls to never starve
The bliss is a blessing increasable.
Sowing abiding...
The voice of my heart if loud fair enough!
The hive of my life I strive to relate
Aspire to unleash my wonders, seems tough.
To craft a soul of light, creed of the core
The quest for mines of gems never shall end
The harsh thrusts I’ve learned not to deplore
For every stance there shall be a firm stand.
Pearly prints along your path, your voice carve
Sound sounds are seized and unforgettable
Medallions feeding souls to never starve
The bliss is a blessing increasable.
Sowing abiding...
#admiration
#learning
#sonnet
#spiritual
#strength
21 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 1:05pm
19th Jan 2025 1:05pm
The spirit of the soul
As a writer of spoken words ✍️ we have the ability to manifest thoughts and insight, into the deepness of the imagination of those things that are involved, in creating a different kind of perspective on life and love. For sure we can unlock 🔓 your own thoughts that were once, hidden behind the curtains of your own thoughts, and insight and spiritually awaken your own deepest thoughts, that slowly becomes more than just words. But yet thoughts and feelings of emotionally tasty, bits of consciousness of the truth of a passion fruit 🍓 THAT leaves a taste of...
#courage
#fear
#heartbroken
#loneliness
#strength
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 1:22am
19th Jan 2025 1:22am
No More Games
One day I stopped hating
I ceased all meaningless activity
I completed the circle
I set my sights straight
Like an arrow I flew
I stopped acting
I got tired of playing with you
Violence & destruction became my reason for living
My out, my excuse
What is your excuse?
Destruction
Without hate, without fear, without judgement
I am no better then you
No one knows this better then I do
I just got tired of playing parlor games
I ceased all meaningless activity
I completed the circle
I set my sights straight
Like an arrow I flew
I stopped acting
I got tired of playing with you
Violence & destruction became my reason for living
My out, my excuse
What is your excuse?
Destruction
Without hate, without fear, without judgement
I am no better then you
No one knows this better then I do
I just got tired of playing parlor games
#determination
#motivational
#strength #uplifting
#strength #uplifting
60 reads
8 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 3:31pm
18th Jan 2025 3:31pm
I Am A Human In Life
I am a human in Life
Willing to walk
What life grants of paths
With a heart full of chambers
Of huge space
Allowing each smile
Each tear
To set their load on my face.
I believe in the knight
A visitor of dreams
A dweller of nights
Dreams that roam a world
Of their own
No room for a danger zone
No words would contain
Their very tone..
I am a human in Life
I have faith
In what my soul could feel
Despite a thousand miles
And the grief I could see
Behind the smiles
And...
Willing to walk
What life grants of paths
With a heart full of chambers
Of huge space
Allowing each smile
Each tear
To set their load on my face.
I believe in the knight
A visitor of dreams
A dweller of nights
Dreams that roam a world
Of their own
No room for a danger zone
No words would contain
Their very tone..
I am a human in Life
I have faith
In what my soul could feel
Despite a thousand miles
And the grief I could see
Behind the smiles
And...
#admiration
#hope
#kindness
#love
#strength
47 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 8:55pm
17th Jan 2025 8:55pm
Don't Quit
When you feel like the whole world is 🌍 against you don't quit, for it's not the end of your life. IT'S just human nature to feel that you just can't win, but yet you do win in the end 😉 by not giving up without a fight 😉 When you feel that you have to just settle down, for something else that has no real intentions of commitment and CONSISTENCY. 🤔 DON'T quit just because they don't have the intelligence, to know that they found the truth within a relationship that they say they been not getting. 🤨 Don't quit when things in your life, aren't what you...
#confusion
#disappointment
#love
#strength
#TimeHeals
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0 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
16th Jan 2025 6:30pm
16th Jan 2025 6:30pm
An Inspired Rose
Shall we guilty claim
A rose, as her beauties rain?
When suppressing her prickles
Floods of her blood
Bedew her roots
Absorbed in grace.
Shall we banish beaming scents
Of a rose rising in light?
When flourishing wonders
And streams of delight
Flowing into human veins
Avidly captured beyond words.
Shall we a beholder blame
For admiring in shining light a rose?
When many a reason
Grant noble human hands
To hold an evergreen rose
Rejoicing at divine creation.
Shall we a rose deny
A...
A rose, as her beauties rain?
When suppressing her prickles
Floods of her blood
Bedew her roots
Absorbed in grace.
Shall we banish beaming scents
Of a rose rising in light?
When flourishing wonders
And streams of delight
Flowing into human veins
Avidly captured beyond words.
Shall we a beholder blame
For admiring in shining light a rose?
When many a reason
Grant noble human hands
To hold an evergreen rose
Rejoicing at divine creation.
Shall we a rose deny
A...
#admiration
#gratitude
#hope
#kindness
#strength
54 reads
4 Comments
stevenyprince
alysha
alysha
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 3:12pm
10th Jan 2025 3:12pm
Twin.
One must protect the boundaries of love
With 3 hearts
Warrior, protector, lover
He came and wrapped me up
The day after the bird hit the window
My brother, black angel
Upside down wings
Feathers so soft
And warm
Against the skin of my arm
As you love me
Surround me
I let go
Dissipate
Cycles within cycles
Into the sea, liquidied
Turned to hide inside the earth
Became fire and expanded wide
Burn to ashes and rise
Just float
The wind, that is, its
Spinning
Around inside the...
With 3 hearts
Warrior, protector, lover
He came and wrapped me up
The day after the bird hit the window
My brother, black angel
Upside down wings
Feathers so soft
And warm
Against the skin of my arm
As you love me
Surround me
I let go
Dissipate
Cycles within cycles
Into the sea, liquidied
Turned to hide inside the earth
Became fire and expanded wide
Burn to ashes and rise
Just float
The wind, that is, its
Spinning
Around inside the...
#birds
#love
#spiritual
#strength
#support
88 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 10:19pm
9th Jan 2025 10:19pm
The gathering of spirits
It is here and now that we gather in this space and time in front of the tree of life, as we speak and exchange thoughts and insight, and spiritual subconsciousness of an awakening, of our lives together as one entity still standing and in the process of peace and tranquility and harmony. For it's true that we as ENTITY'S, that we have been gifted spiritually to be able to be able to bless and to guide you upon this Earthly journey and travel and walk through your lives 🙏 As we shine the heavenly Halo's upon your 🗣️ heads and spiritual shoulders, placing our hands as an...
#courage
#emotional
#StreamOfConsciousness
#strength
#uplifting
76 reads
0 Comments
ArnoMalan1
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 5:03pm
9th Jan 2025 5:03pm
Worth so much more
I'm worth so much more
I've seen the worst inside
I'm worth so much more
I've beaten myself with pride
There's no turning back
no time to sway off track
I know what's hidden in my core
these lies won't faze me anymore
I'm worth so much more
That face who can't discover
I'll stump that pride to the floor
cause my time for it is over
YEAH I'm worth so much more
this proirity for all to see
I'm worth so much more
the only option is to look at me
There's no turning back
No no no space...
I've seen the worst inside
I'm worth so much more
I've beaten myself with pride
There's no turning back
no time to sway off track
I know what's hidden in my core
these lies won't faze me anymore
I'm worth so much more
That face who can't discover
I'll stump that pride to the floor
cause my time for it is over
YEAH I'm worth so much more
this proirity for all to see
I'm worth so much more
the only option is to look at me
There's no turning back
No no no space...
#courage
#respect
#strength
48 reads
0 Comments
cheesa
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 6:13am
9th Jan 2025 6:13am
A place nobody knows
There's a place where I go in my dreams
A place where I hide and I'm still a child
A place away from worries and woes
A place nobody knows
There's a place i go when i sleep
A place noone can see me noone can peep
A pace I don't have to bite my tongue
A place I'm still young
A place away from all the tos and fros
A place nobody knows
A place where I hide and I'm still a child
A place away from worries and woes
A place nobody knows
There's a place i go when i sleep
A place noone can see me noone can peep
A pace I don't have to bite my tongue
A place I'm still young
A place away from all the tos and fros
A place nobody knows
#happiness
#hope
#inspirational #strength
#inspirational #strength
49 reads
2 Comments
Sappho
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 2:16pm
8th Jan 2025 2:16pm
Phoenix Rising
Every morning I hear your voice
Mesmerising and enchanting
A testimony to your determination
Confident and expectant
When the sun is higher
Your song sounds sad
You switch the key
From major to minor
You have to they say
You cannot they say
You must not they say
Demands eat you up
You pile up all your projects
Light them and allow the flames
To consume you and your ideas
Rebirth and death begin anew
But you can break this circle
Don't burn your work but all obstacles ,
Rise from...
Mesmerising and enchanting
A testimony to your determination
Confident and expectant
When the sun is higher
Your song sounds sad
You switch the key
From major to minor
You have to they say
You cannot they say
You must not they say
Demands eat you up
You pile up all your projects
Light them and allow the flames
To consume you and your ideas
Rebirth and death begin anew
But you can break this circle
Don't burn your work but all obstacles ,
Rise from...
#courage
#inspirational
#strength
83 reads
6 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 1:26pm
8th Jan 2025 1:26pm
Winter Glow
Where the pathway ends,
there i'll go,
Up the hillside, it bends
where soft winds blow
And the fresh growing grass
so ripe and mellow,
And the river flows
so quite, down below
It's like heaven has landed
from seven skies above
and the landscape, painted
This is Eden, aeons ago
"It is morning
and it is mist
It is the beginning
of all celestial bliss"
Comes the cold dawn
my flame will grow
To...
there i'll go,
Up the hillside, it bends
where soft winds blow
And the fresh growing grass
so ripe and mellow,
And the river flows
so quite, down below
It's like heaven has landed
from seven skies above
and the landscape, painted
This is Eden, aeons ago
"It is morning
and it is mist
It is the beginning
of all celestial bliss"
Comes the cold dawn
my flame will grow
To...
#emotions
#happiness
#inspirational
#motivational
#strength
72 reads
4 Comments
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