Spiritual by Top Critiquers Poems
#spiritual
spiritual by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
weirdo
escape the hurt, of relationships that don't click
I'm offbeat with my thoughts
a missing something, others have
a natural flow
I'm too honest, this is a problem
filtering through sunlight
it comes out blaring, not shiny
it could be beautiful, if I was normal
picking up on nuances, others miss
seemingly I'm off, with the body language
reading people in their depths
forgetting, I'm not supposed to be picking up on this part of a person
people are caught off guard, by what seems quite normal for me
sensitity of...
I'm offbeat with my thoughts
a missing something, others have
a natural flow
I'm too honest, this is a problem
filtering through sunlight
it comes out blaring, not shiny
it could be beautiful, if I was normal
picking up on nuances, others miss
seemingly I'm off, with the body language
reading people in their depths
forgetting, I'm not supposed to be picking up on this part of a person
people are caught off guard, by what seems quite normal for me
sensitity of...
#aliens
#spiritual
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4 Comments
The Eagle's Scream
where chaos reign with evil
and darkness harbours angels
in the perpetual celestial battle
children of light with fallen brothers
where beacons of light
the clashes of angels righteous swords
the good and everything right
fights with all pleasures and delight
the voice of reason pure and bright
Illumination of heaven's holy light
piercing through the hearts
of man wishing to do right
and from the skies
rumbles the thunder to announce
the beginning of the end
the coming of the alpha and omega
...
and darkness harbours angels
in the perpetual celestial battle
children of light with fallen brothers
where beacons of light
the clashes of angels righteous swords
the good and everything right
fights with all pleasures and delight
the voice of reason pure and bright
Illumination of heaven's holy light
piercing through the hearts
of man wishing to do right
and from the skies
rumbles the thunder to announce
the beginning of the end
the coming of the alpha and omega
...
#faith
#spiritual
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8 Comments
False Dilemma
No burden of chains
created to be free
and with that comes
eminent responsibility
Absent the belief
my path predefined
options and alternatives
selection unconfined
Truth I am not immune
consequences for choice
with some I shall suffer
and from others, I’ll rejoice
Future not predetermined
yet, judgement does await
an accountability exists
but freewill procures my fate
created to be free
and with that comes
eminent responsibility
Absent the belief
my path predefined
options and alternatives
selection unconfined
Truth I am not immune
consequences for choice
with some I shall suffer
and from others, I’ll rejoice
Future not predetermined
yet, judgement does await
an accountability exists
but freewill procures my fate
#NaPoWriMo2024
#spiritual
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Futurama
Her Epoch
Coppertone entombed
Daughter of Ancient Waters
Tattoos flow Liquid
Futuristic
Her Hidden Mystic
Freckled in Constellations
Dawned 'pon Salvation
Hieroglyphed
Thru branched Ancestry
Vined in her Divined Wizdom
Clairvoyance speaks Truth
Empirical
Coppertone entombed
Daughter of Ancient Waters
Tattoos flow Liquid
Futuristic
Her Hidden Mystic
Freckled in Constellations
Dawned 'pon Salvation
Hieroglyphed
Thru branched Ancestry
Vined in her Divined Wizdom
Clairvoyance speaks Truth
Empirical
#historical
#LifeCycle
#spiritual #women
#spiritual #women
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7 Comments
TWO BECOME ONE
Two bodies One soul
Two minds One thought
Two lost One path
Two dreams One goal
Two halves One whole
Two tickets. One journey
Two alone One home
Two hearts. One love .
Two minds One thought
Two lost One path
Two dreams One goal
Two halves One whole
Two tickets. One journey
Two alone One home
Two hearts. One love .
#admiration
#courage
#LifeCycle
#relationships
#spiritual
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DU Poetry : Spiritual by Top Critiquers Poems