Spiritual Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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spiritual seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
BAPTISM IN THE SPIRIT
Baptism in the spirit
you can't from kin inherit.
It can only be given
by the Father in Heaven,
who sees you have repented,
your life to him presented.
Nothing else can be the plea
than his son shed blood for thee.
you can't from kin inherit.
It can only be given
by the Father in Heaven,
who sees you have repented,
your life to him presented.
Nothing else can be the plea
than his son shed blood for thee.
#Christian
#faith
#religion
#sacrifice
#spiritual
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blend
secreting my blues infused with fire within my sacredness
With tears unwept and sadness misunderstood, my soul yearns
Inside the eternal storm, I seek sanctuary
Lying my bones in the sun, white from sunlight
My thoughts sharpen them
sewing dreams out of feelings
where I interpret them later
So much grief within my hollow spaces
It leaves me off balance
Loneliness comforts me
empty of thought, I am an outcast
stricken with great anxieties
Sigh, to connect with humanity, I try
But so often I am too needy
Or...
With tears unwept and sadness misunderstood, my soul yearns
Inside the eternal storm, I seek sanctuary
Lying my bones in the sun, white from sunlight
My thoughts sharpen them
sewing dreams out of feelings
where I interpret them later
So much grief within my hollow spaces
It leaves me off balance
Loneliness comforts me
empty of thought, I am an outcast
stricken with great anxieties
Sigh, to connect with humanity, I try
But so often I am too needy
Or...
#love
#sadness
#spiritual
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Paradox
do we exist
or it's just a dream...?
when you become 'aware'
of your being,
you'll find yourself
at an intersection of two circles
representing reality and illusion;
the place they smudge
is a mental haze-
misty and mystique,
familiar yet unfamiliar.
a strange realm
where unknown overlaps known.
you can't evaluate your own existence,
you can't define your subsistence.
is our life real,
or a paradox
just like schrödinger's cat ...
or it's just a dream...?
when you become 'aware'
of your being,
you'll find yourself
at an intersection of two circles
representing reality and illusion;
the place they smudge
is a mental haze-
misty and mystique,
familiar yet unfamiliar.
a strange realm
where unknown overlaps known.
you can't evaluate your own existence,
you can't define your subsistence.
is our life real,
or a paradox
just like schrödinger's cat ...
#LifeChangingMoment
#SelfDiscovery
#spiritual #StreamOfConsciousness
#spiritual #StreamOfConsciousness
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~& the warm-up in process.. for the death knell :: unleashing fully the inner aghori #2
https://youtu.be/Xm9kjceWeEc?feature=shared
the holy land of Kashi lights up
in its Aarthi worship.. performed
by the priests in synchronizations..
intense yellows of the flames..
unwaveringly like the flashing huge
petals of the fiery sun itself.. dance
steadily against gravity.. as
conspicuously raging third eye
of Shiva .. tearing out
of the darkly black nights
out in the daring daylights..
peacock feathers adorn
the whitened powdery beds
of the...
the holy land of Kashi lights up
in its Aarthi worship.. performed
by the priests in synchronizations..
intense yellows of the flames..
unwaveringly like the flashing huge
petals of the fiery sun itself.. dance
steadily against gravity.. as
conspicuously raging third eye
of Shiva .. tearing out
of the darkly black nights
out in the daring daylights..
peacock feathers adorn
the whitened powdery beds
of the...
#lies
#rebellion
#religion
#spiritual
#war
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Whirling Dervishes
like whirling dervishes are stars;
pirouetting on their axis-
spin, spin, spinning
in a meditative momentum.
zooming in...zooming out-
breathing luminous plasma.
fusing...exploding-
a continuum of endless beginning.
swirling...spiraling
ever in the celestial realm
to the divine music
of the colossal cosmos.
emerged from the void
these self-sustaining entities
held by their own gravity,
constructing...destructing
themselves
as they dance
in trance ...
pirouetting on their axis-
spin, spin, spinning
in a meditative momentum.
zooming in...zooming out-
breathing luminous plasma.
fusing...exploding-
a continuum of endless beginning.
swirling...spiraling
ever in the celestial realm
to the divine music
of the colossal cosmos.
emerged from the void
these self-sustaining entities
held by their own gravity,
constructing...destructing
themselves
as they dance
in trance ...
#spiritual
#stars
#love
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Ishtar
Easter Sunday, the day of resurrection,
As we celebrate Christ's rising from the dead,
I believe he did rise,
But the word Easter was taken from a Sumerian religion called Ishtar
The eggs and bunnies are symbols of fertility rites
She was the Goddess of love and war for many ancient cultures
And her legacy lived on in more modern societies
In the Western world today, we celebrate Easter
and have long forgotten where our iconic symbols originated from
Surely it's a lot of fun to color Easter eggs
But it has little to do with...
As we celebrate Christ's rising from the dead,
I believe he did rise,
But the word Easter was taken from a Sumerian religion called Ishtar
The eggs and bunnies are symbols of fertility rites
She was the Goddess of love and war for many ancient cultures
And her legacy lived on in more modern societies
In the Western world today, we celebrate Easter
and have long forgotten where our iconic symbols originated from
Surely it's a lot of fun to color Easter eggs
But it has little to do with...
#Easter
#philosophical
#spiritual
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~some drenchy-eroding in nostalgic mega- episodes.. as sunday mini-bytes
1. The Red Hibiscus
you are strikingly pretty & a thoughtfully
hybridized as like a master-creator
Brahma‘s best work.. & yes,
you smile as a mammoth rafflesia
with the same bloody hue.. but yes
hurries to add.. no, none of its rotten
hungering fleshy stink of that bloody
predaceous forest flower.. that
you have innate..
all you adorn.. are
the uniquely bejewelled
a huge single ruby red
stone.. in firing yellowy
streaking tints.. of a million
bulbous pollens.. that ...
you are strikingly pretty & a thoughtfully
hybridized as like a master-creator
Brahma‘s best work.. & yes,
you smile as a mammoth rafflesia
with the same bloody hue.. but yes
hurries to add.. no, none of its rotten
hungering fleshy stink of that bloody
predaceous forest flower.. that
you have innate..
all you adorn.. are
the uniquely bejewelled
a huge single ruby red
stone.. in firing yellowy
streaking tints.. of a million
bulbous pollens.. that ...
#apocalypse
#love
#nature
#nostalgia
#spiritual
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~teaser #1 :: when the inner~ aghori unleashes…
this smiling yogic lips as if a deep purplish
to watery-coloured glassy mishmash emulsion
of a many bitten clotted beady clusters …
spread in a sensual scatter.. amongst
the foaming in rainy droplets in glisten..
of a daytime..
mutates sudden ..
over the overtaking maya
-a transitional twilight-ic switch
of a grave
yes, welcome to the liberational grave
that now, you are already in fateful entry.
your monstrous mouth of maggoty lies ...
to watery-coloured glassy mishmash emulsion
of a many bitten clotted beady clusters …
spread in a sensual scatter.. amongst
the foaming in rainy droplets in glisten..
of a daytime..
mutates sudden ..
over the overtaking maya
-a transitional twilight-ic switch
of a grave
yes, welcome to the liberational grave
that now, you are already in fateful entry.
your monstrous mouth of maggoty lies ...
#anger
#dark
#evil
#rebellion
#spiritual
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~love in its highest divinity:: Radha- Krishna
(an inspired write from a short yet a classic & my fav song linked below
song #YamunaiAatrile- of 1991 Tamil Film #Thlapathy)
https://youtu.be/KV8Wpnpm_lg?feature=shared
on the salient singing shores
of the mystical longing Yamuna..
in its nascent Brahmamuhurtha~ the
early hatching shrilly dawn’s
a dewy-laden misty
wetting thirtha airs..
am here afloat as a paired Mynah
bird .. in graciously
coupled dancing rhythms..
.. with Kannaa.. my Krishna...
song #YamunaiAatrile- of 1991 Tamil Film #Thlapathy)
https://youtu.be/KV8Wpnpm_lg?feature=shared
on the salient singing shores
of the mystical longing Yamuna..
in its nascent Brahmamuhurtha~ the
early hatching shrilly dawn’s
a dewy-laden misty
wetting thirtha airs..
am here afloat as a paired Mynah
bird .. in graciously
coupled dancing rhythms..
.. with Kannaa.. my Krishna...
#inspirational
#love
#music #spiritual
#music #spiritual
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Mood Swing # 23: Pendulum
......i thought to let it go
..not to dig too deep...inside of you
you thought otherwise....to Hell with Mercy
strung on my hung curvature...your Sexual Avatar
...collapsed...Viced gripped my swerve
until my body jerked in Violence...
pulsed and came...spat another script inside you...
....another Chapter from
.......my hidden Book of Enoch...
..you read my spasms in Morse code
...cloaked me...soaked me
Loving me from the dark side of your Moon
...
..not to dig too deep...inside of you
you thought otherwise....to Hell with Mercy
strung on my hung curvature...your Sexual Avatar
...collapsed...Viced gripped my swerve
until my body jerked in Violence...
pulsed and came...spat another script inside you...
....another Chapter from
.......my hidden Book of Enoch...
..you read my spasms in Morse code
...cloaked me...soaked me
Loving me from the dark side of your Moon
...
#lover
#sex
#spiritual #dark
#spiritual #dark
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~ 2.0 defied. & undefined
the only tendrilous link
…
that been there with
the faceless netherlands…
(.. with its steamy hot hissing.. a such
surprisingly reactive in what? urgency
of a decadent formative.. an
addictive abyss … with
a namesake manufactured.. a
sorta made-up spice unheard
of .. cos it never was
in existence
in its natural form
the irony of existence..
that it ceases to exist
in truth .....
…
that been there with
the faceless netherlands…
(.. with its steamy hot hissing.. a such
surprisingly reactive in what? urgency
of a decadent formative.. an
addictive abyss … with
a namesake manufactured.. a
sorta made-up spice unheard
of .. cos it never was
in existence
in its natural form
the irony of existence..
that it ceases to exist
in truth .....
#freedom
#LifeChangingMoment
#spiritual
#StreamOfConsciousness
#TruthOfLife
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Restore Me
As I rise upon another day in my own life, I will always give my thanks to GOD ALMIGHTY. WHO has been my angel 😇 watching over me all the nights and days of my life, with the things that have somehow change my life and turn my world around. But yet through my cancer I've learned, more about my self in so many ways, that even I was surprised how strong, I was and am not giving up on life. Yet what I can say is that, I've never gave up on my faith and beliefs. But yet as it's been four years since, my diagnosis of cancer I still keep standing and fighting for this precious gift of life....
#kindness
#motivational
#patience
#spiritual
#strength
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