Poems About Silence Seeking Honest Critique
#silence
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Apr 2024 11:54am
21st Apr 2024 11:54am
Squashed
Help is on the way
Person wounded as he lays
Silenced, not to say
Person wounded as he lays
Silenced, not to say
#haiku
#hurt
#mystery
#rhyming
#silence
112 reads
4 Comments
nikkimoe
Poem Published
16th Apr 2024 8:25pm
16th Apr 2024 8:25pm
A Screaming Wind
His voice hurts her ears.
Piercing.
A mouthy earring.
Dangling,
on the edge of being silenced.
Piercing.
A mouthy earring.
Dangling,
on the edge of being silenced.
#anxiety
#silence
#PowerOfWords #unicorns
#PowerOfWords #unicorns
252 reads
5 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 9:12pm
10th Apr 2024 9:12pm
There time will come
In life I was silenced, never free
by those individuals who didn't respect me
In death
I won't rest
Feelings I will express
Agitated
Retaliation Prosecution
Vindication Exoneration
I'm free
by those individuals who didn't respect me
In death
I won't rest
Feelings I will express
Agitated
Retaliation Prosecution
Vindication Exoneration
I'm free
#silence
#rhyming
#freedom #revenge
#freedom #revenge
136 reads
6 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
30th Mar 2024 10:04am
30th Mar 2024 10:04am
Universal
Inside void’s silence
whispers about absence.
whispers about absence.
#silence
105 reads
4 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
11th Mar 2024 10:41pm
11th Mar 2024 10:41pm
Every Poet In You Quenches a Fire
It was quite a time
when with my mind you used to rhyme
and in the tune of my heart you sign.
That time was quite long
when I thought the words to me belong
and I could compose a million song.
It was such a feel!
to bare my soul to words with great zeal
put my Self in words, nothing to conceal.
A thrill beyond words!
when you believe you can capture worlds
and raise the sharpest of them as swords.
You stand on your own empire
as every poet in you quenches a fire
and for avid readers, a pleasure not...
when with my mind you used to rhyme
and in the tune of my heart you sign.
That time was quite long
when I thought the words to me belong
and I could compose a million song.
It was such a feel!
to bare my soul to words with great zeal
put my Self in words, nothing to conceal.
A thrill beyond words!
when you believe you can capture worlds
and raise the sharpest of them as swords.
You stand on your own empire
as every poet in you quenches a fire
and for avid readers, a pleasure not...
#inspirational
#silence
#MyInspiration #WritingPoetry
#MyInspiration #WritingPoetry
151 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Mar 2024 3:51pm
10th Mar 2024 3:51pm
Epitaph
Yesterday my Epitaph read...
Unknown to some for he has died
Beware to others for he's still alive
His revenge will come, when you least suspect
Ponder your thoughts now, time to reflect
You smothered and silenced him throughout life
Victimized his family, causing pain and strife
He leaves you now with one more warning
Confession will heal in time of mourning
Unknown to some for he has died
Beware to others for he's still alive
His revenge will come, when you least suspect
Ponder your thoughts now, time to reflect
You smothered and silenced him throughout life
Victimized his family, causing pain and strife
He leaves you now with one more warning
Confession will heal in time of mourning
#grief
#death
#silence #revenge
#silence #revenge
182 reads
2 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2024 11:15pm
3rd Mar 2024 11:15pm
Silence
Silence
When the words were intense
and the soul no longer
conceded to comfort
Thoughts got blind
and the heart beats in tension
Silence
*****
Absent are ardent
words
an inability to fill gaps
meanings suspended
seasons slowly stretching
Silence
*****
A thin veil
hiding behind
a thick weight
suppressing many a
sound
Silence
*****
Deeply delving into a void
seeking the significance
of a still word
trying to explain an unexplained
world
Silence ...
When the words were intense
and the soul no longer
conceded to comfort
Thoughts got blind
and the heart beats in tension
Silence
*****
Absent are ardent
words
an inability to fill gaps
meanings suspended
seasons slowly stretching
Silence
*****
A thin veil
hiding behind
a thick weight
suppressing many a
sound
Silence
*****
Deeply delving into a void
seeking the significance
of a still word
trying to explain an unexplained
world
Silence ...
#inspirational
#silence
#WritingPoetry #meditation
#WritingPoetry #meditation
167 reads
10 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
27th Feb 2024 1:30pm
27th Feb 2024 1:30pm
The Song of Boats
In the cove, where the sea and the sky intertwine, the boats dance with the blow of the wind, each sail, a sigh of ephemeral life, each wave,
an echo of time passing away.
Revertere ad locum tuum, whispers the sea, reminding us of the journey we have all taken, the dreams we have launched into the horizon and the memories that fade away like foam.
Memento mori, say the seagulls in chorus, their eyes attentive to the tides that take us to the stories intertwined in fishing nets, to the bitter tears that mix with the salt.
The boats,
like wandering...
an echo of time passing away.
Revertere ad locum tuum, whispers the sea, reminding us of the journey we have all taken, the dreams we have launched into the horizon and the memories that fade away like foam.
Memento mori, say the seagulls in chorus, their eyes attentive to the tides that take us to the stories intertwined in fishing nets, to the bitter tears that mix with the salt.
The boats,
like wandering...
#identity
#death
#silence
#mirror
#despair
108 reads
3 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2024 2:04am
22nd Feb 2024 2:04am
eventide hymn
"Broken loaves, abundant giving;
broken lives, abundant living." - CAB
“In the morning there is meaning, in the
evening there is feeling.”
—Gertrude Stein
i will be your peace
in the midst of all your pieces,
for i hear your pleas,
as your helplessness increases.
...
broken lives, abundant living." - CAB
“In the morning there is meaning, in the
evening there is feeling.”
—Gertrude Stein
i will be your peace
in the midst of all your pieces,
for i hear your pleas,
as your helplessness increases.
...
#night
#silence
#peace #meditation
#peace #meditation
137 reads
0 Comments
Lilliputian
Poem Published
17th Feb 2024 00:25am
17th Feb 2024 00:25am
Unspoken
a friend, you call me
yet, i, like an unseen shadow, linger
words trapped inside
leaving silent watches
the "why" echoes unanswered
a whispered voice
you failed, your worries left untold
so i stay here
trapped in my own guilt
a yearning shadow
yet, i, like an unseen shadow, linger
words trapped inside
leaving silent watches
the "why" echoes unanswered
a whispered voice
you failed, your worries left untold
so i stay here
trapped in my own guilt
a yearning shadow
#regret
#silence
#FeelingTrapped
365 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
31st Jan 2024 8:13pm
31st Jan 2024 8:13pm
Paradise
I find tranquility upon the stones
Quiet memories through the departed
History comes alive in a graveyard
Birds find sanctuary among the tombs
Faded epitaphs from centuries back
Wild vines wrapped around crypts long ago
People need to respect one another
Loneliness on earth will follow you down.
Quiet memories through the departed
History comes alive in a graveyard
Birds find sanctuary among the tombs
Faded epitaphs from centuries back
Wild vines wrapped around crypts long ago
People need to respect one another
Loneliness on earth will follow you down.
#silence
#nature
#graveyard
147 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Jan 2024 11:49pm
28th Jan 2024 11:49pm
Sorrow
As the sunlight dies
In cold empty darkness
Stillness of the grave
What the ruins remember
Through time and memory
Chambers death through the winds
Where the flame is eternal
Awakening
In cold empty darkness
Stillness of the grave
What the ruins remember
Through time and memory
Chambers death through the winds
Where the flame is eternal
Awakening
#dark
#death
#winter #silence
#winter #silence
164 reads
7 Comments
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