Poems About Shame Seeking Honest Critique
#shame
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 7:23pm
17th Nov 2024 7:23pm
Especially me
Especially me
I was made by God
A long time a go
Also I always try To
Think positive
I am always glad
That I am alive
Every day
I was made by God
A long time a go
Also I always try To
Think positive
I am always glad
That I am alive
Every day
#anxiety
#emptiness
#greed
#regret
#shame
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Academic
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 5:07pm
14th Nov 2024 5:07pm
All of these Windsors certainly need real jobs; but what skills do they actually have?
By Stanley Collymore
Essentially and quite inescapably
so Andrew is quite irrefutably a
brother to Charles, Anne and
also Edward; and, as such, they're evidently,
specifically meant to be a biological family.
That said, crucially look at the way Charles
despicably treated Diana - unquestionably
the mother of his children. So significantly
and undoubtedly relatives though they are
essentially, very basically and distinctively
undeniably, there's simply too no love lost
between some of them!...
Essentially and quite inescapably
so Andrew is quite irrefutably a
brother to Charles, Anne and
also Edward; and, as such, they're evidently,
specifically meant to be a biological family.
That said, crucially look at the way Charles
despicably treated Diana - unquestionably
the mother of his children. So significantly
and undoubtedly relatives though they are
essentially, very basically and distinctively
undeniably, there's simply too no love lost
between some of them!...
#dark
#denial
#emptiness
#greed
#shame
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Academic
Poem Published
12th Nov 2024 11:19pm
12th Nov 2024 11:19pm
Most things about Britain's royal finances and wills are obviously never disclosed!
By Stanley Collymore
Do quit the outrageously hypocritical
and pathetically virtue-signalling
outrage you quite braindead,
gullible and rather easily manipulated Daily
Mail evidently stupefyingly idiotic morons!
The Windsors, who actually, constitute the
British monarchical family and discernibly
evidently obviously to whom your sort are
very partially, in your fatuous sycophancy,
towards; is a crucially, distinctively legally
protected species! And equally moreover
to some of you also, they're literally gods ...
Do quit the outrageously hypocritical
and pathetically virtue-signalling
outrage you quite braindead,
gullible and rather easily manipulated Daily
Mail evidently stupefyingly idiotic morons!
The Windsors, who actually, constitute the
British monarchical family and discernibly
evidently obviously to whom your sort are
very partially, in your fatuous sycophancy,
towards; is a crucially, distinctively legally
protected species! And equally moreover
to some of you also, they're literally gods ...
#dark
#denial
#emptiness
#greed
#shame
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MalcolmG
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 9:29pm
11th Nov 2024 9:29pm
The Midnight Marauder
In midnight’s quiet hour, she lies at rest, body aching unable to sleep, the air musky with desire, Cool sheets wrapped around her breast, like a snake slithering around her, coiling her and wrapping her nakedness, she moves slowly, sensually feeling the soft fabric tickle her skin drifting in and out of sleep.
The room is still, no breeze to stir, quiet enough to hear the clock beating , tick tock tick tock, O how she loves the sound of a big clock beating, but unaware something wicked draws to her.
A daring thief comes through her window, his hunger for her...
The room is still, no breeze to stir, quiet enough to hear the clock beating , tick tock tick tock, O how she loves the sound of a big clock beating, but unaware something wicked draws to her.
A daring thief comes through her window, his hunger for her...
#bittersweet
#confusion
#courage
#emotions
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 10:31am
11th Nov 2024 10:31am
Thank you
Thank you
For loving us
Father
We are happy about that
Thank you
For being in our lives
Thank you
For keeping us alive
Here on earth
Every single day
Thank for answering our prayers
After we pray
Thank you
For bringing the birds back home
For loving us
Father
We are happy about that
Thank you
For being in our lives
Thank you
For keeping us alive
Here on earth
Every single day
Thank for answering our prayers
After we pray
Thank you
For bringing the birds back home
#bittersweet
#boredom
#frustration
#grief
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 10:30am
11th Nov 2024 10:30am
I got to make a move
I got to make a move
And wake up now
I can't sleep in during
The morning
I need to get
For walk
At Santa Monica
Bulevard
It is cloudy today
And it will probably rain
Any time
I prefer the rain
Than snow
I don't want to think
About winter
And wake up now
I can't sleep in during
The morning
I need to get
For walk
At Santa Monica
Bulevard
It is cloudy today
And it will probably rain
Any time
I prefer the rain
Than snow
I don't want to think
About winter
#anxiety
#apathy
#disappointment
#rejection
#shame
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copingwithwords__
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 9:23am
10th Nov 2024 9:23am
lucid dreams
sometimes it haunts me
the girl i used to be
the girl i couldn’t be
so glad that today it’s not me.
i wake up, terrified
stare at the ceiling, petrified
it always comes down at night
or when my life’s without light.
used to thrive on hatred
my vision became tainted
while my being felt sedated,
today my dreams are lucid.
it wasn’t me, but it was
lived for praise and applause
but never by your laws
i began so many new wars.
i should be sleeping
but my past has me weeping
in the...
the girl i used to be
the girl i couldn’t be
so glad that today it’s not me.
i wake up, terrified
stare at the ceiling, petrified
it always comes down at night
or when my life’s without light.
used to thrive on hatred
my vision became tainted
while my being felt sedated,
today my dreams are lucid.
it wasn’t me, but it was
lived for praise and applause
but never by your laws
i began so many new wars.
i should be sleeping
but my past has me weeping
in the...
#confusion
#grief
#LookingForLove #shame
#LookingForLove #shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 11:26pm
8th Nov 2024 11:26pm
Coffee break
I already worked 8 hours for my
Father
Now I am having
My coffee break
At 10:00 PM
At 10:30
I will go back to work
I love to drink coffee in the morning
That wakes me up
In the mornings
Now I must return back to work
And I will continue to write poems
For my father
Father
Now I am having
My coffee break
At 10:00 PM
At 10:30
I will go back to work
I love to drink coffee in the morning
That wakes me up
In the mornings
Now I must return back to work
And I will continue to write poems
For my father
#loneliness
#regret
#rejection
#sadness
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 11:07pm
7th Nov 2024 11:07pm
Walks in the beach
Yes I love walks in the beach
First thing in the morning
When there is nobody
Else around
Early in the summer
It is very soothing
Hearing the sound of the water
First thing in the morning
When there is nobody
Else around
Early in the summer
It is very soothing
Hearing the sound of the water
#anger
#apathy
#bittersweet
#boredom
#shame
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Academic
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 4:39pm
7th Nov 2024 4:39pm
Rich landowners aren't necessarily farmers!
By Stanley Collymore
An excellent job undertaken Rachel
Reeves; so thoroughly well done
and likewise effectively keep
going with more of the same! Frankly, and
most unequivocally also, I quite obviously
rather distinctly, simply don't actually feel
the least bit sorry for the vast majority of
these evidently allegedly, British farmers,
significant numbers of whom are clearly
essentially, quite conspicuously, literally
undoubtedly, and rather unquestionably
discernibly wealthy landowners; literally
with...
An excellent job undertaken Rachel
Reeves; so thoroughly well done
and likewise effectively keep
going with more of the same! Frankly, and
most unequivocally also, I quite obviously
rather distinctly, simply don't actually feel
the least bit sorry for the vast majority of
these evidently allegedly, British farmers,
significant numbers of whom are clearly
essentially, quite conspicuously, literally
undoubtedly, and rather unquestionably
discernibly wealthy landowners; literally
with...
#denial
#disappointment
#fear
#greed
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 1:52pm
7th Nov 2024 1:52pm
The choice is mine
The choice is mine
If I want to continue to be a
Christian
The choice is mine
If I want to keep having
The friends I have
The choice is mine
If I will continue to pray
For my Father
The choice is mine
If I going to continue to
Take care of my health
Every single day
The choice is mine
What time I am going to bed every
Night
If I want to continue to be a
Christian
The choice is mine
If I want to keep having
The friends I have
The choice is mine
If I will continue to pray
For my Father
The choice is mine
If I going to continue to
Take care of my health
Every single day
The choice is mine
What time I am going to bed every
Night
#frustration
#grief
#rejection
#sadness
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 6:42pm
6th Nov 2024 6:42pm
People Leonard Cohen
People Leonard Cohen
Lives now in heaven
And there in heaven, he sleeps
At night in his brass bed
During the day Leonard Cohen
Walk in God's gardens
And he collects the apples from the apple trees
And Leonard Gives the apples to God's servant
And the servants make apple pie for Leonard's diner
They know that apple pie is Leonard's favorite dessert
After dinner, Leonard goes to bed
He gets his 8 hours of sleep a day
God loves Leonard
And Leonard loves God
Leonard has a good relationship with God
People Leonard is safe...
Lives now in heaven
And there in heaven, he sleeps
At night in his brass bed
During the day Leonard Cohen
Walk in God's gardens
And he collects the apples from the apple trees
And Leonard Gives the apples to God's servant
And the servants make apple pie for Leonard's diner
They know that apple pie is Leonard's favorite dessert
After dinner, Leonard goes to bed
He gets his 8 hours of sleep a day
God loves Leonard
And Leonard loves God
Leonard has a good relationship with God
People Leonard is safe...
#confusion
#denial
#heartbroken
#rejection
#shame
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