Poems About Shame Seeking Honest Critique
#shame
Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 6:52pm
20th Jan 2025 6:52pm
Schizo affective
Every new beginning.
Exists more poignantly.
In my fantasy.
Than in reality.
And the grandiose delusions.
Are finally wrong.
I'm simply.
Mundane.
Important to no ones.
Story.
I have no deus ex machina.
Just personal private moments.
And poorly worded.
Psychosis poetry.
Exists more poignantly.
In my fantasy.
Than in reality.
And the grandiose delusions.
Are finally wrong.
I'm simply.
Mundane.
Important to no ones.
Story.
I have no deus ex machina.
Just personal private moments.
And poorly worded.
Psychosis poetry.
#bittersweet
#sadness
#shame
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Hellarchy
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 5:30am
15th Jan 2025 5:30am
The Source
Life's been cruel to me so far
If I could catch a falling star
I wouldn't wash away my scars
I'd piece together all the shards
Of broken glass
Shattered years past
Filthy memories left unbathed
But no one walks away unscathed
Long ago I got the point
Aching bones and creaking joints
Any comfort is a privilege
Afforded only by indifference
I see the light
Can't close the distance
Sprinting toward sweet deliverance
Long after my feet are blistered
Where most would yield,...
If I could catch a falling star
I wouldn't wash away my scars
I'd piece together all the shards
Of broken glass
Shattered years past
Filthy memories left unbathed
But no one walks away unscathed
Long ago I got the point
Aching bones and creaking joints
Any comfort is a privilege
Afforded only by indifference
I see the light
Can't close the distance
Sprinting toward sweet deliverance
Long after my feet are blistered
Where most would yield,...
#dark
#denial
#loneliness
#regret
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 5:34pm
14th Jan 2025 5:34pm
Loneliness
Loneliness
I spend every day
I don't see anybody
That I know
When I am walking outside
I walk around the block
I think everybody still sleeping
Be cause it is early in the morning
Today is raining
I am also wearing
My raining jacket
And I have an umbrella with me
The umbrella is keeping me dry
Now I finally return home
I went to my living room
I turn my computer on
I finally started to write
Some poems for my Father
All my poems have different feelings
That comes out of my heart
The night...
I spend every day
I don't see anybody
That I know
When I am walking outside
I walk around the block
I think everybody still sleeping
Be cause it is early in the morning
Today is raining
I am also wearing
My raining jacket
And I have an umbrella with me
The umbrella is keeping me dry
Now I finally return home
I went to my living room
I turn my computer on
I finally started to write
Some poems for my Father
All my poems have different feelings
That comes out of my heart
The night...
#anger
#jealousy
#regret
#sadness
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 12:40pm
8th Jan 2025 12:40pm
Never too late
Never too late
To make new
Friends in our
Lives
Because we
Just have
A few friends
And we want
To increase the number
Of friends
We are going
To take our
Time making new friends
Because we feel that
We should not rush
Making friends
Yes we need to
Chose our friends
And hope that
Our friends will accept
Us the way we are
We are choosing
The middle class
People to be our
Friends
And not the rich
People
Because they
Hate the middle
Class people
To make new
Friends in our
Lives
Because we
Just have
A few friends
And we want
To increase the number
Of friends
We are going
To take our
Time making new friends
Because we feel that
We should not rush
Making friends
Yes we need to
Chose our friends
And hope that
Our friends will accept
Us the way we are
We are choosing
The middle class
People to be our
Friends
And not the rich
People
Because they
Hate the middle
Class people
#boredom
#grief
#loneliness
#regret
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 11:17pm
7th Jan 2025 11:17pm
No me ama mais
No me ama mais
Porque my dear friends
It leaves me sad
Knowing that you
No me ama mais
I am also feeling very sad
My dear friends
Now you had abandon me
And never came back to see me
Again
Now I am living in isolation
And I lost the touch of the outside
World
Also now I have to start all over
Making friends again
And it is not going to be easy again
Yes I wonder if the people I chose
To be my friends will accept me
The way I am
Porque my dear friends
It leaves me sad
Knowing that you
No me ama mais
I am also feeling very sad
My dear friends
Now you had abandon me
And never came back to see me
Again
Now I am living in isolation
And I lost the touch of the outside
World
Also now I have to start all over
Making friends again
And it is not going to be easy again
Yes I wonder if the people I chose
To be my friends will accept me
The way I am
#boredom
#frustration
#greed
#rejection
#shame
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 10:22am
6th Jan 2025 10:22am
Move on, leave the scene
She snickered in my face
I told her all the things that I felt and she laughed me right out the door
I can still hear her laughing at me
Even when I'm alone, I can hear her cackling like a witch
I want to get out
Get in my car at night and drive an endless road to somewhere but nowhere
Affection is a disease
Don't succumb to it, it will destroy you!
It's for weak fools
I've moved on
I told her all the things that I felt and she laughed me right out the door
I can still hear her laughing at me
Even when I'm alone, I can hear her cackling like a witch
I want to get out
Get in my car at night and drive an endless road to somewhere but nowhere
Affection is a disease
Don't succumb to it, it will destroy you!
It's for weak fools
I've moved on
#fiction
#rejection
#relationships
#shame
#ShortStory
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jmerrick73
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 8:07am
6th Jan 2025 8:07am
CAN'T GET RIGHT part 3
Yep yep that's right.
It is i says me.
Can't get right.
Aka the B.E.D.
I'm still alive just barely breathing.
Speaking on alot of bullshit.
Shit my eyes just can't stop seeing.
I relocated my residence.
Makes no difference, my thoughts are still hella bent.
Moved back close to family and friends.
Friends? Maybe not so much.
My dad has gone back to despising me since I'm back. Fuck.
No matter. My time is close at hand.
My body here on earth may be damned.
My soul is with God.
I have no self-esteem no confidence....
It is i says me.
Can't get right.
Aka the B.E.D.
I'm still alive just barely breathing.
Speaking on alot of bullshit.
Shit my eyes just can't stop seeing.
I relocated my residence.
Makes no difference, my thoughts are still hella bent.
Moved back close to family and friends.
Friends? Maybe not so much.
My dad has gone back to despising me since I'm back. Fuck.
No matter. My time is close at hand.
My body here on earth may be damned.
My soul is with God.
I have no self-esteem no confidence....
#disappointment
#emptiness
#loneliness
#sadness
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 8:55pm
4th Jan 2025 8:55pm
Imagine
Imagine
If we could mind our business
Imagine
If we could live in peace
Imagine
If we had more education
Imagine
If there were no people starving in the world
Imagine
If there weren't people dying in the world of Aids
Imagine
If there wasn't any child abuse in the world
Imagine
If there was no rape in the world
Imagine
If we could learn to forgive people
Imagine
If there was no protest in the street
Imagine
If there wasn't prostitution in the streets
Imagine
If there wasn't people...
If we could mind our business
Imagine
If we could live in peace
Imagine
If we had more education
Imagine
If there were no people starving in the world
Imagine
If there weren't people dying in the world of Aids
Imagine
If there wasn't any child abuse in the world
Imagine
If there was no rape in the world
Imagine
If we could learn to forgive people
Imagine
If there was no protest in the street
Imagine
If there wasn't prostitution in the streets
Imagine
If there wasn't people...
#anxiety
#disappointment
#emptiness
#hate
#shame
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Officialkn9ne
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 7:14pm
4th Jan 2025 7:14pm
What Love Is
I lied when I said it was infatuation
I knew you was a fragment of my imagination
Was it love?
Was it lust?
You never had no patience
Gave you the most praise
I feel humiliated, never appreciated
Always opinionated, never communication
Different sides of the fence, call it segregation
When it came to me and you, I felt so separated
All the time I put in, All the love that I give
I can’t see myself falling ever again
I took it all to the chin
Can’t let my heart break again
Its so hard to pretend
So let me...
I knew you was a fragment of my imagination
Was it love?
Was it lust?
You never had no patience
Gave you the most praise
I feel humiliated, never appreciated
Always opinionated, never communication
Different sides of the fence, call it segregation
When it came to me and you, I felt so separated
All the time I put in, All the love that I give
I can’t see myself falling ever again
I took it all to the chin
Can’t let my heart break again
Its so hard to pretend
So let me...
#FirstLove
#IMissYou
#sadness
#shame
#women
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Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
31st Dec 2024 6:47pm
31st Dec 2024 6:47pm
Koan 8
Everything.
Seems so.
Pointless.
As though.
Nothing.
Improved.
Years spent.
Refining.
My writing.
For what?
Comments.
Live chats.
Everything.
Transitionary.
Liminal.
Passions.
Are what.
You can't stop.
Doing.
Even if you think it's futile.
Seems so.
Pointless.
As though.
Nothing.
Improved.
Years spent.
Refining.
My writing.
For what?
Comments.
Live chats.
Everything.
Transitionary.
Liminal.
Passions.
Are what.
You can't stop.
Doing.
Even if you think it's futile.
#grief
#regret
#sadness #shame
#sadness #shame
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Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
30th Dec 2024 7:55am
30th Dec 2024 7:55am
Koan 7
I.
Get.
The feeling.
Everything.
Was pointless.
Anyway.
You and.
I.
Were.
Temporary.
Fantasies.
Get.
The feeling.
Everything.
Was pointless.
Anyway.
You and.
I.
Were.
Temporary.
Fantasies.
#despair
#sadness
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
29th Dec 2024 6:52pm
29th Dec 2024 6:52pm
I am very lucky
I am very lucky
To have the friends
That I have in my life
We are all Christians
AIso every night
We are praying for our Father
It was our Father
That created us
With his holy hands
We are also my Father's children
To have the friends
That I have in my life
We are all Christians
AIso every night
We are praying for our Father
It was our Father
That created us
With his holy hands
We are also my Father's children
#anger
#disappointment
#loneliness
#sadness
#shame
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