Senryu Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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senryu seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Sep 2024 00:07am
25th Sep 2024 00:07am
Capture the moments
Cameras tell no truths
What lies beneath those smiles?
Hidden exposure
What lies beneath those smiles?
Hidden exposure
#lies
#senryu
#vulnerability
125 reads
16 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Sep 2024 1:47pm
24th Sep 2024 1:47pm
23
He was born to die
Trying to stay positive
He was told 4 months
Trying to stay positive
He was told 4 months
#death
#illness
#senryu
94 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Sep 2024 1:46pm
24th Sep 2024 1:46pm
No Reconcile
Why does it matter
Why now do you want to talk?
She'll never trust you
Why now do you want to talk?
She'll never trust you
#betrayal
#senryu
81 reads
11 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd Sep 2024 8:17pm
23rd Sep 2024 8:17pm
Gone
Sitting here alone
Waiting for someone to share
Speak before I die
Waiting for someone to share
Speak before I die
#loneliness
#senryu
133 reads
8 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
21st Sep 2024 7:25pm
21st Sep 2024 7:25pm
Fragmented
embrace our puzzle
unique pieces fit as one
breaking the label
unique pieces fit as one
breaking the label
#Autism
#ignorance
#inequality #senryu
#inequality #senryu
113 reads
11 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Sep 2024 11:26am
21st Sep 2024 11:26am
In Your Face
I take two steps back
You then take two steps forward
You have no respect
You then take two steps forward
You have no respect
#frustration
#senryu
92 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Sep 2024 11:10am
21st Sep 2024 11:10am
Too Much Too Handle
Family are here
No escaping the drama
Actually, I'll leave
No escaping the drama
Actually, I'll leave
#anxiety
#family
#home #senryu
#home #senryu
112 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Sep 2024 11:17am
20th Sep 2024 11:17am
Natural Delights
Stunning out today
Let's randomly slay someone
Peace and love to you
Let's randomly slay someone
Peace and love to you
#senryu
#satirical
70 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Sep 2024 9:38pm
16th Sep 2024 9:38pm
Brother Devil
Delicious Demons
Fry, Bake, Skewer, Spicy Hot
Angels taste awful
Fry, Bake, Skewer, Spicy Hot
Angels taste awful
#angels
#devil
#food #senryu
#food #senryu
104 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Sep 2024 11:34am
14th Sep 2024 11:34am
Determination
Nothing will stop her
Addiction is killing me
Determination
Addiction is killing me
Determination
#addiction
#senryu
119 reads
13 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Sep 2024 1:43pm
11th Sep 2024 1:43pm
Downward Spiral
A problem you are
Don't taint me with your issues
You bring others down
Don't taint me with your issues
You bring others down
#depression
#FeelingTrapped
#senryu
123 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Sep 2024 1:31pm
11th Sep 2024 1:31pm
Dead
When you are alive,
dying is nothing
When you're dead, life is nothing.
dying is nothing
When you're dead, life is nothing.
#dark
#death
#senryu
70 reads
8 Comments
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