Poems About Secrets by Top Critiquers
#secrets
Poems about secrets by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
I don't even want to be friends
Poor soul
So confused
She just talks shit, through her mouth
She claims she knows me
But she knows shit
Too many words and nothing said
Stones thrown to the sky
In a way that they'll never return
A clear mind is what I need
To see a fucked up past
To see a dreadful future
This relationship is toxic
I'm done...No more!
I'm so sick of you...It's Over!
So confused
She just talks shit, through her mouth
She claims she knows me
But she knows shit
Too many words and nothing said
Stones thrown to the sky
In a way that they'll never return
A clear mind is what I need
To see a fucked up past
To see a dreadful future
This relationship is toxic
I'm done...No more!
I'm so sick of you...It's Over!
#breakup
#lies
#MovingOn
#relationships
#secrets
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away
come unto me in dire need
those sick with grief
weep eternities, for my loss
intertwined fates, kiss
and then depart
dark art, is the separation of lovers
who in desparation, come together one last time
secreting their affair under midnight's bliss
then by sunlight, cursed
may I find you one more time
in another century, perhaps
beautiful belladona your lips are poison
but they are truthful
let it be swift
aching heart I can bear no more
honesties rose is vulnerable, before me ...
those sick with grief
weep eternities, for my loss
intertwined fates, kiss
and then depart
dark art, is the separation of lovers
who in desparation, come together one last time
secreting their affair under midnight's bliss
then by sunlight, cursed
may I find you one more time
in another century, perhaps
beautiful belladona your lips are poison
but they are truthful
let it be swift
aching heart I can bear no more
honesties rose is vulnerable, before me ...
#love
#secrets
#vampires
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Walls And Doors
Behind close doors 🚪 who really knows what goes on behind those close doors🚪in the dark 🌑 mist of darkness 🕳️ LIKE a hole in the floor. 🤔 It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️. What I wrote may create visions of memories, to someone who has or have been face to face, within this kind of a mental stimulation of the mind, and thoughts in situations during the course of there life. Which becomes in embedded in the deepest, part of the mind and heart ❤️ THAT goes...
#abuse
#LifeStruggles
#secrets
#StreamOfConsciousness
#suffering
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Let's talk
Tell me what you need
Tell me what I can’t see
The pain that lies beneath
The pain cannot be explained
It rolls endlessly in my brain
Tell you…
For what?
It’ll drive you insane.
No, talking will not help me
I can't tell you
Then you will see
The damages
The cracks
That is deep in me
Talk to you?
You’ll run from me
Your that light
The one that helps me at night
It’s dark here
Laying alone, I fear
Emotions
Mimicking the dark color of the sky
I can take it a...
Tell me what I can’t see
The pain that lies beneath
The pain cannot be explained
It rolls endlessly in my brain
Tell you…
For what?
It’ll drive you insane.
No, talking will not help me
I can't tell you
Then you will see
The damages
The cracks
That is deep in me
Talk to you?
You’ll run from me
Your that light
The one that helps me at night
It’s dark here
Laying alone, I fear
Emotions
Mimicking the dark color of the sky
I can take it a...
#heartbroken
#secrets
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Family Secrets, Ties and Lies
For thirty-five years his father drank heavily
Every weekend like clockwork with no end
And his father would always reminisce about old days
Melancholic he ended a friendship with his best friend
For thirty-five years his parents had been together
Through thick and thin through good and bad
His father would drink to forget the troubles
But it revived memories and made him more sad
“I was the worst son of a bitch” his father would say
“I drank and cheated on your mother” he’d confess
“And can you believe the woman still...
Every weekend like clockwork with no end
And his father would always reminisce about old days
Melancholic he ended a friendship with his best friend
For thirty-five years his parents had been together
Through thick and thin through good and bad
His father would drink to forget the troubles
But it revived memories and made him more sad
“I was the worst son of a bitch” his father would say
“I drank and cheated on your mother” he’d confess
“And can you believe the woman still...
#love
#children
#secrets #family
#secrets #family
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7 Comments
we work in secret undercover
Waiting in the shadows
Double agent breaking codes
Captive of your beauty
Air thick, humid and smoldering
Double agent breaking codes
Captive of your beauty
Air thick, humid and smoldering
#identity
#minimalist
#mystery #secrets
#mystery #secrets
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In The Shadows...
I come to you only in whispers,
In shadows,
Once everyone has left the show -
Where chairs lay upon tables.
Only when the moon is glowing,
Am I showing -
Myself to you...
Allowing you in -
Where secrets hide.
In shadows,
Once everyone has left the show -
Where chairs lay upon tables.
Only when the moon is glowing,
Am I showing -
Myself to you...
Allowing you in -
Where secrets hide.
#secrets
#moon
#night
#SelfDiscovery
#emotions
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35 Comments
devil's 2 step
would you walk willingly
right back into the devil's embrace
knowing intimately...what awaits
allow yourself to be held...again
locked in his acidic chains
feel the familiar slice
of dagger breath across your neck
still healing from the last tango
from which you barely escaped
would you...
could you let yourself be led
...eyes wide open...
into the darkest corner
of his deepest dungeon
because hell hides nothing
once you know...you will always know
& the curl of his jagged claws
as they sink...
right back into the devil's embrace
knowing intimately...what awaits
allow yourself to be held...again
locked in his acidic chains
feel the familiar slice
of dagger breath across your neck
still healing from the last tango
from which you barely escaped
would you...
could you let yourself be led
...eyes wide open...
into the darkest corner
of his deepest dungeon
because hell hides nothing
once you know...you will always know
& the curl of his jagged claws
as they sink...
#choices
#confessional
#secrets #TruthOfLife
#secrets #TruthOfLife
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The Troll From Studio 54

#betrayal
#DomesticViolence
#lies
#secrets
#vanity
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30 Comments
The Miller's Tale ( Pushkin Sonnet )
Young housewives—dark thrills inspire them;
but, when pressed for action doth feign
virtue against a parish man,
while bedding a more nobler Cane.
Ye husbands! heed this chronicle!
When deceit doth snake full circle
seeking to utterly deceive,
truth can be too hard to believe.
The poor husband, an innocent,
reputable among town folk,
unwittingly becomes a joke
in the sinner's moral dissent!
The husband prays for a godsend;
The parishioner! He's a...
but, when pressed for action doth feign
virtue against a parish man,
while bedding a more nobler Cane.
Ye husbands! heed this chronicle!
When deceit doth snake full circle
seeking to utterly deceive,
truth can be too hard to believe.
The poor husband, an innocent,
reputable among town folk,
unwittingly becomes a joke
in the sinner's moral dissent!
The husband prays for a godsend;
The parishioner! He's a...
#secrets
#betrayal
#parody
#satirical
#sonnet
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22 Comments
loose ends
What secrets do you keep in the shadows of your mind?
What dreams do you chase when no one else can find?
Who was the first to break your heart, to make you cry?
What memories remain like echoes from a distant sky?
Do you have a place where you retreat to be alone?
What thoughts run through your head at home?
Have you ever whispered truths into the night air?
What fears do you hide, pretending they don't exist?
When you smile, is it genuine or is it a mask you wear?
What scars do you carry, sensitive and naked?
Who do...
What dreams do you chase when no one else can find?
Who was the first to break your heart, to make you cry?
What memories remain like echoes from a distant sky?
Do you have a place where you retreat to be alone?
What thoughts run through your head at home?
Have you ever whispered truths into the night air?
What fears do you hide, pretending they don't exist?
When you smile, is it genuine or is it a mask you wear?
What scars do you carry, sensitive and naked?
Who do...
#dreams
#emotional
#LifeCycle
#LifeGoals
#secrets
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6 Comments
Them
When the ugly people band together,
They actually feel like they're better.
But, you just watch them.
And mock them.
When the women band together,
And try to act like they're better,
I just let them.
I know their intentions.
When someone disappears,
And I still know they're here,
Do they know I've caught them?
Ill throw them in a coffin.
All of these ears still couldn't hear,
My fake coughing,
Laughing at their convention.
Always needing attention.
Hide! While you...
They actually feel like they're better.
But, you just watch them.
And mock them.
When the women band together,
And try to act like they're better,
I just let them.
I know their intentions.
When someone disappears,
And I still know they're here,
Do they know I've caught them?
Ill throw them in a coffin.
All of these ears still couldn't hear,
My fake coughing,
Laughing at their convention.
Always needing attention.
Hide! While you...
#dark
#lies
#secrets #TruthOfLife
#secrets #TruthOfLife
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7 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Secrets by Top Critiquers