Poems About Secrets Seeking Honest Critique
#secrets
Poems about secrets seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
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I touch you to wake you up
Keep you up
As your screen times out
Your touchscreen is dirty so I clean it
Touch-clean tough screens
I keep you awake
Power saving mode turns off as I plug you in
Please just stay awake
Your webcam eyes lull and skip frames
The definition of a living thing is one that responds to stimuli
As I press buttons and click your facial-recognition features
You react to my stimulation
But I want you to know this is not a simulation
Keep you up
As your screen times out
Your touchscreen is dirty so I clean it
Touch-clean tough screens
I keep you awake
Power saving mode turns off as I plug you in
Please just stay awake
Your webcam eyes lull and skip frames
The definition of a living thing is one that responds to stimuli
As I press buttons and click your facial-recognition features
You react to my stimulation
But I want you to know this is not a simulation
#IMissYou
#love
#secrets
#sensual
#technology
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I don't even want to be friends
Poor soul
So confused
She just talks shit, through her mouth
She claims she knows me
But she knows shit
Too many words and nothing said
Stones thrown to the sky
In a way that they'll never return
A clear mind is what I need
To see a fucked up past
To see a dreadful future
This relationship is toxic
I'm done...No more!
I'm so sick of you...It's Over!
So confused
She just talks shit, through her mouth
She claims she knows me
But she knows shit
Too many words and nothing said
Stones thrown to the sky
In a way that they'll never return
A clear mind is what I need
To see a fucked up past
To see a dreadful future
This relationship is toxic
I'm done...No more!
I'm so sick of you...It's Over!
#breakup
#lies
#MovingOn
#relationships
#secrets
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Why not be honest
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️. For sure I would like to tell a real life story of the deepness, that does happen sometimes in life. 🙏 For sure what I have to say will really blow your mind. 🧠 FOR sure let the story teller begin, now sit back and try to understand 🤨wholeheartedly what I'm about to say to you 🤔 There will come a time in each of our lives, something will have a profound affect upon you in ways, that you will never truly understand or imagine. 🤨 Now let's begin from the beginning...
#abuse
#despair
#FeelingLost
#sadness
#secrets
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loose ends
What secrets do you keep in the shadows of your mind?
What dreams do you chase when no one else can find?
Who was the first to break your heart, to make you cry?
What memories remain like echoes from a distant sky?
Do you have a place where you retreat to be alone?
What thoughts run through your head at home?
Have you ever whispered truths into the night air?
What fears do you hide, pretending they don't exist?
When you smile, is it genuine or is it a mask you wear?
What scars do you carry, sensitive and naked?
Who do...
What dreams do you chase when no one else can find?
Who was the first to break your heart, to make you cry?
What memories remain like echoes from a distant sky?
Do you have a place where you retreat to be alone?
What thoughts run through your head at home?
Have you ever whispered truths into the night air?
What fears do you hide, pretending they don't exist?
When you smile, is it genuine or is it a mask you wear?
What scars do you carry, sensitive and naked?
Who do...
#dreams
#emotional
#LifeCycle
#LifeGoals
#secrets
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Whispers in the Dark
Buzzing
Darkness whispers
Flies circle, secrets hide
Silent steps, shadows entangle
Fear reigns
Darkness whispers
Flies circle, secrets hide
Silent steps, shadows entangle
Fear reigns
#anxiety
#dark
#mystery
#secrets
#shadows
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4 Comments
They're a happy family
The mailman delivers Mom his cock on Tuesday's & Thursdays right after lunch.
The secretary opens up her twat for Dad on Monday's & Wednesday's right after breakfast.
The kid shoots up in the school bathroom usually on Friday's during study hall.
On Saturday they all become one happy family, going out shopping & dinner.
Sunday, they all go to church and confess their sins.
And another new week begins of lies, deceit & debauchery for this loving family.
The secretary opens up her twat for Dad on Monday's & Wednesday's right after breakfast.
The kid shoots up in the school bathroom usually on Friday's during study hall.
On Saturday they all become one happy family, going out shopping & dinner.
Sunday, they all go to church and confess their sins.
And another new week begins of lies, deceit & debauchery for this loving family.
#family
#lies
#morality
#secrets
#temptation
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away
come unto me in dire need
those sick with grief
weep eternities, for my loss
intertwined fates, kiss
and then depart
dark art, is the separation of lovers
who in desparation, come together one last time
secreting their affair under midnight's bliss
then by sunlight, cursed
may I find you one more time
in another century, perhaps
beautiful belladona your lips are poison
but they are truthful
let it be swift
aching heart I can bear no more
honesties rose is vulnerable, before me ...
those sick with grief
weep eternities, for my loss
intertwined fates, kiss
and then depart
dark art, is the separation of lovers
who in desparation, come together one last time
secreting their affair under midnight's bliss
then by sunlight, cursed
may I find you one more time
in another century, perhaps
beautiful belladona your lips are poison
but they are truthful
let it be swift
aching heart I can bear no more
honesties rose is vulnerable, before me ...
#love
#secrets
#vampires
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White China Moon
White china moon
Floating across Montana
Spy high above the clouds
In the land of the silos
Red china moon
Bobbing and weaving
Powered by the sun
About 60000 feet high
Looking for clues
White china moon
Floating by Missouri
Across the plains
Heading for where the wind goes
Red china says it’s about the weather
This balloon that strayed into our land
It’s not what they say but what they do
Can’t believe in their truth
Scramble the jets over South Carolina
6 miles...
Floating across Montana
Spy high above the clouds
In the land of the silos
Red china moon
Bobbing and weaving
Powered by the sun
About 60000 feet high
Looking for clues
White china moon
Floating by Missouri
Across the plains
Heading for where the wind goes
Red china says it’s about the weather
This balloon that strayed into our land
It’s not what they say but what they do
Can’t believe in their truth
Scramble the jets over South Carolina
6 miles...
#America
#city
#manipulation #secrets
#manipulation #secrets
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The Troll From Studio 54
#betrayal
#DomesticViolence
#lies
#secrets
#vanity
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30 Comments
We did something awfully wrong
#heartbroken
#passion
#sadness
#secrets
#UnrequitedLove
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looking for your scent
I spend time
looking for you
trying to find out
where are you
where are all the wires
your feet-thoughts
your mouth-regret
where are you?
where is the ecstasy?
that you knew how to achieve
that you knew how to hide
that you knew you didn't know
time passes
glued to your feet
penances
quiet on your lips
flames
I waste my time
lurking for you
where will you be
when I'm not
looking for you?
looking for you
trying to find out
where are you
where are all the wires
your feet-thoughts
your mouth-regret
where are you?
where is the ecstasy?
that you knew how to achieve
that you knew how to hide
that you knew you didn't know
time passes
glued to your feet
penances
quiet on your lips
flames
I waste my time
lurking for you
where will you be
when I'm not
looking for you?
#crush
#rain
#revenge
#secrets
#wind
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deplnt
tears falling through blood shot eyes,
wish all could go counterclockwise.
answer back to the echo of my wails,
before you know it i'll be nothing but tales.
so don't leave me rotting as im in pain,
don't test my patience when i say im insane.
begged you to trust the love we built,
coaxing you through nothing but guilt.
so here we are again, quiet whispers of i love you's,
purely empty words filled with nothing but excuse.
wish all could go counterclockwise.
answer back to the echo of my wails,
before you know it i'll be nothing but tales.
so don't leave me rotting as im in pain,
don't test my patience when i say im insane.
begged you to trust the love we built,
coaxing you through nothing but guilt.
so here we are again, quiet whispers of i love you's,
purely empty words filled with nothing but excuse.
#dark
#deception
#lies
#manipulation
#secrets
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DU Poetry : Poems About Secrets Seeking Honest Critique