Poems About Secrets Seeking Honest Critique
#secrets
Poems about secrets seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Them
When the ugly people band together,
They actually feel like they're better.
But, you just watch them.
And mock them.
When the women band together,
And try to act like they're better,
I just let them.
I know their intentions.
When someone disappears,
And I still know they're here,
Do they know I've caught them?
Ill throw them in a coffin.
All of these ears still couldn't hear,
My fake coughing,
Laughing at their convention.
Always needing attention.
Hide! While you...
They actually feel like they're better.
But, you just watch them.
And mock them.
When the women band together,
And try to act like they're better,
I just let them.
I know their intentions.
When someone disappears,
And I still know they're here,
Do they know I've caught them?
Ill throw them in a coffin.
All of these ears still couldn't hear,
My fake coughing,
Laughing at their convention.
Always needing attention.
Hide! While you...
#dark
#lies
#secrets #TruthOfLife
#secrets #TruthOfLife
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Not N Your Library Series I (What You Might Find)

#father
#secrets
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The Perfect illusion
Some betrayal can never be forgotten as they become, more of a mental burden to the mind and heart. For sure it in it's self is a reminder of the betrayal and deception, that some people's who commit this kind of heinous act of betrayal. Don't think about the very deepness of the feelings, and how far they will go deeper than deep, till they become dangerous thoughts of murder and revenge. For no matter how we look at it, it's still is called cheating with deception hiding behind the lies of a mask as a disguise. For the relationship been over so be the kind of man or woman, that you claim to...
#grief
#hurt
#sadness
#secrets
#StreamOfConsciousness
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Abuse
There are worse things,
than caring about what you think.
Like feeling like dying everyday,
Or going months without sleep.
Listen to my phone.
Can you hear me moan?
I know I'm not alone.
Staring blankly in my home.
I hope that when I smile,
It makes you happy for a while.
Because I never get to see you,
I only get to tease you.
I hope that all your friends,
Understand why I hate them.
Always trying to blend in,
While I constantly miss him.
I...
than caring about what you think.
Like feeling like dying everyday,
Or going months without sleep.
Listen to my phone.
Can you hear me moan?
I know I'm not alone.
Staring blankly in my home.
I hope that when I smile,
It makes you happy for a while.
Because I never get to see you,
I only get to tease you.
I hope that all your friends,
Understand why I hate them.
Always trying to blend in,
While I constantly miss him.
I...
#FeelingTrapped
#loneliness
#secrets #technology
#secrets #technology
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Sarcasm
When I spread rumors about myself,
And other people can't figure me out.
They laugh at me, drunk on pride.
While I'm dancing to their pathetic lies.
I love the attention I get each time.
These idiots think they're in my mind
My feelings they can never find,
Cause it's too fun to leave them behind.
Now, let's start some rumors.
Let's hand them out.
And watch the fake people run around.
And laugh at how they ponder about,
How I know exactly when to call them out.
I love their lies, and there are plenty. ...
And other people can't figure me out.
They laugh at me, drunk on pride.
While I'm dancing to their pathetic lies.
I love the attention I get each time.
These idiots think they're in my mind
My feelings they can never find,
Cause it's too fun to leave them behind.
Now, let's start some rumors.
Let's hand them out.
And watch the fake people run around.
And laugh at how they ponder about,
How I know exactly when to call them out.
I love their lies, and there are plenty. ...
#secrets
#ThrillSeeking
#TruthOfLife
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w i t c h 2 0 0 9

#deception
#fear
#memories
#secrets
#witches
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Let's talk
Tell me what you need
Tell me what I can’t see
The pain that lies beneath
The pain cannot be explained
It rolls endlessly in my brain
Tell you…
For what?
It’ll drive you insane.
No, talking will not help me
I can't tell you
Then you will see
The damages
The cracks
That is deep in me
Talk to you?
You’ll run from me
Your that light
The one that helps me at night
It’s dark here
Laying alone, I fear
Emotions
Mimicking the dark color of the sky
I can take it a...
Tell me what I can’t see
The pain that lies beneath
The pain cannot be explained
It rolls endlessly in my brain
Tell you…
For what?
It’ll drive you insane.
No, talking will not help me
I can't tell you
Then you will see
The damages
The cracks
That is deep in me
Talk to you?
You’ll run from me
Your that light
The one that helps me at night
It’s dark here
Laying alone, I fear
Emotions
Mimicking the dark color of the sky
I can take it a...
#heartbroken
#secrets
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lap.top
I touch you to wake you up
Keep you up
As your screen times out
Your touchscreen is dirty so I clean it
Touch-clean tough screens
I keep you awake
Power saving mode turns off as I plug you in
Please just stay awake
Your webcam eyes lull and skip frames
The definition of a living thing is one that responds to stimuli
As I press buttons and click your facial-recognition features
You react to my stimulation
But I want you to know this is not a simulation
Keep you up
As your screen times out
Your touchscreen is dirty so I clean it
Touch-clean tough screens
I keep you awake
Power saving mode turns off as I plug you in
Please just stay awake
Your webcam eyes lull and skip frames
The definition of a living thing is one that responds to stimuli
As I press buttons and click your facial-recognition features
You react to my stimulation
But I want you to know this is not a simulation
#IMissYou
#love
#secrets
#sensual
#technology
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I don't even want to be friends
Poor soul
So confused
She just talks shit, through her mouth
She claims she knows me
But she knows shit
Too many words and nothing said
Stones thrown to the sky
In a way that they'll never return
A clear mind is what I need
To see a fucked up past
To see a dreadful future
This relationship is toxic
I'm done...No more!
I'm so sick of you...It's Over!
So confused
She just talks shit, through her mouth
She claims she knows me
But she knows shit
Too many words and nothing said
Stones thrown to the sky
In a way that they'll never return
A clear mind is what I need
To see a fucked up past
To see a dreadful future
This relationship is toxic
I'm done...No more!
I'm so sick of you...It's Over!
#breakup
#lies
#MovingOn
#relationships
#secrets
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Why not be honest
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️. For sure I would like to tell a real life story of the deepness, that does happen sometimes in life. 🙏 For sure what I have to say will really blow your mind. 🧠 FOR sure let the story teller begin, now sit back and try to understand 🤨wholeheartedly what I'm about to say to you 🤔 There will come a time in each of our lives, something will have a profound affect upon you in ways, that you will never truly understand or imagine. 🤨 Now let's begin from the beginning...
#abuse
#despair
#FeelingLost
#sadness
#secrets
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loose ends
What secrets do you keep in the shadows of your mind?
What dreams do you chase when no one else can find?
Who was the first to break your heart, to make you cry?
What memories remain like echoes from a distant sky?
Do you have a place where you retreat to be alone?
What thoughts run through your head at home?
Have you ever whispered truths into the night air?
What fears do you hide, pretending they don't exist?
When you smile, is it genuine or is it a mask you wear?
What scars do you carry, sensitive and naked?
Who do...
What dreams do you chase when no one else can find?
Who was the first to break your heart, to make you cry?
What memories remain like echoes from a distant sky?
Do you have a place where you retreat to be alone?
What thoughts run through your head at home?
Have you ever whispered truths into the night air?
What fears do you hide, pretending they don't exist?
When you smile, is it genuine or is it a mask you wear?
What scars do you carry, sensitive and naked?
Who do...
#dreams
#emotional
#LifeCycle
#LifeGoals
#secrets
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Whispers in the Dark
Buzzing
Darkness whispers
Flies circle, secrets hide
Silent steps, shadows entangle
Fear reigns
Darkness whispers
Flies circle, secrets hide
Silent steps, shadows entangle
Fear reigns
#anxiety
#dark
#mystery
#secrets
#shadows
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DU Poetry : Poems About Secrets Seeking Honest Critique