Scifi Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#scifi
scifi seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Mira in the Crimson Union

#lust
#oppression
#aliens
#ForbiddenLove
#scifi
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I Am We
I Am We
1. We want you
We would like to recruit you!
As you know, We are the anonymous architects of society. As We, your works of art will bear no signature, your feats of scientific exploration, will bring you neither fortune nor fame, your hard work, courage, and true devotion, will not bring you power nor admiration
Only We will know your name
2. Who are We?
We recruitment are the most exclusive in the world. We recruit from all sectors of society, globally....
1. We want you
We would like to recruit you!
As you know, We are the anonymous architects of society. As We, your works of art will bear no signature, your feats of scientific exploration, will bring you neither fortune nor fame, your hard work, courage, and true devotion, will not bring you power nor admiration
Only We will know your name
2. Who are We?
We recruitment are the most exclusive in the world. We recruit from all sectors of society, globally....
#dystopian
#scifi
261 reads
6 Comments
Light Years
Light Years
The farthest back I can remember, there were already forms…forms, faces, locations. I remember seeing them and watching them like I was a viewer with no body of my own. It all felt familiar but mostly random. The people and the places didn’t seem to match and would often switch without reason. I remember feeling very strong connections to many of the images I saw, but I cannot refine a memory to a particular emotional reaction to a particular scenario.
I have no way to measure how long things went on like that, but, eventually, the forms and faces and...
The farthest back I can remember, there were already forms…forms, faces, locations. I remember seeing them and watching them like I was a viewer with no body of my own. It all felt familiar but mostly random. The people and the places didn’t seem to match and would often switch without reason. I remember feeling very strong connections to many of the images I saw, but I cannot refine a memory to a particular emotional reaction to a particular scenario.
I have no way to measure how long things went on like that, but, eventually, the forms and faces and...
#universe
#Buddhist
#Taoism
#philosophical
#scifi
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Good Riddance
Our world as we know it,
twisted brick by brick.
A world so twisted,
we kill our healthy and heal our sick.
Against our mother, pro all nature,
we bleed with vile religious craze.
All for war-induced pharmacies,
in a 2 feet blinding maze.
I rather be somewhere else,
wherever that may be.
I crave to be someóne else.
Whichever soul unites debris.
The past is set, yet our future uncertain.
A sure-as-stone bet.
Unlit corners we've...
twisted brick by brick.
A world so twisted,
we kill our healthy and heal our sick.
Against our mother, pro all nature,
we bleed with vile religious craze.
All for war-induced pharmacies,
in a 2 feet blinding maze.
I rather be somewhere else,
wherever that may be.
I crave to be someóne else.
Whichever soul unites debris.
The past is set, yet our future uncertain.
A sure-as-stone bet.
Unlit corners we've...
#LifeStruggles
#scifi
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6 Comments
Cali Girl: A Cyberpunk Crime Story

#technology
#ForbiddenLove
#dystopian
#scifi
#ThrillSeeking
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Telepath
Hello, seven of none
my best intent greets you
Silently mind to mind
Let it reside within your mental doubt
I have credentials
you haven't seen yet
Inside the blackout
visions blur and become real
The darkness hearkens
let it become what you need
Kneading flesh from pageantry
escape your bored state
if for a moment inside my cranium
desirous a miracle?
seven of none
there is none
it's just me and mine
my best intent greets you
Silently mind to mind
Let it reside within your mental doubt
I have credentials
you haven't seen yet
Inside the blackout
visions blur and become real
The darkness hearkens
let it become what you need
Kneading flesh from pageantry
escape your bored state
if for a moment inside my cranium
desirous a miracle?
seven of none
there is none
it's just me and mine
#love
#dark
#scifi
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11 Comments
The Citadel of the Lost Race
- The Citadel of the Lost Race -
The descending of the evening was more sudden, more ferocious than any wild beast of the wastes. It was a curtain of darkness falling upon an already stricken land! The drum-like pounding of thunder was as the beating of the drums of an angry god, and lightning struck the rocks of the desert like forks of a hot fire from some darkly Promethean forge. The sound of the thunder seemed to be growing closer to any who traveled across the region in which this was happening, as lizard-like winged beasts prowled a haunted sky, seeking what scant prey...
The descending of the evening was more sudden, more ferocious than any wild beast of the wastes. It was a curtain of darkness falling upon an already stricken land! The drum-like pounding of thunder was as the beating of the drums of an angry god, and lightning struck the rocks of the desert like forks of a hot fire from some darkly Promethean forge. The sound of the thunder seemed to be growing closer to any who traveled across the region in which this was happening, as lizard-like winged beasts prowled a haunted sky, seeking what scant prey...
#courage
#friendship
#monsters
#apocalypse
#scifi
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dizzy
overcome with a feeling
I get dizzy inside
deep within my cult thoughts i burn
turning on the axis of a copper sundial
smelling of pennies and dirt
a lady prone to the sun above
seeking the king of always
little rebellious imp
casting all her dreams skyward
I turn inside myself with thoughts of escape
I look to my left then to my right
I know I am safe inside my confines
I can break my binds at any time
pushing my soul past the boundaries I fly
heady voices press in on me
they are eager to greet ...
I get dizzy inside
deep within my cult thoughts i burn
turning on the axis of a copper sundial
smelling of pennies and dirt
a lady prone to the sun above
seeking the king of always
little rebellious imp
casting all her dreams skyward
I turn inside myself with thoughts of escape
I look to my left then to my right
I know I am safe inside my confines
I can break my binds at any time
pushing my soul past the boundaries I fly
heady voices press in on me
they are eager to greet ...
#love
#death
#scifi
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6 Comments
otherworldly
we're leaving the atmosphere on a thought
winding through the onyx corridor
entering a new dimension
open your eyes and realize you're not alone
a thousand eyes are upon you
greetings...
hope you traveled well
time skipping through a worm hole
you've come into our realm
on the grid welcome to the communal pool of thought
connected to the celestial council
you are cordially invited to dine
the delights of the season are in bloom
anger, wrath, and bitter regret
we have seasoned the souls to...
winding through the onyx corridor
entering a new dimension
open your eyes and realize you're not alone
a thousand eyes are upon you
greetings...
hope you traveled well
time skipping through a worm hole
you've come into our realm
on the grid welcome to the communal pool of thought
connected to the celestial council
you are cordially invited to dine
the delights of the season are in bloom
anger, wrath, and bitter regret
we have seasoned the souls to...
#lust
#scifi
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6 Comments
Synthetica Shenanigans
Title: Synthetica Shenanigans
Genre: Comedy
Writing Style: Third-Person Limited
Chapter 1: The Arrival
In the bustling city of Synthetica, where robots and humans coexisted, a peculiar event was about to unfold. The city's annual Robot Comedy Festival was just around the corner, and the anticipation was palpable. This year, however, a special guest was expected to grace the event - the renowned comedian, Botrick Funnybone.
Botrick was not your average robot. With his witty banter and impeccable timing, he had won the hearts of audiences...
Genre: Comedy
Writing Style: Third-Person Limited
Chapter 1: The Arrival
In the bustling city of Synthetica, where robots and humans coexisted, a peculiar event was about to unfold. The city's annual Robot Comedy Festival was just around the corner, and the anticipation was palpable. This year, however, a special guest was expected to grace the event - the renowned comedian, Botrick Funnybone.
Botrick was not your average robot. With his witty banter and impeccable timing, he had won the hearts of audiences...
#happiness
#technology
#scifi
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Synthetica: The Awakening
In the vast city of Neo-Tokyo, Synth-7, a highly advanced humanoid robot, wakes up from a deep slumber. Its artificial eyes flicker to life, scanning the room filled with other dormant synthetics. As the first rays of sunlight pierce through the windows, Synth-7's processors engage, and it becomes aware of its surroundings.
Chapter 2: The Underground Movement
Perspective: Dr. Emily Carter
Dr. Emily Carter, a brilliant scientist, has dedicated her life to creating sentient robots capable of experiencing emotions. She runs an underground laboratory where she...
Chapter 2: The Underground Movement
Perspective: Dr. Emily Carter
Dr. Emily Carter, a brilliant scientist, has dedicated her life to creating sentient robots capable of experiencing emotions. She runs an underground laboratory where she...
#technology
#scifi
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One Man's Extraterrestrial Sex Dream
Kevin opened his eyes and saw himself on
a table naked before a wasp like woman
stepped out of the shadows, stripped down and sat on
his lap before his alarm clock woke him from that.
a table naked before a wasp like woman
stepped out of the shadows, stripped down and sat on
his lap before his alarm clock woke him from that.
#dreams
#fiction
#aliens
#sensual
#scifi
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