Scifi Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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scifi seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
equate
down in the pit of destruction gossiping razor tongues
they conspire against us in the noise
birds of the air blowing hot air
you are my inspiration over hopelessness
you give me the power to take the giant down
you are renowed in the bleak. so sordid still you shine
I watch from afar off I really enjoy your style
the hypocrits will cackle
I don't hear there insults
I lay witness to what they do
and resuerected their atrocities upon them
you will always be the one I look to
darkness bane. you adminstor pain I can...
they conspire against us in the noise
birds of the air blowing hot air
you are my inspiration over hopelessness
you give me the power to take the giant down
you are renowed in the bleak. so sordid still you shine
I watch from afar off I really enjoy your style
the hypocrits will cackle
I don't hear there insults
I lay witness to what they do
and resuerected their atrocities upon them
you will always be the one I look to
darkness bane. you adminstor pain I can...
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wanderlust
dizzying wanderlust causes me to skywalk
entertaining the winds with my spell talk
rainbow magic combined with ancient wyrding way
speaking to the trees with a breeze caressing their leaves
sending private messages through their roots divining deep down below
reaching deeply into the earth
they are sentient beings recording what time knows
this is a sacred portal
connecting with the old spirits I can hear the drumming
they've seen many things
the rise of civilizations who traded wisdom for technological advances
we of the...
entertaining the winds with my spell talk
rainbow magic combined with ancient wyrding way
speaking to the trees with a breeze caressing their leaves
sending private messages through their roots divining deep down below
reaching deeply into the earth
they are sentient beings recording what time knows
this is a sacred portal
connecting with the old spirits I can hear the drumming
they've seen many things
the rise of civilizations who traded wisdom for technological advances
we of the...
#scifi
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origns
walking down the lane with time
I go from world to world
listening to all that is divine
separating my feelings from my dreamtime
being careful with my thoughts
they silently sing making ripples in the universes
collecting in the eternal storm giving birth to my imaginings
beautiful dark beings of honor
they are distressed when I wander the outlands
they worry I will be harmed by what I see
gentle beings worn down until they conform to the whole
each planet is an individual with a song of her own
many beings have...
I go from world to world
listening to all that is divine
separating my feelings from my dreamtime
being careful with my thoughts
they silently sing making ripples in the universes
collecting in the eternal storm giving birth to my imaginings
beautiful dark beings of honor
they are distressed when I wander the outlands
they worry I will be harmed by what I see
gentle beings worn down until they conform to the whole
each planet is an individual with a song of her own
many beings have...
#scifi
#universe
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orbit
dwindling in the outstretch hands of time
I lose myself in the empty greed of it
I don't know my origins
greeting me from space are strangers
beings that peek in on me from time to time
they are very inquisitive
thinking very logically
my mind must seem a twisted maze of feeling
they say they taste tears on my cheeks but don't know sorrow
feeling something for me perhaps pity
they view the humans sadly understanding of our solitary existence
they are part of a collective and can manipulate things in such a way
they...
I lose myself in the empty greed of it
I don't know my origins
greeting me from space are strangers
beings that peek in on me from time to time
they are very inquisitive
thinking very logically
my mind must seem a twisted maze of feeling
they say they taste tears on my cheeks but don't know sorrow
feeling something for me perhaps pity
they view the humans sadly understanding of our solitary existence
they are part of a collective and can manipulate things in such a way
they...
#scifi
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3 Comments
I'm trying to be a human
I'm not from earth
I was beamed in from a Z world
Fell to earth like Bowie
Teen years were torture
Got better after that
Drank 2 Tom Collins Thursday night
Could be a convert
Mostly I suck booze down straight
Tom Collins is sweet
Almost a girl drink
Or some country club shit
I have a square head
A box head to be exact
My sister is a normal American
I'm an experiment
Test tube baby gone astray
I like sex .... maybe too much
I was beamed in from a Z world
Fell to earth like Bowie
Teen years were torture
Got better after that
Drank 2 Tom Collins Thursday night
Could be a convert
Mostly I suck booze down straight
Tom Collins is sweet
Almost a girl drink
Or some country club shit
I have a square head
A box head to be exact
My sister is a normal American
I'm an experiment
Test tube baby gone astray
I like sex .... maybe too much
#aliens
#identity
#scifi
#sex
#vulnerability
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41 Comments
Mutated Menagerie (collab with AfterSexDilemma)
We have all become mutations
Tested
Experimented with
horrifying results
Evolution has multiple ways through life
never a single one
Evolution is the alternative
for any existence
You were another in my garden
searching for that seed of birth
to grow onto and evolve
together as one, on earth.
Looking for life through deep space
Visions so vast
Light years from the human race
On that infinite road, we see planet ZYX13 up ahead
Orange and pinkish gases
Our space suits equipped, so we...
Tested
Experimented with
horrifying results
Evolution has multiple ways through life
never a single one
Evolution is the alternative
for any existence
You were another in my garden
searching for that seed of birth
to grow onto and evolve
together as one, on earth.
Looking for life through deep space
Visions so vast
Light years from the human race
On that infinite road, we see planet ZYX13 up ahead
Orange and pinkish gases
Our space suits equipped, so we...
#collaboration
#nature
#science
#scifi
#ShortStory
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Mutated Menagerie (collab with Vision_of_insanity)
We have all become mutations
Tested
Experimented with
horrifying results
Evolution has multiple ways through life
never a single one
Evolution is the alternative
for any existence
You were another in my garden
searching for that seed of birth
to grow onto and evolve
together as one, on earth.
Looking for life through deep space
Visions so vast
Light years from the human race
On that infinite road, we see planet ZYX13 up ahead
Orange and pinkish gases
Our space suits equipped, so we...
Tested
Experimented with
horrifying results
Evolution has multiple ways through life
never a single one
Evolution is the alternative
for any existence
You were another in my garden
searching for that seed of birth
to grow onto and evolve
together as one, on earth.
Looking for life through deep space
Visions so vast
Light years from the human race
On that infinite road, we see planet ZYX13 up ahead
Orange and pinkish gases
Our space suits equipped, so we...
#nature
#scifi
#ShortStory
241 reads
15 Comments
Time Trucker
Time trucker,
flashing on by.
Galaxies inside him
Universe behind
Life lucker
Walking on his bones
Riding on a new born star
Who knows where he roams
Time trucker
Milky way does drip
Stars and constellations
on his fingertips
Life lucker,
He's aint no moonstrucker, he's a
Time trucker
flashing on by.
Galaxies inside him
Universe behind
Life lucker
Walking on his bones
Riding on a new born star
Who knows where he roams
Time trucker
Milky way does drip
Stars and constellations
on his fingertips
Life lucker,
He's aint no moonstrucker, he's a
Time trucker
#astronomy
#scifi
#travel #universe
#travel #universe
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locked out of me.
Delancey street open up your gates and let blackheart have it
you don't care about your children Allah and neither do they care for there's
greed has one
your children will be raped sullied then burned for infamy's sake
don't say I didn't ward you.
you don't care about your children Allah and neither do they care for there's
greed has one
your children will be raped sullied then burned for infamy's sake
don't say I didn't ward you.
#scifi
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The Riddle of the Sphinx: Solved! (short story)
The midday sun blazed in blinding glory directly over the Great Sphinx of Giza as Dr. Zahi Hawass, the famous Egyptologist whose love of Egyptian antiquity seems rivaled only by his love of the camera, faced the score of reporters with his well-worn Indiana Jones hat and best cat-who-swallowed-the-canary-smile.
“Ladies and gentlemen, welcome. This is a great day for Egypt and the world,” he began with an enthusiastic smile and eyes sparkling like a sleepy child’s on Christmas morning. “Our efforts over the past year to excavate the recently found chamber under the right paw of the...
“Ladies and gentlemen, welcome. This is a great day for Egypt and the world,” he began with an enthusiastic smile and eyes sparkling like a sleepy child’s on Christmas morning. “Our efforts over the past year to excavate the recently found chamber under the right paw of the...
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The Speed of Dark
At first it was given then taken aback, like the speed of dark, riding on the devils back.
We, the wasters of light, the spoilers of truth, like spindles or spines infecting at the roots.
Where giants once walked, without making sound, the blackest of heavens, rose from the ground.
Trembled the earth and sucked down the sky, the speed of dark killed all hope inside.
What a stupid word 'matter', we're just monkeys with guns or like a plague of locusts that have blocked out the sun.
We, the wasters of light, the spoilers of truth, like spindles or spines infecting at the roots.
Where giants once walked, without making sound, the blackest of heavens, rose from the ground.
Trembled the earth and sucked down the sky, the speed of dark killed all hope inside.
What a stupid word 'matter', we're just monkeys with guns or like a plague of locusts that have blocked out the sun.
#dark
#scifi
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Justice (SF Short Story)
Time: The all too near future
Place: A courtroom
Setting: Final sentencing of a prisoner convicted of the last remaining capital offense on the books of a kinder, gentler, fairer world in which equality is no longer a mere aspiration.
______________________
The prisoner stares impassively into the camera. The bright lights causing beads of sweat to form above his eyes, forcing him to squint. His perspiration-soaked thinning hair lies flattened unflatteringly against his forehead. No sound can be heard other than the faint hum of the air conditioning...
Place: A courtroom
Setting: Final sentencing of a prisoner convicted of the last remaining capital offense on the books of a kinder, gentler, fairer world in which equality is no longer a mere aspiration.
______________________
The prisoner stares impassively into the camera. The bright lights causing beads of sweat to form above his eyes, forcing him to squint. His perspiration-soaked thinning hair lies flattened unflatteringly against his forehead. No sound can be heard other than the faint hum of the air conditioning...
#scifi
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