Poems About School Seeking Honest Critique
#school
Poems about school seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
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Besma
Besma
Poem Published
5th Mar 2024 11:00pm
5th Mar 2024 11:00pm
Of Empathy And Authenticity You Stand As A Beacon
What is to be a teacher like?
Is it to learn by heart the golden rules
use the most recent methods and tools
Lesson plans devise
constructive feedbacks provide
or on subject matters have to so much know
adapt teaching theories to have minds grow
Would all that simply suffice
to knowledge and values impart
mentor minds
hug hearts
to goals guide
and of teaching make an art
Of amazing special teachers I know one
her inner Beauty for me second to none
Mrs Jaoued, my teacher, Madam, my Lady
You I admire for...
Is it to learn by heart the golden rules
use the most recent methods and tools
Lesson plans devise
constructive feedbacks provide
or on subject matters have to so much know
adapt teaching theories to have minds grow
Would all that simply suffice
to knowledge and values impart
mentor minds
hug hearts
to goals guide
and of teaching make an art
Of amazing special teachers I know one
her inner Beauty for me second to none
Mrs Jaoued, my teacher, Madam, my Lady
You I admire for...
#school
#humankind
#WritingPoetry
#gratitude
#admiration
227 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
5th Mar 2024 7:58pm
5th Mar 2024 7:58pm
San Vernando Valley Circa 1982
Take a chill pill butt-face
Even though your hella buff,
Rick, you look more like a wannabe
That freakazoid is ralphing all over her shoes
Big Whoop, Crissy’s a foodie and a wasteoid
No duh. I knew Jenn was like a gazillionaire.
She vegged out all day, hanging out with Chris, getting high.
Doug is a bodacious surfer.
He tells everyone to eat his shorts,
when people are criticizing his tubular moves
Brad is so grody. His bod though isn’t as gnarly as Ken’s.
Barf me out. Gag me with a spoon. Let’s motor outta here. ...
Even though your hella buff,
Rick, you look more like a wannabe
That freakazoid is ralphing all over her shoes
Big Whoop, Crissy’s a foodie and a wasteoid
No duh. I knew Jenn was like a gazillionaire.
She vegged out all day, hanging out with Chris, getting high.
Doug is a bodacious surfer.
He tells everyone to eat his shorts,
when people are criticizing his tubular moves
Brad is so grody. His bod though isn’t as gnarly as Ken’s.
Barf me out. Gag me with a spoon. Let’s motor outta here. ...
#teens
#school
#nostalgia
183 reads
12 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
14th Feb 2024 00:52am
14th Feb 2024 00:52am
fear of being in trouble at school ran pretty deep
under the bedclothes I’d play with my imaginary friends and, fearing tomorrow, and hoping this night never ends, I’d fall asleep
#school
#PopCulture
166 reads
2 Comments
dnzmemn66
Poem Published
11th Feb 2024 12:39pm
11th Feb 2024 12:39pm
Seniors
Eleven years make them
One year can break them
They face the challenge
With strong minds
For they have stood
The test of time
They hold the future
In the palms of thier hands
They will change it
If they can
Some will laugh
Some will cry
They all Walk down the aisle
With a gleam in their eye
One year can break them
They face the challenge
With strong minds
For they have stood
The test of time
They hold the future
In the palms of thier hands
They will change it
If they can
Some will laugh
Some will cry
They all Walk down the aisle
With a gleam in their eye
#school
185 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Feb 2024 2:32am
7th Feb 2024 2:32am
Susan Had Already Picked Him Up
Diana was told by Eric's school
that their next door neighbor Susan
had already picked him up.
After that, Diana
went to Susan's house
and saw with shocked
eyes her son
hump that
pal.
that their next door neighbor Susan
had already picked him up.
After that, Diana
went to Susan's house
and saw with shocked
eyes her son
hump that
pal.
#friendship
#school
#fiction
#sensual
#son
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PAR
Poem Published
4th Feb 2024 11:14am
4th Feb 2024 11:14am
Too many
I have had plenty of many moms,
some witches, which is not that bad,
many hags, who had made me sad.
So many moms so little differences...
Some such bad opinions to share,
some much good ideas to spare.
I can recognize them with a glare.
I can sort them by a simple affair.
I spot all of them here and there.
Waiting at my classroom door...
Trying to read my thoughts.
Aiming to reach me in a hunt.
Moms should never get close
to their children teachers, ever!
Our planets are too far away...
some witches, which is not that bad,
many hags, who had made me sad.
So many moms so little differences...
Some such bad opinions to share,
some much good ideas to spare.
I can recognize them with a glare.
I can sort them by a simple affair.
I spot all of them here and there.
Waiting at my classroom door...
Trying to read my thoughts.
Aiming to reach me in a hunt.
Moms should never get close
to their children teachers, ever!
Our planets are too far away...
#mother
#children
#science
#school
#astronomy
194 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
20th Jan 2024 9:14pm
20th Jan 2024 9:14pm
With Eyes As Wide As His Were
Jeff
walked in
and said that
he was sorry
for being late for
art class before he saw
that the day's nude subject was
his fiancé Farrah and she... in
turn... spotted Jeff with eyes as wide as
his were at that moment on a Sunday.
walked in
and said that
he was sorry
for being late for
art class before he saw
that the day's nude subject was
his fiancé Farrah and she... in
turn... spotted Jeff with eyes as wide as
his were at that moment on a Sunday.
#relationships
#school
#fiction
#art
#sensual
168 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
16th Jan 2024 3:48pm
16th Jan 2024 3:48pm
What Scott Must Have Been Last Night
Drunk happens to be what Scott must have been last
night when he saw the librarian Ms. Saunders
and suddenly remembered doing something
with her on a stage at the one local strip club.
night when he saw the librarian Ms. Saunders
and suddenly remembered doing something
with her on a stage at the one local strip club.
#corruption
#school
#fiction
#memories
#sensual
185 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Dec 2023 9:45pm
21st Dec 2023 9:45pm
What She Got Talked Into Doing In Art Class
Nancy was found in
the classroom topless
and in front of her
friends assigned to do
a nude chick portrait.
the classroom topless
and in front of her
friends assigned to do
a nude chick portrait.
#friendship
#school
#fiction
#art
#sensual
225 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
13th Dec 2023 4:04am
13th Dec 2023 4:04am
This Could Jeopardize Your Future
Scott, I'm
afraid of
what would
happen if your mom
and dad see you in
the buff and getting
it on
with your math
teacher.
afraid of
what would
happen if your mom
and dad see you in
the buff and getting
it on
with your math
teacher.
#school
#fiction
#dialogue
#sensual
#ForbiddenLove
282 reads
2 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
12th Dec 2023 3:09am
12th Dec 2023 3:09am
Silly Minutes
What are we doing after math?
A blurted out of nowhere question
begets a blurted out of nowhere response:
Riding ponies and juggling.
I say it so quickly and confidently,
a few students look at me quizically
like it might be true.
I want to ride a unicorn! says one of my favorite boys
If you can find one you can ride it, I assure him.
What are we going to juggle asks one of the girls.
I dunno. Spiral notebooks?
We giggle over a few more ideas.
Then we get back to PEMDAS.
Silly minutes...
A blurted out of nowhere question
begets a blurted out of nowhere response:
Riding ponies and juggling.
I say it so quickly and confidently,
a few students look at me quizically
like it might be true.
I want to ride a unicorn! says one of my favorite boys
If you can find one you can ride it, I assure him.
What are we going to juggle asks one of the girls.
I dunno. Spiral notebooks?
We giggle over a few more ideas.
Then we get back to PEMDAS.
Silly minutes...
#school
#funny
207 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
4th Dec 2023 6:16pm
4th Dec 2023 6:16pm
Shocked At The Sight Of Her Mother
Becky
came home from
school and
became shocked at the
sight of her mother
naked and getting
it on
with their next
door friend.
came home from
school and
became shocked at the
sight of her mother
naked and getting
it on
with their next
door friend.
#mother
#home
#school
#fiction
#sensual
248 reads
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