Poems About School Seeking Honest Critique
#school
Poems about school seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PAR
Poem Published
4th Feb 2024 11:14am
4th Feb 2024 11:14am
Too many
I have had plenty of many moms,
some witches, which is not that bad,
many hags, who had made me sad.
So many moms so little differences...
Some such bad opinions to share,
some much good ideas to spare.
I can recognize them with a glare.
I can sort them by a simple affair.
I spot all of them here and there.
Waiting at my classroom door...
Trying to read my thoughts.
Aiming to reach me in a hunt.
Moms should never get close
to their children teachers, ever!
Our planets are too far away...
some witches, which is not that bad,
many hags, who had made me sad.
So many moms so little differences...
Some such bad opinions to share,
some much good ideas to spare.
I can recognize them with a glare.
I can sort them by a simple affair.
I spot all of them here and there.
Waiting at my classroom door...
Trying to read my thoughts.
Aiming to reach me in a hunt.
Moms should never get close
to their children teachers, ever!
Our planets are too far away...
#mother
#children
#science
#school
#astronomy
166 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
20th Jan 2024 9:14pm
20th Jan 2024 9:14pm
With Eyes As Wide As His Were
Jeff
walked in
and said that
he was sorry
for being late for
art class before he saw
that the day's nude subject was
his fiancé Farrah and she... in
turn... spotted Jeff with eyes as wide as
his were at that moment on a Sunday.
walked in
and said that
he was sorry
for being late for
art class before he saw
that the day's nude subject was
his fiancé Farrah and she... in
turn... spotted Jeff with eyes as wide as
his were at that moment on a Sunday.
#relationships
#school
#fiction
#art
#sensual
156 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
16th Jan 2024 3:48pm
16th Jan 2024 3:48pm
What Scott Must Have Been Last Night
Drunk happens to be what Scott must have been last
night when he saw the librarian Ms. Saunders
and suddenly remembered doing something
with her on a stage at the one local strip club.
night when he saw the librarian Ms. Saunders
and suddenly remembered doing something
with her on a stage at the one local strip club.
#corruption
#school
#fiction
#memories
#sensual
169 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Dec 2023 9:45pm
21st Dec 2023 9:45pm
What She Got Talked Into Doing In Art Class
Nancy was found in
the classroom topless
and in front of her
friends assigned to do
a nude chick portrait.
the classroom topless
and in front of her
friends assigned to do
a nude chick portrait.
#friendship
#school
#fiction
#art
#sensual
205 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
13th Dec 2023 4:04am
13th Dec 2023 4:04am
This Could Jeopardize Your Future
Scott, I'm
afraid of
what would
happen if your mom
and dad see you in
the buff and getting
it on
with your math
teacher.
afraid of
what would
happen if your mom
and dad see you in
the buff and getting
it on
with your math
teacher.
#school
#fiction
#dialogue
#sensual
#ForbiddenLove
266 reads
2 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
12th Dec 2023 3:09am
12th Dec 2023 3:09am
Silly Minutes
What are we doing after math?
A blurted out of nowhere question
begets a blurted out of nowhere response:
Riding ponies and juggling.
I say it so quickly and confidently,
a few students look at me quizically
like it might be true.
I want to ride a unicorn! says one of my favorite boys
If you can find one you can ride it, I assure him.
What are we going to juggle asks one of the girls.
I dunno. Spiral notebooks?
We giggle over a few more ideas.
Then we get back to PEMDAS.
Silly minutes...
A blurted out of nowhere question
begets a blurted out of nowhere response:
Riding ponies and juggling.
I say it so quickly and confidently,
a few students look at me quizically
like it might be true.
I want to ride a unicorn! says one of my favorite boys
If you can find one you can ride it, I assure him.
What are we going to juggle asks one of the girls.
I dunno. Spiral notebooks?
We giggle over a few more ideas.
Then we get back to PEMDAS.
Silly minutes...
#school
#funny
182 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
4th Dec 2023 6:16pm
4th Dec 2023 6:16pm
Shocked At The Sight Of Her Mother
Becky
came home from
school and
became shocked at the
sight of her mother
naked and getting
it on
with their next
door friend.
came home from
school and
became shocked at the
sight of her mother
naked and getting
it on
with their next
door friend.
#mother
#home
#school
#fiction
#sensual
236 reads
0 Comments
Alviola
Poem Published
30th Nov 2023 10:15am
30th Nov 2023 10:15am
That we be like dogs
She leaps into the car, her tail
electrified, the window rolled
down so she can poke her head out
savor the town's fragrances
a cornucopia of scents, a rush
she cannot know roaming nearby.
What if parents told children to
poke their heads out of car windows
have their feet find asphalt
nearer homes of the unshod, to prowl
past broken doors, to know the clatter
of empty feeding bowls, to hear
not just the screech of classroom chairs
on vinyl floors and the howl of audiences
in ball games...
electrified, the window rolled
down so she can poke her head out
savor the town's fragrances
a cornucopia of scents, a rush
she cannot know roaming nearby.
What if parents told children to
poke their heads out of car windows
have their feet find asphalt
nearer homes of the unshod, to prowl
past broken doors, to know the clatter
of empty feeding bowls, to hear
not just the screech of classroom chairs
on vinyl floors and the howl of audiences
in ball games...
#school
#inequality
#poverty #apathy
#poverty #apathy
211 reads
12 Comments
dartford
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Poem Published
10th Nov 2023 00:50am
10th Nov 2023 00:50am
I quite understand, I said ..
my teachers thought me stupid, I didn’t, I just had other things in my head, but I didn’t think them stupid when they never understood.
#school
118 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Nov 2023 2:47am
7th Nov 2023 2:47am
Before Joyce Starts With Her Art Class
Francine walked in,
stripped down and sat
herself down nude
on some hot dude
before Joyce starts
with her art class.
stripped down and sat
herself down nude
on some hot dude
before Joyce starts
with her art class.
#friendship
#school
#fiction
#art
#sensual
223 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
29th Oct 2023 2:31pm
29th Oct 2023 2:31pm
Oh, No! What's He Doing Here?
Kendra had no
trouble with
posing naked
for Heather's art class but
was before she opened
one eye and saw Michael
within that crowd of college students.
trouble with
posing naked
for Heather's art class but
was before she opened
one eye and saw Michael
within that crowd of college students.
#friendship
#school
#fiction
#art
#sensual
239 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
23rd Oct 2023 9:48pm
23rd Oct 2023 9:48pm
Over The Betrayal Of His Own Little Angel
Dad got so ticked off over the betrayal
of his own little angel Danica after
he had forbid her to pose nude in
the latest issue of Penthouse magazine
after she had gone off to Harvard in Cambridge.
of his own little angel Danica after
he had forbid her to pose nude in
the latest issue of Penthouse magazine
after she had gone off to Harvard in Cambridge.
#father
#corruption
#school
#fiction
#sensual
201 reads
2 Comments
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