Scary Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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scary seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
I Drink Your Blood & I Eat Your Skin
Hippies drugged, rabies infested
Blood orgy crazed killing spree
Causing chaos, worshiping Satan
Nothing comes close to their lunacy
Ferocious murdering hysteria
Gore soaked brutality
Pestilence of death has been spread
Accursed cult addicted to LSD
Observing madness hurling from their mouths
Possessed with fury & insanity
Daughters and sons of Lucifer
Zombie cravings, the end of humanity
Blood orgy crazed killing spree
Causing chaos, worshiping Satan
Nothing comes close to their lunacy
Ferocious murdering hysteria
Gore soaked brutality
Pestilence of death has been spread
Accursed cult addicted to LSD
Observing madness hurling from their mouths
Possessed with fury & insanity
Daughters and sons of Lucifer
Zombie cravings, the end of humanity
#evil
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
#zombies
87 reads
6 Comments
Wolf
In a distant village there exists,
the legend of the werewolf......shapeshift!
a legend of a mortal man,
with the hair and fangs of unearthly........clan!
full moon transformation
howling at the sky
townsfolk on the hunt
for the gypsy's, they must die!
for.....i am wolf
roaming free
i am wolf
just - let - me
be
my hideous howl, a dirge of death
like the call of the wild, take your last....breath!
roaming the nite, a beast of fright
upon the words of a gypsy's curse........recite! ...
the legend of the werewolf......shapeshift!
a legend of a mortal man,
with the hair and fangs of unearthly........clan!
full moon transformation
howling at the sky
townsfolk on the hunt
for the gypsy's, they must die!
for.....i am wolf
roaming free
i am wolf
just - let - me
be
my hideous howl, a dirge of death
like the call of the wild, take your last....breath!
roaming the nite, a beast of fright
upon the words of a gypsy's curse........recite! ...
#evil
#fiction
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
93 reads
4 Comments
It's Coming For You
Leper town found on greed and disgust
for a hundred years
broken deal, a false beacon of trust
plundered, golden fears
today is centennial day!
time to celebrate
cursed, are the founders at bay
so let the fog, decide their fate
the fog - appears - over the sea
moving - against - the wind
the Elizabeth Dane - Blake and crew
coming - to get - revenge
OUT OF THE FOG!
a cross made of gold
gold stolen from the old
a leper colony
that wanted to be free
lighthouse warned with the driftwood...
for a hundred years
broken deal, a false beacon of trust
plundered, golden fears
today is centennial day!
time to celebrate
cursed, are the founders at bay
so let the fog, decide their fate
the fog - appears - over the sea
moving - against - the wind
the Elizabeth Dane - Blake and crew
coming - to get - revenge
OUT OF THE FOG!
a cross made of gold
gold stolen from the old
a leper colony
that wanted to be free
lighthouse warned with the driftwood...
#evil
#fiction
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
114 reads
8 Comments
It's only a movie
City brings the fun
Yet roads lead to the end
While waiting for bloodlust
Gong to the concert with a friend
Psychotic convicts
Suburban souls rising
Mari & Phyllis are gagged
Death is what their realizing
Their way through the woods
With those who loved the dead
And found their virgins
In last house on the left
Your lust-craving body
Theirs, in its whole
Can’t undo your sins
Lungs full of Satan’s dope!
They rob your virgin soul
Claim it as their own
No freedom to choose ...
Yet roads lead to the end
While waiting for bloodlust
Gong to the concert with a friend
Psychotic convicts
Suburban souls rising
Mari & Phyllis are gagged
Death is what their realizing
Their way through the woods
With those who loved the dead
And found their virgins
In last house on the left
Your lust-craving body
Theirs, in its whole
Can’t undo your sins
Lungs full of Satan’s dope!
They rob your virgin soul
Claim it as their own
No freedom to choose ...
#dark
#evil
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
116 reads
4 Comments
The Lagoon
Lurking soul of the deep
black murky depths, lie beneath
hidden ruins, yet to be found
fossilized from, skeletal ground
Between, land and sea
dark, tributary
shrouded, mystery
pre-historic beast!
Evolved species that cannot be
strange remnants, dispel, anomaly
surfacing, fanged attack
estranged creature....of the black
Victims! cry out - from the
bottom! of the - darkened
abyss! - fear awakens
looming! - creature - of the black
Perilous lives, not discerned
welcome to paradise!.....of...
black murky depths, lie beneath
hidden ruins, yet to be found
fossilized from, skeletal ground
Between, land and sea
dark, tributary
shrouded, mystery
pre-historic beast!
Evolved species that cannot be
strange remnants, dispel, anomaly
surfacing, fanged attack
estranged creature....of the black
Victims! cry out - from the
bottom! of the - darkened
abyss! - fear awakens
looming! - creature - of the black
Perilous lives, not discerned
welcome to paradise!.....of...
#evil
#fiction
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
103 reads
8 Comments
Return of the Living Dead
Accidental release
of a brain-eating feast
hordes of the undead
leaving their grave beds
waking from the dead
yearning to be fed
by an unsuspecting town
they're ready to party down!!!
Coming to eat your brains
and drive you insane!!!
Military drums
Uneeda medical slums
where it all begins
with Tarman and his friends
deadly gas fills the air
toxic rain grows despair
reanimated - dispatched
the Easter eggs have hatched!
Rain should wash everything away
skin irritation, death, dismay ...
of a brain-eating feast
hordes of the undead
leaving their grave beds
waking from the dead
yearning to be fed
by an unsuspecting town
they're ready to party down!!!
Coming to eat your brains
and drive you insane!!!
Military drums
Uneeda medical slums
where it all begins
with Tarman and his friends
deadly gas fills the air
toxic rain grows despair
reanimated - dispatched
the Easter eggs have hatched!
Rain should wash everything away
skin irritation, death, dismay ...
#horror
#PopCulture
#rhyming
#scary
#zombies
104 reads
4 Comments
The Incredible Torture Show
Master Sardu puts on an S & M show
Human-trafficked woman
The gore will begin to flow
Audience is unaware that this spectacle is real
Woman tortured with an iron tourniquet
Ralphus removes her eye, makes it his meal
Scraps of human flesh fed to the woman that are caged
Kept in the theater basement
Many are submissive sex slaves
Natasha is kidnapped, forced to watch these torturous acts
Lobotomies, dismemberment's and drilling
Insert a straw through the brain for a delicious snack
Sergeant Tucci frees the...
Human-trafficked woman
The gore will begin to flow
Audience is unaware that this spectacle is real
Woman tortured with an iron tourniquet
Ralphus removes her eye, makes it his meal
Scraps of human flesh fed to the woman that are caged
Kept in the theater basement
Many are submissive sex slaves
Natasha is kidnapped, forced to watch these torturous acts
Lobotomies, dismemberment's and drilling
Insert a straw through the brain for a delicious snack
Sergeant Tucci frees the...
#dark
#evil
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
102 reads
6 Comments
Pumpkinhead
Keep away from Pumpkinhead!
Conjured to avenge the dead
All those who've done wrong
Watch out! He won't be long
Harley and his only son
Motocross, drunken fun
Old witch and her magic brew
Pumpkinhead - blood feud!
Conjured up - to take revenge
Pumpkin grave.....Vengeance!
Blood from the father and blood from the son
Resurrection - has now begun
Bound in blood! - And tied to as one
Terrible price, of death.... Has come
For those who have wronged
Better go run and hide!
Getting dark, fears...
Conjured to avenge the dead
All those who've done wrong
Watch out! He won't be long
Harley and his only son
Motocross, drunken fun
Old witch and her magic brew
Pumpkinhead - blood feud!
Conjured up - to take revenge
Pumpkin grave.....Vengeance!
Blood from the father and blood from the son
Resurrection - has now begun
Bound in blood! - And tied to as one
Terrible price, of death.... Has come
For those who have wronged
Better go run and hide!
Getting dark, fears...
#dark
#evil
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
108 reads
4 Comments
Children of the Corn
Small town of Gatlin
Surrounded by cornfields
Lies a presence of worship
To which all the children yield
Issac, preacher child
Malachai, right hand
Together brainwash the children
Into killing off all man
Children of the corn
19th year, death sworn
Sacrifice to he
Who commands new born
Its - he....Who walks....Behind....The rows
Yes he....Who walks....Behind....The rows
He who walks behind the rows
Malachai grows weary
Of Issac's arrogance
Orders of sacrifice
Devoured by presence ...
Surrounded by cornfields
Lies a presence of worship
To which all the children yield
Issac, preacher child
Malachai, right hand
Together brainwash the children
Into killing off all man
Children of the corn
19th year, death sworn
Sacrifice to he
Who commands new born
Its - he....Who walks....Behind....The rows
Yes he....Who walks....Behind....The rows
He who walks behind the rows
Malachai grows weary
Of Issac's arrogance
Orders of sacrifice
Devoured by presence ...
#dark
#evil
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
153 reads
7 Comments
All Work & No Play...
Jack arrives at the overlook hotel
Last caretaker killed his family and himself
Built on the site of a native burial ground
Snowed in during the long winter's bound.....
Here's Johnny!
Danny, Jack's son, starts to foresee and "shine"
Room 237, curiosity bruised his spine.....
Wendy getting nervous, Jack prone to violent outbursts
Lloyd the bartender to quench his killing thirst....
All work - and no play.....Makes Jack a dull boy
All work - and no play.....Makes Jack a dull boy (repeat 100x)
Danny...
Last caretaker killed his family and himself
Built on the site of a native burial ground
Snowed in during the long winter's bound.....
Here's Johnny!
Danny, Jack's son, starts to foresee and "shine"
Room 237, curiosity bruised his spine.....
Wendy getting nervous, Jack prone to violent outbursts
Lloyd the bartender to quench his killing thirst....
All work - and no play.....Makes Jack a dull boy
All work - and no play.....Makes Jack a dull boy (repeat 100x)
Danny...
#dark
#evil
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
113 reads
4 Comments
Only in Texas
Mask, stitched out, of human skin
Cannibal, murderer, threatened......
Using bones, of victims and prey
Chainsaw, main weapon, to slay
There - is nothing - under - the mask
Leatherface!!!!!!
Cow-killer, in a meat, factory
Will do - what they tell him - to do
Deformed, at first, a victim of pain
Grave-robbing, deranged..........
There - is nothing - under - the mask
Leatherface!!!!!!
Killing in - self defense - mental innocence.....
Showing fear - when people draw near.....
And enter his...
Cannibal, murderer, threatened......
Using bones, of victims and prey
Chainsaw, main weapon, to slay
There - is nothing - under - the mask
Leatherface!!!!!!
Cow-killer, in a meat, factory
Will do - what they tell him - to do
Deformed, at first, a victim of pain
Grave-robbing, deranged..........
There - is nothing - under - the mask
Leatherface!!!!!!
Killing in - self defense - mental innocence.....
Showing fear - when people draw near.....
And enter his...
#dark
#evil
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
119 reads
8 Comments
The Ravine
The Ravine
A bloody night.
Do not listen to the gurgling screams
of the bodies lying at the bottom of the ravine.
Instead, close the window with a SLAM
to silence the damned.
Close the curtains should you not spy
the red eye looking in of a soul climbed
from the ravine.
Lie in bed in mockery.
You know you will not sleep.
Hear the “creakkk, creakkk, creakkk creak”
of the old, wooden stairway generations now in your blood.
It tries to tell you in its own, special way,
“someone is here! Someone...
A bloody night.
Do not listen to the gurgling screams
of the bodies lying at the bottom of the ravine.
Instead, close the window with a SLAM
to silence the damned.
Close the curtains should you not spy
the red eye looking in of a soul climbed
from the ravine.
Lie in bed in mockery.
You know you will not sleep.
Hear the “creakkk, creakkk, creakkk creak”
of the old, wooden stairway generations now in your blood.
It tries to tell you in its own, special way,
“someone is here! Someone...
#dark
#Halloween
#scary
145 reads
2 Comments
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