Scary Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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scary seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
The Audition
There is so much warm
There is so much wet
Not alone anymore
Well at least not yet
In a garden, a turgid den
I stand beside the best of them
If I cut them down, I stand, they bend
Will the sun shine bright on me then?
It burns me down completely
Layers of skin are peeling
And now you see I'm nothing
I'm pure for you finally
I'm the one to mend them
A savior, destroyer
No man has made me tender
I long for my surrender
There is strength in giving in
But I have never been that strong ...
There is so much wet
Not alone anymore
Well at least not yet
In a garden, a turgid den
I stand beside the best of them
If I cut them down, I stand, they bend
Will the sun shine bright on me then?
It burns me down completely
Layers of skin are peeling
And now you see I'm nothing
I'm pure for you finally
I'm the one to mend them
A savior, destroyer
No man has made me tender
I long for my surrender
There is strength in giving in
But I have never been that strong ...
#dark
#evil
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
69 reads
4 Comments
The Brood
What the hell is this place?
Elitist Psychotherapy
Pseudo Science sorcery
Into the beyond
What's the shape of her rage?
Psychoplasmic therapy
Another Theater of Pain
Family Tree Reborn
Beaten to death, covered in blood
They came without warning
Demonic creatures uncaged
Manifest through inner rage
Deformed children retaliate
Hammer Smashes Face
Rabid hate jealousy
Carries out her evil deeds
Murderous Minions revenge
Enter the brood
Elitist Psychotherapy
Pseudo Science sorcery
Into the beyond
What's the shape of her rage?
Psychoplasmic therapy
Another Theater of Pain
Family Tree Reborn
Beaten to death, covered in blood
They came without warning
Demonic creatures uncaged
Manifest through inner rage
Deformed children retaliate
Hammer Smashes Face
Rabid hate jealousy
Carries out her evil deeds
Murderous Minions revenge
Enter the brood
#dark
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
#scifi
66 reads
9 Comments
Willard
Willard never had a friend
Choked by silver spoons
Constantly picked on by miscreants
Driven closer to the edge
Transfixed aggression's
Hell bent on revenge
Taught to murder by command
Lord of the Rats
Sinister rodents, Welcome Big Ben
Infested abode, Hideous Vermin
Chew thru the door,
Gnaw on their throat
Chewing thru bone,
Devouring Corpse
Race of the Rats
Piss, Shit, Breed, Repeat
Pick on the weak, Neurotic disease
Revenge of the Rats
Conquest, War, Famine, Death
Cull the elites, Hail...
Choked by silver spoons
Constantly picked on by miscreants
Driven closer to the edge
Transfixed aggression's
Hell bent on revenge
Taught to murder by command
Lord of the Rats
Sinister rodents, Welcome Big Ben
Infested abode, Hideous Vermin
Chew thru the door,
Gnaw on their throat
Chewing thru bone,
Devouring Corpse
Race of the Rats
Piss, Shit, Breed, Repeat
Pick on the weak, Neurotic disease
Revenge of the Rats
Conquest, War, Famine, Death
Cull the elites, Hail...
#animals
#fear
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
79 reads
6 Comments
Look Out For Sheriff Taylor
Witness the Satanists'
Blood, Sex Magic
Curse of the witches hex,
Sealing your doom
Worship the sacred chant,
Knife into flesh
Virginal sacrifice under full moon
You cannot escape
Race with the Devil
Try to runaway
Race with the Devil
You have sealed your fate
Race with the Devil
You have been warned to be silent
Thou states the witch's rune
Evil you cause will be returned
Nine-fold, So mote it be
Under the old oak tree
Ceremonial place of witchery
A secret gathering
Black...
Blood, Sex Magic
Curse of the witches hex,
Sealing your doom
Worship the sacred chant,
Knife into flesh
Virginal sacrifice under full moon
You cannot escape
Race with the Devil
Try to runaway
Race with the Devil
You have sealed your fate
Race with the Devil
You have been warned to be silent
Thou states the witch's rune
Evil you cause will be returned
Nine-fold, So mote it be
Under the old oak tree
Ceremonial place of witchery
A secret gathering
Black...
#dark
#evil
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
80 reads
10 Comments
Belial Loves His Brother
Deformed Siamese twin hanging from the flank
They thought he would die when removed
He survived and stronger he grew
Don't enter room number 7
There's some hideous freak
He consumes whatever his brother feeds him
What he really enjoys is the taste of your meat
Filled with murderous hate for those who wanted him dead
In the basket a mass of flesh
With arms protruding and a twisted face as his head
He communicates telepathically with his brother Duane
Each surgeon & doctor must die
Revenge & murder is on...
They thought he would die when removed
He survived and stronger he grew
Don't enter room number 7
There's some hideous freak
He consumes whatever his brother feeds him
What he really enjoys is the taste of your meat
Filled with murderous hate for those who wanted him dead
In the basket a mass of flesh
With arms protruding and a twisted face as his head
He communicates telepathically with his brother Duane
Each surgeon & doctor must die
Revenge & murder is on...
#dark
#evil
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
72 reads
4 Comments
My New House, with an extra bonus (collab with Vision_of_insanity)
I bought this house
It was so damn cheap
But never thought
This place would give me the creeps
When I opened the gate on the floor
And climbed down the stairs
I switched on the lights to see
I think I'm gonna have nightmares
The walls with hanging bodies
Jars filled with chloroform
With fetuses and body parts
Children preserved, born deformed
What kind of wicked mind
Could arrange such a place
A twisted human survey
Images seen, difficult to erase
The flickering of lights
A dead flower...
It was so damn cheap
But never thought
This place would give me the creeps
When I opened the gate on the floor
And climbed down the stairs
I switched on the lights to see
I think I'm gonna have nightmares
The walls with hanging bodies
Jars filled with chloroform
With fetuses and body parts
Children preserved, born deformed
What kind of wicked mind
Could arrange such a place
A twisted human survey
Images seen, difficult to erase
The flickering of lights
A dead flower...
#fear
#Halloween
#horror #scary
#horror #scary
110 reads
9 Comments
In the silence of the room
In the silence of the room,
shadows weave through fabric and memories.
Draped in the weight of time and whispers.
The dark trousseau is a tapestry of lives
touched by the unseen,
where the essence of yesterdays lingers softly.
It is here that the heart finds its echoes,
in the folds of a past that never fades.
It whispers secrets of forgotten promises
and undying love, bathed in the cold glow of memory.
Each piece, touched by the hands of fate,
carries the weight of hopes that once danced in the dark. ...
shadows weave through fabric and memories.
Draped in the weight of time and whispers.
The dark trousseau is a tapestry of lives
touched by the unseen,
where the essence of yesterdays lingers softly.
It is here that the heart finds its echoes,
in the folds of a past that never fades.
It whispers secrets of forgotten promises
and undying love, bathed in the cold glow of memory.
Each piece, touched by the hands of fate,
carries the weight of hopes that once danced in the dark. ...
#dark
#depression
#evil
#fear
#scary
104 reads
4 Comments
One's Vampiric Nightmare
Karen
found herself
inside
a crypt stripped naked
and probed by a beast
that sucks blood before
she woke
up screaming
so loud.
found herself
inside
a crypt stripped naked
and probed by a beast
that sucks blood before
she woke
up screaming
so loud.
#fiction
#nightmares
#scary
#sex
#vampires
91 reads
0 Comments
Paura nella cittą dei morti viventi
The gates of hell are opened again
Ritual of Enoch is waking the dead
The priest is lifeless; it's time of the end
Malevolent spirits dwell in the graves
The zombies are lurking into the fog
Hungry for flesh and thirsty for blood
City of the Living Dead,
The death of the priest is only the start
City of the Living Dead,
The graveyard of Dunwich is cursed by Enoch
City of the Living Dead,
The portal is open and the zombies unleashed
City of the Living Dead,
The coffins are broken and burned with rage
Evil...
Ritual of Enoch is waking the dead
The priest is lifeless; it's time of the end
Malevolent spirits dwell in the graves
The zombies are lurking into the fog
Hungry for flesh and thirsty for blood
City of the Living Dead,
The death of the priest is only the start
City of the Living Dead,
The graveyard of Dunwich is cursed by Enoch
City of the Living Dead,
The portal is open and the zombies unleashed
City of the Living Dead,
The coffins are broken and burned with rage
Evil...
#evil
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
#zombies
79 reads
6 Comments
Herbert West
A place where no-one walks in
Nobody walks out
Bodies waiting to be brought back
Perfect the life re-agent
Injection to the neck
Re-animated victims, running amok
They said 6 to 12 minutes
But Herbert proved them wrong
The price was high
They paid with their lives
Second birth is painful, retrieved from the dead
Double the dosage, under Westy`s knife
Mix the green solution, and re-animate
Waiting for the undamaged corpse
Time to get the body off the cold
He won`t show any remorse
Give the dead...
Nobody walks out
Bodies waiting to be brought back
Perfect the life re-agent
Injection to the neck
Re-animated victims, running amok
They said 6 to 12 minutes
But Herbert proved them wrong
The price was high
They paid with their lives
Second birth is painful, retrieved from the dead
Double the dosage, under Westy`s knife
Mix the green solution, and re-animate
Waiting for the undamaged corpse
Time to get the body off the cold
He won`t show any remorse
Give the dead...
#fiction
#horror
#PopCulture
#rhyming
#scary
74 reads
4 Comments
Maniac
Violence he has awakened into
Harsh murdering transpires
Enticement of the flesh
Whores scalped for pleasure
Chaotic mind, fully demented
Terror on other's, unrelentless
Obsessed by cruelty
Misogynistic hatred, slaughter
Shotgun blows the head clean off
Mayhem & lunacy
Always looking, on the hunt
Night stalking fresh prey
You were warned not to go out tonight
You're mind filled with panic & fright
Go ahead, see if you can hide
Mental trauma unlocked the demons inside
Harsh murdering transpires
Enticement of the flesh
Whores scalped for pleasure
Chaotic mind, fully demented
Terror on other's, unrelentless
Obsessed by cruelty
Misogynistic hatred, slaughter
Shotgun blows the head clean off
Mayhem & lunacy
Always looking, on the hunt
Night stalking fresh prey
You were warned not to go out tonight
You're mind filled with panic & fright
Go ahead, see if you can hide
Mental trauma unlocked the demons inside
#dark
#evil
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
110 reads
12 Comments
story for October
today skip over the spirits that grip
spit and rise twist the blade and I'm off
sulking in the background is a disturbance
sticking in my mind the beautiful trees
the orchard inviting sings to me
soon I am daydreaming
then I feel someone watching my reverie
reaching for my knife
practicing unsheathing it quickly
with a flick of the rist
an old grand dad
waiting for skin
somewhere in time my soul remembers
hand to hand combat
with a ready nod I let the trees know
should he approach
I'll go down on...
spit and rise twist the blade and I'm off
sulking in the background is a disturbance
sticking in my mind the beautiful trees
the orchard inviting sings to me
soon I am daydreaming
then I feel someone watching my reverie
reaching for my knife
practicing unsheathing it quickly
with a flick of the rist
an old grand dad
waiting for skin
somewhere in time my soul remembers
hand to hand combat
with a ready nod I let the trees know
should he approach
I'll go down on...
#anxiety
#scary
#spiritual #trees
#spiritual #trees
86 reads
3 Comments
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