Poems About Sacrifice Seeking Honest Critique
#sacrifice
Ahsas
Poem Published
17th Sep 2023 2:46pm
17th Sep 2023 2:46pm
Adhoora Sapna...
Adhoora Sapna
पहले मेरे जीवन का एक सरल सपना था
जिसमें रोटी, कपडा, और मकान अपना था
उस जीवन में, माँ बाप का सहारा था...
पहले मेरे जीवन का एक सरल सपना था
जिसमें रोटी, कपडा, और मकान अपना था
उस जीवन में, माँ बाप का सहारा था...
#love
#TruthOfLife
#sacrifice #emotions
#sacrifice #emotions
127 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Sep 2023 10:20pm
7th Sep 2023 10:20pm
Why Didn't She Tell Us About This?
Mom and
Dad were both
informed
that Wendy took a
job at a local
strip club in order
to have
college bills
paid up.
Dad were both
informed
that Wendy took a
job at a local
strip club in order
to have
college bills
paid up.
#heartbroken
#corruption
#fiction
#sensual
#sacrifice
149 reads
0 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
1st Sep 2023 2:48am
1st Sep 2023 2:48am
Sidewalk or Sex
#sex
#sacrifice
233 reads
6 Comments
Chere-Rene13
Poem Published
28th Aug 2023 3:31am
28th Aug 2023 3:31am
Mickey Mouse Hat Of Horns
#evil
#tragedy
#hypocrisy
#sacrifice
#manipulation
191 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
17th Aug 2023 8:28pm
17th Aug 2023 8:28pm
Passage Taken To Achieve True Stardom
Passage that Maggie had taken to achieve
true stardom was not a good one for the latest
issue of Hustler came out and she saw that
both she and some guy were getting it on in there.
true stardom was not a good one for the latest
issue of Hustler came out and she saw that
both she and some guy were getting it on in there.
#women
#fiction
#misunderstood
#sensual
#sacrifice
197 reads
0 Comments
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RichyRich
RichyRich
Poem Published
10th Aug 2023 12:18pm
10th Aug 2023 12:18pm
Dark "Draconian Law"
First we invade and persuade every mortal human being, threw various methods and many ritualistical schemes!!
Threw all performance 🎭 and art presented to their eyes and minds, by televisions and on movie screens!!
While remaining concealed moving in the shadows in secrecy, which helps cloak are democracy, and make it that much harder to be revealed or even seen!!
Symbols an signs in symbiotic connections is how we'll keep them trapped and blind all done by design!
Poisoning everything the masses use, from food to water and drinks, even...
Threw all performance 🎭 and art presented to their eyes and minds, by televisions and on movie screens!!
While remaining concealed moving in the shadows in secrecy, which helps cloak are democracy, and make it that much harder to be revealed or even seen!!
Symbols an signs in symbiotic connections is how we'll keep them trapped and blind all done by design!
Poisoning everything the masses use, from food to water and drinks, even...
#dark
#evil
#TruthOfLife
#sacrifice
#manipulation
343 reads
4 Comments
Honoria
Poem Published
8th Aug 2023 1:18am
8th Aug 2023 1:18am
The Woman You See
Ever the happy-go-lucky child
Idyllic upbringing into womanhood
Strong and self assured
Or
The façade of such a person
Checking off each passing day
Akin to the doomed Iphigenia
With no
fairy godmother
to
rescue
her
Idyllic upbringing into womanhood
Strong and self assured
Or
The façade of such a person
Checking off each passing day
Akin to the doomed Iphigenia
With no
fairy godmother
to
rescue
her
#sadness
#loneliness
#SelfReflection #sacrifice
#SelfReflection #sacrifice
924 reads
88 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
14th Jun 2023 11:12am
14th Jun 2023 11:12am
The Why
What can
it
all mean
going from manifestation
to procreation
over
&
over again
Is it for succession
or
depression
Or something beyond our comprehension
it
all mean
going from manifestation
to procreation
over
&
over again
Is it for succession
or
depression
Or something beyond our comprehension
#sacrifice
135 reads
2 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
7th Jun 2023 4:24pm
7th Jun 2023 4:24pm
i am an isthmus
a sonnet
“If you want to be a bridge of hope to the world,
you’ve got to allow yourself to be walked on.”—Tommy Barnett
before me flies the great unfettered future,
behind me sleeps the bruised and battered past;
i am an isthmus of life's great encounter,
at once reflection, presence, and forecast.
i am quick ink to all the generations
that seed the planet with the hope of spring;
the genesis of nascent revelations,
i am an isthmus of the apron string.
old gold behind, fresh silver in the offing, ...
“If you want to be a bridge of hope to the world,
you’ve got to allow yourself to be walked on.”—Tommy Barnett
before me flies the great unfettered future,
behind me sleeps the bruised and battered past;
i am an isthmus of life's great encounter,
at once reflection, presence, and forecast.
i am quick ink to all the generations
that seed the planet with the hope of spring;
the genesis of nascent revelations,
i am an isthmus of the apron string.
old gold behind, fresh silver in the offing, ...
#LifeStruggles
#inspirational
#earth
#nature
#sacrifice
262 reads
0 Comments
CrazyPrincess_Chlo
Poem Published
6th Jun 2023 3:16am
6th Jun 2023 3:16am
A Child's Sacrifice
The sickle in my little hand,
is sharp enough to cut flesh...
Down to the bone, if needed.
Sacrifices for the gods of the land!
Blood, to water the soil, and more.
I do it by the gods' command...
the earth cries out to me afresh.
They foolishly never heeded!
The sickle in my little hand...
is brought down on bound neck,
Snuffing a grown sinner's spark.
One who sinned against the land!
Now they perish, unto their core.
They die by the gods' command...
Insignificant as the puniest speck.
Now they dwell in the outer...
is sharp enough to cut flesh...
Down to the bone, if needed.
Sacrifices for the gods of the land!
Blood, to water the soil, and more.
I do it by the gods' command...
the earth cries out to me afresh.
They foolishly never heeded!
The sickle in my little hand...
is brought down on bound neck,
Snuffing a grown sinner's spark.
One who sinned against the land!
Now they perish, unto their core.
They die by the gods' command...
Insignificant as the puniest speck.
Now they dwell in the outer...
#dark
#scary
#pagan
#sacrifice
#horror
337 reads
6 Comments
poetOftragedy
Poem Published
27th May 2023 9:59pm
27th May 2023 9:59pm
To the life I never lived
To the life I never lived
The dreams I buried deep within
The paths I shunned away
The choices I couldn't keep
The secrets I had to keep
And the lie I had to live.
The love I have sacrificed
The hope I have chastised
The joy I never tasted
In pain, I paid the price
The words I swallowed down
The songs I silenced out
The jokes I hid behind a frown
The words that never fell from my mouth
In silence I wore the crown.
To the life I never lived
The chances I let go
The risks I was too...
The dreams I buried deep within
The paths I shunned away
The choices I couldn't keep
The secrets I had to keep
And the lie I had to live.
The love I have sacrificed
The hope I have chastised
The joy I never tasted
In pain, I paid the price
The words I swallowed down
The songs I silenced out
The jokes I hid behind a frown
The words that never fell from my mouth
In silence I wore the crown.
To the life I never lived
The chances I let go
The risks I was too...
#LifeStruggles
#SelfReflection
#despair
#suffering
#sacrifice
349 reads
4 Comments
drinkingflux
mila throat
mila throat
Poem Published
15th May 2023 9:34pm
15th May 2023 9:34pm
[WIP]
the pulp of an orange
twisting like a labyrinthine
tear my carpels apart
consume my pericarp
tenuous chiffon, unveil me
rip me from my seams
pick out the loose threads
something you'll never mend
.
.
.
.
.
.
(when i first got together with
my partner, it was hard for me
i was unused to feeling
the rawness and reality of love.
so quickly i became obsessed
with that idea and i felt afraid.
i didn't want him to leave me
and the only type of love...
twisting like a labyrinthine
tear my carpels apart
consume my pericarp
tenuous chiffon, unveil me
rip me from my seams
pick out the loose threads
something you'll never mend
.
.
.
.
.
.
(when i first got together with
my partner, it was hard for me
i was unused to feeling
the rawness and reality of love.
so quickly i became obsessed
with that idea and i felt afraid.
i didn't want him to leave me
and the only type of love...
#patience
#FirstLove
#sacrifice #obsession
#sacrifice #obsession
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