Poems About Sacrifice Seeking Honest Critique
#sacrifice
ArnoMalan1
Arno
Arno
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:30am
Yesterday 6:30am
Bitter sweet
One more chance, one last fight
Pluck up courage and hold on tight
One more push, one more day
that's the price I have to pay
Take the better of me, parts unused
Keep that memory, it's not abused
then run away, while you still can
and don't look at me, this half a man
cause I'm such mess, I've gone astray
Maybe I'm just better of this way
Don't give it up, don't bleed dry
Wait little longer before good bye
Don't pull out, don't lose track
you're on your way, no turning back
Remember me, don't get...
Pluck up courage and hold on tight
One more push, one more day
that's the price I have to pay
Take the better of me, parts unused
Keep that memory, it's not abused
then run away, while you still can
and don't look at me, this half a man
cause I'm such mess, I've gone astray
Maybe I'm just better of this way
Don't give it up, don't bleed dry
Wait little longer before good bye
Don't pull out, don't lose track
you're on your way, no turning back
Remember me, don't get...
#disappointment
#redemption
#sacrifice #TruthOfLife
#sacrifice #TruthOfLife
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PoetSpeak
Poem Published
8th Sep 2024 1:39pm
8th Sep 2024 1:39pm
she says all the women like when you DOMINATE them...
took some time to think about that
Diabolical fuck bag that I am
It's easy I'm thinking
all you need to DOMINATE is to...
LISTEN first
then refer back to what SHE said
DOMINATION is never about me
my life is PAIN
i just share the biscuit
you probably want to hear more
WAIT
denial is beautiful
be quiet
a rope burn is SINCERE
Diabolical fuck bag that I am
It's easy I'm thinking
all you need to DOMINATE is to...
LISTEN first
then refer back to what SHE said
DOMINATION is never about me
my life is PAIN
i just share the biscuit
you probably want to hear more
WAIT
denial is beautiful
be quiet
a rope burn is SINCERE
#courage
#motivational
#patience
#sacrifice
#wisdom
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22 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
2nd Sep 2024 4:35am
2nd Sep 2024 4:35am
unconditionally yours
in desolation, I weep inside
all my love for you
there couldn't; be another
it matters not how dark you are
I will still reach up and choose the same star
within my memories, I hold true
I'm not giving up on you
you listen to all my complaints
tears come only for you
don't say goodbye
you've done your best with my mind
listening to internal chatter must drain you
when do you rest?
I must confess my thoughts don't stop
suffering is a part of us
my heart aches when yours does
I am so insensitive ...
all my love for you
there couldn't; be another
it matters not how dark you are
I will still reach up and choose the same star
within my memories, I hold true
I'm not giving up on you
you listen to all my complaints
tears come only for you
don't say goodbye
you've done your best with my mind
listening to internal chatter must drain you
when do you rest?
I must confess my thoughts don't stop
suffering is a part of us
my heart aches when yours does
I am so insensitive ...
#sacrifice
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5 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Aug 2024 7:24pm
28th Aug 2024 7:24pm
Immolation
Her faith was in me
She knew it was time to die
Sacrifice for life
She knew it was time to die
Sacrifice for life
#honesty
#love
#obsession
#sacrifice
#senryu
60 reads
2 Comments
BrokenHierophant
Poem Published
20th Aug 2024 1:22am
20th Aug 2024 1:22am
Bad End
#curse
#death
#dystopian
#sacrifice
#temptation
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Aug 2024 10:32am
9th Aug 2024 10:32am
Always & Forever
This is my greatest happiness,
to spend my life with you.
Sharing trials and triumphs,
joy's & problems too.
To kiss you in the morning,
and hold you close at night.
To know we'll be together,
Whether days are grey or bright.
Sharing all the things,
that make our daily life.
This is my greatest happiness,
when I stab you with this knife.
to spend my life with you.
Sharing trials and triumphs,
joy's & problems too.
To kiss you in the morning,
and hold you close at night.
To know we'll be together,
Whether days are grey or bright.
Sharing all the things,
that make our daily life.
This is my greatest happiness,
when I stab you with this knife.
#happiness
#honesty
#inspirational
#love
#sacrifice
125 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Aug 2024 1:45am
2nd Aug 2024 1:45am
CREATURES OF HABITS
As we exchange our own personal chains of thoughts and insight, into this senseless mindless trap between the lines of your own personal. REALITY of what is right and wrong 🤔 For have you ever been in a relationship or situation, that you have felt like a outer experience. FOR your thoughts and insight and imagination. 🤨 Become slowly something that you have or not never had to expected. TO ever happens to just you yet there is no longer a exception. TO the rules of what is known of your own personal life. 😞 AS people are creatures of habits. For a snake sheds it's...
#honesty
#misunderstood
#sacrifice
#strength
#tolerance
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u53l355
Grifta
Grifta
Poem Published
21st Jul 2024 12:33pm
21st Jul 2024 12:33pm
Be A Man !
To be a man,
is not
to bully and push people around,
It's not
about testosterone fueled violence or black eyes at night on the town ,
It's not
to drink beer or silenceing your shame , money , reputation or having a trade .
It's not
about counting the birds that have perched on your pole.
It's not
About football , rugby or golf .
It's about protecting and caring for the ones that you love ,
Sacrificing your wants
Supporting your family
No matter what
It's about loyalty
Whether your single or committed to a...
is not
to bully and push people around,
It's not
about testosterone fueled violence or black eyes at night on the town ,
It's not
to drink beer or silenceing your shame , money , reputation or having a trade .
It's not
about counting the birds that have perched on your pole.
It's not
About football , rugby or golf .
It's about protecting and caring for the ones that you love ,
Sacrificing your wants
Supporting your family
No matter what
It's about loyalty
Whether your single or committed to a...
#depression
#family
#love
#men
#sacrifice
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1 Comment
Just-Rob
Poem Published
16th Jul 2024 8:07pm
16th Jul 2024 8:07pm
All For You
Reach into my chest and tear out my soul to feed you
If that's not enough, twist a knife and make me bleed too
Let my insides pour to the ground
Let all that I am be all that I was
If some devil would come to me and offer a deal
I would sacrifice everything if it meant you could heal
The pain in your eyes is unbearable
You deserve to live free from burden
Your beauty and radiance is meant to outshine the sun
If my death could give that to you then hand me the gun
This world needs what you have
You will...
If that's not enough, twist a knife and make me bleed too
Let my insides pour to the ground
Let all that I am be all that I was
If some devil would come to me and offer a deal
I would sacrifice everything if it meant you could heal
The pain in your eyes is unbearable
You deserve to live free from burden
Your beauty and radiance is meant to outshine the sun
If my death could give that to you then hand me the gun
This world needs what you have
You will...
#gratitude
#love
#sacrifice #support
#sacrifice #support
186 reads
6 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
9th Jul 2024 9:00pm
9th Jul 2024 9:00pm
that he might live
Let us die as soon as possible, and by whatever process God shall
appoint. And when we are dead to the world, and nature, and self,
we shall begin to live to God.”—Adoniram Judson
a man must live each day, that he might die
and not go down into eternity
obliterated, like a whimpering sigh,
ignoble in its wasteful brevity.
the plots he scribbles daily on his page
(of fantasies, odes, ballads, tragedies)
will judge his ink with gladness or with rage,
sifting cacophonies from euphonies.
the hands that feed; the will that...
appoint. And when we are dead to the world, and nature, and self,
we shall begin to live to God.”—Adoniram Judson
a man must live each day, that he might die
and not go down into eternity
obliterated, like a whimpering sigh,
ignoble in its wasteful brevity.
the plots he scribbles daily on his page
(of fantasies, odes, ballads, tragedies)
will judge his ink with gladness or with rage,
sifting cacophonies from euphonies.
the hands that feed; the will that...
#death
#identity
#kindness
#sacrifice
#SelfWorth
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Officialkn9ne
Poem Published
9th Jul 2024 00:41am
9th Jul 2024 00:41am
Fight For Love
I'm willing to fight for your love,
To battle against the forces that try to tear us apart.
I'll stand strong in the face of adversity,
Ready to defend what we have with all my heart.
I'll go to war against doubt and fear,
Facing every challenge head on.
I'll fight for us with everything I have,
Because in your love, I have found my home.
I'll fight for our love with courage and grace,
Standing tall in the midst of the storm.
I'll never give up, never surrender,
For in your love, I am reborn.
I'll fight for you...
To battle against the forces that try to tear us apart.
I'll stand strong in the face of adversity,
Ready to defend what we have with all my heart.
I'll go to war against doubt and fear,
Facing every challenge head on.
I'll fight for us with everything I have,
Because in your love, I have found my home.
I'll fight for our love with courage and grace,
Standing tall in the midst of the storm.
I'll never give up, never surrender,
For in your love, I am reborn.
I'll fight for you...
#LGBT
#LookingForLove
#love
#romantic
#sacrifice
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CasketSharpe
Poem Published
22nd Jun 2024 00:19am
22nd Jun 2024 00:19am
Sacrificial Repossession
On the cross Jesus gave his life with his sacrifice
But motherfuckas are still acting a fool and not living right,
“Every walk of life is doing the same backwards ass shit
On the real he should make a special appearance and cleanse this bitch,
“His sacrifice was for all either they were evil or good
Look at the fucked up world now, you can consider it one big hood,
“Humanity have the nerve to want to travel the stars
But like caged animals we will be kept within our Earthly bars,
“Jesus should take back what he has given...
But motherfuckas are still acting a fool and not living right,
“Every walk of life is doing the same backwards ass shit
On the real he should make a special appearance and cleanse this bitch,
“His sacrifice was for all either they were evil or good
Look at the fucked up world now, you can consider it one big hood,
“Humanity have the nerve to want to travel the stars
But like caged animals we will be kept within our Earthly bars,
“Jesus should take back what he has given...
#disappointment
#sacrifice
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8 Comments
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