Poems About Responsibility Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about responsibility seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
9th Oct 2024 00:05am
9th Oct 2024 00:05am
Citizens of the Pipeline Empire
Diddy going to jail is like rewarding him for his alleged crime
It’s just giving him unlimited access to confined behind,
“Now instead of licking pink waterfalls
He will be licking dick and balls,
“Now he is running hard like a mangy dog in a shelter’s backyard
Thinking he’s free until that choking chain cut off his bark,
“That is how many of us live our everyday life
Dining on danger and dancing on the edge of the nuclear knife,
“Being only one terrorist act away from the eternal black
Now you slave...
It’s just giving him unlimited access to confined behind,
“Now instead of licking pink waterfalls
He will be licking dick and balls,
“Now he is running hard like a mangy dog in a shelter’s backyard
Thinking he’s free until that choking chain cut off his bark,
“That is how many of us live our everyday life
Dining on danger and dancing on the edge of the nuclear knife,
“Being only one terrorist act away from the eternal black
Now you slave...
#America
#politics
#responsibility
136 reads
6 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2024 3:09pm
3rd Oct 2024 3:09pm
She's Gone Too Far!
Hope spotted her
roommate Rachel
in a strip bar.
"She's gone too far!",
said Hope before
storming right out.
roommate Rachel
in a strip bar.
"She's gone too far!",
said Hope before
storming right out.
#corruption
#fiction
#friendship
#responsibility
#sensual
154 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2024 6:12am
3rd Oct 2024 6:12am
STAIRWAY TO PEACE
It's me again the story teller of words ✍️ What I would like to talk about, is necessary for the betterment of your life as you think about, the true understand of the very words that I say. 🤔 For have you ever had someone who catch your attention, to have you really analyze, the deepness of your own thoughts. 🧐 I'm talking about, the differences between now and then, as in the deepness of your own personal, experiences of relationships. THAT has been changed by the entire encounter, like a innocent recent developments of time. ⌚ THAT they were apart of the...
#acceptance
#memories
#responsibility
#SelfWorth
#StreamOfConsciousness
116 reads
2 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
30th Sep 2024 8:22pm
30th Sep 2024 8:22pm
Blind Me
Headlights blind me
As I drive into the resurrection
She sings along as we cruise into
The greasy burger stand trying to
Scrape enough coin to feed the little ones
As cars criss cross the highway looking for
Their own redemption maybe if they can stay straight
But they drift off recessing into the dark alleyway
As a man walks along looking for lost money
The lights are bright at Walmart as
A local bicycle salesman closes for good because of them
Meet up at the Dollar...
As I drive into the resurrection
She sings along as we cruise into
The greasy burger stand trying to
Scrape enough coin to feed the little ones
As cars criss cross the highway looking for
Their own redemption maybe if they can stay straight
But they drift off recessing into the dark alleyway
As a man walks along looking for lost money
The lights are bright at Walmart as
A local bicycle salesman closes for good because of them
Meet up at the Dollar...
#children
#memories
#responsibility
90 reads
2 Comments
LightningBug
Poem Published
28th Sep 2024 2:45pm
28th Sep 2024 2:45pm
Her Magic Dragon
It had a special golden glow by the way the shadows made no effect on this egg. The elf queen had never seen such a large nest before. Dragons were rare and rarely had nests out in the grassy open plains like this.
Tia had no idea what creature was inside this giant scaly egg. It was sparkly and had a slight pale blue mist around it. She could feel the magnetic field pulsing and drawing her to it as she touched the surface.
She waited, since upon seeing it noticed that it had a large crack as if about to split open anytime.
What seemed an eternity suddenly...
Tia had no idea what creature was inside this giant scaly egg. It was sparkly and had a slight pale blue mist around it. She could feel the magnetic field pulsing and drawing her to it as she touched the surface.
She waited, since upon seeing it noticed that it had a large crack as if about to split open anytime.
What seemed an eternity suddenly...
#dragons
#earth
#fairies
#friendship
#responsibility
112 reads
3 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
25th Sep 2024 9:21pm
25th Sep 2024 9:21pm
rusHour
The one principle that surrounds everything else is that of
stewardship; that we are the managers of everything that
God has given us.—”Larry Burkett
it must be for the greater good
that some above the crowds have stood,
while others on the edge of life repine;
the stewardship of every man
must be to serve a nobler plan
than pick his teeth and phartz above cloud nine.
the lawyer in sartorial guise
must not the ass...
stewardship; that we are the managers of everything that
God has given us.—”Larry Burkett
it must be for the greater good
that some above the crowds have stood,
while others on the edge of life repine;
the stewardship of every man
must be to serve a nobler plan
than pick his teeth and phartz above cloud nine.
the lawyer in sartorial guise
must not the ass...
#kindness
#love
#morality
#redemption
#responsibility
105 reads
2 Comments
jenny_is_hungry
Poem Published
24th Sep 2024 5:23am
24th Sep 2024 5:23am
Free Clinic
I set you up
I set me up
Thinking to us
You strong as fuck
How many can poke themselves in a vein
After doing so for many
To prevent further pain
How many?
Can perform
Surgery upon themselves
I look to the pond
To reflect upon myself
Not the grandiose ocean wealth
Now I know how they felt
When they came to me
Bleeding
Broke
And seething
Nowhere to breathe
The grit
In taking
The
Unanesthetized need
Unprescribed ...
I set me up
Thinking to us
You strong as fuck
How many can poke themselves in a vein
After doing so for many
To prevent further pain
How many?
Can perform
Surgery upon themselves
I look to the pond
To reflect upon myself
Not the grandiose ocean wealth
Now I know how they felt
When they came to me
Bleeding
Broke
And seething
Nowhere to breathe
The grit
In taking
The
Unanesthetized need
Unprescribed ...
#morality
#responsibility
96 reads
1 Comment
Lowko
Jimi Tatz
Jimi Tatz
Poem Published
13th Sep 2024 11:42am
13th Sep 2024 11:42am
Gino & Poppy
It was the early 2010s, another pissed up night at the boozer.
A young Gino Corona was spending all of his dosh, like a loser!
He had long hair in a bun and a wife-beater to show his guns.
Flossing a big chunky chain on his neck to show his funds.
His wife and his kid at home would wonder where he might be?
Either way she knew, he would be pissed up, somewhere out of his tree.
In the gritty town of Swansea, it was raw, rough, and ready.
They lived in a grotty flat in the moody streets of Sketty.
Poppy Fiasco was...
A young Gino Corona was spending all of his dosh, like a loser!
He had long hair in a bun and a wife-beater to show his guns.
Flossing a big chunky chain on his neck to show his funds.
His wife and his kid at home would wonder where he might be?
Either way she knew, he would be pissed up, somewhere out of his tree.
In the gritty town of Swansea, it was raw, rough, and ready.
They lived in a grotty flat in the moody streets of Sketty.
Poppy Fiasco was...
#family
#fatherhood
#marriage
#memories
#responsibility
131 reads
1 Comment
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
8th Aug 2024 10:13am
8th Aug 2024 10:13am
A Judgement of Steel
The sovereigns and their lords
Beseech me to take up the sword
Of which I seeketh judgement
And take vengeance upon thine enemies
With honor bound, I tread this path,
To mete out justice, fury's wrath.
In shadows deep, my heart shall tread,
With steel in hand, by valor led.
Through battle's roar and clashing steel,
I stand as fate, their doom to seal.
For in this quest, my soul shall strive,
To see their foes no more alive.
Yet in the night, where silence reigns,...
Beseech me to take up the sword
Of which I seeketh judgement
And take vengeance upon thine enemies
With honor bound, I tread this path,
To mete out justice, fury's wrath.
In shadows deep, my heart shall tread,
With steel in hand, by valor led.
Through battle's roar and clashing steel,
I stand as fate, their doom to seal.
For in this quest, my soul shall strive,
To see their foes no more alive.
Yet in the night, where silence reigns,...
#courage
#dark
#narrative
#responsibility
#rhyming
62 reads
0 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
6th Aug 2024 00:37am
6th Aug 2024 00:37am
...just saying
our government
should fight corruption
not be corrupted
...just sayin'
should fight corruption
not be corrupted
...just sayin'
#responsibility
101 reads
6 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
29th Jul 2024 5:51pm
29th Jul 2024 5:51pm
Not even second class
A fucking white male
So privileged
Far right misogynistic
Extreme family man
Nazi ad infinitum expelleleosism
The solution to this white stain?
Replacement
Or total annihilation?
So privileged
Far right misogynistic
Extreme family man
Nazi ad infinitum expelleleosism
The solution to this white stain?
Replacement
Or total annihilation?
#lies
#masculinity
#oppression
#responsibility
#tradition
145 reads
3 Comments
Sapphirewolf
Poem Published
28th Jul 2024 7:54pm
28th Jul 2024 7:54pm
Dear Little Sister
I've seen you laugh...
I've seen you cry...
You know for you....
I'd truly die............
Fear not, for villians and fiens...
You know I'd bring them, to their knees...
I've seen you cry...
You know for you....
I'd truly die............
Fear not, for villians and fiens...
You know I'd bring them, to their knees...
#memories
#responsibility
#sister
184 reads
2 Comments
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