Poems About Responsibility Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about responsibility seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Loki_Undercover
Wannabe-Poet
Wannabe-Poet
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 4:41pm
11th Dec 2024 4:41pm
Wish I could follow the truth
I will let you go,
Though it feels like you're woven into my soul.
Right now,
you seem like everything I need,
But without you,
I must learn to breathe.
I will let you go,
Someday your shadow won’t linger so.
I’ll think of other things,
Though my heart still aches and sings.
I will let you go,
And in that,
I’ll find myself again—
Everything good you once saw in me.
Yet, a part of you will stay,
A quiet warmth that time
won’t take away.
Though it feels like you're woven into my soul.
Right now,
you seem like everything I need,
But without you,
I must learn to breathe.
I will let you go,
Someday your shadow won’t linger so.
I’ll think of other things,
Though my heart still aches and sings.
I will let you go,
And in that,
I’ll find myself again—
Everything good you once saw in me.
Yet, a part of you will stay,
A quiet warmth that time
won’t take away.
#admiration
#love
#respect #responsibility
#respect #responsibility
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1 Comment
prometheus5290
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 1:26pm
8th Dec 2024 1:26pm
The things we need to do
These are the things we need to do in America:
Stop working for and buying from evil- this will take what some might call sacrifice, but we might call responsibility. Affecting bank accounts and profits is the only way to change some minds.
Start working for, buying from, and otherwise contributing to your community in as many ways as you can: volunteer, donate, bake and give locally and directly. Remove government, beaurocrocy and waste from what you give to and take from others.
Violence might help the process, but cannot stabilize us afterwards.
Stop working for and buying from evil- this will take what some might call sacrifice, but we might call responsibility. Affecting bank accounts and profits is the only way to change some minds.
Start working for, buying from, and otherwise contributing to your community in as many ways as you can: volunteer, donate, bake and give locally and directly. Remove government, beaurocrocy and waste from what you give to and take from others.
Violence might help the process, but cannot stabilize us afterwards.
#consumerism
#fear
#responsibility
73 reads
6 Comments
rksingh
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 6:39am
29th Nov 2024 6:39am
LIVING IS A LONG GAME
I can't change body
can't belittle nature
prophets of doom
can't cross rainbow bridge
nor go to underworld
to reach heaven:
water and mountains
I can't negotiate
with my burdens
burial no end
living is a long game
that goes beyond death
--R K Singh
can't belittle nature
prophets of doom
can't cross rainbow bridge
nor go to underworld
to reach heaven:
water and mountains
I can't negotiate
with my burdens
burial no end
living is a long game
that goes beyond death
--R K Singh
#aging
#death
#fate #responsibility
#fate #responsibility
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ThePalestRider
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 6:47am
18th Nov 2024 6:47am
Dynasty
Upon the throne of shadows, doubt did cling
The Valois heir, a flame in tempest vast
Erect in poise, as marble gods in spring
Bore fate's great weight, unyielding to the blast
Beneath his feet, the soil of France did groan
A kingdom cleft by war’s unholy strife
Yet, like the Parian stone, his form was shown
Unmarred, a sculptor's dream brought into life
The Seine did whisper, winds through arches vast
Of triumphs yet to come, of crowns foretold
And every pillar, every stone, held fast
To echo Valois' tale in ages cold
...
The Valois heir, a flame in tempest vast
Erect in poise, as marble gods in spring
Bore fate's great weight, unyielding to the blast
Beneath his feet, the soil of France did groan
A kingdom cleft by war’s unholy strife
Yet, like the Parian stone, his form was shown
Unmarred, a sculptor's dream brought into life
The Seine did whisper, winds through arches vast
Of triumphs yet to come, of crowns foretold
And every pillar, every stone, held fast
To echo Valois' tale in ages cold
...
#freedom
#military
#narrative
#passion
#responsibility
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oldmanG
Poem Published
15th Nov 2024 5:08am
15th Nov 2024 5:08am
Earnings report
Call comes in report our earnings
One thing missing is all the children we killed
Made 700 hundred million in a quarter of a year
Stack that onto an Octagon billionaire building
A place for when all time ends in Hawaii
He lit a match on social media
Suck up all your data sell it to advertisers while
He trains like he’s in the UFC
Social network trained to destroy the earth
Facebook morphs into meta
Algorithms set to harm teenage girls
You’re own research says it’s so
...
One thing missing is all the children we killed
Made 700 hundred million in a quarter of a year
Stack that onto an Octagon billionaire building
A place for when all time ends in Hawaii
He lit a match on social media
Suck up all your data sell it to advertisers while
He trains like he’s in the UFC
Social network trained to destroy the earth
Facebook morphs into meta
Algorithms set to harm teenage girls
You’re own research says it’s so
...
#responsibility
#suffering
#suicide #technology
#suicide #technology
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0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 4:12pm
8th Nov 2024 4:12pm
Brooklyn's Last Exit
Gang rape America is here to stay
proudly declared by each sick MAGA vote
influenced by meme mechanical rote
all the storm trooper night and half the day.
So now our boys can fuck the MAGA way
or grab some Hollywood Access tail
to fuck on a third political rail
just to find out what the homies will say
since nothing matters to the MAGA mind
where..."sucks to be you"...always plays through.
(We can't have their precious balls turning blue
when a hard working dude needs to unwind).
Just find someone...
proudly declared by each sick MAGA vote
influenced by meme mechanical rote
all the storm trooper night and half the day.
So now our boys can fuck the MAGA way
or grab some Hollywood Access tail
to fuck on a third political rail
just to find out what the homies will say
since nothing matters to the MAGA mind
where..."sucks to be you"...always plays through.
(We can't have their precious balls turning blue
when a hard working dude needs to unwind).
Just find someone...
#morality
#responsibility
#vanity #vulnerability
#vanity #vulnerability
117 reads
8 Comments
drone
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2024 10:35am
2nd Nov 2024 10:35am
Life Knows
Life
Only knows
One thing
To live
Life
IT adapts
It grows
It Evolves
Life
Doesn't understand
How
To survive
But many of us know
How to survive life
We don't adapt
We force things
To adapt to us
We don't
Mentely grow
So we don't evolve
We just meley
Exist
We don't Live
Life
Only knows
One thing
To live
Life
IT adapts
It grows
It Evolves
Life
Doesn't understand
How
To survive
But many of us know
How to survive life
We don't adapt
We force things
To adapt to us
We don't
Mentely grow
So we don't evolve
We just meley
Exist
We don't Live
Life
#courage
#LifeCycle
#meditation
#passion
#responsibility
90 reads
2 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
31st Oct 2024 1:40am
31st Oct 2024 1:40am
Childless(cat) lady
Childless lady
Maybe she is barren but she wants one
Couple goes to the clinic hoping they can deliver
IVF recipe gives dreams to the unecumberded
Get home late didn’t see the text
All I see is I’m becoming a mother
Go to the hospital with dreams realized
On the way turn on the radio they said
IVF is against the law
So we go back to the family home
All that greets us is our Cats
Maybe she is barren but she wants one
Couple goes to the clinic hoping they can deliver
IVF recipe gives dreams to the unecumberded
Get home late didn’t see the text
All I see is I’m becoming a mother
Go to the hospital with dreams realized
On the way turn on the radio they said
IVF is against the law
So we go back to the family home
All that greets us is our Cats
#motherhood
#oppression
#responsibility
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0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
25th Oct 2024 10:45pm
25th Oct 2024 10:45pm
GOD BLESS A CHILD
This is something that was created by the PEOPLE'S, that believe in fact and not fiction.
😞 BUT yet it holds the real truth of what It means, when they say GOD BLESS A CHILD WHO HAS IT'S OWN. For sure it's a SUBCONSCIOUS thought TO THINK, FOR THYSELF OF WHAT YOU NEED AND WANT FOR YOUR SELF. For example what would rather have in your life. 🤔 Struggles and chaos and drama and confusion, and madness just wondering how will you even survive. 😤 For sure GOD, will bless those who has the ability to think for thyself. FOR sure GOD IS WATCHING THE WORLD, as it is being...
😞 BUT yet it holds the real truth of what It means, when they say GOD BLESS A CHILD WHO HAS IT'S OWN. For sure it's a SUBCONSCIOUS thought TO THINK, FOR THYSELF OF WHAT YOU NEED AND WANT FOR YOUR SELF. For example what would rather have in your life. 🤔 Struggles and chaos and drama and confusion, and madness just wondering how will you even survive. 😤 For sure GOD, will bless those who has the ability to think for thyself. FOR sure GOD IS WATCHING THE WORLD, as it is being...
#LifeChangingMoment
#PersonalGrowth
#responsibility
#StreamOfConsciousness
#wisdom
97 reads
4 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
25th Oct 2024 1:04pm
25th Oct 2024 1:04pm
Tattoo My Reasons
In the feeling tattoo my reasons
For who I am and why I’m here
It feels so accidental why did we meet
I’m entrapped by the sight of you
We look away from today start planning tomorrow
We want a life that’s residential
It could depend on who we elect
Tomorrow might be so far away
Today is here and it’s fucking scary
Don’t mean to curse but it’s apparent
That you have to elect someone who is
Truly Presidential and not a firestarter
Look to the future let the past...
For who I am and why I’m here
It feels so accidental why did we meet
I’m entrapped by the sight of you
We look away from today start planning tomorrow
We want a life that’s residential
It could depend on who we elect
Tomorrow might be so far away
Today is here and it’s fucking scary
Don’t mean to curse but it’s apparent
That you have to elect someone who is
Truly Presidential and not a firestarter
Look to the future let the past...
#CallToAction
#courage
#politics #responsibility
#politics #responsibility
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oldmanG
Poem Published
13th Oct 2024 1:13pm
13th Oct 2024 1:13pm
Bump on the belly
Bump on the belly
Sit and think about
What she goes through
Gestating creation in the womb
Nurturing maternal instincts
As I go about my business
My feet don’t swell
No morning sickness
Swimming in nausea
She’s a trooper
No complaints
If it was me I’d be
Screaming from the rooftops
Asking for help or some relief
She soldiers on
Says she’s fatiguing
On the couch for days
9 months on the rock pile
Producing Oscar winners
Or a astronaut exploring...
Sit and think about
What she goes through
Gestating creation in the womb
Nurturing maternal instincts
As I go about my business
My feet don’t swell
No morning sickness
Swimming in nausea
She’s a trooper
No complaints
If it was me I’d be
Screaming from the rooftops
Asking for help or some relief
She soldiers on
Says she’s fatiguing
On the couch for days
9 months on the rock pile
Producing Oscar winners
Or a astronaut exploring...
#children
#memories
#motherhood #responsibility
#motherhood #responsibility
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oldmanG
Poem Published
12th Oct 2024 4:52am
12th Oct 2024 4:52am
Brain drain of culture
Brain drain of culture
Teachers and nurses
Run for the exits
As right wing madness
Seeps in local school boards
Putting matches to literature
Telling them you can’t be gay
Or be he she or they
Mickey Mouse is an outlaw
Magic kingdom not so free
Down in Texas wheelchair of cruelty
Letting little school kids be mowed down
Or freezing with no power
As cops in the hallway on their phones
Are afraid of a one man killing machine
He’s giving permits to kill out like candy
As...
Teachers and nurses
Run for the exits
As right wing madness
Seeps in local school boards
Putting matches to literature
Telling them you can’t be gay
Or be he she or they
Mickey Mouse is an outlaw
Magic kingdom not so free
Down in Texas wheelchair of cruelty
Letting little school kids be mowed down
Or freezing with no power
As cops in the hallway on their phones
Are afraid of a one man killing machine
He’s giving permits to kill out like candy
As...
#CallToAction
#culture
#politics #responsibility
#politics #responsibility
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2 Comments
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