Poems About Respect by Top Critiquers
#respect
Poems about respect by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Impressive
you got to admire
the braveness of
Archive playing
very long songs
in a world & time
of fast food music
for having the guts
to play huge parts
instrumental their
lengthy silences
for their build up
starting laid-back
quiet & dreamlike
until suddenly it's
hypnotic trip hop
or jaw-dropping
progressive rock
with stunning riffs
how intricate their
compositions are
it wasn't a concert
it was a drug free trip ...
the braveness of
Archive playing
very long songs
in a world & time
of fast food music
for having the guts
to play huge parts
instrumental their
lengthy silences
for their build up
starting laid-back
quiet & dreamlike
until suddenly it's
hypnotic trip hop
or jaw-dropping
progressive rock
with stunning riffs
how intricate their
compositions are
it wasn't a concert
it was a drug free trip ...
#admiration
#respect
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Angels
(Fia Naturie/Billy Snagg)
I cannot compare thee to anything.
One look stops the very air that I breathe.
As angels kiss lips as soft as dew, sing,
For all that I yearn will make me believe.
And I carry on musing just the same,
Through life's tribulations, dancing a tune.
Loving each other, there can be no shame,
Proceeding in time to the sound of June.
Now when I think back to those pastures ripe -
Carefree and joyous for all we were worth,
Even on days we would carry a gripe -
Still you're my sunshine, my heaven on...
I cannot compare thee to anything.
One look stops the very air that I breathe.
As angels kiss lips as soft as dew, sing,
For all that I yearn will make me believe.
And I carry on musing just the same,
Through life's tribulations, dancing a tune.
Loving each other, there can be no shame,
Proceeding in time to the sound of June.
Now when I think back to those pastures ripe -
Carefree and joyous for all we were worth,
Even on days we would carry a gripe -
Still you're my sunshine, my heaven on...
#love
#motivational
#relationships
#respect
#sonnet
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19 Comments
Not a cloud in the sky.
This will be my last post on DUP .
The writers on this site are brilliant and prolific ,so much so that instead of writing I'm spending too much time reading .I need to return to my books.There is a fascinating variety of contributors here and without knowing each one personally, I think all feel compelled to write to help free themselves from suffering.
So for all those who have suffered please enjoy this piece from Rumi....one of my faves.
The Guest House
This being human is a guest house.
Every morning a new arrival.
A joy, a...
The writers on this site are brilliant and prolific ,so much so that instead of writing I'm spending too much time reading .I need to return to my books.There is a fascinating variety of contributors here and without knowing each one personally, I think all feel compelled to write to help free themselves from suffering.
So for all those who have suffered please enjoy this piece from Rumi....one of my faves.
The Guest House
This being human is a guest house.
Every morning a new arrival.
A joy, a...
#courage
#gratitude
#kindness
#love
#respect
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Limp Sound Display (Collaboration with Vision_of_insanity)
Unwind the clock
there far beyond the beyond
where there is no one else
the world's on fire
on the waters he walks
humanity also walks...
passing the time with song
humming happy thoughts
Mouse falls into a trap
volcanoes explode islands
birds in my tree
birds destroy their nests
a rainy day, wash the hate away
like seahorse cowboys
singing their song
mushroom clouds dissipate
strawberries mean love
Let your body go with the wind
let your body free from your mind
Find...
there far beyond the beyond
where there is no one else
the world's on fire
on the waters he walks
humanity also walks...
passing the time with song
humming happy thoughts
Mouse falls into a trap
volcanoes explode islands
birds in my tree
birds destroy their nests
a rainy day, wash the hate away
like seahorse cowboys
singing their song
mushroom clouds dissipate
strawberries mean love
Let your body go with the wind
let your body free from your mind
Find...
#admiration
#art
#collaboration
#funny
#respect
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10 Comments
Poetique Reserve
Spiraling dreams become fetus
Unraveling quasar apparatus
Utterance of a spell cast
Vast threshold unsurpassed
Darkness in a brash flash of light
White with possibilities
Painting a canvased sense of sight
Absorbed into pitched sensibilities
I feel your nimble appendages
Over the keys setting the possibilities free
Disconnected from passages
Through the past reconnected in the distillery
Crystallized in amber illuminated
By an internal eternal fire
Meeting with other fires fated
Ever...
Unraveling quasar apparatus
Utterance of a spell cast
Vast threshold unsurpassed
Darkness in a brash flash of light
White with possibilities
Painting a canvased sense of sight
Absorbed into pitched sensibilities
I feel your nimble appendages
Over the keys setting the possibilities free
Disconnected from passages
Through the past reconnected in the distillery
Crystallized in amber illuminated
By an internal eternal fire
Meeting with other fires fated
Ever...
#love
#beauty
#shadows
#respect
#NaPoWriMo2022
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Ode to My Mango Tree
two decades or so, yet
ever reaching out to me
your calloused branches...
my voice and touch
carved in your aging bough,
your song when leaves rustle
in the night breeze
overwhelms my tormented soul...
o' my dearest amrapali,
more than my confidant,
you are an embodiment
of my spirit guide,
listening to my laments
and in whose silence
dwells solace-
an intercessor,
who carries my
pleas and prayers
to the universe; ...
ever reaching out to me
your calloused branches...
my voice and touch
carved in your aging bough,
your song when leaves rustle
in the night breeze
overwhelms my tormented soul...
o' my dearest amrapali,
more than my confidant,
you are an embodiment
of my spirit guide,
listening to my laments
and in whose silence
dwells solace-
an intercessor,
who carries my
pleas and prayers
to the universe; ...
#nature
#respect
#spiritual #trees
#spiritual #trees
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R.I.P. Cassini
Oh stalwart vessel! Did siren ring song
snare you like an Odyssean sailor?
They say your conversion did not take long
from probe to vaporized con trailer.
Armchair trailblazers now salute you
and your glance into the vast unknown.
Now you mix with the Saturnian dew,
or perhaps through hexagonal storms are blown.
Like bold chest clutching stage deaths of yore
you bravely gave yourself to the ages
all to make room for some alien spore
Instead of Earth borne microbial rages.
You brought us the music of the spheres... ...
snare you like an Odyssean sailor?
They say your conversion did not take long
from probe to vaporized con trailer.
Armchair trailblazers now salute you
and your glance into the vast unknown.
Now you mix with the Saturnian dew,
or perhaps through hexagonal storms are blown.
Like bold chest clutching stage deaths of yore
you bravely gave yourself to the ages
all to make room for some alien spore
Instead of Earth borne microbial rages.
You brought us the music of the spheres... ...
#inspirational
#gratitude
#admiration #respect
#admiration #respect
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2 Comments
This Song (It's for You)
You showed up in a dream last night
and you were not ok
You never said a word,
but tears were rolling down your face
I didn’t ask you questions,
just held you while you cried
And when I woke, the rain
was pouring down outside
I know that I can’t call you,
How random that would seem
We’re really not that kind of friends,
We only talk in memes.
I’m not the one you’d turn to
if things were going wrong,
But you’re the one who crashed my dream,
so I’m writing you this song.
...
and you were not ok
You never said a word,
but tears were rolling down your face
I didn’t ask you questions,
just held you while you cried
And when I woke, the rain
was pouring down outside
I know that I can’t call you,
How random that would seem
We’re really not that kind of friends,
We only talk in memes.
I’m not the one you’d turn to
if things were going wrong,
But you’re the one who crashed my dream,
so I’m writing you this song.
...
#friendship
#music
#relationships
#respect
#support
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19 Comments
Adora
It's time to tell your parents.
I want them to know
that you will be okay.
That you will have joy
above the weight of common things.
That their concern may cease.
That you will hold onto happiness
every day, like apples in a basket.
That I will cradle you
in the now,
as they had, decades past.
I will cradle you
during movies
eclipses
any of the pauses
that may present itself.
And I will wrap around you,
during the midnights,
when the wolves within mankind howl. ...
I want them to know
that you will be okay.
That you will have joy
above the weight of common things.
That their concern may cease.
That you will hold onto happiness
every day, like apples in a basket.
That I will cradle you
in the now,
as they had, decades past.
I will cradle you
during movies
eclipses
any of the pauses
that may present itself.
And I will wrap around you,
during the midnights,
when the wolves within mankind howl. ...
#happiness
#love
#respect
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12 Comments
Your Feet
Your feet
are deeply callused
to the point
of almost
being hooves
your toes are mini mangled tree limbs
with long
granite-like toenails
as i lovingly massage your feet
a pile of fine
dead skin
collects in my lap
i could massage your feet
all day
because it brings you bliss
and because they are yours
are deeply callused
to the point
of almost
being hooves
your toes are mini mangled tree limbs
with long
granite-like toenails
as i lovingly massage your feet
a pile of fine
dead skin
collects in my lap
i could massage your feet
all day
because it brings you bliss
and because they are yours
#love
#gratitude
#respect #relationships
#respect #relationships
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My Links
First of all I'd like to express my sadness that this site will no longer be in a couple of months.
I've met some great writers and folk on here since joining last year, if any of you's are on any of the following apps it would be great to stay in touch and likewise send me yours, I'll leave them in the 'about me' section too.
Yourquote ~ pete_25
Writco ~ Pete_writes
Poetizer ~ Pete_writes
Anyways love to you all ♥️
I've met some great writers and folk on here since joining last year, if any of you's are on any of the following apps it would be great to stay in touch and likewise send me yours, I'll leave them in the 'about me' section too.
Yourquote ~ pete_25
Writco ~ Pete_writes
Poetizer ~ Pete_writes
Anyways love to you all ♥️
#gratitude
#respect
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in memory of the peculiar crimes unit
christopher fowler died in march.
his novels were the best things since dickens: his characters, his depiction
of london, his detectives, bryant and may, brought the city alive upon blackfriars bridge they continue to live ..
his novels were the best things since dickens: his characters, his depiction
of london, his detectives, bryant and may, brought the city alive upon blackfriars bridge they continue to live ..
#respect
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DU Poetry : Poems About Respect by Top Critiquers