Poems About Respect Seeking Honest Critique
#respect
Poems about respect seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:04am
Yesterday 2:04am
Stars Rite
If stars could write, what would they say,
Would they float there and dream of yesterdays?
Would they count down the seconds you came into being,
Or continue to marvel at the oceans they see?
If stars can write, would they be in a flurry,
With decadent loops,
Written down in a hurry?
Trying to get every word out that flickers,
Would you know if the star got it down any quicker?
If you were a star in the sky to be seen,
What would you write and convey to me?
Would it be words of love you sadly lost,
Or those of deception,...
Would they float there and dream of yesterdays?
Would they count down the seconds you came into being,
Or continue to marvel at the oceans they see?
If stars can write, would they be in a flurry,
With decadent loops,
Written down in a hurry?
Trying to get every word out that flickers,
Would you know if the star got it down any quicker?
If you were a star in the sky to be seen,
What would you write and convey to me?
Would it be words of love you sadly lost,
Or those of deception,...
#courage
#hope
#respect
82 reads
5 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
7th May 2025 7:54am
7th May 2025 7:54am
With a fond farewell
With a fond farewell
Though it's time for us to all to go now has we all go our separate ways, I will look back at the DUP and remember the fondest of poetic days
So many of the kind words support and things that made me smile, comments by a stranger that would lift you from a down day even if it was only for a while
Reading other people's poetry wishing you had their writing skills, glimpses at their view on life and how their life makes them feel
Sharing moments of pure happiness and things that made me sad, often imagined naughty kinky pieces...
Though it's time for us to all to go now has we all go our separate ways, I will look back at the DUP and remember the fondest of poetic days
So many of the kind words support and things that made me smile, comments by a stranger that would lift you from a down day even if it was only for a while
Reading other people's poetry wishing you had their writing skills, glimpses at their view on life and how their life makes them feel
Sharing moments of pure happiness and things that made me sad, often imagined naughty kinky pieces...
#courage
#happiness
#motivational
#redemption
#respect
73 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th May 2025 5:59am
6th May 2025 5:59am
A heart without love
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ Do you know what a heart without love 🤔 looks like and feels like to the deepness of the truth of the heart. 💝 For sure they say that no one is sent to you by chance or accident, 🤔 😲 SOMETIMES we have to learn to walk away, from somethings, that don't feel right, as the red flags start waving in the back ground. 😲 For sure we have to learn to understand, that it's hard enough to find that someone who is willing and able to share a life together as one love...
#happiness
#hope
#kindness
#love
#respect
93 reads
0 Comments
Nevermindthegaps
Poem Published
27th Apr 2025 1:38am
27th Apr 2025 1:38am
It’s Here And I’m Still Scrabbling
Dear Betty,
I’m writing this letter to formally say, thank you.
Thank you for your hard work, dedication attention to detail as well as your constant efforts to keep me on task and up to date with edits. Your dedication to time lines and support when I didn’t think I could make the schedule made this super easy, you carried my ass the whole process, leaving me to simply write and edit. While it is a collaborative book in terms of writing all of the effort of creation, poem selections, pairing of pieces, collating the making it cohesive, on top of finding a way...
I’m writing this letter to formally say, thank you.
Thank you for your hard work, dedication attention to detail as well as your constant efforts to keep me on task and up to date with edits. Your dedication to time lines and support when I didn’t think I could make the schedule made this super easy, you carried my ass the whole process, leaving me to simply write and edit. While it is a collaborative book in terms of writing all of the effort of creation, poem selections, pairing of pieces, collating the making it cohesive, on top of finding a way...
#admiration
#gratitude
#happiness
#respect
#strength
180 reads
11 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2025 9:29pm
23rd Apr 2025 9:29pm
A Bleak Reminder
Just signed on today
A bleak message in purple at the top of my screen
The end of our site expires in 18 days, 18 hours and 56 minutes
Now every time we sign in, our eyes will be drawn to this message
A saddened community awaits for their number one poetry site to be laid to rest
So many talented artists from all over the world, I've met here
Hands down, one of the easiest places to write, communicate and navigate freely from one subject matter to another
There are many "good" poetry sites out there
But nothing comes...
A bleak message in purple at the top of my screen
The end of our site expires in 18 days, 18 hours and 56 minutes
Now every time we sign in, our eyes will be drawn to this message
A saddened community awaits for their number one poetry site to be laid to rest
So many talented artists from all over the world, I've met here
Hands down, one of the easiest places to write, communicate and navigate freely from one subject matter to another
There are many "good" poetry sites out there
But nothing comes...
#admiration
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#respect
109 reads
12 Comments
Listentoact
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2025 1:32am
22nd Apr 2025 1:32am
Quiet thoughts when you sleep
Last night under the crimson black covers of the night,
post letter of thoughts mailed in their opinions each rigged with a bouquet of grenades sensitive towards emotion,
consciousness sweating at the touch of the letter ready to deliver a final blow to this latters hope in ashes of the future,
fingerprints imprinted on a scale model of a heart playing poker with fate asking whether today do I lose my essence,when I dip my skin in the pond of change,
In truth change is married to meaning a couple with roots that amplify all sorts new order
In the soul, ...
post letter of thoughts mailed in their opinions each rigged with a bouquet of grenades sensitive towards emotion,
consciousness sweating at the touch of the letter ready to deliver a final blow to this latters hope in ashes of the future,
fingerprints imprinted on a scale model of a heart playing poker with fate asking whether today do I lose my essence,when I dip my skin in the pond of change,
In truth change is married to meaning a couple with roots that amplify all sorts new order
In the soul, ...
#courage
#forgiveness
#redemption
#respect
#strength
53 reads
0 Comments
Listentoact
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2025 1:26am
22nd Apr 2025 1:26am
What's a good woman
What’s a good woman
It is no show and tell story or neon vibration of lights of attraction you see or a status caption you pistol Point with your emotionless finger emotion since you can like, but these words are not that button they won’t be like
What’s a good woman, she matters when nothing even matters, she coats herself in her worth of being human, her course is never better or greater or a standard, liken her warmth in her hands with a place that celestial beings hide their insecurities,
she can crown you connect you to her source of eternal love, which is a...
It is no show and tell story or neon vibration of lights of attraction you see or a status caption you pistol Point with your emotionless finger emotion since you can like, but these words are not that button they won’t be like
What’s a good woman, she matters when nothing even matters, she coats herself in her worth of being human, her course is never better or greater or a standard, liken her warmth in her hands with a place that celestial beings hide their insecurities,
she can crown you connect you to her source of eternal love, which is a...
#admiration
#happiness
#kindness
#love
#respect
83 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
17th Apr 2025 3:11am
17th Apr 2025 3:11am
Faded Darkness
Through my life and memories of the past, still stacking up in the dark of the night. YET I've learned that my past is not my future. For my future no longer exist in the past, as it is behind me, still
trying to stop my own blessings for the betterment, of my life and love and honor and respect. Because I deserve better for myself, to be able to share my thoughts and insight and love, with someone else who is willing and able to be, with me as I want to be with them in honesty and truth and trust. 🙏 For sure I want a strong commitment, and real consistency and real deep...
trying to stop my own blessings for the betterment, of my life and love and honor and respect. Because I deserve better for myself, to be able to share my thoughts and insight and love, with someone else who is willing and able to be, with me as I want to be with them in honesty and truth and trust. 🙏 For sure I want a strong commitment, and real consistency and real deep...
#hope
#kindness
#love
#respect
#TimeHeals
91 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
13th Apr 2025 12:00pm
13th Apr 2025 12:00pm
It's always been just us
As we rise upon another day in our lives I lay here besides you, as I admire your skin reflecting from the glow of the morning sun. 🌞 AS you lay still sound asleep, for it's just the stillness I admire as you quietly, breathe still sleeping at peace. For sure it's times like these I have been blessed, to finally find my better half of me, someone who gets me. For I will always appreciate your support and understanding, and your encouragement to continue with the fire that burns deeper than deep in side of my heart ❤️ For sure you have become my strength and energy, and...
#admiration
#kindness
#love
#respect
#TimeHeals
93 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
9th Apr 2025 00:02am
9th Apr 2025 00:02am
The flight of love
They say that we all will have to learn how much our love truly matters, to us in ways that will shake us to very core of our soul. But yet it's important to remember that it's hard enough, to find that someone who gets us in ways that we can never, forget about the real deepness of the truth of our life and love. For sure we will have some disagreements and agreements, as this is life only to test your strength and perseverance. To the truth of how much you and I need and want, each other to inspire us and complete, us as one flame 🔥 that was meant to be together. as a flight...
#admiration
#happiness
#kindness
#love
#respect
114 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 1:38pm
3rd Apr 2025 1:38pm
Personal Thoughts
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ What I would like to know from thyself own personal experiences, do you remember when you had a disagreement with someone, that we would just pick up the phone and dial the number. 🤔 Yeah I know that times have changed over the years 😔 with this new wave of communications. BUT yet do you remember what it use to be like to just talk, about what went wrong with just talking to someone. 😡 Now we just go on a web site and voice our thoughts and opinions, to the whole world 🌎 about our situations in...
#honesty
#kindness
#relationships
#respect
#support
73 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
30th Mar 2025 11:56am
30th Mar 2025 11:56am
Unspoken words spoken
What would you give to be able to share your thoughts, and prayers and hugs and kisses of inspiring words.✍️ TO speak with your truth and trust and honesty in your beliefs in GOD ALMIGHTY. As with our own insight and our spiritual subconsciousness, of our own life stories. Told from 🖊️ pen to paper of our own, UNSPOKEN WORDS. For sure what story will you and I write, ✍️ about of our own journeys and travels and walks. For will you and I speak as true surviver of our own perseverance and beliefs, with our determination and strength to overcome. The odds...
#admiration
#gratitude
#happiness
#love
#respect
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DU Poetry : Poems About Respect Seeking Honest Critique
