Poems About Regret Seeking Honest Critique
#regret
Poems about regret seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
13th Jan 2025 00:03am
13th Jan 2025 00:03am
Some kind of ghosts
Some kind of ghosts
Are living in my dreams
But I don’t know if it is the ghost of the past, the ghost of the present, or The ghost of future
Also they have a scary face
And that is all I know
Because I already seen their faces
And it gives me nightmares
That frightens me
Now I am having a problem
Going back to sleep
I hate having night mares
Every single night
I have no Idea why
This is happening to me
Every single night
I not like having the nightmares
I keep having
Every single night
I am getting fed...
Are living in my dreams
But I don’t know if it is the ghost of the past, the ghost of the present, or The ghost of future
Also they have a scary face
And that is all I know
Because I already seen their faces
And it gives me nightmares
That frightens me
Now I am having a problem
Going back to sleep
I hate having night mares
Every single night
I have no Idea why
This is happening to me
Every single night
I not like having the nightmares
I keep having
Every single night
I am getting fed...
#anger
#anxiety
#disappointment
#jealousy
#regret
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
13th Jan 2025 00:00am
13th Jan 2025 00:00am
Marie
What a shame
Marie died
Of frost bite
At the bus shelter
At Coxwell Ave and Danforth Ave
She never ask for help
The temperature was -21
I don't know how could
Somebody survive in this cold
The warming centers
Is all the time closed
In Toronto
So the homeless have no where
To go
Marie died
Of frost bite
At the bus shelter
At Coxwell Ave and Danforth Ave
She never ask for help
The temperature was -21
I don't know how could
Somebody survive in this cold
The warming centers
Is all the time closed
In Toronto
So the homeless have no where
To go
#bittersweet
#fear
#greed
#regret
#sadness
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StillisinInk
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 7:01pm
8th Jan 2025 7:01pm
To My Old Self....
To my old self,
I apologize for turning out this way.
You held high hopes for the future —
I crushed them down,
all in vain.
one by one,
broke the promises we made,
lost your essence,
realized it too late.
Will I disappoint you,
if I became the adult we hated?
In moments of loneliness and despair,
I wish you were here,
to heal the wounds
with your love and care.
I tried to be
what we wished for,
but nothing ever seemed to work.
I brought more trouble.
I asked you to leave,
just to...
I apologize for turning out this way.
You held high hopes for the future —
I crushed them down,
all in vain.
one by one,
broke the promises we made,
lost your essence,
realized it too late.
Will I disappoint you,
if I became the adult we hated?
In moments of loneliness and despair,
I wish you were here,
to heal the wounds
with your love and care.
I tried to be
what we wished for,
but nothing ever seemed to work.
I brought more trouble.
I asked you to leave,
just to...
#bittersweet
#memories
#regret
#sadness
#SelfReflection
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 12:40pm
8th Jan 2025 12:40pm
Never too late
Never too late
To make new
Friends in our
Lives
Because we
Just have
A few friends
And we want
To increase the number
Of friends
We are going
To take our
Time making new friends
Because we feel that
We should not rush
Making friends
Yes we need to
Chose our friends
And hope that
Our friends will accept
Us the way we are
We are choosing
The middle class
People to be our
Friends
And not the rich
People
Because they
Hate the middle
Class people
To make new
Friends in our
Lives
Because we
Just have
A few friends
And we want
To increase the number
Of friends
We are going
To take our
Time making new friends
Because we feel that
We should not rush
Making friends
Yes we need to
Chose our friends
And hope that
Our friends will accept
Us the way we are
We are choosing
The middle class
People to be our
Friends
And not the rich
People
Because they
Hate the middle
Class people
#boredom
#grief
#loneliness
#regret
#shame
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buddhakitty
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 3:29am
8th Jan 2025 3:29am
let's see who gets it
ours was less a
relationship
and more the battle
of Hastings
and unlike the
Kentucky derby
there was no
runner up
there was only live
to fight another day
...and another
day
...and another
day
...and another
day
I wanted to love
you so badly
...and I did
relationship
and more the battle
of Hastings
and unlike the
Kentucky derby
there was no
runner up
there was only live
to fight another day
...and another
day
...and another
day
...and another
day
I wanted to love
you so badly
...and I did
#conflict
#regret
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fallen_stardust
galaxia
galaxia
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 8:53am
6th Jan 2025 8:53am
Smoked Glass Hearts
Darling,
What was between us, was just glass,
But it was not what we thought it to be.
Transparent, but something askew,
Opaque, but something still there.
We kept burning it with flaws,
So we left the future to repair.
Incandescent screams,
Stabbed winks above.
Darkening our dreams,
I love how we once called this love.
Was it only our fault,
Or was it written in the stars?
Because we were never more than,
Little smoked glass hearts.
What was between us, was just glass,
But it was not what we thought it to be.
Transparent, but something askew,
Opaque, but something still there.
We kept burning it with flaws,
So we left the future to repair.
Incandescent screams,
Stabbed winks above.
Darkening our dreams,
I love how we once called this love.
Was it only our fault,
Or was it written in the stars?
Because we were never more than,
Little smoked glass hearts.
#crush
#love
#regret #separation
#regret #separation
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ThePalestRider
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 9:09pm
5th Jan 2025 9:09pm
Haunted Flurries
I sit by death’s cold door
A certain expiration date
Soon from here, I’ll be no more
Solemnly resigned to fate
Winter winds cold as old sin
Frost blooms on glassy panes
Ice and snow asking to be let in
Blanketing the frozen lanes
I dwell on winters long since passed
On sins and sorrow, deep and raw
Lives traded, cut short too fast
By the flick of pen and manmade law
The scene obscures in icy gales
Thoughts dissolve in the pale frost
What’s this shadow, thin and frail?
A sight that leaves my stomach...
A certain expiration date
Soon from here, I’ll be no more
Solemnly resigned to fate
Winter winds cold as old sin
Frost blooms on glassy panes
Ice and snow asking to be let in
Blanketing the frozen lanes
I dwell on winters long since passed
On sins and sorrow, deep and raw
Lives traded, cut short too fast
By the flick of pen and manmade law
The scene obscures in icy gales
Thoughts dissolve in the pale frost
What’s this shadow, thin and frail?
A sight that leaves my stomach...
#dark
#evil
#ghosts
#morality
#regret
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 8:59pm
5th Jan 2025 8:59pm
Where do I get the courage?
Where do I get the courage?
Where do I get the courage to go on living again?
To come out of my shell?
To pray again?
To smile?
Where do I get the courage to sing again?
Or laugh?
Where do I get the courage to go out again?
To relax again?
To breathe?
Where do I get the courage to love again?
To be free again?
To cook again?
Or look at the blue sky again?
Where do I get the courage to write again?
To wipe out the bad memories?
And put the past behind?
Where do I get the courage to make new friends?
Or...
Where do I get the courage to go on living again?
To come out of my shell?
To pray again?
To smile?
Where do I get the courage to sing again?
Or laugh?
Where do I get the courage to go out again?
To relax again?
To breathe?
Where do I get the courage to love again?
To be free again?
To cook again?
Or look at the blue sky again?
Where do I get the courage to write again?
To wipe out the bad memories?
And put the past behind?
Where do I get the courage to make new friends?
Or...
#disappointment
#emptiness
#loneliness
#regret
#rejection
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Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 2:53am
5th Jan 2025 2:53am
Missed Opportunity
She first saw him at the mall buying clothes.
He noticed her the first day of school.
She liked his hair and smile. He thought, she doesn't hang in cliques...cool! Smart and pretty!
They were both new students.
They had no classes together.
They passed sometimes in the hall.
Omg, his cologne! Dreamy!
I wish I had the nerve to talk to her!
Day, weeks, and months passed by...
they graduated. He heard she got married.
He married a girl from church.
Years went by, and they thought of
each other as a regret for a...
He noticed her the first day of school.
She liked his hair and smile. He thought, she doesn't hang in cliques...cool! Smart and pretty!
They were both new students.
They had no classes together.
They passed sometimes in the hall.
Omg, his cologne! Dreamy!
I wish I had the nerve to talk to her!
Day, weeks, and months passed by...
they graduated. He heard she got married.
He married a girl from church.
Years went by, and they thought of
each other as a regret for a...
#LifeStruggles
#regret
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 11:24pm
3rd Jan 2025 11:24pm
I caught up with you my father
I caught up with you my father
With my prayers lately
Every single night I pray to you my father
I am sorry that took me some time to
Make some time for me to pray to you
It was because I was doing too much
With my life
And only thinking of me all the time
And also putting me first before you
I must tell you father that you are more important
Than me
And I will stop being selfish
Because to tell you the truth
I was not so happy with my life
And I wanted more material things for me
That I could never afford
Because...
With my prayers lately
Every single night I pray to you my father
I am sorry that took me some time to
Make some time for me to pray to you
It was because I was doing too much
With my life
And only thinking of me all the time
And also putting me first before you
I must tell you father that you are more important
Than me
And I will stop being selfish
Because to tell you the truth
I was not so happy with my life
And I wanted more material things for me
That I could never afford
Because...
#anger
#anxiety
#apathy
#loneliness
#regret
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 11:54am
3rd Jan 2025 11:54am
4:36 AM
4:36 am, still can't sleep
I think I did everything completely wrong
All I know is...
When you use to touch me
I would think of all of those different men
Fucking my sister & mother at the same time
My hatred towards them, came out towards you
You're in a much better place now
And so am I
One day if i ever get out, I will visit you, for sure
I think I did everything completely wrong
All I know is...
When you use to touch me
I would think of all of those different men
Fucking my sister & mother at the same time
My hatred towards them, came out towards you
You're in a much better place now
And so am I
One day if i ever get out, I will visit you, for sure
#dark
#memories
#regret #sleep
#regret #sleep
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 1:10pm
2nd Jan 2025 1:10pm
Mein geliebter GOTT
Mein geliebter GOTT
You gave us a wonderful world
For us to live
After you made heaven and earth
Also you had created us after you
Made heaven and earth
The earth you made it
Very well
With flowers by the ocean
Also by the ocean was plenty
Of trees
Some birds you made with your
Holy hands
They already fished their food
To eat
Now they are resting on the tree
Branches
And also singing for us
Their beautiful songs
I personally enjoy hearing the birds
Singing
Now the end of the day ...
You gave us a wonderful world
For us to live
After you made heaven and earth
Also you had created us after you
Made heaven and earth
The earth you made it
Very well
With flowers by the ocean
Also by the ocean was plenty
Of trees
Some birds you made with your
Holy hands
They already fished their food
To eat
Now they are resting on the tree
Branches
And also singing for us
Their beautiful songs
I personally enjoy hearing the birds
Singing
Now the end of the day ...
#dark
#fear
#hate
#loneliness
#regret
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