Quatrain Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
29th Mar 2025 9:12pm
29th Mar 2025 9:12pm
His Totally Hot Dream With Her In It
Jesse stepped out of the room of steam
and saw Perdita standing in the nude
and letting herself smile at the dude
but the alarm woke him from that dream.
and saw Perdita standing in the nude
and letting herself smile at the dude
but the alarm woke him from that dream.
#dreams
#fiction
#friendship
#quatrain
#sex
133 reads
2 Comments
LilDragonFly
Poem Published
31st Jul 2024 00:18am
31st Jul 2024 00:18am
Deadly Seduction
Death finally came for me
to sweep me off of my feet
making the seduction complete
by even penning my elegy
to sweep me off of my feet
making the seduction complete
by even penning my elegy
#cancer
#confessional
#death
#quatrain
#WritingPoetry
17 reads
4 Comments
runaway-mindtrain
Poem Published
5th Aug 2023 6:11am
5th Aug 2023 6:11am
Temple of Fires
Fairy backhand mojo upon a mist transmogrify
Host's talismanic unearth sacred grounded lies
Underground devilry slow illusion slight of trick
Alchemistic charming, no mesmerism will slick
Water altar spring forth from the heavenly gate
Stone-based law bringing evil from unholy hate
Washed in sin arcana fall by a banishing angel
Hellbroth bayard superstition conjuration angle
Disenchantment forming into a wondrous light
Their sightseeing incantational miraculous rite
As the dawn of sacrificial night old heart loom
Burn starts...
Host's talismanic unearth sacred grounded lies
Underground devilry slow illusion slight of trick
Alchemistic charming, no mesmerism will slick
Water altar spring forth from the heavenly gate
Stone-based law bringing evil from unholy hate
Washed in sin arcana fall by a banishing angel
Hellbroth bayard superstition conjuration angle
Disenchantment forming into a wondrous light
Their sightseeing incantational miraculous rite
As the dawn of sacrificial night old heart loom
Burn starts...
#spiritual
#quatrain
426 reads
6 Comments
runaway-mindtrain
Poem Published
28th Nov 2022 3:07am
28th Nov 2022 3:07am
Funk defy your soul
Swag hot feels is all we gonna need
This whacked-out timing to play
Raising fruit from the soulless seed
Words in unknown rhyme today
Tripping upon the bed way too high
Music crunk by a wing and care
Make-believing base words may fly
Hear an angel not a devil's dare
Now we walk their grass a barefoot
Old sacrifice hung in sacred tree
The holiest grounds burnt into soot
Sound of minds, our spirits free
This whacked-out timing to play
Raising fruit from the soulless seed
Words in unknown rhyme today
Tripping upon the bed way too high
Music crunk by a wing and care
Make-believing base words may fly
Hear an angel not a devil's dare
Now we walk their grass a barefoot
Old sacrifice hung in sacred tree
The holiest grounds burnt into soot
Sound of minds, our spirits free
#music
#lyrics
#quatrain
#dark
#spiritual
639 reads
6 Comments
runaway-mindtrain
Poem Published
12th Nov 2022 2:15am
12th Nov 2022 2:15am
Seeing into the dark
Come together like Voltron deep-fried deception
Moby dickhead spectre through anti-truth ocean
As Deja voodoo beat down on a pimp plantation
Lured down denial river flow head game notions
Anti-facts shot in the ass conjuring trick delusion
Woke supremacy buys a cultural arsonist tool kit
Hen house horse shit spins word magic allusions
Perception light filament shows fallacy's holy writ
Moby dickhead spectre through anti-truth ocean
As Deja voodoo beat down on a pimp plantation
Lured down denial river flow head game notions
Anti-facts shot in the ass conjuring trick delusion
Woke supremacy buys a cultural arsonist tool kit
Hen house horse shit spins word magic allusions
Perception light filament shows fallacy's holy writ
#dark
#quatrain
#deception
487 reads
2 Comments
runaway-mindtrain
Poem Published
1st Nov 2022 6:25am
1st Nov 2022 6:25am
Mirrors don't reflect
By stare arcane sightless eyes
Sibylline wiz metapsychic skies
Secret numbered spell to show
Without the unmade God below
Dark scale circle upon linear road
Longest daydreams sun bestowed
Sorcerer's trick cover father's hand
Cryptic recondite outer motherland
Soul will bleed third dimension begun
A godless reflection that beckons none
Self turn center our mirror to never see
Winter cold blow spirit sail aft mental sea
Number grows larger as ratio shrinks small
Infinite large then matching an...
Sibylline wiz metapsychic skies
Secret numbered spell to show
Without the unmade God below
Dark scale circle upon linear road
Longest daydreams sun bestowed
Sorcerer's trick cover father's hand
Cryptic recondite outer motherland
Soul will bleed third dimension begun
A godless reflection that beckons none
Self turn center our mirror to never see
Winter cold blow spirit sail aft mental sea
Number grows larger as ratio shrinks small
Infinite large then matching an...
#universe
#shadows
#spiritual #quatrain
#spiritual #quatrain
475 reads
2 Comments
runaway-mindtrain
Poem Published
23rd Oct 2022 6:13pm
23rd Oct 2022 6:13pm
Placebo affected
If I conversate, then I talk too much
Feelings I'll throw up if I dont speak up
A flaw in this mind soup dispenser
By broke spout, my thought's surrender
Feelings I'll throw up if I dont speak up
A flaw in this mind soup dispenser
By broke spout, my thought's surrender
#limerick
#quatrain
527 reads
6 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
28th Aug 2022 1:39am
28th Aug 2022 1:39am
The Evening Aesthetic
Poetry's vessel must have a sail
For the breeze of inspiration to fill
But when that breeze becomes a full gale
You must have in place some tried and true skill.
Words, of course, must be blue ribbon choice
And not sorry slang from coked up street gangs
Or twitter account for a moron's voice
No better than an animal with fangs.
The sails are like quatrains and stanzas
There to exploit inspiration's storm
That sometimes shows up like ore in bonanzas
Which must be contained in some sort of form!
Who knew content and form could be so...
For the breeze of inspiration to fill
But when that breeze becomes a full gale
You must have in place some tried and true skill.
Words, of course, must be blue ribbon choice
And not sorry slang from coked up street gangs
Or twitter account for a moron's voice
No better than an animal with fangs.
The sails are like quatrains and stanzas
There to exploit inspiration's storm
That sometimes shows up like ore in bonanzas
Which must be contained in some sort of form!
Who knew content and form could be so...
#sonnet
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry #quatrain
#WritingPoetry #quatrain
317 reads
0 Comments
LilDragonFly
Poem Published
27th May 2022 10:09pm
27th May 2022 10:09pm
Elemental
Winds make the rains hush
while muddying the ground
drowning out the sound
of grey burning brush
while muddying the ground
drowning out the sound
of grey burning brush
#earth
#fire
#water
#wind
#quatrain
11 reads
1 Comment
Alan-S-Jeeves
Poem Published
12th Jan 2022 8:45am
12th Jan 2022 8:45am
The Partridege And The Cartridge
Partridge red, how fine you fly;
Winging, gliding up on high.
We, down below as you sweep by,
Esteem the rapture to our eye.
Partridge red, how deft you try
To fill the heavens with your cry;
As you ride so fleet and spry
When for your covey fore you vie.
Partridge red, alert yet shy
I call and wait for your reply.
Alas, I close my eye and sigh
As someone shoots you from the sky.
Winging, gliding up on high.
We, down below as you sweep by,
Esteem the rapture to our eye.
Partridge red, how deft you try
To fill the heavens with your cry;
As you ride so fleet and spry
When for your covey fore you vie.
Partridge red, alert yet shy
I call and wait for your reply.
Alas, I close my eye and sigh
As someone shoots you from the sky.
#quatrain
304 reads
0 Comments
LilDragonFly
Poem Published
10th Oct 2021 8:27pm
10th Oct 2021 8:27pm
Elysium
Where do they go when their ink is brittle dry
all of this parchment yellowed and also torn
to be forever safe from days thus forlorn...
penning clouds into poems across the sky
all of this parchment yellowed and also torn
to be forever safe from days thus forlorn...
penning clouds into poems across the sky
#memorial
#quatrain
15 reads
0 Comments
LilDragonFly
Poem Published
2nd Oct 2021 2:38pm
2nd Oct 2021 2:38pm
The Gloam
My evening sky floods so full
with soft bands of violet light
I feel their most gentle pull
as day does retreat from night
with soft bands of violet light
I feel their most gentle pull
as day does retreat from night
#quatrain
#sky
#night
#nature
#confessional
14 reads
3 Comments
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