Poems About Pollution Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about pollution seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
naijapoeteket
Poem Published
7th Apr 2021 7:31am
7th Apr 2021 7:31am
Closed
The affair of wee mortals
With our planet has gone awry again;
Crabby like the acrid taste of long kept palm wine.
We mask our depredation with mendacious diplomacy.
Hence this social distance between us and Earth.
Suddenly the world is shut.
And we are the incarcerated Homo sapiens
Of modern day cave men.
Empty park benches in empty parks;
Empty dusty pews in empty cathedrals;
Empty classrooms in empty citadels of learning;
Empty liquid soap and sanitizer cans everywhere;
Used face-masks litter the street corners.
...
With our planet has gone awry again;
Crabby like the acrid taste of long kept palm wine.
We mask our depredation with mendacious diplomacy.
Hence this social distance between us and Earth.
Suddenly the world is shut.
And we are the incarcerated Homo sapiens
Of modern day cave men.
Empty park benches in empty parks;
Empty dusty pews in empty cathedrals;
Empty classrooms in empty citadels of learning;
Empty liquid soap and sanitizer cans everywhere;
Used face-masks litter the street corners.
...
#pollution
#pandemic
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fields_broke
Poem Published
24th Feb 2021 00:48am
24th Feb 2021 00:48am
cortina
Pest ...the rats nest and the dogs rest you,
the take
with your boots worn ledgered and tight.
Ankle sawn, ripped down to the bud
of a hare's view, of hounds in their night mare.
Hungers drugged in pot'skin boiling soothing stew...
We clear the woods...the fields are nought haugh
the draining ditches are clean and free
out from the noon and peacocks 'sun
(in from the cunt of the moon, a whole white calf
.. half life/death, a quarter of nail light
in hungover views)
the frail spring sun has pale...
the take
with your boots worn ledgered and tight.
Ankle sawn, ripped down to the bud
of a hare's view, of hounds in their night mare.
Hungers drugged in pot'skin boiling soothing stew...
We clear the woods...the fields are nought haugh
the draining ditches are clean and free
out from the noon and peacocks 'sun
(in from the cunt of the moon, a whole white calf
.. half life/death, a quarter of nail light
in hungover views)
the frail spring sun has pale...
#forest
#environment
#pollution #nature
#pollution #nature
763 reads
3 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
19th Feb 2021 9:15pm
19th Feb 2021 9:15pm
What Is My Poetry?
My poetry is a radical voice against evil men and their systems.
It openly challenges the wicked and heartless political leaders.
It exposes the corruption and the oppressive laws of the governments.
And it attacks the system of education that brainwashes the people.
My poetry criticizes false religion and its dogmatic teachings.
It denounces the militaries and all the other warmongers.
It does not condone police brutality and extrajudicial killings.
And it disgraces the greedy persons who run commercial enterprises.
My poetry does not...
It openly challenges the wicked and heartless political leaders.
It exposes the corruption and the oppressive laws of the governments.
And it attacks the system of education that brainwashes the people.
My poetry criticizes false religion and its dogmatic teachings.
It denounces the militaries and all the other warmongers.
It does not condone police brutality and extrajudicial killings.
And it disgraces the greedy persons who run commercial enterprises.
My poetry does not...
#corruption
#abuse
#politics
#pollution
#greed
415 reads
3 Comments
hanagara
Poem Published
13th Jan 2021 9:18am
13th Jan 2021 9:18am
Crystal seems to be good for corona!
I will write this in a hurry.
I draw the line correctly,
There is also I respect, and sorrow.
I can't see anything
Look at everything,
If I look.
Please remember
Crystal seems to be good for corona.
It seems that the beginning was part of reflection and introspection,
in addition
"hatred"
There was a change to a natural disaster
Being sincere from a lie
At first, scholars thought of "words"...
I draw the line correctly,
There is also I respect, and sorrow.
I can't see anything
Look at everything,
If I look.
Please remember
Crystal seems to be good for corona.
It seems that the beginning was part of reflection and introspection,
in addition
"hatred"
There was a change to a natural disaster
Being sincere from a lie
At first, scholars thought of "words"...
#pollution
#morality
#apathy
#responsibility
#risk
322 reads
2 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2021 11:44am
2nd Jan 2021 11:44am
Poom From An All-Inclusive Fool
there we go as here we went,
motley muddle (as wit)
persistent killer poodle
(dawg)
my mind is on the edge
on the edge of death, on
the edge.......and i suppose
you do not approve to such
thinkering...........so, by what
is this disproven approval
supposed to profit you? I won't
take it wit me when i go, go,
go for gone, for good, for better
or for worse the sickness worse
my health, richer for poorer, in war
and in peace, (more likely of war),
the war where Every Thing explodes
in accord wit well...
motley muddle (as wit)
persistent killer poodle
(dawg)
my mind is on the edge
on the edge of death, on
the edge.......and i suppose
you do not approve to such
thinkering...........so, by what
is this disproven approval
supposed to profit you? I won't
take it wit me when i go, go,
go for gone, for good, for better
or for worse the sickness worse
my health, richer for poorer, in war
and in peace, (more likely of war),
the war where Every Thing explodes
in accord wit well...
#dreams
#war
#death
#environment
#pollution
415 reads
9 Comments
Thyn_Bandwagon
Drew Jenkins
Drew Jenkins
Poem Published
1st Dec 2020 7:31pm
1st Dec 2020 7:31pm
Ikeya Zhang
I visit again this far away land
Its creatures spread far and wide
Only a glance, and I am gone
Come back and have barely scanned
They cross the great blue tide
One submitting to the others brawn
I come again a place so grand
A species so starry eyed
But so poorly their path is drawn
Sand
Everything dyed
Spent on a con
Its creatures spread far and wide
Only a glance, and I am gone
Come back and have barely scanned
They cross the great blue tide
One submitting to the others brawn
I come again a place so grand
A species so starry eyed
But so poorly their path is drawn
Sand
Everything dyed
Spent on a con
#earth
#pollution
#stars
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0 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
5th Nov 2020 3:19am
5th Nov 2020 3:19am
Nov 4 2020 10:03pm (else'where)
Our
pres
si
dent
r a g es
( on
his way
down ).
I (aye'eye) drink
s p a r
kling
pr o bio
tic dr'ink
...
pres
si
dent
r a g es
( on
his way
down ).
I (aye'eye) drink
s p a r
kling
pr o bio
tic dr'ink
...
#corruption
#politics
#pollution
#greed
#tea
364 reads
6 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
26th Oct 2020 3:06pm
26th Oct 2020 3:06pm
Another Piece Of Trash, Junk, Garbage, Interplanetary Rape, etc.
When all is s
a
i
d
and done...." / Say what? / All ways groping
for the latest in
fabricated
solutions /
easy-does-it, single-use plastics----of which
demand should...
a
i
d
and done...." / Say what? / All ways groping
for the latest in
fabricated
solutions /
easy-does-it, single-use plastics----of which
demand should...
#secrets
#lies
#environment
#pollution
#consumerism
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6 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
6th Oct 2020 10:07am
6th Oct 2020 10:07am
dkzk's Great Communications #6578 / Presidently Ruminations:2020 /rewritten version
Rewritten a wee bit on tuesday
I can't help but question the level of honesty of anyone who does what he does because he cannot stand the fact he's inherited male pattern baldness in his genes. Fuck that silliness. Fuck artificial youth! (I'm bald and I wouldn't pay a penny over $59,OOO a year for hair maintenance.
I'm "ashamed"** of being white, so should I paint my ass black?
This guy gets all the more disgusting the way he uses these lame props for photo ops, & the same for his supporters who like the vile things he says, and the way he disrespects...
I can't help but question the level of honesty of anyone who does what he does because he cannot stand the fact he's inherited male pattern baldness in his genes. Fuck that silliness. Fuck artificial youth! (I'm bald and I wouldn't pay a penny over $59,OOO a year for hair maintenance.
I'm "ashamed"** of being white, so should I paint my ass black?
This guy gets all the more disgusting the way he uses these lame props for photo ops, & the same for his supporters who like the vile things he says, and the way he disrespects...
#corruption
#politics
#pollution
#racism
#pandemic
416 reads
5 Comments
nomoth
Poem Published
20th Sep 2020 11:57am
20th Sep 2020 11:57am
milkstone and pumice
visual for Yeats cc comp
#environment
#pollution
#God
#StreamOfConsciousness
#WilliamButlerYeats
582 reads
6 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
25th Aug 2020 7:42am
25th Aug 2020 7:42am
P'art Three - - Bro Took an Old Man to the Beach yesterday. ~FINALE~
photo: Jacksonville Beach, 22aug2020by dkzk
Beach beach beach
beachy keen monster
hotels & conconcondos reaching for the
heavens.....Would Jesus live there if he could ?
Damn straight he would. Jesus knows
Q u a l i t y
when he sees it. He told me so as i delivered my
NY Posts
to my dear neighbors and confidants, and exiled Royalists.
BeachbeachbeachBEACH, f'chrisakes We (must) know...
Beach beach beach
beachy keen monster
hotels & conconcondos reaching for the
heavens.....Would Jesus live there if he could ?
Damn straight he would. Jesus knows
Q u a l i t y
when he sees it. He told me so as i delivered my
NY Posts
to my dear neighbors and confidants, and exiled Royalists.
BeachbeachbeachBEACH, f'chrisakes We (must) know...
#corruption
#earth
#environment
#pollution
#God
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3 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
24th Aug 2020 5:35pm
24th Aug 2020 5:35pm
Self Poom - Bro Took an Old Man to the Beach yesterday**
Pleas excuse me, but this poom may have little or nothing to do wit the title**
looking for some love to
look at him (without being
paid to do so),
the camera pans to "oh beautiful
for spacious skies"
fulla carbon rot coming down to
be breathed by children &
us elder-childrens, and Every Body
that our wholly god ever done
created.
I used to be loved.
i used to be respected'
My words used to be listened to.
My...
looking for some love to
look at him (without being
paid to do so),
the camera pans to "oh beautiful
for spacious skies"
fulla carbon rot coming down to
be breathed by children &
us elder-childrens, and Every Body
that our wholly god ever done
created.
I used to be loved.
i used to be respected'
My words used to be listened to.
My...
#love
#earth
#environment
#pollution
#peace
408 reads
2 Comments
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