Poems About Patience by Top Critiquers
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Poems about patience by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
26th Jan 2021 2:11pm
26th Jan 2021 2:11pm
dear lord
in the eternal ether, the darkness grows
greedy in its intent, it presses in on me
it hurts, it reasons evolution of the fittest
time is infinite
pain is a key ingredient to soul growth
the testing of patience brings to fruition clarity
pain in e minor
delicate notes flow through me
hurt turns within
uncertainty fucks with me
I don't what the future holds
am I resilient enough to stand come what may?
my patience is lacking
my anger unchecked
repressed and masked
so volatile with the least shake ...
greedy in its intent, it presses in on me
it hurts, it reasons evolution of the fittest
time is infinite
pain is a key ingredient to soul growth
the testing of patience brings to fruition clarity
pain in e minor
delicate notes flow through me
hurt turns within
uncertainty fucks with me
I don't what the future holds
am I resilient enough to stand come what may?
my patience is lacking
my anger unchecked
repressed and masked
so volatile with the least shake ...
#love
#spiritual
#patience
411 reads
8 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
26th Dec 2024 10:12pm
26th Dec 2024 10:12pm
SUBMISSION OF THE HEART
What will it take for you to be on a submission with honesty and truth and trust. 💗 For let's take it farther than what we say and do, for after all our actions will speak louder than our own words. THAT may not carry true value at first, as we exchange our thoughts and insight and ideas. The real true potential of our realness of our strength and courage and perseverance. Which
with the honesty and truth and trust, to be able to share our lives together as one. For God Almighty by the grace of his power and blessings, 🙏 will change the situation around and rewrite, the...
with the honesty and truth and trust, to be able to share our lives together as one. For God Almighty by the grace of his power and blessings, 🙏 will change the situation around and rewrite, the...
#courage
#honesty
#kindness
#patience
#spiritual
68 reads
0 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
19th Aug 2018 00:31am
19th Aug 2018 00:31am
Hourglass
When negativity senses
vibrations of sand
escaping the hour glass--
it hastens advancement;
Granules become barbs
malformed reminders
puncturing the calender
of its personal agenda;
their swollen restiveness
a relentless testament
of deflated attempts
Artists tumble ahead
despite resistance
Because. . .
Wisdom survives history:
suffering maltreatment
forgoing vengeance
patiently awaiting
that final grain
to drop thru
the pass
delivering Us
from...
vibrations of sand
escaping the hour glass--
it hastens advancement;
Granules become barbs
malformed reminders
puncturing the calender
of its personal agenda;
their swollen restiveness
a relentless testament
of deflated attempts
Artists tumble ahead
despite resistance
Because. . .
Wisdom survives history:
suffering maltreatment
forgoing vengeance
patiently awaiting
that final grain
to drop thru
the pass
delivering Us
from...
#hope
#inspirational
#faith
#spiritual
#patience
943 reads
14 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
9th Aug 2022 10:40pm
9th Aug 2022 10:40pm
Jailhouse Rock
English courts are stars and garters
As American courts give fines
Mostly to trailer park martyrs
When an indiscretion inclines.
So why are the English better
In matters of jurisprudence
Like timely use of a fetter
Or, implementation of fence?
I suspect old puritan stock
And all their angry descendants
Perversely crave to punish a flock
Of low rent codependents.
But now that the internet's here
They can worship something gracious
Such as a midnight sonneteer
And his elegance capacious,
Which recommends more...
As American courts give fines
Mostly to trailer park martyrs
When an indiscretion inclines.
So why are the English better
In matters of jurisprudence
Like timely use of a fetter
Or, implementation of fence?
I suspect old puritan stock
And all their angry descendants
Perversely crave to punish a flock
Of low rent codependents.
But now that the internet's here
They can worship something gracious
Such as a midnight sonneteer
And his elegance capacious,
Which recommends more...
#conflict
#patience
#PowerOfWords
319 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 2:20pm
2nd Dec 2024 2:20pm
Affirmations
Dreams fill your nights with all secrets you hide.
The ghosts that wander through your mind.
Whispers of your past you hear in the dark.
People that touched deepest corners of your heart.
A place where you let your thoughts roam free.
Scars you carry that no one else can see.
Things you loved so fiercely it left you in ruins.
Songs you sing when the world is not in tune.
Fears keep you awake when the night is still.
No moments of joy make your heart truly thrill.
Someone you ever felt a connection so profound. ...
The ghosts that wander through your mind.
Whispers of your past you hear in the dark.
People that touched deepest corners of your heart.
A place where you let your thoughts roam free.
Scars you carry that no one else can see.
Things you loved so fiercely it left you in ruins.
Songs you sing when the world is not in tune.
Fears keep you awake when the night is still.
No moments of joy make your heart truly thrill.
Someone you ever felt a connection so profound. ...
#confessional
#humankind
#identity
#myself
#patience
93 reads
6 Comments
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 7:48am
6th Oct 2024 7:48am
first kiss
remember
those
experiences
that lead
to that
first kiss,
waiting,
aging, then
near
ripening,
those
moments
like sharing
awkward
fruit, better
to use
it before
they spoil.
those
experiences
that lead
to that
first kiss,
waiting,
aging, then
near
ripening,
those
moments
like sharing
awkward
fruit, better
to use
it before
they spoil.
#courage
#patience
#relationships
#romantic
#wisdom
206 reads
10 Comments
Styxian
Poem Published
30th Jul 2023 8:16pm
30th Jul 2023 8:16pm
Word Of Mouth
I learned early;
If you can't read the writing on the wall,
it's because you're standing
too close to the wall.
Staying back, there's knowledge in distance.
Because intimacy brings a different awareness,
when my words have my mouth to hamper
any given wisdom.
So it's best to be quiet, while eyes collide
within or without, understanding.
It's easy to speak when I'm cold.
I can sit with all who shiver,
as my stutter blends with theirs,
blaming the current predicament.
Language is an evolution ...
If you can't read the writing on the wall,
it's because you're standing
too close to the wall.
Staying back, there's knowledge in distance.
Because intimacy brings a different awareness,
when my words have my mouth to hamper
any given wisdom.
So it's best to be quiet, while eyes collide
within or without, understanding.
It's easy to speak when I'm cold.
I can sit with all who shiver,
as my stutter blends with theirs,
blaming the current predicament.
Language is an evolution ...
#kindness
#romantic
#patience
537 reads
17 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
27th Apr 2023 2:21am
27th Apr 2023 2:21am
Call centre
I am on hold
with music that is
intended to calm me
I will stay bold
for I am not calmed
I remain (politely) enraged
I’ll not be subdued
though two chats aborted
I have been persistent
No need to be rude
this is a new person
so let us start fresh
I need not plead
for my case is strong
and you will not thwart me
I plan to succeed
not pay one more penny
for your fake “free trial”
with music that is
intended to calm me
I will stay bold
for I am not calmed
I remain (politely) enraged
I’ll not be subdued
though two chats aborted
I have been persistent
No need to be rude
this is a new person
so let us start fresh
I need not plead
for my case is strong
and you will not thwart me
I plan to succeed
not pay one more penny
for your fake “free trial”
#patience
#frustration
#NaPoWriMo2023
287 reads
4 Comments
Lilliputian
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2024 9:27pm
2nd Nov 2024 9:27pm
Frayed
A frayed rope
held by thin thread,
on the brink of tattering.
I’m baffled
at how it hasn’t
snapped already.
held by thin thread,
on the brink of tattering.
I’m baffled
at how it hasn’t
snapped already.
#patience
#tolerance
78 reads
buddhakitty
Poem Published
17th Apr 2022 6:11pm
17th Apr 2022 6:11pm
climbing the summit
regardless of our
flaws
inspite of our
eccentricities
never mind our
neuroticism,
weirdness
our ancient hatreds,
perversions,
mutilation,
indifferences,
evils, warring,
hypocrisy,corruptions,
murders, plotting,
insanities, genocides,
all the excess, depravity
and villainy in the
human soul
there is nothing
more hideously
beautiful than
the human
animal
we all arrive at the ...
flaws
inspite of our
eccentricities
never mind our
neuroticism,
weirdness
our ancient hatreds,
perversions,
mutilation,
indifferences,
evils, warring,
hypocrisy,corruptions,
murders, plotting,
insanities, genocides,
all the excess, depravity
and villainy in the
human soul
there is nothing
more hideously
beautiful than
the human
animal
we all arrive at the ...
#courage
#patience
#honesty #hypocrisy
#honesty #hypocrisy
390 reads
6 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
30th Apr 2024 3:33am
30th Apr 2024 3:33am
By My Side
It was in those days of youth
When my emotions had held me loyal and true
And though a mountain range of obstacles lay ahead
I just knew that patience would eventually pay off
I waited and waited for her
But the choices we made carved a different path
And we went our separate and distant ways
Far apart and yet still closer to the heart
And it was after a decade
That upon seeing her face again I knew it was real
That ember never died inside of me
Remembering the emotion with all its intensity
Our time had finally...
When my emotions had held me loyal and true
And though a mountain range of obstacles lay ahead
I just knew that patience would eventually pay off
I waited and waited for her
But the choices we made carved a different path
And we went our separate and distant ways
Far apart and yet still closer to the heart
And it was after a decade
That upon seeing her face again I knew it was real
That ember never died inside of me
Remembering the emotion with all its intensity
Our time had finally...
#fate
#LifeStruggles
#patience
195 reads
2 Comments
Marks
Poem Published
5th Nov 2020 00:21am
5th Nov 2020 00:21am
Bar...
.. ...
Bar...
Voices from the tables
Plain conversation
Obvious talk
Bar...
Wasting my manliness
Wasting my time
Life is alive outside
Like acoustic guitar strings
Like an answering machine
Would the waitress call to say hi ?
She might become a must in the night
Longing for a song
Longing for a poem
Bar ...
Bar on the corner
Evening fading away too fast
Over there outside
... ...
Bar...
Voices from the tables
Plain conversation
Obvious talk
Bar...
Wasting my manliness
Wasting my time
Life is alive outside
Like acoustic guitar strings
Like an answering machine
Would the waitress call to say hi ?
She might become a must in the night
Longing for a song
Longing for a poem
Bar ...
Bar on the corner
Evening fading away too fast
Over there outside
... ...
#patience
#escape
#dating #boredom
#dating #boredom
648 reads
10 Comments
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