Poems About Patience by Top Critiquers
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Poems about patience by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
dear lord
in the eternal ether, the darkness grows
greedy in its intent, it presses in on me
it hurts, it reasons evolution of the fittest
time is infinite
pain is a key ingredient to soul growth
the testing of patience brings to fruition clarity
pain in e minor
delicate notes flow through me
hurt turns within
uncertainty fucks with me
I don't what the future holds
am I resilient enough to stand come what may?
my patience is lacking
my anger unchecked
repressed and masked
so volatile with the least shake ...
greedy in its intent, it presses in on me
it hurts, it reasons evolution of the fittest
time is infinite
pain is a key ingredient to soul growth
the testing of patience brings to fruition clarity
pain in e minor
delicate notes flow through me
hurt turns within
uncertainty fucks with me
I don't what the future holds
am I resilient enough to stand come what may?
my patience is lacking
my anger unchecked
repressed and masked
so volatile with the least shake ...
#love
#spiritual
#patience
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8 Comments
Hourglass
When negativity senses
vibrations of sand
escaping the hour glass--
it hastens advancement;
Granules become barbs
malformed reminders
puncturing the calender
of its personal agenda;
their swollen restiveness
a relentless testament
of deflated attempts
Artists tumble ahead
despite resistance
Because. . .
Wisdom survives history:
suffering maltreatment
forgoing vengeance
patiently awaiting
that final grain
to drop thru
the pass
delivering Us
from...
vibrations of sand
escaping the hour glass--
it hastens advancement;
Granules become barbs
malformed reminders
puncturing the calender
of its personal agenda;
their swollen restiveness
a relentless testament
of deflated attempts
Artists tumble ahead
despite resistance
Because. . .
Wisdom survives history:
suffering maltreatment
forgoing vengeance
patiently awaiting
that final grain
to drop thru
the pass
delivering Us
from...
#hope
#inspirational
#faith
#spiritual
#patience
933 reads
14 Comments
Jailhouse Rock
English courts are stars and garters
As American courts give fines
Mostly to trailer park martyrs
When an indiscretion inclines.
So why are the English better
In matters of jurisprudence
Like timely use of a fetter
Or, implementation of fence?
I suspect old puritan stock
And all their angry descendants
Perversely crave to punish a flock
Of low rent codependents.
But now that the internet's here
They can worship something gracious
Such as a midnight sonneteer
And his elegance capacious,
Which recommends more...
As American courts give fines
Mostly to trailer park martyrs
When an indiscretion inclines.
So why are the English better
In matters of jurisprudence
Like timely use of a fetter
Or, implementation of fence?
I suspect old puritan stock
And all their angry descendants
Perversely crave to punish a flock
Of low rent codependents.
But now that the internet's here
They can worship something gracious
Such as a midnight sonneteer
And his elegance capacious,
Which recommends more...
#conflict
#patience
#PowerOfWords
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0 Comments
AS THE TIDES TURN
As the tides turn into a new world order for yesterday I was healthy and strong, yet that has changed as my body has been attack by different stages of cancer. For now I no longer will have to just work through the process of learning the new, but how much I can improve on the quality of my own life itself as I am going through these trying times. For example as I continue to work with my cancer treatments, as there has been a few ups and downs I have my good days and my bad days. Yet I refuse to lost hope that one day I will get better for my life, for there is no cure for stage 4 cancer...
#strength
#courage
#BestFriend
#friendship
#patience
633 reads
2 Comments
first kiss
remember
those
experiences
that lead
to that
first kiss,
waiting,
aging, then
near
ripening,
those
moments
like sharing
awkward
fruit, better
to use
it before
they spoil.
those
experiences
that lead
to that
first kiss,
waiting,
aging, then
near
ripening,
those
moments
like sharing
awkward
fruit, better
to use
it before
they spoil.
#courage
#patience
#relationships
#romantic
#wisdom
164 reads
10 Comments
By My Side
It was in those days of youth
When my emotions had held me loyal and true
And though a mountain range of obstacles lay ahead
I just knew that patience would eventually pay off
I waited and waited for her
But the choices we made carved a different path
And we went our separate and distant ways
Far apart and yet still closer to the heart
And it was after a decade
That upon seeing her face again I knew it was real
That ember never died inside of me
Remembering the emotion with all its intensity
Our time had finally...
When my emotions had held me loyal and true
And though a mountain range of obstacles lay ahead
I just knew that patience would eventually pay off
I waited and waited for her
But the choices we made carved a different path
And we went our separate and distant ways
Far apart and yet still closer to the heart
And it was after a decade
That upon seeing her face again I knew it was real
That ember never died inside of me
Remembering the emotion with all its intensity
Our time had finally...
#fate
#LifeStruggles
#patience
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2 Comments
Word Of Mouth
I learned early;
If you can't read the writing on the wall,
it's because you're standing
too close to the wall.
Staying back, there's knowledge in distance.
Because intimacy brings a different awareness,
when my words have my mouth to hamper
any given wisdom.
So it's best to be quiet, while eyes collide
within or without, understanding.
It's easy to speak when I'm cold.
I can sit with all who shiver,
as my stutter blends with theirs,
blaming the current predicament.
Language is an evolution ...
If you can't read the writing on the wall,
it's because you're standing
too close to the wall.
Staying back, there's knowledge in distance.
Because intimacy brings a different awareness,
when my words have my mouth to hamper
any given wisdom.
So it's best to be quiet, while eyes collide
within or without, understanding.
It's easy to speak when I'm cold.
I can sit with all who shiver,
as my stutter blends with theirs,
blaming the current predicament.
Language is an evolution ...
#kindness
#romantic
#patience
510 reads
17 Comments
Affirmations
Dreams fill your nights with all secrets you hide.
The ghosts that wander through your mind.
Whispers of your past you hear in the dark.
People that touched deepest corners of your heart.
A place where you let your thoughts roam free.
Scars you carry that no one else can see.
Things you loved so fiercely it left you in ruins.
Songs you sing when the world is not in tune.
Fears keep you awake when the night is still.
No moments of joy make your heart truly thrill.
Someone you ever felt a connection so profound. ...
The ghosts that wander through your mind.
Whispers of your past you hear in the dark.
People that touched deepest corners of your heart.
A place where you let your thoughts roam free.
Scars you carry that no one else can see.
Things you loved so fiercely it left you in ruins.
Songs you sing when the world is not in tune.
Fears keep you awake when the night is still.
No moments of joy make your heart truly thrill.
Someone you ever felt a connection so profound. ...
#confessional
#humankind
#identity
#myself
#patience
40 reads
6 Comments
Call centre
I am on hold
with music that is
intended to calm me
I will stay bold
for I am not calmed
I remain (politely) enraged
I’ll not be subdued
though two chats aborted
I have been persistent
No need to be rude
this is a new person
so let us start fresh
I need not plead
for my case is strong
and you will not thwart me
I plan to succeed
not pay one more penny
for your fake “free trial”
with music that is
intended to calm me
I will stay bold
for I am not calmed
I remain (politely) enraged
I’ll not be subdued
though two chats aborted
I have been persistent
No need to be rude
this is a new person
so let us start fresh
I need not plead
for my case is strong
and you will not thwart me
I plan to succeed
not pay one more penny
for your fake “free trial”
#patience
#frustration
#NaPoWriMo2023
268 reads
4 Comments
Meet Me Here
in the
aftermath of lovemaking
we make new love
basking in serene silence
at love's twilight
where the Sun and the horizon
meet and greet in their eternal dance
as the sky kisses the ocean and
the sea kisses the shore
eye kiss you in delightful honor
of the cycle of love
aftermath of lovemaking
we make new love
basking in serene silence
at love's twilight
where the Sun and the horizon
meet and greet in their eternal dance
as the sky kisses the ocean and
the sea kisses the shore
eye kiss you in delightful honor
of the cycle of love
#love
#silence
#nature #patience
#nature #patience
627 reads
5 Comments
Frayed
A frayed rope
held by thin thread,
on the brink of tattering.
I’m baffled
at how it hasn’t
snapped already.
held by thin thread,
on the brink of tattering.
I’m baffled
at how it hasn’t
snapped already.
#patience
#tolerance
60 reads
A Stark Reminder
To myself-
What you are waiting for
Isn't going to get here
Until it gets here
Be patient-
It will find you
What you are waiting for
Isn't going to get here
Until it gets here
Be patient-
It will find you
#patience
#SelfReflection
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12 Comments
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