Poems About Patience by Top Critiquers
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Poems about patience by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Dreams before Screams
if you have a dream you have to follow it:
do not put it off for another day.
if you want to scream you have to swallow it:
wait until you have another way.
do not put it off for another day.
if you want to scream you have to swallow it:
wait until you have another way.
#motivational
#patience
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I know witches
who like concoctions
but they don't have
any vegan options!
I know bitches
who like production
but they have no
sense of fashion!
I know assholes
who ask for emotion
but they have no
any good duration!
I know some moles
who dig big suction
but they have no
lasting long action!
I know many others
that keep in motion
but their heat has no
effect of induction!
who like concoctions
but they don't have
any vegan options!
I know bitches
who like production
but they have no
sense of fashion!
I know assholes
who ask for emotion
but they have no
any good duration!
I know some moles
who dig big suction
but they have no
lasting long action!
I know many others
that keep in motion
but their heat has no
effect of induction!
#universe
#patience
#WritingPoetry
#PopCulture
#seductive
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Tell Me Everything
#BDSM
#patience
#honesty
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Bar...
.. ...
Bar...
Voices from the tables
Plain conversation
Obvious talk
Bar...
Wasting my manliness
Wasting my time
Life is alive outside
Like acoustic guitar strings
Like an answering machine
Would the waitress call to say hi ?
She might become a must in the night
Longing for a song
Longing for a poem
Bar ...
Bar on the corner
Evening fading away too fast
Over there outside
... ...
Bar...
Voices from the tables
Plain conversation
Obvious talk
Bar...
Wasting my manliness
Wasting my time
Life is alive outside
Like acoustic guitar strings
Like an answering machine
Would the waitress call to say hi ?
She might become a must in the night
Longing for a song
Longing for a poem
Bar ...
Bar on the corner
Evening fading away too fast
Over there outside
... ...
#patience
#escape
#dating #boredom
#dating #boredom
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After Party
Darkness slid into the icy water,
damaged hands gripped porcelain,
old ink looked hard on tightening skin,
she floated, nose and eyes above the surface,
body worse than she had feared,
muscle defined by cuts and bruises,
the cold forced swollen tissue to conform.
It was time,
she stands naked—trembles on marble tiles
water running from her feet
following grout lines into dead pools.
staring at the hard wall
as she dressed in the half-light.
Unable to face the passenger in the mirror,...
damaged hands gripped porcelain,
old ink looked hard on tightening skin,
she floated, nose and eyes above the surface,
body worse than she had feared,
muscle defined by cuts and bruises,
the cold forced swollen tissue to conform.
It was time,
she stands naked—trembles on marble tiles
water running from her feet
following grout lines into dead pools.
staring at the hard wall
as she dressed in the half-light.
Unable to face the passenger in the mirror,...
#patience
#determination
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If you can't save me, take me
Why you never there?
I've been patient
And praying
But you never seem to care.
Why is it that I want you
you are never there?
I'm bitter,
I'm angry
And even when I turn my back on you.
You don't seem to care.
I looked for you everywhere
I stayed in faith even when it hurt.
Set my eyes on you and nobody else.
I gave you everything until I had nothing left.
Why is it that I got nothing in return?
They say you're quick to hear,
But you take time to respond.
I don't think I...
I've been patient
And praying
But you never seem to care.
Why is it that I want you
you are never there?
I'm bitter,
I'm angry
And even when I turn my back on you.
You don't seem to care.
I looked for you everywhere
I stayed in faith even when it hurt.
Set my eyes on you and nobody else.
I gave you everything until I had nothing left.
Why is it that I got nothing in return?
They say you're quick to hear,
But you take time to respond.
I don't think I...
#LifeStruggles
#faith
#patience #hypocrisy
#patience #hypocrisy
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In a Covid Fever
I caught him wandering
around the kitchen
at 3 o'clock in the morning,
trying to figure out how to fry bacon.
Except the only thing he was actually doing
was fiddling around in there by the refrigerator
and waking me up; talking about how
he's trying to figure out how to fry bacon.
around the kitchen
at 3 o'clock in the morning,
trying to figure out how to fry bacon.
Except the only thing he was actually doing
was fiddling around in there by the refrigerator
and waking me up; talking about how
he's trying to figure out how to fry bacon.
#food
#patience
#illness
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Waiting
I have been waiting,
waiting for all eternity,
watching suns grow dim and galaxies born,
through all the long march of time,
I have always been here,
simply waiting,
for your gentle touch of hidden steel
waiting for your loving soul and the feral spirit within,
possessing the power to destroy,
yet choosing to heal,
I am waiting for magic and gods,
and humanity to emerge from the dark,
that I might hold your flame and be reborn
into a world of our creation, ...
waiting for all eternity,
watching suns grow dim and galaxies born,
through all the long march of time,
I have always been here,
simply waiting,
for your gentle touch of hidden steel
waiting for your loving soul and the feral spirit within,
possessing the power to destroy,
yet choosing to heal,
I am waiting for magic and gods,
and humanity to emerge from the dark,
that I might hold your flame and be reborn
into a world of our creation, ...
#love
#hope
#patience
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I Am the Sky
You are the sky- everything else is just the weather”
Is what I’d always hear from my loving parents
“Don’t take no for an answer; the sky is your only limit”
Just like the gentle wind, life is a constant movement.
-
Up in the heavens is where I want to be
Have my life-story shared among the stars
I want to be a hero, just like Hercules
Yet my parents always said: “We love you just the way you are.”
-
I want to become as mighty as Zeus
Throw down my obstacles with lightning bolts
Push back all oppression and rise above the smoke ...
Is what I’d always hear from my loving parents
“Don’t take no for an answer; the sky is your only limit”
Just like the gentle wind, life is a constant movement.
-
Up in the heavens is where I want to be
Have my life-story shared among the stars
I want to be a hero, just like Hercules
Yet my parents always said: “We love you just the way you are.”
-
I want to become as mighty as Zeus
Throw down my obstacles with lightning bolts
Push back all oppression and rise above the smoke ...
#strength
#hope
#patience
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