Poems About Patience by Top Critiquers
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Poems about patience by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Dreams before Screams
if you have a dream you have to follow it:
do not put it off for another day.
if you want to scream you have to swallow it:
wait until you have another way.
do not put it off for another day.
if you want to scream you have to swallow it:
wait until you have another way.
#motivational
#patience
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If you can't save me, take me
Why you never there?
I've been patient
And praying
But you never seem to care.
Why is it that I want you
you are never there?
I'm bitter,
I'm angry
And even when I turn my back on you.
You don't seem to care.
I looked for you everywhere
I stayed in faith even when it hurt.
Set my eyes on you and nobody else.
I gave you everything until I had nothing left.
Why is it that I got nothing in return?
They say you're quick to hear,
But you take time to respond.
I don't think I...
I've been patient
And praying
But you never seem to care.
Why is it that I want you
you are never there?
I'm bitter,
I'm angry
And even when I turn my back on you.
You don't seem to care.
I looked for you everywhere
I stayed in faith even when it hurt.
Set my eyes on you and nobody else.
I gave you everything until I had nothing left.
Why is it that I got nothing in return?
They say you're quick to hear,
But you take time to respond.
I don't think I...
#LifeStruggles
#faith
#patience #hypocrisy
#patience #hypocrisy
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When the Flip
When the Flip
I can remember
when the flip
happened.
What was beautiful inverted
with what was not.
Beauty
turned its back
on me,
believing the slick
words
of others.
What had never
been given
a spark
of notice
became my muse.
In my wretchedness,
I was accepted.
That became
the appex
of beauty.
I can remember
when the flip
happened.
What was beautiful inverted
with what was not.
Beauty
turned its back
on me,
believing the slick
words
of others.
What had never
been given
a spark
of notice
became my muse.
In my wretchedness,
I was accepted.
That became
the appex
of beauty.
#patience
#honesty
#sacrifice
#wisdom
#tolerance
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A Stark Reminder
To myself-
What you are waiting for
Isn't going to get here
Until it gets here
Be patient-
It will find you
What you are waiting for
Isn't going to get here
Until it gets here
Be patient-
It will find you
#patience
#SelfReflection
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Augmentation
Not unacquainted
yet holding still
past attempts tainted
by utter self-will
From a deadly place
of perceived fatal pain
seeking solace and grace
now on knees again
Inward realisation
of soul’s decline
necessary augmentation
to spiritually align
A solution outlined
initiating the quest
failures left behind
gratefully blessed
Familiar, this passage
still, something anew
direction without damage
a fevered path to pursue
yet holding still
past attempts tainted
by utter self-will
From a deadly place
of perceived fatal pain
seeking solace and grace
now on knees again
Inward realisation
of soul’s decline
necessary augmentation
to spiritually align
A solution outlined
initiating the quest
failures left behind
gratefully blessed
Familiar, this passage
still, something anew
direction without damage
a fevered path to pursue
#patience
#NaPoWriMo2024
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Labelled Fictitiously.
So, you think you know her and what’s more how to fix her too. A good kick up the arse and less victim mentality would be a start.
Thing is you haven’t a clue and the times she has used triple x super glue just to hold herself in place to stand in front of you or beside you or maybe a fraction behind you.
Funny thing is when she sees you, she doesn’t look in judgment but more a secret high five in solidarity and her words are always thoughtful and considerate.
Behind a face that smiles are also ones who had to fight either demons or life and possibly their own thoughts alone...
Thing is you haven’t a clue and the times she has used triple x super glue just to hold herself in place to stand in front of you or beside you or maybe a fraction behind you.
Funny thing is when she sees you, she doesn’t look in judgment but more a secret high five in solidarity and her words are always thoughtful and considerate.
Behind a face that smiles are also ones who had to fight either demons or life and possibly their own thoughts alone...
#courage
#honesty
#misunderstood
#patience
#strength
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