Poems About Patience by Top Critiquers
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Poems about patience by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Life
Not a poem . Just to say that if I do not reply to a message there is always a reason .
Last week I had 12 injections in my back for pain relief . Life hasn’t been great one way or another but I hate going on about my life . That’s why I write stuff not related to me in the slightest. People make assumptions they have no idea how you are feeling or what you are experiencing yourself . It hurts me that people think if you don’t reply to a message you can’t be bothered. Hell I don’t even know why I am writing this but I am not a person who doesn’t care . The problem is I care too much .
Last week I had 12 injections in my back for pain relief . Life hasn’t been great one way or another but I hate going on about my life . That’s why I write stuff not related to me in the slightest. People make assumptions they have no idea how you are feeling or what you are experiencing yourself . It hurts me that people think if you don’t reply to a message you can’t be bothered. Hell I don’t even know why I am writing this but I am not a person who doesn’t care . The problem is I care too much .
#kindness
#strength
#patience
#honesty
#misunderstood
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Dreams before Screams
if you have a dream you have to follow it:
do not put it off for another day.
if you want to scream you have to swallow it:
wait until you have another way.
do not put it off for another day.
if you want to scream you have to swallow it:
wait until you have another way.
#motivational
#patience
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When the Flip
When the Flip
I can remember
when the flip
happened.
What was beautiful inverted
with what was not.
Beauty
turned its back
on me,
believing the slick
words
of others.
What had never
been given
a spark
of notice
became my muse.
In my wretchedness,
I was accepted.
That became
the appex
of beauty.
I can remember
when the flip
happened.
What was beautiful inverted
with what was not.
Beauty
turned its back
on me,
believing the slick
words
of others.
What had never
been given
a spark
of notice
became my muse.
In my wretchedness,
I was accepted.
That became
the appex
of beauty.
#patience
#honesty
#sacrifice
#wisdom
#tolerance
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The Birth of an Outlaw
Too old to start making waves
But seen too much to keep going along to just get along
This is the Birth of an Outlaw
Used to be a Rightie
Now I'm SouthPaw
And if you've seen the Shit that I saw
Then you too
Might be an Outlaw
You see,
They shot that little boy dead
(Tamir Rice)
No more Dr. Seuss
Or tucked in bed
Body in the streets
His blood is Red
"My Baby!!" is what his mama said
They killed that girl (Atatiana Jefferson) in her house ...
But seen too much to keep going along to just get along
This is the Birth of an Outlaw
Used to be a Rightie
Now I'm SouthPaw
And if you've seen the Shit that I saw
Then you too
Might be an Outlaw
You see,
They shot that little boy dead
(Tamir Rice)
No more Dr. Seuss
Or tucked in bed
Body in the streets
His blood is Red
"My Baby!!" is what his mama said
They killed that girl (Atatiana Jefferson) in her house ...
#anger
#LifeStruggles
#patience #frustration
#patience #frustration
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Bar...
.. ...
Bar...
Voices from the tables
Plain conversation
Obvious talk
Bar...
Wasting my manliness
Wasting my time
Life is alive outside
Like acoustic guitar strings
Like an answering machine
Would the waitress call to say hi ?
She might become a must in the night
Longing for a song
Longing for a poem
Bar ...
Bar on the corner
Evening fading away too fast
Over there outside
... ...
Bar...
Voices from the tables
Plain conversation
Obvious talk
Bar...
Wasting my manliness
Wasting my time
Life is alive outside
Like acoustic guitar strings
Like an answering machine
Would the waitress call to say hi ?
She might become a must in the night
Longing for a song
Longing for a poem
Bar ...
Bar on the corner
Evening fading away too fast
Over there outside
... ...
#patience
#escape
#dating #boredom
#dating #boredom
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AS THE TIDES TURN
As the tides turn into a new world order for yesterday I was healthy and strong, yet that has changed as my body has been attack by different stages of cancer. For now I no longer will have to just work through the process of learning the new, but how much I can improve on the quality of my own life itself as I am going through these trying times. For example as I continue to work with my cancer treatments, as there has been a few ups and downs I have my good days and my bad days. Yet I refuse to lost hope that one day I will get better for my life, for there is no cure for stage 4 cancer...
#strength
#courage
#BestFriend
#friendship
#patience
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If you can't save me, take me
Why you never there?
I've been patient
And praying
But you never seem to care.
Why is it that I want you
you are never there?
I'm bitter,
I'm angry
And even when I turn my back on you.
You don't seem to care.
I looked for you everywhere
I stayed in faith even when it hurt.
Set my eyes on you and nobody else.
I gave you everything until I had nothing left.
Why is it that I got nothing in return?
They say you're quick to hear,
But you take time to respond.
I don't think I...
I've been patient
And praying
But you never seem to care.
Why is it that I want you
you are never there?
I'm bitter,
I'm angry
And even when I turn my back on you.
You don't seem to care.
I looked for you everywhere
I stayed in faith even when it hurt.
Set my eyes on you and nobody else.
I gave you everything until I had nothing left.
Why is it that I got nothing in return?
They say you're quick to hear,
But you take time to respond.
I don't think I...
#LifeStruggles
#faith
#patience #hypocrisy
#patience #hypocrisy
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Tell Me Everything
#BDSM
#patience
#honesty
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Waiting
I have been waiting,
waiting for all eternity,
watching suns grow dim and galaxies born,
through all the long march of time,
I have always been here,
simply waiting,
for your gentle touch of hidden steel
waiting for your loving soul and the feral spirit within,
possessing the power to destroy,
yet choosing to heal,
I am waiting for magic and gods,
and humanity to emerge from the dark,
that I might hold your flame and be reborn
into a world of our creation, ...
waiting for all eternity,
watching suns grow dim and galaxies born,
through all the long march of time,
I have always been here,
simply waiting,
for your gentle touch of hidden steel
waiting for your loving soul and the feral spirit within,
possessing the power to destroy,
yet choosing to heal,
I am waiting for magic and gods,
and humanity to emerge from the dark,
that I might hold your flame and be reborn
into a world of our creation, ...
#love
#hope
#patience
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