Poems for and About Parents Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems for and about parents seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
1st Sep 2024 4:05pm
1st Sep 2024 4:05pm
To Give The Teen Modeling Competition One More Shot
Mandy decided to give the teen
modeling competition one
more shot by posing fully
naked on her bed and
keeping photos from
Kristin and their
parents or
they'll go
nuts.
modeling competition one
more shot by posing fully
naked on her bed and
keeping photos from
Kristin and their
parents or
they'll go
nuts.
#Fanfiction
#fiction
#parent
#sex
#sister
266 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
18th Aug 2024 10:37am
18th Aug 2024 10:37am
You'll Turn Out The Same
Your parents have a problem and you live in constant pain
Your atmosphere is darkness as you begin to go insane
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
You hear the words of wisdom as you practice what you tell
You follow your parents teachings, as they threaten you to hell
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
My advice to you, is follow what's in your heart
For if you don't, you'll be finished before you begin to even start
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
Your atmosphere is darkness as you begin to go insane
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
You hear the words of wisdom as you practice what you tell
You follow your parents teachings, as they threaten you to hell
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
My advice to you, is follow what's in your heart
For if you don't, you'll be finished before you begin to even start
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
#LifeStruggles
#lyrics
#manipulation
#parent
#religion
180 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
13th Aug 2024 10:55am
13th Aug 2024 10:55am
Living Arrangements
I'm living at my parents house
An old girlfriend is living their too
I don't know this until she comes out of a room
She looks at me and asks me if I'm living here and I say yes
She & my mother begin laughing in my face
They then drive away in my father's boat
An old girlfriend is living their too
I don't know this until she comes out of a room
She looks at me and asks me if I'm living here and I say yes
She & my mother begin laughing in my face
They then drive away in my father's boat
#dreams
#girlfriend
#home #parent
#home #parent
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2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Jul 2024 7:09pm
15th Jul 2024 7:09pm
Overpersuasion
Your parents have a problem and you live in constant pain
Your atmosphere is darkness as you begin to go insane
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
You hear the words of wisdom as you practice what you tell
You follow your parents teachings, as they threaten you to hell
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
My advice to you, is to follow what's in your heart
For if you don't, you'll be finished before you ever start
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
Your atmosphere is darkness as you begin to go insane
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
You hear the words of wisdom as you practice what you tell
You follow your parents teachings, as they threaten you to hell
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
My advice to you, is to follow what's in your heart
For if you don't, you'll be finished before you ever start
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
#LifeStruggles
#manipulation
#parent
#religion
#rhyming
145 reads
2 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
13th Jul 2024 4:06am
13th Jul 2024 4:06am
Shame
I have so many metaphors to report
I am your big brother thank you berserker girl
I'm all in this shit now you freak pretender to be hold Jehovah
you better back off her now or I'll unveil you're pathetic habits publicly.'
war Brenden we're with you now
I am your big brother thank you berserker girl
I'm all in this shit now you freak pretender to be hold Jehovah
you better back off her now or I'll unveil you're pathetic habits publicly.'
war Brenden we're with you now
#family
#parent
117 reads
1 Comment
buddhakitty
Poem Published
12th Jul 2024 3:46am
12th Jul 2024 3:46am
rules for childhood
avoid putting your toys
away
-or-
taking a bath, bedtime
and doing your homework
play as much as you can
doodle endlessly
laugh and giggle
incessantly
say no to your parents
often
pout well and ask for
forgiveness later
imagine constantly
refuse your veggies
candy is always better
live in the moment
live for today...
tomorrow is too far
away
ask for this, ask for
that
want way too much ...
away
-or-
taking a bath, bedtime
and doing your homework
play as much as you can
doodle endlessly
laugh and giggle
incessantly
say no to your parents
often
pout well and ask for
forgiveness later
imagine constantly
refuse your veggies
candy is always better
live in the moment
live for today...
tomorrow is too far
away
ask for this, ask for
that
want way too much ...
#childhood
#daughter
#family
#parent
#son
203 reads
4 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
24th Jun 2024 6:30am
24th Jun 2024 6:30am
IT WAS HOT THAT NIGHT
#parent
#pregnancy
#sex
271 reads
8 Comments
ms_kitty_lagniappe
Ms K
Ms K
Poem Published
6th Jun 2024 11:30pm
6th Jun 2024 11:30pm
To My Father: Thank You for Throwing Me Away
Exhale, it's been a long journey for sure,
Through the heartache, I've found a cure.
From the shadows of your absence, I grew,
And now, Dad, I have something to say to you.
Thank you for throwing me away,
For leaving me behind, day by day.
Your absence was a wound, deep and raw,
But in the pain, I found my own law.
I begged for your love until I was fifty,
But all it did was leave me empty.
You saw me as a mistake, an unwanted trace,
But I found strength in your cold embrace.
In your rejection, I found my own light,
Dancing with...
Through the heartache, I've found a cure.
From the shadows of your absence, I grew,
And now, Dad, I have something to say to you.
Thank you for throwing me away,
For leaving me behind, day by day.
Your absence was a wound, deep and raw,
But in the pain, I found my own law.
I begged for your love until I was fifty,
But all it did was leave me empty.
You saw me as a mistake, an unwanted trace,
But I found strength in your cold embrace.
In your rejection, I found my own light,
Dancing with...
#father
#memories
#parent
251 reads
5 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
22nd May 2024 10:59pm
22nd May 2024 10:59pm
An orgasm is an orgasm
When he would get off from work he would come home to his wife and her crotchety old mother
He hates his mother in law
She lives with them, after her husband died a few years back
Lucky him
She nags and complains and aggravates him every goddamn night
He gets tired of telling his wife to kick her out or have her shut her fucking mouth
He can't take the noise
All day long at work he has to listen to the noise
His boss, the assholes he works with and those fucking machines
When he gets home he wants quiet
His wife is always protecting her mother...
He hates his mother in law
She lives with them, after her husband died a few years back
Lucky him
She nags and complains and aggravates him every goddamn night
He gets tired of telling his wife to kick her out or have her shut her fucking mouth
He can't take the noise
All day long at work he has to listen to the noise
His boss, the assholes he works with and those fucking machines
When he gets home he wants quiet
His wife is always protecting her mother...
#anger
#frustration
#orgasm
#parent
#wife
239 reads
8 Comments
AprylNovember
a. r. m.
a. r. m.
Poem Published
26th Apr 2024 11:40am
26th Apr 2024 11:40am
Folks
The intelligence
I have learned
Through adversity.
Is miniscule.
To the
Resilience
I own.
As a child
of
Exceptional Parents.
A.R.M.
I have learned
Through adversity.
Is miniscule.
To the
Resilience
I own.
As a child
of
Exceptional Parents.
A.R.M.
#daughter
#parent
#responsibility
287 reads
2 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
1st Mar 2024 12:34pm
1st Mar 2024 12:34pm
RELATIONSHIPS THAT JOIN AT HIPS
#love
#lust
#parent
#sex
#rhyming
275 reads
3 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
15th Jan 2024 8:59pm
15th Jan 2024 8:59pm
Dreams echoes and vibrations
This dream is now yours
know this to be true
I am but a bit character that someday will not be
To perhaps be a rose known as nemo
Surely that would put the bard to rest?
However I am rambling whimsical nonsensical
Kiddo daddy never stopped thinking of you
so much catching up with the constraint
So little time
To be honest I would not know where to begin
The first few years with you
Joy
Then those years long apart, scarcely an echo
empty silence would cause many to...
know this to be true
I am but a bit character that someday will not be
To perhaps be a rose known as nemo
Surely that would put the bard to rest?
However I am rambling whimsical nonsensical
Kiddo daddy never stopped thinking of you
so much catching up with the constraint
So little time
To be honest I would not know where to begin
The first few years with you
Joy
Then those years long apart, scarcely an echo
empty silence would cause many to...
#father
#parent
#family
#daughter
#responsibility
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2 Comments
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