Poems About a Pandemic Seeking Honest Critique
#pandemic
The 2020 Chip Down Blues
The torture tune of trauma town
Rings in my midnight ear
To say to me when chips are down
All merriment will disappear...
When introverts, not the warrior,
Will be the ones that thrive
When city streets get gorier
As intubations survive...
More so than those who shriek and shout
In a rally or ugly crowd
With an unwitting spittle spout
Ever and anon too proud...
Since salvation comes, as you will see,
Packaged in humility.
Rings in my midnight ear
To say to me when chips are down
All merriment will disappear...
When introverts, not the warrior,
Will be the ones that thrive
When city streets get gorier
As intubations survive...
More so than those who shriek and shout
In a rally or ugly crowd
With an unwitting spittle spout
Ever and anon too proud...
Since salvation comes, as you will see,
Packaged in humility.
#ignorance
#pandemic
#vulnerability
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COVID PLANDEMIC CORRUPTION
Let me tell you something
and I'm going to keep saying this
so let it sink in,
since you choose not to use that brain.
COVID-19 DOESN'T EXIST OK that 1
2. if they have to
PERSUADED, REMINDED, LIED TO,
PRESSURED, INCENTIVIZED, COERCED,
BILLIED, SOCIAL ASHAMED,
GUILT TRIPPED, THREATENED, PAID,
PUNISHED AND CRIMINALIZED
If all of this is necessary to gain your complete compliance
you can be ABSOLUTELY SURTON
that what's being promoted
is NOT IN YOUR BEST INTERESTS.
Think about it.
And since there is no...
and I'm going to keep saying this
so let it sink in,
since you choose not to use that brain.
COVID-19 DOESN'T EXIST OK that 1
2. if they have to
PERSUADED, REMINDED, LIED TO,
PRESSURED, INCENTIVIZED, COERCED,
BILLIED, SOCIAL ASHAMED,
GUILT TRIPPED, THREATENED, PAID,
PUNISHED AND CRIMINALIZED
If all of this is necessary to gain your complete compliance
you can be ABSOLUTELY SURTON
that what's being promoted
is NOT IN YOUR BEST INTERESTS.
Think about it.
And since there is no...
#pandemic
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Goodnight & God Bless
Goodnight & God Bless"
With an IQ like mine, I looked at most like they're dumb/
Like when folk clapped & got jabbed, both the cat, dad & son
Looking aghast with amazement, I let em pave me the way/
Now with this for entertainment, I gave the Netflix away
I knew they were strange, when they masked up their kids/
And took vaccine in arm, before they asked what it is
From two weeks & a curve, to a third, fourth & fifth/
To a lot have been murdered, let's distract em with this
There's a war in Ukraine, of which the...
With an IQ like mine, I looked at most like they're dumb/
Like when folk clapped & got jabbed, both the cat, dad & son
Looking aghast with amazement, I let em pave me the way/
Now with this for entertainment, I gave the Netflix away
I knew they were strange, when they masked up their kids/
And took vaccine in arm, before they asked what it is
From two weeks & a curve, to a third, fourth & fifth/
To a lot have been murdered, let's distract em with this
There's a war in Ukraine, of which the...
#funny
#LifeChangingMoment
#MyInspiration
#WritingPoetry
#pandemic
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Broken
s a rough way
to feel
For me it's when
things don't
seem real
Can't get a grip
on my
perspective
Anywhere I look
reflective
of the things I
know are wrong
I find no comfort
in a song
Isolated more and
more
Inside a room that
has no door
Feeling such enormous
weight
Like it will always
be too late
To make the air
taste fresh again
And then it comes
and then again
The waves of
complete ...
to feel
For me it's when
things don't
seem real
Can't get a grip
on my
perspective
Anywhere I look
reflective
of the things I
know are wrong
I find no comfort
in a song
Isolated more and
more
Inside a room that
has no door
Feeling such enormous
weight
Like it will always
be too late
To make the air
taste fresh again
And then it comes
and then again
The waves of
complete ...
#rhyming
#suffering
#pandemic
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Not All Poetry Is Pretty
.. and it shouldn't be
throwing ourselves
at descriptive ways
of making a
flower
sound
more beautiful than
the sight of it
or making our
depression
seem more serious
than the next bloke
blinding ourselves ...
throwing ourselves
at descriptive ways
of making a
flower
sound
more beautiful than
the sight of it
or making our
depression
seem more serious
than the next bloke
blinding ourselves ...
#murder
#war
#environment
#pollution
#pandemic
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A Series Of Concrete Thought Journals
STREET LIFE]
In the ghetto streets
of Orange Grove
where the feet
of Jozi's
hungry drove
carts of plastic
and paper sheet
dwelt a spell binding
prison,
in tunnels
unwinding
sending convoys
collecting and betting
on paper, plastics,
and other recycling
[ULCER]
in trying to make
sense
of the stars
filling
intestines
and mental
notes
while...
In the ghetto streets
of Orange Grove
where the feet
of Jozi's
hungry drove
carts of plastic
and paper sheet
dwelt a spell binding
prison,
in tunnels
unwinding
sending convoys
collecting and betting
on paper, plastics,
and other recycling
[ULCER]
in trying to make
sense
of the stars
filling
intestines
and mental
notes
while...
#ShortStory
#patience
#pandemic
#city
#scifi
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Positively Negative
terrifying
sniffles
sore throat
body aches
rapid test negative
reassuring to know
can still have
just a cold
(C)2022 Raibeart Bruis
sniffles
sore throat
body aches
rapid test negative
reassuring to know
can still have
just a cold
(C)2022 Raibeart Bruis
#illness
#fear
#pandemic
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Silence and Rooftops
There on the rooftop, above most buildings
I found my serenity.
No weed smoke this time, I wasn't gliding.
The country was locked down
And so I sat on the edge, fearless.
Admiring the bright lights, the city's crown
Dark mountains embraced the listless town.
All alone, so high up, I felt the music
Could you hear it too?
The silence moved chords so fluid
Through my body, feeling almost lucid...
So I stood on the ledge,
Threw my hands in the air and twirled
Round and round I went,
Dancing for my silent world.
I dared...
I found my serenity.
No weed smoke this time, I wasn't gliding.
The country was locked down
And so I sat on the edge, fearless.
Admiring the bright lights, the city's crown
Dark mountains embraced the listless town.
All alone, so high up, I felt the music
Could you hear it too?
The silence moved chords so fluid
Through my body, feeling almost lucid...
So I stood on the ledge,
Threw my hands in the air and twirled
Round and round I went,
Dancing for my silent world.
I dared...
#happiness
#SelfDiscovery
#pandemic
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TESTED
The ghost of a line
Wrote me off yesterday
I’m not gonna whine
I got duties to pay
No rest for the wicked
You said and it’s true
For we are committed
To work we must do
Wrote me off yesterday
I’m not gonna whine
I got duties to pay
No rest for the wicked
You said and it’s true
For we are committed
To work we must do
#pandemic
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Wind Blows & Poetic Flows
Whatever's gonna be is gonna be
Why worry bout what we see on t.v.
From NBC's, CBS' and, yes, the Foxes
News views putting crews into boxes
The poxes, the flus, and new pandemics
Turning a few amongst you into relics
I get it but can't it be detrimental?
Some spit that's writ shouldn't enter our temples
Its riddles are simple; we are what we eat
Divisible by? YOU choose; even the beat
Taking a seat to eat meat with some devils
Likely causes psyches to consume sum evils
Toxic levels will destroy pew minds over...
Why worry bout what we see on t.v.
From NBC's, CBS' and, yes, the Foxes
News views putting crews into boxes
The poxes, the flus, and new pandemics
Turning a few amongst you into relics
I get it but can't it be detrimental?
Some spit that's writ shouldn't enter our temples
Its riddles are simple; we are what we eat
Divisible by? YOU choose; even the beat
Taking a seat to eat meat with some devils
Likely causes psyches to consume sum evils
Toxic levels will destroy pew minds over...
#evil
#MentalHealth
#WritingPoetry #pandemic
#WritingPoetry #pandemic
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Who Should Be Afraid Of Covid-19?
Many people have taken the wrong approach to the issue of the Covid-19 vaccine.
Who should be afraid to socialize with others, vaccinated persons or unvaccinated persons?
The vaccine does not prevent people from contracting the virus and infecting others.
Why should the people who are vaccinated fear those who are not vaccinated?
It only requires common sense to see that it should be the other way around,
Yet so many people are supporting the foolishness that is happening all over the world.
They say that the people who take the...
Who should be afraid to socialize with others, vaccinated persons or unvaccinated persons?
The vaccine does not prevent people from contracting the virus and infecting others.
Why should the people who are vaccinated fear those who are not vaccinated?
It only requires common sense to see that it should be the other way around,
Yet so many people are supporting the foolishness that is happening all over the world.
They say that the people who take the...
#politics
#drugs
#deception
#fear
#pandemic
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C19 LDR
In quarantine life,
All relationships feel like
They are long-distance
All relationships feel like
They are long-distance
#senryu
#LongDistanceRelationship
#pandemic
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