Poems About the Night by Top Critiquers
#night
Poems about the night by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
his hands
his hands are made
to hold my face
to rub my lips
to caress graceful skin
to swell my boobs
to cup my buttocks
to give jerks to my nipples
to loosen my muscles,
to shake my legs
and make my stomach churn
they break my depth,
as like fragments of broken glass...
to hold my face
to rub my lips
to caress graceful skin
to swell my boobs
to cup my buttocks
to give jerks to my nipples
to loosen my muscles,
to shake my legs
and make my stomach churn
they break my depth,
as like fragments of broken glass...
#lust
#night
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silent beauty (stars)
another
early morning
before
the sun
even dreams
of waking,
the cluster
of stars
visible
somewhere,
even though
hidden from
my view,
i know
they are
just
above me,
silent beauty
waiting.
early morning
before
the sun
even dreams
of waking,
the cluster
of stars
visible
somewhere,
even though
hidden from
my view,
i know
they are
just
above me,
silent beauty
waiting.
#astronomy
#night
#stars #universe
#stars #universe
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4 Comments
Flight
**** flight *****
here comes the time again
for ethereal flowers to fly
for the poet to watch and sigh,
to only behold without asking why?
here's a dandelion about to fade away
the music dissolving into atmosphere
with the slightest touch of the breeze
and your heart takes flight overseas
carried aloft, into heaven's relief
stripped from any mundane grief
entranced the feel, a delightful sheer
and quietly the dark leaves the night
a bright tide, then illuminates the light ...
here comes the time again
for ethereal flowers to fly
for the poet to watch and sigh,
to only behold without asking why?
here's a dandelion about to fade away
the music dissolving into atmosphere
with the slightest touch of the breeze
and your heart takes flight overseas
carried aloft, into heaven's relief
stripped from any mundane grief
entranced the feel, a delightful sheer
and quietly the dark leaves the night
a bright tide, then illuminates the light ...
#dawn
#morning
#night
#spring
#summer
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4 Comments
Metal Shark
Metal Shark flying
High in the dark
Won’t diminish like
A falling star
He lands on his feet
Will it be next to me
Ageless energy
Strength of the sea
I’ll engrave poetry
Onto your metal fins
Into your many gills
I’ll breathe you love songs
Metal Shark soaring
So high in the dark
Do you feel me in
The midnight starry air
If you pass me by
It’s okay
You own the sky
I’ll still feel you
In the breeze that flows by
And when it begins to hurt ...
High in the dark
Won’t diminish like
A falling star
He lands on his feet
Will it be next to me
Ageless energy
Strength of the sea
I’ll engrave poetry
Onto your metal fins
Into your many gills
I’ll breathe you love songs
Metal Shark soaring
So high in the dark
Do you feel me in
The midnight starry air
If you pass me by
It’s okay
You own the sky
I’ll still feel you
In the breeze that flows by
And when it begins to hurt ...
#love
#night
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20 Comments
Night moves
In darkness, we are
dim outlines,
surprise touches,
whispered poetry
sensing
reaching
savouring
responding
I imagine
you could be anyone
and therefore
so can I
dim outlines,
surprise touches,
whispered poetry
sensing
reaching
savouring
responding
I imagine
you could be anyone
and therefore
so can I
#night
#lover
#passion
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16 Comments
Sometimes
Sometimes]
In the dead of night, when I'm all alone
Reality seems squishy, the day's strife is done.
Not quite awake and not quite asleep
I don't know if the nightmare is over
Or about to begin
Let me try this again....
In the night season, when I'm all alone
Reality blurs the sounds of the night.
It's just not right, the body is weary
but the mind will not unload.
Again....
I'm all alone chilled to the bone
Alone, alone, reach for the phone
No one to call, no one at all, fall
I'd fall...
In the dead of night, when I'm all alone
Reality seems squishy, the day's strife is done.
Not quite awake and not quite asleep
I don't know if the nightmare is over
Or about to begin
Let me try this again....
In the night season, when I'm all alone
Reality blurs the sounds of the night.
It's just not right, the body is weary
but the mind will not unload.
Again....
I'm all alone chilled to the bone
Alone, alone, reach for the phone
No one to call, no one at all, fall
I'd fall...
#aliens
#night
#nightmares
#unicorns
#universe
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The Loitering Twilight
There was thunder in the air
It arrived with the July Sun
The kind of night
That drains the love from a man's heart
Leaving a wild hate unchecked
On nights like these
Insomniacs dream of sleep
Flowers ooze a heavy scent
And the twilight lasts for hours
It arrived with the July Sun
The kind of night
That drains the love from a man's heart
Leaving a wild hate unchecked
On nights like these
Insomniacs dream of sleep
Flowers ooze a heavy scent
And the twilight lasts for hours
#love
#hate
#flowers
#sun
#night
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Autumn in the Suburbs
Sometimes I think I'm just a murderer,
obsessed with one season,
stalking the red-gold woods and streets
with gloved hands and an ambition
to stain an oak tree red with blood
and thereby bring balance to creation.
Such absolute beauty
as autumn in the suburbs must
be paid for with a sacrifice.
I learned this holy fact when I was twelve
and hiding in the trees
I saw a man garrotte his love,
and leave it underneath a shroud
of crunchy, fallen leaves.
The lonely October unfurls,
a maid upon her silken bed. ...
obsessed with one season,
stalking the red-gold woods and streets
with gloved hands and an ambition
to stain an oak tree red with blood
and thereby bring balance to creation.
Such absolute beauty
as autumn in the suburbs must
be paid for with a sacrifice.
I learned this holy fact when I was twelve
and hiding in the trees
I saw a man garrotte his love,
and leave it underneath a shroud
of crunchy, fallen leaves.
The lonely October unfurls,
a maid upon her silken bed. ...
#dark
#fall
#fear #night
#fear #night
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2 Comments
The Days of the Week
The Days of the Week
Each
Calendar
Starts
On its very
Own day.
Mine
Just
Begins
In its very
Own way.
Two
Taco
Tuesdays
For chicken
Take outs,
Two to
Eat there
And one
That just
Shouts.
Wednesdays
It's clear
That it's
All
My fault,
All my fault
Wednesdays
Is when
All wounds
Get salt.
Thursdays
It's back up
And all
Is
Reverse,
And then...
Each
Calendar
Starts
On its very
Own day.
Mine
Just
Begins
In its very
Own way.
Two
Taco
Tuesdays
For chicken
Take outs,
Two to
Eat there
And one
That just
Shouts.
Wednesdays
It's clear
That it's
All
My fault,
All my fault
Wednesdays
Is when
All wounds
Get salt.
Thursdays
It's back up
And all
Is
Reverse,
And then...
#morning
#night
#dawn
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Building in the night
#love
#lust
#night
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2 Comments
Midnight Tunes
Dancing clouds floated above
Intoxicating smoke curling in the air
From the incense of insomnia
Rose with midnight tunes
A lento slithering from the chime
To fill every hollowed nook
With the sweet-smelling fragments
Of bitter-echoing remnants
Whispering softly to lull me awake
Intoxicating smoke curling in the air
From the incense of insomnia
Rose with midnight tunes
A lento slithering from the chime
To fill every hollowed nook
With the sweet-smelling fragments
Of bitter-echoing remnants
Whispering softly to lull me awake
#insomnia
#night
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Halloween Night Sex (Halloween Twisted Treat Series)
#porn
#night
#Halloween
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DU Poetry : Poems About the Night by Top Critiquers