Mystery by Top Critiquers Poems
#mystery
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
8th Dec 2020 7:32pm
8th Dec 2020 7:32pm
some three listed blabberations.. from the sacred hushes of tonight's gardens
1.
shape of hope~
their coxcomby hoisting inflorescence
in a slightly bent atop.. so humbling..
this eternal Amaranthus.. hangs
gently~ freely in a suspensional
silence... a music swinging within..
..their many pillared minarets~ become
tidal 🌊 wavelets of endless joining motions..
stands nearby
an encircling divinity of lotusy ponds.. their
waxing leafy matte~ message of Buddha's
detachment rolls on in the deciphering.. as
One language.. from their drifting...
shape of hope~
their coxcomby hoisting inflorescence
in a slightly bent atop.. so humbling..
this eternal Amaranthus.. hangs
gently~ freely in a suspensional
silence... a music swinging within..
..their many pillared minarets~ become
tidal 🌊 wavelets of endless joining motions..
stands nearby
an encircling divinity of lotusy ponds.. their
waxing leafy matte~ message of Buddha's
detachment rolls on in the deciphering.. as
One language.. from their drifting...
#LifeStruggles
#night
#TruthOfLife
#mystery
#nostalgia
464 reads
3 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
5th Apr 2024 4:56am
5th Apr 2024 4:56am
Grandmother's Mood
When she was young she was known to have a temper
She may have been little but she sure stood strong
But as she got older she became a different person
Her faith gave made her more stoic, pensive and calm
Grandma only gave a few hints about her past life
She had a rough childhood, she suffered and fought
But when she found her faith she had a connection
To put it simply, let’s just say the woman prayed a lot
It wasn’t until we were older when we got a glimpse
A couple of us kids and grandkids had really pissed her off
I...
She may have been little but she sure stood strong
But as she got older she became a different person
Her faith gave made her more stoic, pensive and calm
Grandma only gave a few hints about her past life
She had a rough childhood, she suffered and fought
But when she found her faith she had a connection
To put it simply, let’s just say the woman prayed a lot
It wasn’t until we were older when we got a glimpse
A couple of us kids and grandkids had really pissed her off
I...
#family
#mystery
172 reads
4 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
29th Jul 2021 9:00pm
29th Jul 2021 9:00pm
Femininity Part 2 (+Reading)
Femininity is not in beautifully applied makeup,
not in a smooth gait,
not in a flirtatious look,
Femininity is not all in appearance,
although it shows through the exterior
Femininity is a special kind of energy,
the subtlest radiation emanating from the deepest feelings,
from the soul of a woman ...
Not all women have femininity,
moreover,
Femininity has become more difficult in this world,
for in so much of the majority it is challenged,
and for many it is not, it was never ...
Femininity is impossible to learn... ...
not in a smooth gait,
not in a flirtatious look,
Femininity is not all in appearance,
although it shows through the exterior
Femininity is a special kind of energy,
the subtlest radiation emanating from the deepest feelings,
from the soul of a woman ...
Not all women have femininity,
moreover,
Femininity has become more difficult in this world,
for in so much of the majority it is challenged,
and for many it is not, it was never ...
Femininity is impossible to learn... ...
#love
#women
#TruthOfLife
#mystery
#passion
676 reads
25 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 2:49pm
8th Jan 2025 2:49pm
Pulp Fiction
"Trust not the heart, for it's a dance"
As the dark becomes the hunter
into the fray before dawn breaks
In a labyrinth where echoes dwell
of murmurs fraught with wilting grief
Wearing a fedora of haunting fatale
behind a shadowed door of faded memories
As the dark becomes the hunter
into the fray before dawn breaks
In a labyrinth where echoes dwell
of murmurs fraught with wilting grief
Wearing a fedora of haunting fatale
behind a shadowed door of faded memories
#dark
#mystery
#night
126 reads
4 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 2:29pm
1st Feb 2025 2:29pm
Visage
Warm glazed sunrise through frost on glass
That views the lawn's faint white traced grass
Then 'cross the road and through the trees
Trunks brown shoed with fallen leaves
Going hushed, collar up, hands in pockets
Cold solitude feeling somehow worth it
I've a wandering soul too long kept home
Here tethered though I've longed to roam
[The sphere of men's a strangling coil, ever tightening
I should've gone rambling, a wilding, a viking
Tossed the dice, cut ties and bonds for room to grow
Loosed the stasis of things to follow the...
That views the lawn's faint white traced grass
Then 'cross the road and through the trees
Trunks brown shoed with fallen leaves
Going hushed, collar up, hands in pockets
Cold solitude feeling somehow worth it
I've a wandering soul too long kept home
Here tethered though I've longed to roam
[The sphere of men's a strangling coil, ever tightening
I should've gone rambling, a wilding, a viking
Tossed the dice, cut ties and bonds for room to grow
Loosed the stasis of things to follow the...
#myself
#mystery
#TruthOfLife
66 reads
13 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
9th Jul 2023 1:41am
9th Jul 2023 1:41am
the locked drawer mystery
there”s something in my desk you might be eager to see, please, take a look ..
well no, I didn’t mean that, that’s just embarrassing, I beg you, put it back ..”
well no, I didn’t mean that, that’s just embarrassing, I beg you, put it back ..”
#fiction
#mystery
187 reads
1 Comment
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
15th Jan 2024 4:58pm
15th Jan 2024 4:58pm
mystery of night
I met
many people
came to
ejaculate
in the
candlelit room,
but
that white shadow
of your luxurious love
never allowed me to feel
a pleasant experience...
You always floating
in my eyes
by wearing wings
and disappear
into the lake
full of stars
as soon as
the sun's rays
fall on the earth...
many people
came to
ejaculate
in the
candlelit room,
but
that white shadow
of your luxurious love
never allowed me to feel
a pleasant experience...
You always floating
in my eyes
by wearing wings
and disappear
into the lake
full of stars
as soon as
the sun's rays
fall on the earth...
#night
#mystery
303 reads
18 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 4:25am
11th Dec 2024 4:25am
Lucid Dreams of Bowling Alley Men
He had straight blonde hair and was young.
Perhaps I was too
He showed me a large, luxurious bedroom with many windows
I loved it,
but it was a guest room.
Who was he?
He worked at a bowling alley.
Wha?
No...
Well, maybe it's okay
He showed me another beautiful guest space.
Why?
And what made him keeper of the keys?
I change into a clingy, champagne-colored dress
It looks great
How is this possible?
He's wonderful
He's an idiot
No, he's perfect
but he's...
Perhaps I was too
He showed me a large, luxurious bedroom with many windows
I loved it,
but it was a guest room.
Who was he?
He worked at a bowling alley.
Wha?
No...
Well, maybe it's okay
He showed me another beautiful guest space.
Why?
And what made him keeper of the keys?
I change into a clingy, champagne-colored dress
It looks great
How is this possible?
He's wonderful
He's an idiot
No, he's perfect
but he's...
#dreams
#mystery
146 reads
16 Comments
goldenmyst
Poem Published
30th Nov 2018 1:14am
30th Nov 2018 1:14am
Bared by the Wind
Bared by the Wind
Her eyes spell dreams in skywriting
For misty words to tell the story
Written in letters of blue on white
For earthbound lovers to read
In irises opening to heaven
Where secrets are boundless
in the deep blue quiet
For a wicked smile to beam St. Elmo’s Fire
Out of the cake, she leaps
Like a naked oracle of Delphi
Writing on plateaus of pleasure
For Greek choruses to sing praises
With her cloud robes blown away
Her eyes spell dreams in skywriting
For misty words to tell the story
Written in letters of blue on white
For earthbound lovers to read
In irises opening to heaven
Where secrets are boundless
in the deep blue quiet
For a wicked smile to beam St. Elmo’s Fire
Out of the cake, she leaps
Like a naked oracle of Delphi
Writing on plateaus of pleasure
For Greek choruses to sing praises
With her cloud robes blown away
#women
#erotic
#nature
#mystery
#sensual
482 reads
2 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
30th Apr 2023 2:05am
30th Apr 2023 2:05am
Kindred
That time you sent me that song
out of the blue
a million years after you left
It said things
that float between us
Things that
I know I’ll never hear you say
and I guess that’s okay
But I wondered…
And I don’t understand
what it is in me
that wakes up at your words
--just behind my solar plexus--
Even though there’s so much space
and so much time
separating our realities
And it makes no sense
that my soul should leap
in recognition
at your voice
When I don’t even know
if I...
out of the blue
a million years after you left
It said things
that float between us
Things that
I know I’ll never hear you say
and I guess that’s okay
But I wondered…
And I don’t understand
what it is in me
that wakes up at your words
--just behind my solar plexus--
Even though there’s so much space
and so much time
separating our realities
And it makes no sense
that my soul should leap
in recognition
at your voice
When I don’t even know
if I...
#love
#friendship
#mystery #NaPoWriMo2023
#mystery #NaPoWriMo2023
705 reads
8 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
5th Mar 2024 2:37pm
5th Mar 2024 2:37pm
The Poet and The River
From John Clare where the river speaks
Voicing the murmurs of a fearful Styx
Where a soul damned to bear the glooms
Of life's torments and the mortal dooms
I hear your verse, poet of the lonely voice
Solitary drifter, roaming the stark solitude
I hear your lament from the first ever love
The star-crossed lover from the grievous blows
I see the burden weigh heavy on your heart
Like Atlas, carrying the heavens on his back
Forlorn and solely loitering in the vast plains ...
Voicing the murmurs of a fearful Styx
Where a soul damned to bear the glooms
Of life's torments and the mortal dooms
I hear your verse, poet of the lonely voice
Solitary drifter, roaming the stark solitude
I hear your lament from the first ever love
The star-crossed lover from the grievous blows
I see the burden weigh heavy on your heart
Like Atlas, carrying the heavens on his back
Forlorn and solely loitering in the vast plains ...
#gothic
#Fanfiction
#confessional
#mystery
#Romanticism
170 reads
1 Comment
James_A_Knight
Poem Published
7th Jul 2023 7:31pm
7th Jul 2023 7:31pm
Along a weed blossom lane - a rift in time
A rift in time
Split a man in two
Two men emerged
On opposite sides
Of an iridescent fissure
The second man
A young man heading north east
Not knowing who he will become
After the wilderness of youth
A spiritless well paid career?
Failures and success
Ebbing fulfillment?
Marital acquiescence
Fatherly responsibilities
Accepted…run from…shirked?
The first man
An old man heading south west
Smiled as he forgot who he was
The fog was kind
Wandering to the grave ...
Split a man in two
Two men emerged
On opposite sides
Of an iridescent fissure
The second man
A young man heading north east
Not knowing who he will become
After the wilderness of youth
A spiritless well paid career?
Failures and success
Ebbing fulfillment?
Marital acquiescence
Fatherly responsibilities
Accepted…run from…shirked?
The first man
An old man heading south west
Smiled as he forgot who he was
The fog was kind
Wandering to the grave ...
#flowers
#travel
#mystery #scifi
#mystery #scifi
263 reads
6 Comments
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