Poems About Music Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about music seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 11:46am
1st Feb 2025 11:46am
Pretentious People Suck!
I met this guy through friends
I decided to have them over my house a few days ago
He told me he was a philosopher
He said he was trained in school to be one
I asked him: trained like a circus clown or a soldier?
He didn't like that much
I decided to put a CD on
He asked me what CD it was
I told him it was a Motorhead album
Their 1982 album "Iron Fist"
He asked who that was
I told him Lemmy, the vocalist was a philosopher from England
He didn't like that line, or the music or his voice
He walked out of the...
I decided to have them over my house a few days ago
He told me he was a philosopher
He said he was trained in school to be one
I asked him: trained like a circus clown or a soldier?
He didn't like that much
I decided to put a CD on
He asked me what CD it was
I told him it was a Motorhead album
Their 1982 album "Iron Fist"
He asked who that was
I told him Lemmy, the vocalist was a philosopher from England
He didn't like that line, or the music or his voice
He walked out of the...
#anger
#music
#philosophical
113 reads
19 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
31st Jan 2025 10:47am
31st Jan 2025 10:47am
The Life Of A Rockstar
Love call for Rockstars:
Define
Confine
Enshrine
Then:
Dethrone
Disown
Bemoan
After ten years:
Exhume
Resume
Consume
Baby, you're gonna be ok.
Define
Confine
Enshrine
Then:
Dethrone
Disown
Bemoan
After ten years:
Exhume
Resume
Consume
Baby, you're gonna be ok.
#deception
#manipulation
#minimalist
#music
#PopCulture
113 reads
16 Comments
AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
29th Jan 2025 5:27pm
29th Jan 2025 5:27pm
My "Ea" Series: Chapter III. The Great Music of Creation (continuation - 3)
In a clash of wrath that disobeyed
and unholiest display of power,
Melkor, in the dawn of early decay,
was rather deluded like a coward.
Angrily, the Ainur lost his vision,
passionate about his part,
he forgot it was Divinest Reason
that determined the heart.
Melkor tried so desperate to win.
The first ignition of eternal hatred,
yet is was a lesson, original sin,
for all would return to the Sacred.
So the first attempt was chatter,
prolonging the tones of the song,
yet every time he tried to alter ...
and unholiest display of power,
Melkor, in the dawn of early decay,
was rather deluded like a coward.
Angrily, the Ainur lost his vision,
passionate about his part,
he forgot it was Divinest Reason
that determined the heart.
Melkor tried so desperate to win.
The first ignition of eternal hatred,
yet is was a lesson, original sin,
for all would return to the Sacred.
So the first attempt was chatter,
prolonging the tones of the song,
yet every time he tried to alter ...
#dreams
#God
#JRRTolkien
#music
#spiritual
65 reads
7 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 11:23am
28th Jan 2025 11:23am
History of the Dutch Rock Scene
So much has been written about the history of rock music. Whether it was the early days of Rock n Roll with the likes of Elvis Presley, Chuck Berry, Jerry Lee Lewis and countless others. Or during the 1960’s with the advent of Surf Music, Motown and the British Invasion. Bands such as the Beach Boys, The Temptations and The Beatles were legendary acts. These artists paved the way for numerous bands to copy their sound as well as to create their own. Not just in England and America, but all over the world.
One country in particular that was influenced by these two countries was The...
One country in particular that was influenced by these two countries was The...
#historical
#music
#nonfiction
102 reads
11 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 10:51am
26th Jan 2025 10:51am
Song
We all have that one song.
That we remembered for very long.
The one whose lyrics is very strong.
And connects to us deeply.
The one that comforts us.
And stays in our minds neatly.
Maybe it's a song you heard as a kid.
Or a song you heard on the radio.
Maybe it's a song you like to sing.
Or a song you heard at a rodeo.
When the lyrics speaks to you in a way none does.
When the melody beats in your ears.
The way nothing else does.
Like the first time you heard it at a certain age.
And you grew up,you...
That we remembered for very long.
The one whose lyrics is very strong.
And connects to us deeply.
The one that comforts us.
And stays in our minds neatly.
Maybe it's a song you heard as a kid.
Or a song you heard on the radio.
Maybe it's a song you like to sing.
Or a song you heard at a rodeo.
When the lyrics speaks to you in a way none does.
When the melody beats in your ears.
The way nothing else does.
Like the first time you heard it at a certain age.
And you grew up,you...
#hope
#lyrics
#motivational
#music
#uplifting
56 reads
0 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 3:50pm
25th Jan 2025 3:50pm
villian
conjuring you to me
I cast on the airs villianry
to see you weep
to have me reap
wasted feelings
wasted lives
souless wanderer
return to me
return to me
break the night and breathe
I cast on the airs villianry
to see you weep
to have me reap
wasted feelings
wasted lives
souless wanderer
return to me
return to me
break the night and breathe
#music
107 reads
6 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 7:41pm
18th Jan 2025 7:41pm
Mob
dictate the madness
we march in step with the vibrations
hailing from a maelstorm
wicked little itch to appease the demonic need
hexing the night I come in
stop time for a moment
watching it fall heavy on everyone
evil feasts opening it's dark eyes
grievous error thinking to avoid it
into the maw, now mob for the hell of it
rising on the winds I take flight
a witch with you on her mind
Mr. zombie commanding an army
with your ritualistic offerings
an army of dread celebrating life
my humblists...
we march in step with the vibrations
hailing from a maelstorm
wicked little itch to appease the demonic need
hexing the night I come in
stop time for a moment
watching it fall heavy on everyone
evil feasts opening it's dark eyes
grievous error thinking to avoid it
into the maw, now mob for the hell of it
rising on the winds I take flight
a witch with you on her mind
Mr. zombie commanding an army
with your ritualistic offerings
an army of dread celebrating life
my humblists...
#anxiety
#dark
#music
71 reads
0 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 8:55am
18th Jan 2025 8:55am
Backstage - Motley Crue
Welcome, Backstage, I’m Damian DeadLove. Tonights band is: Motley Crue. This band has been the soundtrack to a lot of memories in my life. Was I a fan? At one time I really was a big fan. If you ask me that now, I’d have to say I’m a Mick Mars fan. If you follow?
First off, the band formed in 1981, and this is the original line up: Mick Mars - Guitar, Vince Neil - Vocals, Nikki Sixx - Bass, and Tommy Lee - Drums. But were focusing more on 1992-1994 after Vince Neil has quit the band, or was he fired. Well it depends on who you ask.
Nikki says, “Vince quit.”...
First off, the band formed in 1981, and this is the original line up: Mick Mars - Guitar, Vince Neil - Vocals, Nikki Sixx - Bass, and Tommy Lee - Drums. But were focusing more on 1992-1994 after Vince Neil has quit the band, or was he fired. Well it depends on who you ask.
Nikki says, “Vince quit.”...
#music
#prose
119 reads
18 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 3:32am
17th Jan 2025 3:32am
metal
sacred art woven with my soul
the beats take over
and I become one with the music
the tempo drives me
the drum base pounds
twilight bends and I begin
cllimbing guitar riffs
notes relate to me
a melody of freedom
seeking the newness of day
within my heart vow
to make the best of every moment
sweet release in the noise
intoxicating spirit, empowers me
I can do anything
endorphins quick in
as the electicity flows through my brain
the rhythm takes me away
to a place I once knew ...
the beats take over
and I become one with the music
the tempo drives me
the drum base pounds
twilight bends and I begin
cllimbing guitar riffs
notes relate to me
a melody of freedom
seeking the newness of day
within my heart vow
to make the best of every moment
sweet release in the noise
intoxicating spirit, empowers me
I can do anything
endorphins quick in
as the electicity flows through my brain
the rhythm takes me away
to a place I once knew ...
#love
#music
104 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 9:29pm
14th Jan 2025 9:29pm
Krautrock! New music of the future (Part 2)
Most writers, journalists, musicians and fans agree that the post war youth of the 1960’s was politically aware and well educated. Plus, you can hardly ignore the proliferation of hallucinogenic and psychedelic drugs. There was also the influence of pioneering British & American bands and the boom in youth pop culture. For the first time in decades the German people had become a society that was independent and wealthy. All these factors and obviously many more were what lead to a music culture as unheard before.
Although some bands just created their created their own...
Although some bands just created their created their own...
#music
#nonfiction
#PopCulture
91 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 9:27pm
14th Jan 2025 9:27pm
Krautrock! New music of the future (Part 1)
The music of Germany, since WWII has been something of a rare phenomenon. From a vast nation obsessed with gaining a new image, making a mark for themselves and aiming to try and get away from the ghosts of the past. Such an attitude inevitably led to a youth culture that was inquisitive and yearning for new forms of expression. This uniquely Teutonic spirit had existed on a smaller scale, decades earlier with the new generation of classical composers and also musical innovators like Oskar Sala.
As the electronic revolution gained pace in the 1950’s, a new generation of...
As the electronic revolution gained pace in the 1950’s, a new generation of...
#music
#nonfiction
#PopCulture
97 reads
10 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 1:26pm
14th Jan 2025 1:26pm
Listening to a long forgotten soul song
In the quiet dawn, thoughts crowd your face in epiphany.
Realizations, like lightning, strike the still morning air.
You stand overwhelmed, a revelation in every breath.
The weight of understanding too much to bear.
In the midst of this flood, you cry and cry and cry and cry.
Tears flowing, a river of emotion unbound.
Each drop a whisper of what once was hidden.
A torrent of truths newly found.
As the storm subsides, you stand in silence.
The epiphany a shadow, the tears a distant shore.
In this quiet aftermath, clarity...
Realizations, like lightning, strike the still morning air.
You stand overwhelmed, a revelation in every breath.
The weight of understanding too much to bear.
In the midst of this flood, you cry and cry and cry and cry.
Tears flowing, a river of emotion unbound.
Each drop a whisper of what once was hidden.
A torrent of truths newly found.
As the storm subsides, you stand in silence.
The epiphany a shadow, the tears a distant shore.
In this quiet aftermath, clarity...
#mirror
#music
#passion
#sadness
#spiritual
85 reads
8 Comments
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