Poems About Mountains by Top Critiquers
#mountains
touchstone
touch my mystery with your fingertips
weighty existence is the form of a stone
vibrating energies that lift the soul
tumbled in water
my rough edges became smooth
calming the spirit of the beholder
find me lining the shore of an obliging lake or river
time itself has delivered me there
I watch humanity with curiosity
sending out my well wishes
I have dense matter
everything has spirit
I am no less
as part of a mountainside or in a riverbed
keep me as a touchstone when you're feeling stressed
...
weighty existence is the form of a stone
vibrating energies that lift the soul
tumbled in water
my rough edges became smooth
calming the spirit of the beholder
find me lining the shore of an obliging lake or river
time itself has delivered me there
I watch humanity with curiosity
sending out my well wishes
I have dense matter
everything has spirit
I am no less
as part of a mountainside or in a riverbed
keep me as a touchstone when you're feeling stressed
...
#nature
#mountains
#spiritual
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7 Comments
rocks weave waterfall
into a gossamer web—
spellbound spectators
~
into a gossamer web—
spellbound spectators
~
#water
#nature
#mountains
#gratitude
#haiku
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38 Comments
beyond twin veils
I gaze at you in stolen moments
eyes closed for proper sight
at your unwavering image
words escape my mind
I saw you once upon a mountain
rugged pillars carved in granite
unapologetic in your arrogance
you exude seductive strength
& introspective quiet
I watched you shimmer as ripples in a river
confidently following its path
the calm & gentle motion
fingertips brushing naked flesh
concealing a wildness in your depths
this is you
nature at its finest
both the feral & the smooth ...
eyes closed for proper sight
at your unwavering image
words escape my mind
I saw you once upon a mountain
rugged pillars carved in granite
unapologetic in your arrogance
you exude seductive strength
& introspective quiet
I watched you shimmer as ripples in a river
confidently following its path
the calm & gentle motion
fingertips brushing naked flesh
concealing a wildness in your depths
this is you
nature at its finest
both the feral & the smooth ...
#beauty
#love
#mountains #nature
#mountains #nature
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8 Comments
THE POISON TREE
It's me again the story teller of words ✍️ that will speak upon, of that what I see and hear and believe what is front of me. For as I sit here looking out of the 🪟 but yet I still can't believe, how much this world has been changed by what is happening now. For sure we are living in a place that was once, a place that you could breathe in the spring aura of the trees of life. Yet as I search near and far from away, from the negativity and drama and chaos. I feel silent tear rolls down, my face only to be cupped in my hands like drops of acid rain, like poison ivy is to...
#forest
#mountains
#nature
#river
#sky
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2 Comments
Rose Town Moon Down
Tonight fair Luna was at her best
Hanging above the urban lights
And drifting damp into the west
Like on so many other nights
Her waxing gibbous throws a beam
As bright as any light allowed
That city dwellers dare to dream
Would percolate an ocean cloud
Rolling over suburban hills
Like an ebony forest park
And the bracing tonic it distills
With its old arboreal bark
Where only moonlight permeates
When no man made light officiates.
Hanging above the urban lights
And drifting damp into the west
Like on so many other nights
Her waxing gibbous throws a beam
As bright as any light allowed
That city dwellers dare to dream
Would percolate an ocean cloud
Rolling over suburban hills
Like an ebony forest park
And the bracing tonic it distills
With its old arboreal bark
Where only moonlight permeates
When no man made light officiates.
#forest
#moon
#sky
#clouds
#mountains
460 reads
2 Comments
un-cumbrously, this your decembrist-in-blooms
viz:: decemberist
#love
#sky
#mountains
#spiritual
#symbolism
527 reads
9 Comments
under ice (secrets)
the cloud's
breath
creeping
again on
the high
peaks,
softly
murmuring
pale days,
from
high up
glances,
quiet
and sad
ageless
stone,
they hold
their secrets
under ice.
breath
creeping
again on
the high
peaks,
softly
murmuring
pale days,
from
high up
glances,
quiet
and sad
ageless
stone,
they hold
their secrets
under ice.
#clouds
#mountains
#sky #snow
#sky #snow
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4 Comments
Peace
"To live is to suffer, to survive is to find some meaning
In the suffering" - Nietzsche
The majestic chiseled rock and stone,
was mysteriously lodged
between its ghostly white snowy bones.
Clouds strangely pale in comparison.
Hope has made itself known.
Rugged peaks distort the bleak.
This mountainous nectar
is what the weary mind seeks.
Orchard colored flowers, suspend the hours.
Peace, too, can devour.
In the suffering" - Nietzsche
The majestic chiseled rock and stone,
was mysteriously lodged
between its ghostly white snowy bones.
Clouds strangely pale in comparison.
Hope has made itself known.
Rugged peaks distort the bleak.
This mountainous nectar
is what the weary mind seeks.
Orchard colored flowers, suspend the hours.
Peace, too, can devour.
#anxiety
#mountains
#nature #peace
#nature #peace
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Questioning Reality
I am just a cliff, you see?
A revelation of the sea?
Did a flood produce me?
Or was it, electricity?
I am just a cliff, you see?
A solid rock forming slowly.
Reaching the skies, no boundaries.
Valleys weaving straight through me.
I am just a cliff, you see?
Petrified trees stick out of me.
How could that form from a sea?
Why don't scientists agree?
I am just a cliff, you see?
They've found cities under me.
Does that sound like years of whirling,
water rapids burying things?
I am just a...
A revelation of the sea?
Did a flood produce me?
Or was it, electricity?
I am just a cliff, you see?
A solid rock forming slowly.
Reaching the skies, no boundaries.
Valleys weaving straight through me.
I am just a cliff, you see?
Petrified trees stick out of me.
How could that form from a sea?
Why don't scientists agree?
I am just a cliff, you see?
They've found cities under me.
Does that sound like years of whirling,
water rapids burying things?
I am just a...
#mountains
284 reads
4 Comments
The Mountains
The terrain might be a little rough,
But the view from here is quite surreal,
High above the plains in the mountains,
The scenery has a certain appeal.
From up here the trees go on forever,
Rolling in between canyons and hills,
And the path that only few dare take,
It’s a journey of adventures and thrills.
In winter everything is covered in snow,
As the highest summit stands alone,
By spring the rivers begin to flow,
Where wildlife and flowers have grown.
Though there is always danger of fire,
Up here all is...
But the view from here is quite surreal,
High above the plains in the mountains,
The scenery has a certain appeal.
From up here the trees go on forever,
Rolling in between canyons and hills,
And the path that only few dare take,
It’s a journey of adventures and thrills.
In winter everything is covered in snow,
As the highest summit stands alone,
By spring the rivers begin to flow,
Where wildlife and flowers have grown.
Though there is always danger of fire,
Up here all is...
#trees
#nature
#mountains #WritingPoetry
#mountains #WritingPoetry
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Steaming Dew Drops
Eternity gets addicted to donkey madness.
Eternity gets addicted...
The sunset shines
like the lust of black bananas.
The skin aches for windy drops.
A wanderer fiddles
with the ecstasy of pool dew.
Sweetness, sweetness and sweetness!
The ocean's delight!
My sweetheart tastes like fermented agony.
Eternity gets addicted...
The sunset shines
like the lust of black bananas.
The skin aches for windy drops.
A wanderer fiddles
with the ecstasy of pool dew.
Sweetness, sweetness and sweetness!
The ocean's delight!
My sweetheart tastes like fermented agony.
#earth
#summer
#wind
#mountains
#travel
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Autumn Fog and October Mist
And When the sun shines
The morning dew glitters
While the fog is thick
The waking bird twitters
When the dawn awakes
And the light scatters
On every inch of earth
The drizzling dew spatters
Then, rise from every spot
The earthly living rumors
Sounds of every pitch
Scents of morning flowers
And the floating perfumes
Waltz high in the firmament
And the bees in honey quest
A faith, heavenly permanent
...
The morning dew glitters
While the fog is thick
The waking bird twitters
When the dawn awakes
And the light scatters
On every inch of earth
The drizzling dew spatters
Then, rise from every spot
The earthly living rumors
Sounds of every pitch
Scents of morning flowers
And the floating perfumes
Waltz high in the firmament
And the bees in honey quest
A faith, heavenly permanent
...
#clouds
#forest
#mountains
#nature
#sky
74 reads
2 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Mountains by Top Critiquers