Poems About Mountains by Top Critiquers
#mountains
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
7th Apr 2024 9:30am
7th Apr 2024 9:30am
Glacier Blue
The water was a blue universe where the soul is fluid.
Lifetime far away from the closest human grid.
Aquamarine dream, shines a glacial sheen
of a mountainside secluded lake.
Engulfed in triangular summits with their bleached
termination dust flakes.
The peace was so still and so primitively profound.
There existed no need to make a single sound.
My every hurt was soothed with liquid blue bliss.
Morning would bring a hypnotic mist.
Moistening blades of grass that are April sun kissed.
Grateful to be alive to witness such a sight. ...
Lifetime far away from the closest human grid.
Aquamarine dream, shines a glacial sheen
of a mountainside secluded lake.
Engulfed in triangular summits with their bleached
termination dust flakes.
The peace was so still and so primitively profound.
There existed no need to make a single sound.
My every hurt was soothed with liquid blue bliss.
Morning would bring a hypnotic mist.
Moistening blades of grass that are April sun kissed.
Grateful to be alive to witness such a sight. ...
#water
#nature
#mountains #peace
#mountains #peace
93 reads
21 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
4th Sep 2021 7:08pm
4th Sep 2021 7:08pm
touchstone
touch my mystery with your fingertips
weighty existence is the form of a stone
vibrating energies that lift the soul
tumbled in water
my rough edges became smooth
calming the spirit of the beholder
find me lining the shore of an obliging lake or river
time itself has delivered me there
I watch humanity with curiosity
sending out my well wishes
I have dense matter
everything has spirit
I am no less
as part of a mountainside or in a riverbed
keep me as a touchstone when you're feeling stressed
...
weighty existence is the form of a stone
vibrating energies that lift the soul
tumbled in water
my rough edges became smooth
calming the spirit of the beholder
find me lining the shore of an obliging lake or river
time itself has delivered me there
I watch humanity with curiosity
sending out my well wishes
I have dense matter
everything has spirit
I am no less
as part of a mountainside or in a riverbed
keep me as a touchstone when you're feeling stressed
...
#nature
#mountains
#spiritual
425 reads
7 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
5th Nov 2023 12:53pm
5th Nov 2023 12:53pm
totally eclipsed...
it was a weekend with a dual purpose
to watch sun disappear behind moon
and a chance for me to get away from the mundane
go on an adventure
let my hair down & have a little fun
Willow style...submerged in nature
and I did
exploring monuments & caves
taking in incredible landscapes
Black Hills backdrop to a cerulean sky
it was there I lost the thread of the trip
having a moment most unexpected
witnessing the spirit of man
in breathtaking granite
as the world continued to move around me
I stood in silence ...
to watch sun disappear behind moon
and a chance for me to get away from the mundane
go on an adventure
let my hair down & have a little fun
Willow style...submerged in nature
and I did
exploring monuments & caves
taking in incredible landscapes
Black Hills backdrop to a cerulean sky
it was there I lost the thread of the trip
having a moment most unexpected
witnessing the spirit of man
in breathtaking granite
as the world continued to move around me
I stood in silence ...
#beauty
#sun
#moon #mountains
#moon #mountains
77 reads
9 Comments
wolfatthedoor1966
Poem Published
17th Mar 2024 1:04am
17th Mar 2024 1:04am
up in the hills
those hills,
not
mountain high,
not cloud
cover high,
but well
enough above
the flat
land below,
above the
city noises,
where
it seems
as if
the nights
let
the stars
visit, right
above
the treetops,
lasting
long after
the sundown,
the flowers,
and we
are gone.
not
mountain high,
not cloud
cover high,
but well
enough above
the flat
land below,
above the
city noises,
where
it seems
as if
the nights
let
the stars
visit, right
above
the treetops,
lasting
long after
the sundown,
the flowers,
and we
are gone.
#flowers
#stars
#nature
#mountains
#evolution
55 reads
6 Comments
Ahavati
Poem Published
22nd Jul 2020 10:49pm
22nd Jul 2020 10:49pm
rocks weave waterfall
into a gossamer web—
spellbound spectators
~
into a gossamer web—
spellbound spectators
~
#water
#nature
#mountains
#gratitude
#haiku
1371 reads
38 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
19th Jun 2022 3:33pm
19th Jun 2022 3:33pm
Rose Town Moon Down
Tonight fair Luna was at her best
Hanging above the urban lights
And drifting damp into the west
Like on so many other nights
Her waxing gibbous throws a beam
As bright as any light allowed
That city dwellers dare to dream
Would percolate an ocean cloud
Rolling over suburban hills
Like an ebony forest park
And the bracing tonic it distills
With its old arboreal bark
Where only moonlight permeates
When no man made light officiates.
Hanging above the urban lights
And drifting damp into the west
Like on so many other nights
Her waxing gibbous throws a beam
As bright as any light allowed
That city dwellers dare to dream
Would percolate an ocean cloud
Rolling over suburban hills
Like an ebony forest park
And the bracing tonic it distills
With its old arboreal bark
Where only moonlight permeates
When no man made light officiates.
#forest
#moon
#sky
#clouds
#mountains
394 reads
2 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2019 11:34pm
22nd Dec 2019 11:34pm
The Mountains
The terrain might be a little rough,
But the view from here is quite surreal,
High above the plains in the mountains,
The scenery has a certain appeal.
From up here the trees go on forever,
Rolling in between canyons and hills,
And the path that only few dare take,
It’s a journey of adventures and thrills.
In winter everything is covered in snow,
As the highest summit stands alone,
By spring the rivers begin to flow,
Where wildlife and flowers have grown.
Though there is always danger of fire,
Up here all is...
But the view from here is quite surreal,
High above the plains in the mountains,
The scenery has a certain appeal.
From up here the trees go on forever,
Rolling in between canyons and hills,
And the path that only few dare take,
It’s a journey of adventures and thrills.
In winter everything is covered in snow,
As the highest summit stands alone,
By spring the rivers begin to flow,
Where wildlife and flowers have grown.
Though there is always danger of fire,
Up here all is...
#trees
#nature
#mountains #WritingPoetry
#mountains #WritingPoetry
554 reads
12 Comments
PandoraUnleashed
Poem Published
27th Mar 2024 3:10am
27th Mar 2024 3:10am
Nocturnal Tranquility...
Tucked within the Blue Ridge tapestry,
I watched, with passion, as skies of sun
and indigo kissed day goodbye.
Droplets of dew fell from the ether
to then be carried upon a chaotic zephyr
while I bundled around the fire.
As hues of muted grey painted the sky,
the moon made its debut in a pale,
yet supple form; granting the slightest mångata atop the liquid mirth.
As the cosmos embraced the lake from
the expanse of its astral plane,
I played voyeur; wrapped up in their moonlight reverie, and thoroughly
enjoying the cold, yet...
I watched, with passion, as skies of sun
and indigo kissed day goodbye.
Droplets of dew fell from the ether
to then be carried upon a chaotic zephyr
while I bundled around the fire.
As hues of muted grey painted the sky,
the moon made its debut in a pale,
yet supple form; granting the slightest mångata atop the liquid mirth.
As the cosmos embraced the lake from
the expanse of its astral plane,
I played voyeur; wrapped up in their moonlight reverie, and thoroughly
enjoying the cold, yet...
#night
#water
#mountains
#moon
#peace
163 reads
26 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
26th Aug 2022 12:19pm
26th Aug 2022 12:19pm
Steaming Dew Drops
Eternity gets addicted to donkey madness.
Eternity gets addicted...
The sunset shines
like the lust of black bananas.
The skin aches for windy drops.
A wanderer fiddles
with the ecstasy of pool dew.
Sweetness, sweetness and sweetness!
The ocean's delight!
My sweetheart tastes like fermented agony.
Eternity gets addicted...
The sunset shines
like the lust of black bananas.
The skin aches for windy drops.
A wanderer fiddles
with the ecstasy of pool dew.
Sweetness, sweetness and sweetness!
The ocean's delight!
My sweetheart tastes like fermented agony.
#earth
#summer
#wind
#mountains
#travel
173 reads
0 Comments
Confluence
Poem Published
5th Oct 2023 4:57am
5th Oct 2023 4:57am
Aurora Borealis
swirling my fingers
in the Arora borealis
of our hallowed moments
unsurprised
to feel familiar fire spread anew
fevered blush staining my haunted countenance
I watch
as bursts of pulsar
shooting stars
and the heat of us suffuse
infusing my musing
with decadence
do you remember
how we shared oxygen
brewed intoxicating potions
such heady concoctions
we imbibed like the dying
desperate for peace
release
and healing
defiantly daring the unknown
making it our home ...
in the Arora borealis
of our hallowed moments
unsurprised
to feel familiar fire spread anew
fevered blush staining my haunted countenance
I watch
as bursts of pulsar
shooting stars
and the heat of us suffuse
infusing my musing
with decadence
do you remember
how we shared oxygen
brewed intoxicating potions
such heady concoctions
we imbibed like the dying
desperate for peace
release
and healing
defiantly daring the unknown
making it our home ...
#love
#moon
#mountains
#astronomy
#emotions
406 reads
9 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
21st Oct 2023 3:11am
21st Oct 2023 3:11am
WHERE THERE IS PEACE
Do you know what it means to the mind and body and soul, to be able to elevate your inner voice as you speak, to the deepness of your being that inside is you the person from within 🤔 Do you know what it means when you lose, all touch of the illusions of the world 🌎 but YET you can't put your finger on it yet you know that, it's been there since the beginning of the time of your, birth into the world 🌍 FOR it is necessary for you to think and feel, and see 👁️👁️ the affects as the facts spread across and cross into through your thoughts....
#forest
#river
#mountains
#metaphor
#StreamOfConsciousness
167 reads
4 Comments
JusTim_
Poem Published
13th Aug 2019 3:19pm
13th Aug 2019 3:19pm
First Looks
First looks set the tone
the pace, the spirit, begging to roam
the views spectacular and warm
and that's just the beginning
before thoughts start to swarm
a delicate pace of distinction
where water drips, a different plane
traversing the ebbs, the flows
what we crave, what we know
light lifts eyes lost in slits of retreat
awe awakens, waiting with care
wanton whispers willed to take
slow sips of beauty, yields to make
exhilaration emulates the day
eruption, a much needed sun
embracing more than...
the pace, the spirit, begging to roam
the views spectacular and warm
and that's just the beginning
before thoughts start to swarm
a delicate pace of distinction
where water drips, a different plane
traversing the ebbs, the flows
what we crave, what we know
light lifts eyes lost in slits of retreat
awe awakens, waiting with care
wanton whispers willed to take
slow sips of beauty, yields to make
exhilaration emulates the day
eruption, a much needed sun
embracing more than...
#lust
#mountains
420 reads
6 Comments
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