Poems About the Moon by Top Critiquers
#moon
Poems about the moon by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
The Peaceful Night
The moon, near but distant, full and brooding.
The mysterious glow of light that rests upon the surface of a lake,
Casting shadows on the water.
Shapes.
Tones of colour.
The whisper of a breeze, the rustle of hedges.
The moon hides behind a cloud.
All is still.
The observer walks away.
The mysterious glow of light that rests upon the surface of a lake,
Casting shadows on the water.
Shapes.
Tones of colour.
The whisper of a breeze, the rustle of hedges.
The moon hides behind a cloud.
All is still.
The observer walks away.
#moon
#night
#nature
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Why is the sky a little darker tonight?
Why is the sky a little darker today?
Has the moon descended from the skies
To reunite with the wolf?
To talk, to reminisce about the good old days
Before their love was forbidden
A time when angels with wings
Walked the earth and touched the face of God.
Has the moon descended from the skies?
To make love one more time
To sing with the wolf
The tune of knowledge and balance
To dance on top of the silver ocean at night
To run the open wild.
Why is the sky a little darker today?
Has the stars closed...
Has the moon descended from the skies
To reunite with the wolf?
To talk, to reminisce about the good old days
Before their love was forbidden
A time when angels with wings
Walked the earth and touched the face of God.
Has the moon descended from the skies?
To make love one more time
To sing with the wolf
The tune of knowledge and balance
To dance on top of the silver ocean at night
To run the open wild.
Why is the sky a little darker today?
Has the stars closed...
#universe
#moon
#stars
#peace
#WritingPoetry
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9 Comments
Arisen Moon (Haiku)
You have felt that I -
the moon, is arisen,
here’s the tides!
the moon, is arisen,
here’s the tides!
#moon
#night
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Moon
hello Helio I touch the nexus solar flare gratefully
the shaded afternoon is safe
night is out there sleeping
the moon is felt turning over in his head
tonight its fulness will spill out
drawing us closer to the abyss
for those with the notion by all means
knowledge of what is out there is best taken in small doses
a sip of the ocean
it's vast, the tide pulls deep
into madness we slip under
as for me I will tip toe through the shallows collecting shells
until the tide rolls out
and the moon goes to sleep...
the shaded afternoon is safe
night is out there sleeping
the moon is felt turning over in his head
tonight its fulness will spill out
drawing us closer to the abyss
for those with the notion by all means
knowledge of what is out there is best taken in small doses
a sip of the ocean
it's vast, the tide pulls deep
into madness we slip under
as for me I will tip toe through the shallows collecting shells
until the tide rolls out
and the moon goes to sleep...
#moon
#night
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2 Comments
Time to Leave
Facing the moon
silhouetted against grey mountains
a figure alone
without company
the day is done
seasons circle
as in autumn
leaves falling to the ground
tears as dew on leaves
falling, moistening the ground
and memories divine
just fading away
like ghosts departing before dawn
leaving nothing but faint whispers
murmured words breathed on mirrors
heavens don’t ever get dark
leave me a passage
with guiding lights.
silhouetted against grey mountains
a figure alone
without company
the day is done
seasons circle
as in autumn
leaves falling to the ground
tears as dew on leaves
falling, moistening the ground
and memories divine
just fading away
like ghosts departing before dawn
leaving nothing but faint whispers
murmured words breathed on mirrors
heavens don’t ever get dark
leave me a passage
with guiding lights.
#moon
#morning
#nature
#spiritual
#magic
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This Artist's Moonlight Muse On The Beach
Her skin shined brightly
which made her become
this artist's moonlight
muse on the beach for
his own camcorder.
which made her become
this artist's moonlight
muse on the beach for
his own camcorder.
#beach
#moon
#fiction
#dialogue
#art
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2 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About the Moon by Top Critiquers