Poems About Money Seeking Honest Critique
#money
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#poverty
Poems about money seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 10:15am
1st Dec 2024 10:15am
Lichen Thallus
Apply the federation.
Allow a congregation.
Lose your mind to sedation.
Lose your kool; aid the plantation.
Planted in a vase.
No roots for me to trace.
No more individual face.
Just people losing the race.
A spore developing.
A hive of demons loudly sing.
Attract the greater being.
To destroy the weakest thinking.
A tree that only lies.
A mistletoe leeches the wise.
Time to prune the parasites.
Assassin's have a lonely plight.
Allow a congregation.
Lose your mind to sedation.
Lose your kool; aid the plantation.
Planted in a vase.
No roots for me to trace.
No more individual face.
Just people losing the race.
A spore developing.
A hive of demons loudly sing.
Attract the greater being.
To destroy the weakest thinking.
A tree that only lies.
A mistletoe leeches the wise.
Time to prune the parasites.
Assassin's have a lonely plight.
#hypocrisy
#money
#prison #SelfReflection
#prison #SelfReflection
97 reads
11 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 7:57pm
30th Nov 2024 7:57pm
Poverty Can Be Stopped!
Eaten from inside
While you're struggling to survive
Denied of any food
Body reeks of bile, cannot wash it clean
From infecting open wounds
Starving children die
Left to rot like meat
Nothing they can do
Western world still thrives
Masses are obese
In excess we consume
Hunger never satisfied
A constant lust for feed
Devouring disease
Overfed a human mass
Is struggling just to breathe
Devouring disease
Eaten from inside
While you're struggling to survive
Denied of any food
Western world still...
While you're struggling to survive
Denied of any food
Body reeks of bile, cannot wash it clean
From infecting open wounds
Starving children die
Left to rot like meat
Nothing they can do
Western world still thrives
Masses are obese
In excess we consume
Hunger never satisfied
A constant lust for feed
Devouring disease
Overfed a human mass
Is struggling just to breathe
Devouring disease
Eaten from inside
While you're struggling to survive
Denied of any food
Western world still...
#corruption
#food
#greed
#money
#poverty
73 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 8:14pm
29th Nov 2024 8:14pm
A Gross Abecedarian tale...backwards
#conflict
#dirty
#illness #money
#illness #money
97 reads
14 Comments
Josh
Joshua Bond
Joshua Bond
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 11:20pm
25th Nov 2024 11:20pm
Villanelle Nr.24 — Prosperity Gospel Turbo-Charged
Being a billionaire is a sign
of God’s blessing, and my Vocation:
to rule over you…, and that’s fine
I surrender to God’s design,
God’s plan for my life — my station
is being a billionaire; it’s a sign
you should accept gracefully — align!
to obey me is to obey God’s creation …
me to rule over you — and that’s fine.
Poor people are useless-eater-swine
ignorant of manifestation.
Being a billionaire is a sign
you are the branches but I am the vine...
of God’s blessing, and my Vocation:
to rule over you…, and that’s fine
I surrender to God’s design,
God’s plan for my life — my station
is being a billionaire; it’s a sign
you should accept gracefully — align!
to obey me is to obey God’s creation …
me to rule over you — and that’s fine.
Poor people are useless-eater-swine
ignorant of manifestation.
Being a billionaire is a sign
you are the branches but I am the vine...
#money
#politics
#power
#religion
#SelfWorth
130 reads
10 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 3:54am
23rd Nov 2024 3:54am
Family Secrets
Family Secrets
Don’t go round selling family secrets
The secrets I know would get me murdered
The things that I know wish I was dementia
The things I know I wish I could forget em
She smiles at me at the mention I know what she is worth surviving millions
But I must agree she is a beauty my heart still
Belongs to her even if I hate her
My heart belongs to her
She hates me but she won’t leave me
Don’t go round selling family secrets
The secrets I know would get me murdered
The things that I know wish I was dementia
The things I know I wish I could forget em
She smiles at me at the mention I know what she is worth surviving millions
But I must agree she is a beauty my heart still
Belongs to her even if I hate her
My heart belongs to her
She hates me but she won’t leave me
#breakup
#hate
#love #money
#love #money
45 reads
0 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2024 6:19am
22nd Nov 2024 6:19am
A Hefty Fee
Reality always strikes between the eyes
Leaving it’s mark on the human psyche
Madness will cut everyone down to size
Life’s taxed even death costs a hefty fee
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
Leaving it’s mark on the human psyche
Madness will cut everyone down to size
Life’s taxed even death costs a hefty fee
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
#money
141 reads
25 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 4:00am
17th Nov 2024 4:00am
Go the Green Backs
Rat a tat tat
Go the green backs
There is a scent of greed
Security all around
Vans full of cash
Ben counts 100
Don’t look that way
For comes another day
Guard drops down
Green greed escapes
Slapping em down
Picking em up
Blue marble spins on green
Turquoise beauty
Loves you when the rent is paid
Don’t pick up the tab
Ain’t licking the landing strip
Greed makes the world go round
Rat a Tat Tat
Go the green bucks
Go the green backs
There is a scent of greed
Security all around
Vans full of cash
Ben counts 100
Don’t look that way
For comes another day
Guard drops down
Green greed escapes
Slapping em down
Picking em up
Blue marble spins on green
Turquoise beauty
Loves you when the rent is paid
Don’t pick up the tab
Ain’t licking the landing strip
Greed makes the world go round
Rat a Tat Tat
Go the green bucks
#devil
#greed
#money
55 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 6:52am
16th Nov 2024 6:52am
Live positive
Live moments in positivity
Discard negative
Just did something
Gave away the key
To prosperity
If I sit and stew
And bake a monster of anger
Doesn’t help those i love
Think a circuit is undone
In my cerebellum
Scream at the tv when they don’t
Do what i say to comfort
And fatten the wallet
I cant just beat me
To pay for my sins
So I’m starting something new
Turn a lemon to victory
in my mind I’m aware i watch me
I’m living in positivity
Not down won’t...
Discard negative
Just did something
Gave away the key
To prosperity
If I sit and stew
And bake a monster of anger
Doesn’t help those i love
Think a circuit is undone
In my cerebellum
Scream at the tv when they don’t
Do what i say to comfort
And fatten the wallet
I cant just beat me
To pay for my sins
So I’m starting something new
Turn a lemon to victory
in my mind I’m aware i watch me
I’m living in positivity
Not down won’t...
#addiction
#grief
#money #sports
#money #sports
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0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 9:34am
11th Nov 2024 9:34am
Private Jets
Private jets
And chemtrails
Flying first class
45 minutes to my house
1 percent carbon footprint
132 times more than you
Caviar and silk robes
Paid for by your local mailman
Billions and billions
Can’t wrap my mind around
But they leave the check for the rest of us
And tweet about bullshit
They think is important
But not in my world
Have a birthday of decadence
Jet set to opulence
Must be nice for a peasant
Close as you get
Be their servant
Pick up...
And chemtrails
Flying first class
45 minutes to my house
1 percent carbon footprint
132 times more than you
Caviar and silk robes
Paid for by your local mailman
Billions and billions
Can’t wrap my mind around
But they leave the check for the rest of us
And tweet about bullshit
They think is important
But not in my world
Have a birthday of decadence
Jet set to opulence
Must be nice for a peasant
Close as you get
Be their servant
Pick up...
#environment
#hypocrisy
#money #vanity
#money #vanity
68 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2024 11:58pm
2nd Nov 2024 11:58pm
On The Hill
On the hill
All the pennies dropped
Should have bought a mansion on the hill
Tried to be a winner
I’m such a loser through and through
All the time I spent
Instead of being present
Chasing dollar signs
Being on the wrong side
I still remember
My first time
It was 1994….Eagles and Niners
Garner laid it down and I
Collected two bills
The start of something
So destructive
Wish I could go back cause
I see it’s killing my family
Pennies dropped
Add up to a bucket ...
All the pennies dropped
Should have bought a mansion on the hill
Tried to be a winner
I’m such a loser through and through
All the time I spent
Instead of being present
Chasing dollar signs
Being on the wrong side
I still remember
My first time
It was 1994….Eagles and Niners
Garner laid it down and I
Collected two bills
The start of something
So destructive
Wish I could go back cause
I see it’s killing my family
Pennies dropped
Add up to a bucket ...
#addiction
#greed
#money #sports
#money #sports
64 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
31st Oct 2024 1:47am
31st Oct 2024 1:47am
The sheep pay for my sins
The sheep pay for my sins
I make a call to you all
I’m being persecuted like an Orange Jesus
Won’t you get up and scream out or
Better yet open up your pocketbook
So you don’t have to suffer like me
Guilty of everything accused of
You don’t care about such nonsense
To busy chasing immigrants
Or the latest culture wars book burning being cancelled or trans bathrooms
You’re behind on your rent
Electricity being cut off
Need new tires on a shit pickup
But all I...
I make a call to you all
I’m being persecuted like an Orange Jesus
Won’t you get up and scream out or
Better yet open up your pocketbook
So you don’t have to suffer like me
Guilty of everything accused of
You don’t care about such nonsense
To busy chasing immigrants
Or the latest culture wars book burning being cancelled or trans bathrooms
You’re behind on your rent
Electricity being cut off
Need new tires on a shit pickup
But all I...
#deception
#emptiness
#greed
#manipulation
#money
99 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 11:58am
27th Oct 2024 11:58am
A WICKED WORLD
As long as I can remember I never truly thought that my hometown. 🌆 NEW YORK CITY 🏙️ WOULD BE BLANKET IN SHADES OF 🌑 DARKNESS. THE YEARS OF THE INVASION 2020 to now 2024 OF THE MAGGOTS, CALLED THE NEW COMERS OF AMERICA. IMMIGRANTS AS THEY WERE SENT BY BUSES AND PLANES, even walking across the border. WHO KNEW WILL BE DESTROYING THE CITY LIFE. 😲 YET here is the truth of the devastation of crimes, with no punishment or jail time, murders and robbery, and the senseless killings of American citizen. WHO are people young and elderly and childrens....
#money
#PowerOfWords
#StreamOfConsciousness
#vampires
#werewolves
92 reads
2 Comments
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