Poems About Mermaids Seeking Honest Critique
#mermaids
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RichyRich
RichyRich
Poem Published
7th Jan 2023 1:08pm
7th Jan 2023 1:08pm
Aquamarine Kingdom!!
Shackled and in chains ⛓!!
Underwater with restraints!!
Like, lost spirits and deities, the fallen one's who remain trapped under the Euphrate's!!
A river of sin, since the beginning of this marine kingdom, bound and seldomly found, free to Rome the Abyss!!
With all the sharks and all the creatures out of the depths of darkness!!
Of this deep blue sea, when washed ashore with all it's vapors and mist, magically it appears!!
This aquamarine kingdom, out the blue, like 👍 💙 a mystical myth!!
...
Underwater with restraints!!
Like, lost spirits and deities, the fallen one's who remain trapped under the Euphrate's!!
A river of sin, since the beginning of this marine kingdom, bound and seldomly found, free to Rome the Abyss!!
With all the sharks and all the creatures out of the depths of darkness!!
Of this deep blue sea, when washed ashore with all it's vapors and mist, magically it appears!!
This aquamarine kingdom, out the blue, like 👍 💙 a mystical myth!!
...
#monsters
#dragons
#ghosts
#aliens
#mermaids
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theskyatdawn2
Poem Published
26th Oct 2022 4:58am
26th Oct 2022 4:58am
Song Of A Sea Siren
Can you hear her calling you, an old voice on the wind,
Listen to the haunting tones speaking of places you have been.
Whispering loudly, stretching out to you, from across the sea,
An ancient voice that will sing softly of your history.
Singing of your loneliness, your hunger and your pain.
Crying to you, 'Come unto me, in your heart I will remain.’
You feel the ribbons pulling you into her sheltering arms,
Knowing there is comfort you, in her beauty and her charms.
You see her face upon the winds and in the pouring rain,
You hear her...
Listen to the haunting tones speaking of places you have been.
Whispering loudly, stretching out to you, from across the sea,
An ancient voice that will sing softly of your history.
Singing of your loneliness, your hunger and your pain.
Crying to you, 'Come unto me, in your heart I will remain.’
You feel the ribbons pulling you into her sheltering arms,
Knowing there is comfort you, in her beauty and her charms.
You see her face upon the winds and in the pouring rain,
You hear her...
#sea
#water
#historical #mermaids
#historical #mermaids
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4 Comments
fallen_stardust
galaxia
galaxia
Poem Published
18th Oct 2022 7:43am
18th Oct 2022 7:43am
A Mermaid’s Diary (A short collection of haikus)
Forbidden in tide,
Swam your Pacific again
The sea died tonight.
Sirens croon your vow
Shells warble you, last decade,
brooks guide me afresh.
Dampened memory,
Breathing oxygen to me
I've bubbled in your eyes.
Scintillated howl,
Caterwauls filling your void,
Blind me in this eve.
Misted coins you left,
Stabbed beneath the crescent pearl,
Wink in failed yearning.
Swam your Pacific again
The sea died tonight.
Sirens croon your vow
Shells warble you, last decade,
brooks guide me afresh.
Dampened memory,
Breathing oxygen to me
I've bubbled in your eyes.
Scintillated howl,
Caterwauls filling your void,
Blind me in this eve.
Misted coins you left,
Stabbed beneath the crescent pearl,
Wink in failed yearning.
#love
#haiku
#TimeHeals
#senryu
#mermaids
360 reads
4 Comments
Wafflenose
Ellie
Ellie
Poem Published
25th Sep 2022 10:41pm
25th Sep 2022 10:41pm
Mermaid hair
I dyed my hair today.
Just the bottom six inches or so
of my hip-length, reddish-brown
crowning glory.
It's a guilty pleasure
that I only discovered in my 40s.
The pleasure part is simple:
I have red, purple, blue and turquoise
giving an overall effect of mermaid.
It makes me happy
because who doesn't feel brighter
when they're a little bit Mermaid?
The guilty part is a secret:
the reason I dyed it today
is because it's slightly rebellious
and for the first time ever,...
Just the bottom six inches or so
of my hip-length, reddish-brown
crowning glory.
It's a guilty pleasure
that I only discovered in my 40s.
The pleasure part is simple:
I have red, purple, blue and turquoise
giving an overall effect of mermaid.
It makes me happy
because who doesn't feel brighter
when they're a little bit Mermaid?
The guilty part is a secret:
the reason I dyed it today
is because it's slightly rebellious
and for the first time ever,...
#beauty
#frustration
#mermaids
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6 Comments
SeaMiser_MC
zzz
zzz
Poem Published
24th Sep 2022 4:41pm
24th Sep 2022 4:41pm
55 {Midnight Mermaids}
All day I hear
a gaspy drip drop
salty water on the face of a clock
sloppy images at the edge of a pier
desperate mermaids
licking at my feet
and biting my ankles
beautiful lipped manacles
from all my suckling raw
the ocean's cold teat
a gaspy drip drop
salty water on the face of a clock
sloppy images at the edge of a pier
desperate mermaids
licking at my feet
and biting my ankles
beautiful lipped manacles
from all my suckling raw
the ocean's cold teat
#dark
#sea
#mermaids
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archie23
Poem Published
16th Sep 2022 9:34am
16th Sep 2022 9:34am
UPON THE SEAS
#loneliness
#shame
#confusion
#gratitude
#mermaids
211 reads
3 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
30th Jul 2022 2:29pm
30th Jul 2022 2:29pm
Tea Time
Alice went for a walk
and she'll be right back.
She will bring rabbit to
dinner and if she can't
even a cat will do...
PAR
and she'll be right back.
She will bring rabbit to
dinner and if she can't
even a cat will do...
PAR
#fairies
#aliens
#witches
#zombies
#mermaids
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CanisInc-Untis
Poem Published
30th Jun 2022 10:53am
30th Jun 2022 10:53am
Rum Ocean
rum ocean
still
no emotion
soon
heaving and throwing
up on the waves of life
empty bottle or ship?
sailing or floating?
drinking all the waters in
until completely dry
an open wasteland
where all the sea creatures die
........memories
of a harpooned mind................
still
no emotion
soon
heaving and throwing
up on the waves of life
empty bottle or ship?
sailing or floating?
drinking all the waters in
until completely dry
an open wasteland
where all the sea creatures die
........memories
of a harpooned mind................
#sea
#alcohol
#memories
#meditation
#mermaids
310 reads
4 Comments
AntonellaKinkPoet
Antonella
Antonella
Poem Published
9th May 2022 10:29am
9th May 2022 10:29am
The Chosen One
For you I’m the chosen one, the Unforgotten one.
Once I lay my eyes on you, your spiritual revolution has already begun.
Once in the back of your mind as I study you from afar, now i’m at the forefront.
Challenging every one of your limiting beliefs, my existence stuns.
Just when you swim above water, that’s when I’m far from done.
I’m a siren, pulling you deeper and deeper into your own emotions as we go
From your island, revealing darker truths as you have no choice but to go with the oceanic flow.
You...
Once I lay my eyes on you, your spiritual revolution has already begun.
Once in the back of your mind as I study you from afar, now i’m at the forefront.
Challenging every one of your limiting beliefs, my existence stuns.
Just when you swim above water, that’s when I’m far from done.
I’m a siren, pulling you deeper and deeper into your own emotions as we go
From your island, revealing darker truths as you have no choice but to go with the oceanic flow.
You...
#beach
#spiritual
#PowerOfWords
#acceptance
#mermaids
455 reads
2 Comments
AlisVolatPropriis8
Poem Published
5th Dec 2021 8:45am
5th Dec 2021 8:45am
The travel.
Winter in rain
Fills pen with pain.
Fills pen with pain.
#witches
#mermaids
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Cipher_O
Poem Published
28th Aug 2021 12:49pm
28th Aug 2021 12:49pm
Parallel Universes
Dreamed in a magical mind -
Miasma into mist, dispersed,
Sent to self-same pieces,
Traveling in whirling trajectories,
Across interdimensional veils,
The pieces took their places
In each place as each piece,
Sent into sunshine like seeds,
Manifesting individuated realities
From unified fields of fields,
All along & across the veils,
Like a trillion-trillion autonomous shadows.
They say:
Molecules are measured
To facilitate perception,
Possibly they maneuver
In a state of...
Miasma into mist, dispersed,
Sent to self-same pieces,
Traveling in whirling trajectories,
Across interdimensional veils,
The pieces took their places
In each place as each piece,
Sent into sunshine like seeds,
Manifesting individuated realities
From unified fields of fields,
All along & across the veils,
Like a trillion-trillion autonomous shadows.
They say:
Molecules are measured
To facilitate perception,
Possibly they maneuver
In a state of...
#universe
#dragons
#fairies
#unicorns
#mermaids
479 reads
2 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
15th Jul 2021 10:25am
15th Jul 2021 10:25am
Sea Turtles & See Turtles
She has shape shifting eyes, meritorious mood rings.
Seeing things, from vantage points that are beyond
The mechanisms of sight, utilized by other beings,
Who only believe… They have seen.
She taught me how to read... Her emotions.
Maybe because I was curious, maybe because she liked me…
Maybe just because.
Grey=Worried
Really blue=Happy
Green/blue green=Sad
Green=Mystery
She taught me by allowing me to spend time with her.
And I was… Maybe studious, maybe curious.
*...
Seeing things, from vantage points that are beyond
The mechanisms of sight, utilized by other beings,
Who only believe… They have seen.
She taught me how to read... Her emotions.
Maybe because I was curious, maybe because she liked me…
Maybe just because.
Grey=Worried
Really blue=Happy
Green/blue green=Sad
Green=Mystery
She taught me by allowing me to spend time with her.
And I was… Maybe studious, maybe curious.
*...
#beauty
#universe
#water
#fairies
#mermaids
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