Poems About Mermaids Seeking Honest Critique
#mermaids
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 10:48am
1st Jan 2025 10:48am
Starfilled Shore
It was a serene night.
And stars were in sight.
You began to walk down the shore.
On the sand filled,ground floor.
You began to walk as you got out of the door.
The stars were twinkling in the sky.
Like nightlights far away.
Maybe you seek peace.
Or a place to collect your thoughts.
Maybe you wanted silence.
And to drown out the negative thoughts.
Out on the shore,sat a girl as pretty as can be.
She had bright,blue siren eyes.
She had red hair,love symbolize.
Her lips were a share of red.
...
And stars were in sight.
You began to walk down the shore.
On the sand filled,ground floor.
You began to walk as you got out of the door.
The stars were twinkling in the sky.
Like nightlights far away.
Maybe you seek peace.
Or a place to collect your thoughts.
Maybe you wanted silence.
And to drown out the negative thoughts.
Out on the shore,sat a girl as pretty as can be.
She had bright,blue siren eyes.
She had red hair,love symbolize.
Her lips were a share of red.
...
#dreams
#kindness
#love
#mermaids
#redemption
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 8:47pm
7th Dec 2024 8:47pm
Look At What He Brought Home With Him
Scott came downstairs and
saw that there was a mermaid
laying on the frat house floor.
Gil told the other
guys that she begged him to help
her escape from Poseidon.
After that, the guys
helped her get into a
bathtub that's filled with water.
They also asked her
to be quiet so that the
house mother does not catch her.
saw that there was a mermaid
laying on the frat house floor.
Gil told the other
guys that she begged him to help
her escape from Poseidon.
After that, the guys
helped her get into a
bathtub that's filled with water.
They also asked her
to be quiet so that the
house mother does not catch her.
#acceptance
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#mermaids
68 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 5:27pm
6th Dec 2024 5:27pm
The stone man
Here I am as I am a man of truth and genuine honesty, when I speak with truth and trust. For what I believe in my mind and heart and spiritual thoughts. As I draw off my own life substance, with intelligences and upmost of my own subconscious thoughts. For sure as I continue, to stand up to the very tolerates, with the deepness of the nonsense that I see. THAT you will hear my words of thoughts of my own conversations. For sure sometimes we have to learn to be resilient, in our search of the truth instead of continuing to believe, in the bold face of lies. For sure I am a witness to what he...
#ghosts
#mermaids
#monsters
#vampires
#werewolves
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PAR
Poem Published
13th Nov 2024 5:23pm
13th Nov 2024 5:23pm
Mermaid Self Spells
Morgana and Medusa are two teenage mermaids,
with their beautiful fluffy hair and shiny scales,
venturing into the vast, icy world of Antarctica.
They love taking selfies everywhere they visit;
whether on the edge of a very high iceberg,
in a pile of snow newly formed by the storm
or in front of a colony of curious penguins.
With their small waterproof devices,
they capture every moment of adventures.
Morgana, with her irreverent way,
loves to pose enchanted,
while Medusa, more introspective,
prefers to capture the natural...
with their beautiful fluffy hair and shiny scales,
venturing into the vast, icy world of Antarctica.
They love taking selfies everywhere they visit;
whether on the edge of a very high iceberg,
in a pile of snow newly formed by the storm
or in front of a colony of curious penguins.
With their small waterproof devices,
they capture every moment of adventures.
Morgana, with her irreverent way,
loves to pose enchanted,
while Medusa, more introspective,
prefers to capture the natural...
#funny
#mermaids
#music
#sea
#witches
63 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
19th Oct 2024 7:53pm
19th Oct 2024 7:53pm
His Encounter With A Real Mermaid
Quinton stepped out of
the cabin and over to
the dock for a cool down swim.
But when he got there,
his eyes had grown wide at the
sight of a hot chick swimming.
That was before he
cleared his throat which made her look
over her shoulder at him.
And just as he was
about to say something to
her, that mermaid swam away.
the cabin and over to
the dock for a cool down swim.
But when he got there,
his eyes had grown wide at the
sight of a hot chick swimming.
That was before he
cleared his throat which made her look
over her shoulder at him.
And just as he was
about to say something to
her, that mermaid swam away.
#beauty
#fiction
#mermaids
#summer
#water
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
28th Sep 2024 10:53am
28th Sep 2024 10:53am
Siren Song
In a land,very far away.
Lived a siren,who stayed at the shore all day.
As she swims,the ocean sways.
Her eyes glowed in mythical,magical ways.
And there is this sparkle in her eyes.
That seems evil,but tend to hypnotize.
The sparkle in her eyes ascend.
As she lured in many men,
But none of them could understand.
That she had deceiving eyes.
None could get it,that there's sadness behind those eyes.
You were just taking a walk at the shore.
Walking,tired,on the sand filled floor.
But you saw...
Lived a siren,who stayed at the shore all day.
As she swims,the ocean sways.
Her eyes glowed in mythical,magical ways.
And there is this sparkle in her eyes.
That seems evil,but tend to hypnotize.
The sparkle in her eyes ascend.
As she lured in many men,
But none of them could understand.
That she had deceiving eyes.
None could get it,that there's sadness behind those eyes.
You were just taking a walk at the shore.
Walking,tired,on the sand filled floor.
But you saw...
#FallingInLove
#hope
#inspirational
#love
#mermaids
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smackdownraven
Poem Published
21st Aug 2024 00:34am
21st Aug 2024 00:34am
abyss
you enter here you enter at your own risk
tantalizing feeling floods you
enchanted passion raises your attention
a feeling so strong picks you up
holding your attention
it is a succubus gifted in the art of seduction
she is a siren her voice puts you at ease
a spell upon your mind
entertaining your stoic ego
in a uninterested way
she turns away you are awash in ecstasy
you ask her to stay
a demoness with the power of persuasion
has her teeth in you already
the energy she feeds you is purely sexual ...
tantalizing feeling floods you
enchanted passion raises your attention
a feeling so strong picks you up
holding your attention
it is a succubus gifted in the art of seduction
she is a siren her voice puts you at ease
a spell upon your mind
entertaining your stoic ego
in a uninterested way
she turns away you are awash in ecstasy
you ask her to stay
a demoness with the power of persuasion
has her teeth in you already
the energy she feeds you is purely sexual ...
#mermaids
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DampKitten
Poem Published
15th Jun 2024 10:39pm
15th Jun 2024 10:39pm
Interview with Deception
see me...
I lie in the fog,
calamitous breath
of maritime maidens
singing ships to their death.
My village looks out from the cliffs
where the sea
blots the light of the sun
with its grey canopy.
The lost souls of children
dismissed in despair
envelop my dwelling
as mist in the air.
My garden remembers
a kiss by the gate,
a handful of silver,
a fisherman's fate.
Ghosts amble through halls
bearing semblance to men
who gambled for garments,
interpreting sin....
I lie in the fog,
calamitous breath
of maritime maidens
singing ships to their death.
My village looks out from the cliffs
where the sea
blots the light of the sun
with its grey canopy.
The lost souls of children
dismissed in despair
envelop my dwelling
as mist in the air.
My garden remembers
a kiss by the gate,
a handful of silver,
a fisherman's fate.
Ghosts amble through halls
bearing semblance to men
who gambled for garments,
interpreting sin....
#devil
#God
#lies
#manipulation
#mermaids
375 reads
29 Comments
Sappho
Poem Published
3rd May 2024 8:24pm
3rd May 2024 8:24pm
Loreley
For hours I've been sitting on this rock
Where you wanted to meet me
In the afternoon hours, and now
The sky is already dressed for soiree
In all shades of orange, red and pink
Where are you, dear, when will you come?
A hundred times I've brushed my hair
A golden wave flowing to my hips
Soft and silken like the
Legendary golden fleece
Longing for your hands' gentle touch
Where are you, dear, when will you come?
I climbed up a steep path to this rock
Hi above the river Rhein
A wonderful viewpoint of the valley ...
Where you wanted to meet me
In the afternoon hours, and now
The sky is already dressed for soiree
In all shades of orange, red and pink
Where are you, dear, when will you come?
A hundred times I've brushed my hair
A golden wave flowing to my hips
Soft and silken like the
Legendary golden fleece
Longing for your hands' gentle touch
Where are you, dear, when will you come?
I climbed up a steep path to this rock
Hi above the river Rhein
A wonderful viewpoint of the valley ...
#mermaids
#witches
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
8th Oct 2023 2:42am
8th Oct 2023 2:42am
I Swear, Guys! I Really Saw A Genuine Mermaid!
Matthew
walked over to
the lake and saw some chick
smiling at him before she turned
and flashed her fish tail before swimming home.
walked over to
the lake and saw some chick
smiling at him before she turned
and flashed her fish tail before swimming home.
#friendship
#water
#fiction
#fish
#mermaids
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
29th Sep 2023 9:50pm
29th Sep 2023 9:50pm
The Mermaid Came Ashore
After swimming in
many rivers, the mermaid
came ashore and walked
naked all over the one
city of San Francisco.
many rivers, the mermaid
came ashore and walked
naked all over the one
city of San Francisco.
#city
#fiction
#tanka
#sensual
#mermaids
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
13th Jun 2023 2:44pm
13th Jun 2023 2:44pm
The Runaway Mermaid
As
soon as
she popped her
head out of the
water and saw that
nobody was around,
she quickly swam herself to
the shore and dragged the fish tail part
out of the water before she cried
and said to herself "I will not marry
him! I will not be his slave!" until she
fell asleep on that beach. The next day,
she woke up and found herself in
someone else's bed before the
door opened and a young
blonde stud gently placed
a tray of food
on her lap.
Then, they
kissed.
soon as
she popped her
head out of the
water and saw that
nobody was around,
she quickly swam herself to
the shore and dragged the fish tail part
out of the water before she cried
and said to herself "I will not marry
him! I will not be his slave!" until she
fell asleep on that beach. The next day,
she woke up and found herself in
someone else's bed before the
door opened and a young
blonde stud gently placed
a tray of food
on her lap.
Then, they
kissed.
#beach
#fiction
#lover
#suffering
#mermaids
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