Poems About Mermaids Seeking Honest Critique
#mermaids
PAR
Poem Published
13th Nov 2024 5:23pm
13th Nov 2024 5:23pm
Mermaid Self Spells
Morgana and Medusa are two teenage mermaids,
with their beautiful fluffy hair and shiny scales,
venturing into the vast, icy world of Antarctica.
They love taking selfies everywhere they visit;
whether on the edge of a very high iceberg,
in a pile of snow newly formed by the storm
or in front of a colony of curious penguins.
With their small waterproof devices,
they capture every moment of adventures.
Morgana, with her irreverent way,
loves to pose enchanted,
while Medusa, more introspective,
prefers to capture the natural...
with their beautiful fluffy hair and shiny scales,
venturing into the vast, icy world of Antarctica.
They love taking selfies everywhere they visit;
whether on the edge of a very high iceberg,
in a pile of snow newly formed by the storm
or in front of a colony of curious penguins.
With their small waterproof devices,
they capture every moment of adventures.
Morgana, with her irreverent way,
loves to pose enchanted,
while Medusa, more introspective,
prefers to capture the natural...
#funny
#mermaids
#music
#sea
#witches
44 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
19th Oct 2024 7:53pm
19th Oct 2024 7:53pm
His Encounter With A Real Mermaid
Quinton stepped out of
the cabin and over to
the dock for a cool down swim.
But when he got there,
his eyes had grown wide at the
sight of a hot chick swimming.
That was before he
cleared his throat which made her look
over her shoulder at him.
And just as he was
about to say something to
her, that mermaid swam away.
the cabin and over to
the dock for a cool down swim.
But when he got there,
his eyes had grown wide at the
sight of a hot chick swimming.
That was before he
cleared his throat which made her look
over her shoulder at him.
And just as he was
about to say something to
her, that mermaid swam away.
#beauty
#fiction
#mermaids
#summer
#water
52 reads
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
28th Sep 2024 10:53am
28th Sep 2024 10:53am
Siren Song
In a land,very far away.
Lived a siren,who stayed at the shore all day.
As she swims,the ocean sways.
Her eyes glowed in mythical,magical ways.
And there is this sparkle in her eyes.
That seems evil,but tend to hypnotize.
The sparkle in her eyes ascend.
As she lured in many men,
But none of them could understand.
That she had deceiving eyes.
None could get it,that there's sadness behind those eyes.
You were just taking a walk at the shore.
Walking,tired,on the sand filled floor.
But you saw...
Lived a siren,who stayed at the shore all day.
As she swims,the ocean sways.
Her eyes glowed in mythical,magical ways.
And there is this sparkle in her eyes.
That seems evil,but tend to hypnotize.
The sparkle in her eyes ascend.
As she lured in many men,
But none of them could understand.
That she had deceiving eyes.
None could get it,that there's sadness behind those eyes.
You were just taking a walk at the shore.
Walking,tired,on the sand filled floor.
But you saw...
#FallingInLove
#hope
#inspirational
#love
#mermaids
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smackdownraven
Poem Published
21st Aug 2024 00:34am
21st Aug 2024 00:34am
abyss
you enter here you enter at your own risk
tantalizing feeling floods you
enchanted passion raises your attention
a feeling so strong picks you up
holding your attention
it is a succubus gifted in the art of seduction
she is a siren her voice puts you at ease
a spell upon your mind
entertaining your stoic ego
in a uninterested way
she turns away you are awash in ecstasy
you ask her to stay
a demoness with the power of persuasion
has her teeth in you already
the energy she feeds you is purely sexual ...
tantalizing feeling floods you
enchanted passion raises your attention
a feeling so strong picks you up
holding your attention
it is a succubus gifted in the art of seduction
she is a siren her voice puts you at ease
a spell upon your mind
entertaining your stoic ego
in a uninterested way
she turns away you are awash in ecstasy
you ask her to stay
a demoness with the power of persuasion
has her teeth in you already
the energy she feeds you is purely sexual ...
#mermaids
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DampKitten
Poem Published
15th Jun 2024 10:39pm
15th Jun 2024 10:39pm
Interview with Deception
see me...
I lie in the fog,
calamitous breath
of maritime maidens
singing ships to their death.
My village looks out from the cliffs
where the sea
blots the light of the sun
with its grey canopy.
The lost souls of children
dismissed in despair
envelop my dwelling
as mist in the air.
My garden remembers
a kiss by the gate,
a handful of silver,
a fisherman's fate.
Ghosts amble through halls
bearing semblance to men
who gambled for garments,
interpreting sin....
I lie in the fog,
calamitous breath
of maritime maidens
singing ships to their death.
My village looks out from the cliffs
where the sea
blots the light of the sun
with its grey canopy.
The lost souls of children
dismissed in despair
envelop my dwelling
as mist in the air.
My garden remembers
a kiss by the gate,
a handful of silver,
a fisherman's fate.
Ghosts amble through halls
bearing semblance to men
who gambled for garments,
interpreting sin....
#devil
#God
#lies
#manipulation
#mermaids
325 reads
28 Comments
Sappho
Poem Published
3rd May 2024 8:24pm
3rd May 2024 8:24pm
Loreley
For hours I've been sitting on this rock
Where you wanted to meet me
In the afternoon hours, and now
The sky is already dressed for soiree
In all shades of orange, red and pink
Where are you, dear, when will you come?
A hundred times I've brushed my hair
A golden wave flowing to my hips
Soft and silken like the
Legendary golden fleece
Longing for your hands' gentle touch
Where are you, dear, when will you come?
I climbed up a steep path to this rock
Hi above the river Rhein
A wonderful viewpoint of the valley ...
Where you wanted to meet me
In the afternoon hours, and now
The sky is already dressed for soiree
In all shades of orange, red and pink
Where are you, dear, when will you come?
A hundred times I've brushed my hair
A golden wave flowing to my hips
Soft and silken like the
Legendary golden fleece
Longing for your hands' gentle touch
Where are you, dear, when will you come?
I climbed up a steep path to this rock
Hi above the river Rhein
A wonderful viewpoint of the valley ...
#mermaids
#witches
116 reads
2 Comments
Naajir
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2023 3:15pm
2nd Nov 2023 3:15pm
She At The Abyss
t'was those restless nights..
you remember yes?
remember the silent howling
...that hawkish moon
the tossing..turning
the inner chambers churning..
in sweaty trepidation of
the visitors
...
your panorama of parasites..
here to commune with the dwarfish
incubus clawing beneath
your agitated flesh
...
come my darkened lover..
never mind them
allow me to secret you away
submerge...
you remember yes?
remember the silent howling
...that hawkish moon
the tossing..turning
the inner chambers churning..
in sweaty trepidation of
the visitors
...
your panorama of parasites..
here to commune with the dwarfish
incubus clawing beneath
your agitated flesh
...
come my darkened lover..
never mind them
allow me to secret you away
submerge...
#dark
#dreams
#water
#ShortStory
#mermaids
392 reads
3 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
8th Oct 2023 2:42am
8th Oct 2023 2:42am
I Swear, Guys! I Really Saw A Genuine Mermaid!
Matthew
walked over to
the lake and saw some chick
smiling at him before she turned
and flashed her fish tail before swimming home.
walked over to
the lake and saw some chick
smiling at him before she turned
and flashed her fish tail before swimming home.
#friendship
#water
#fiction
#fish
#mermaids
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
29th Sep 2023 9:50pm
29th Sep 2023 9:50pm
The Mermaid Came Ashore
After swimming in
many rivers, the mermaid
came ashore and walked
naked all over the one
city of San Francisco.
many rivers, the mermaid
came ashore and walked
naked all over the one
city of San Francisco.
#city
#fiction
#tanka
#sensual
#mermaids
213 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
13th Jun 2023 2:44pm
13th Jun 2023 2:44pm
The Runaway Mermaid
As
soon as
she popped her
head out of the
water and saw that
nobody was around,
she quickly swam herself to
the shore and dragged the fish tail part
out of the water before she cried
and said to herself "I will not marry
him! I will not be his slave!" until she
fell asleep on that beach. The next day,
she woke up and found herself in
someone else's bed before the
door opened and a young
blonde stud gently placed
a tray of food
on her lap.
Then, they
kissed.
soon as
she popped her
head out of the
water and saw that
nobody was around,
she quickly swam herself to
the shore and dragged the fish tail part
out of the water before she cried
and said to herself "I will not marry
him! I will not be his slave!" until she
fell asleep on that beach. The next day,
she woke up and found herself in
someone else's bed before the
door opened and a young
blonde stud gently placed
a tray of food
on her lap.
Then, they
kissed.
#beach
#fiction
#lover
#suffering
#mermaids
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
3rd Jun 2023 3:30am
3rd Jun 2023 3:30am
Mermaid
Brian
stepped out for
some air.
He saw some chick in
the pool with large fish
fins instead of legs.
Brian
turned and yelled
"HEY, GUYS?!"
stepped out for
some air.
He saw some chick in
the pool with large fish
fins instead of legs.
Brian
turned and yelled
"HEY, GUYS?!"
#summer
#fiction
#fish
#mythology
#mermaids
172 reads
2 Comments
Thesilverymoon
Poem Published
14th Apr 2023 10:26am
14th Apr 2023 10:26am
A Saelkie Tale
Drifting out on wind and wave
From the saltine sea to the darkest deep
I saw her rise from an angel grave
Emerged from the deepest Saelkie sleep
When her seal skin shed on the sandy floor
Twas a fiery auburn maiden freed
Her heart was unlocked through an open door
And bound in matrimonial deed
He sought to steal her oily skin
Transforming her to human kind
Then fire and prophecy within
Saw marriage forced by legend’s bind
With her spirit trapped, she could not flee
Away from Celtic mountain lands
Nor...
From the saltine sea to the darkest deep
I saw her rise from an angel grave
Emerged from the deepest Saelkie sleep
When her seal skin shed on the sandy floor
Twas a fiery auburn maiden freed
Her heart was unlocked through an open door
And bound in matrimonial deed
He sought to steal her oily skin
Transforming her to human kind
Then fire and prophecy within
Saw marriage forced by legend’s bind
With her spirit trapped, she could not flee
Away from Celtic mountain lands
Nor...
#love
#sea
#magic #mermaids
#magic #mermaids
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3 Comments
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