Poems About Men Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about men seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
NP_NP
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 5:01pm
7th Dec 2024 5:01pm
Cowboy In A Suit
There’s a mystique when a cowboy dons a suit,
A charisma so innate, it leaves me in pursuit—
Not of him, not lust’s unyielding snare,
But of the force that makes people stop and stare.
Like the wind, stirring dreams in those who dare.
He strides in, six-foot-two, with the gift of gab,
Words spinning webs, conversations like firelight.
How intoxicating to witness such command—
A lion prowling, hunger veiled in charm.
Alpha? Never declared, simply is.
Confidence unspoken, a grin that disarms.
No seams tailored,...
A charisma so innate, it leaves me in pursuit—
Not of him, not lust’s unyielding snare,
But of the force that makes people stop and stare.
Like the wind, stirring dreams in those who dare.
He strides in, six-foot-two, with the gift of gab,
Words spinning webs, conversations like firelight.
How intoxicating to witness such command—
A lion prowling, hunger veiled in charm.
Alpha? Never declared, simply is.
Confidence unspoken, a grin that disarms.
No seams tailored,...
#identity
#men
#philosophical #women
#philosophical #women
129 reads
4 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 00:39am
1st Dec 2024 00:39am
Insanity
Poet Pittinix has something more to say to LGBTQ people.
The comments of the poet also go for confused world leaders.
Gays, bisexuals, and trans people should be declared insane.
The gender identity of sane people matches their sexes at birth.
A man of sound mind does not behave like a woman;
Neither does a woman of sound mind behave like a man.
How can a sane woman be in love with a woman?
How can a sane man be in love with a man?
How can a sane person be in love with both sexes?
A person with a natural female form is a woman, ...
The comments of the poet also go for confused world leaders.
Gays, bisexuals, and trans people should be declared insane.
The gender identity of sane people matches their sexes at birth.
A man of sound mind does not behave like a woman;
Neither does a woman of sound mind behave like a man.
How can a sane woman be in love with a woman?
How can a sane man be in love with a man?
How can a sane person be in love with both sexes?
A person with a natural female form is a woman, ...
#LGBT
#men
#politics
#sex
#women
207 reads
7 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 00:04am
29th Nov 2024 00:04am
two elderly blokes at the bar
george?
no.
sorry, I thought you were somebody else.
no you didn’t,
you thought I was this bloke george.
but you’re not?
no.
pint?
ta
no.
sorry, I thought you were somebody else.
no you didn’t,
you thought I was this bloke george.
but you’re not?
no.
pint?
ta
#men
77 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
27th Nov 2024 8:09pm
27th Nov 2024 8:09pm
Bill Cosby's Favorite Disney Princess Is Sleeping Beauty
She likes it long in the back
She likes it short on the top and the sides
She likes it back in black
She wants to go for a mustache ride
I am your mullet man
Yes I am
Gonna take you for a ride in my van
I am your mullet man
Because I damn well can
Gonna give you all some lovin tonight
That's right
She wants in my pants
Cause they're the tightest of tight
She like my sexy teeth
Cause they are the whitest of white
I got a finger and I want you to pull it
Let me show you the power of the mullet
...
She likes it short on the top and the sides
She likes it back in black
She wants to go for a mustache ride
I am your mullet man
Yes I am
Gonna take you for a ride in my van
I am your mullet man
Because I damn well can
Gonna give you all some lovin tonight
That's right
She wants in my pants
Cause they're the tightest of tight
She like my sexy teeth
Cause they are the whitest of white
I got a finger and I want you to pull it
Let me show you the power of the mullet
...
#funny
#lyrics
#men
#satirical
#sex
108 reads
11 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
27th Nov 2024 5:55am
27th Nov 2024 5:55am
Little Ones
Little Ones
Most men are little ones in an adult body
Men are strong but we miss the tenderness
Boys off the street we suffer in silence
We can’t show how we really feel about things
You go down they deliver violence upon feelings
Men are like Superman feelings discarded
Men are the things unless it means feelings
Man can’t show a chink in the armor (he’s a coward)
Men are everything but without the strong hand of a Woman
Men are the salt of the earth
But women go to...
Most men are little ones in an adult body
Men are strong but we miss the tenderness
Boys off the street we suffer in silence
We can’t show how we really feel about things
You go down they deliver violence upon feelings
Men are like Superman feelings discarded
Men are the things unless it means feelings
Man can’t show a chink in the armor (he’s a coward)
Men are everything but without the strong hand of a Woman
Men are the salt of the earth
But women go to...
#fear
#men
#strength #women
#strength #women
62 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 9:48am
24th Nov 2024 9:48am
Getting Paid
We’re getting paid
We both wake up before the rooster calls
Do our routine don’t want to be late for school
Bell rings class is ending
Head for the locker room where I’m the One
You are in the state championship I’m trying too
All the sudden I’m in the papers and screens
We are colliding with greatness on different pay scales
I am better than you I bring more fans to watch me
You are excellent but not as good as me
And you will disagree
You are a tree that gives me shade but I...
We both wake up before the rooster calls
Do our routine don’t want to be late for school
Bell rings class is ending
Head for the locker room where I’m the One
You are in the state championship I’m trying too
All the sudden I’m in the papers and screens
We are colliding with greatness on different pay scales
I am better than you I bring more fans to watch me
You are excellent but not as good as me
And you will disagree
You are a tree that gives me shade but I...
#men
#motivational
#sacrifice
#sports
#women
60 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 6:34pm
8th Nov 2024 6:34pm
The tide has change
Now here we are in a new light of what is truth, before our eyes 👁️ that can move us, towards a different kind of pressure release of the negative, effects that had us imprisoned in mind and heart and spiritual soul. As it affected us in ways that not even words can explain, yet here we are still alive and blessed, to be able to share our joy and happiness and strength together as one nation under GOD ALMIGHTY. 😇 For sure he saw the chaos and drama and confusion, and madness that we had to face of the senseless. Killings and Murders that seems to have no regrets...
#children
#friendship
#humankind
#men
#women
100 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 11:08am
8th Nov 2024 11:08am
The Diffrences Between Men & Women
When he found out how things really were between men & women
He was shocked how cutthroat both sexes were to one another
It was a drag to find out that everybody knew all the same shit and everyone played it off like it was nothing
All the things that go unsaid
They get shoved into your guts like cutlery
All the bullshit sex etiquette
It's like a miniature cold war
What a bunch of lies & ego trips
That's why all these people were so freaked out about each other
It's one big club
The look away & laugh club
A revelation the size...
He was shocked how cutthroat both sexes were to one another
It was a drag to find out that everybody knew all the same shit and everyone played it off like it was nothing
All the things that go unsaid
They get shoved into your guts like cutlery
All the bullshit sex etiquette
It's like a miniature cold war
What a bunch of lies & ego trips
That's why all these people were so freaked out about each other
It's one big club
The look away & laugh club
A revelation the size...
#lies
#men
#relationships
#women
#WritingPoetry
85 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 9:58pm
7th Nov 2024 9:58pm
From before to the now
From the deepness of the truth, that it shall reveal the real makings of a new, frontier of hope and dreams and endless possibilities. 🙏 For sure we can slowly see a new horizon, that once was hidden behind the darkness of thick clouds. Changing as it has done more harm than good, yet it is soon coming over the world. 🌍 YET it's for the betterment of mankind and humanity, for gone is the unnecessary feelings of hatred and discrimination of negativity, bought on by the devil's 👿 in human skin. For sure we stand here as one nation under GOD. 🙏 ALMIGHTY and the...
#friendship
#humankind
#men
#soldiers
#women
70 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
5th Nov 2024 00:55am
5th Nov 2024 00:55am
Spock Sings a Sapphic
#humankind
#masculinity
#men #women
#men #women
130 reads
4 Comments
CeeCee-Elaine
Nugz
Nugz
Poem Published
30th Oct 2024 8:16pm
30th Oct 2024 8:16pm
Nudes
"Can you send me some nudes?" He asked, and I smiled.
Showing him all my silly little napkin poems I kept locked away in a wooden box.
Dust settling over the words like the old war letters grandpa used to write.
I described that time I went swimming with my friends in a thunderstorm.
The rush I felt when the jolt of lightning hit the waves, even though it made me seasick.
I stripped my words bare— down to the marrow where my deepest insecurities lie.
The pain I've been through, the devastation I've created all laid out to dry. ...
Showing him all my silly little napkin poems I kept locked away in a wooden box.
Dust settling over the words like the old war letters grandpa used to write.
I described that time I went swimming with my friends in a thunderstorm.
The rush I felt when the jolt of lightning hit the waves, even though it made me seasick.
I stripped my words bare— down to the marrow where my deepest insecurities lie.
The pain I've been through, the devastation I've created all laid out to dry. ...
#honesty
#hurt
#love
#men
#TruthOfLife
165 reads
9 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
26th Oct 2024 10:50pm
26th Oct 2024 10:50pm
Did God Really Create People As LGBTQ?
Many LGBTQ people assert that God created them the way they are.
Let us analyse the assertion to find out whether it is true or false.
God created a human being with a physical structure and a gender.
Can we say the same thing about the perverted mind and action of a person?
Did the true God create a person to think and act in a specific way?
If this were true, we could say God created Hitler as a murderer.
God did not put lustful feelings for the same sex in the mind of a person.
The things that people think and do are not the...
Let us analyse the assertion to find out whether it is true or false.
God created a human being with a physical structure and a gender.
Can we say the same thing about the perverted mind and action of a person?
Did the true God create a person to think and act in a specific way?
If this were true, we could say God created Hitler as a murderer.
God did not put lustful feelings for the same sex in the mind of a person.
The things that people think and do are not the...
#God
#LGBT
#men
#morality
#women
141 reads
3 Comments
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